2023学年完整公开课版慰问信

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HowtowritealetterofconcernAppreciationandexplorationThepeopleofChinahavebeenverymuchinmythoughtsoverthepasttwoweeksasIhavewatched,withmountingconcern,theeffectsofthedevastationcausedbytheterribleearthquakeinSichuanProvince.IthasbeenmostimpressivetoseethemarvellouswayinwhichtheChinesehumanitarianoperationshavebroughtswiftandeffectiverelieftothoseaffected.IamparticularlypleasedthattheWenchuanEarthquakeOrphanFundhasbeenestablished,tohelpthechildrenwhohavelosttheirparentsinthedisaster.IwantedtotakethisopportunitytosendmydeepestsympathyfollowingthisterribletragedytothepeopleofChina,andmymostheartfeltcondolencestoallthosewhohavelostlovedones.MyPrince'sCharitiesareengagingevermorecloselyinChina,includingworktoassist,inasmallway,withthepreservationofChina'srichanddiverseheritage.Itwouldgivemethegreatestpleasureifwewereabletodevelopthesetiesstillfurtherwith,inparticular,practicalassistancefrommyPrince'sFoundationfortheBuiltEnvironmentinplanningthereconstructionofpartsofSichuanProvince.CharlesThePrinceofWalesWhat?encouragement,comfort,concern,regret,understanding,sympathyandcondolence(吊唁)How?ThreepartsBeginning:Body:Ending:thereasonwhyyouarewritingtheletterorthebackgroundwhichmakesyouwritetheletterToshowyourencouragement,comfort,concern,regret,understanding,sympathy,andcondolenceortogivesomeadvice.Wishes213SentencestoaddcolortoyourwritingIam(terribly\awfully\extremely)sorrytohearthat…Iammorethanshockedtohearthat…Itisashockthat…Whatshocksmeisthat…Itisdefinitelyshockingthat…Itbrokemyheartthat…Ican’ttellyouhowsorry(sad,sorrowful,concerned..)IwaswhenIheardthat…Youcan’timaginehowsad\sorrowful\worriedIwaswhenthenewsthat…..reachedme.Iamwritingtoexpressmydeep(sincere,heart-felt)sympathy\concern\care\...foryouBeginning1.Iunderstandhowyouarefeelingnow.2.Youwillalwayshaveasupportinme.3.Itistruethatattitudesdecideeverything.Soyoushouldnevergiveupnomatterwhatishappening.4.Itishighlyrecommendedthat…Isuggest\advisethat….……isreallyagoodchoiceforyouto…Whynotdosomething?……,whichwillbenefityoualot.5.PleaseletmeknowifthereisanythingIcando.6.IfIcanbeofanyhelp,pleasedon’thesitatetoletmeknow.Body1.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyrecovery.2.HowIwishIwerewithyou.3.Rememberthatmyheartandthoughtsarewithyou.4.Mayyourecoversoon.5.Ihopethattimewilltakeawaythesorrowofyourrecentloss.6.Idohopethateverythingwillreturntonormalsoon.7.Isincerelyhopethatmysuggestionsarepracticalandconstructive.Andyouwillpullthroughtheseupsanddownssmoothly.EndingThepeopleofChinahavebeenverymuchinmythoughtsoverthepasttwoweeksasIhavewatched,withmountingconcern,theeffectsofthedevastationcausedbytheterribleearthquakeinSichuanProvince.IthasbeenmostimpressivetoseethemarvellouswayinwhichtheChinesehumanitarianoperationshavebroughtswiftandeffectiverelieftothoseaffected.IamparticularlypleasedthattheWenchuanEarthquakeOrphanFundhasbeenestablished,tohelpthechildrenwhohavelosttheirparentsinthedisaster.IwantedtotakethisopportunitytosendmydeepestsympathyfollowingthisterribletragedytothepeopleofChina,andmymostheartfeltcondolencestoallthosewhohavelostlovedones.MyPrince'sCharitiesareengagingevermorecloselyinChina,includingworktoassist,inasmallway,withthepreservationofChina'srichanddiverseheritage.Itwouldgivemethegreatestpleasureifwewereabletodevelopthesetiesstillfurtherwith,inparticular,practicalassistancefrommyPrince'sFoundationfortheBuiltEnvironmentinplanningthereconstructionofpartsofSichuanProvince.CharlesThePrinceofWales

MoreappreciationandexplorationDearSir,Thenewsofyouraccidentjustreachedmethismorning.I’mgreatlyshockedtolearnthatyouwereknockeddownbyacaryesterday.Howareyoufeelingtoday?Theonlygoodthingaboutitisthatyourmothertoldmethatyouareprogressingnicely,Ihopethatyouaredoingwellaftertheoperation,andthatyou’llbeoutofthehospitalinaboutaweek.I’mcomingtoseeyouonSundayandtrustthatyourconditionwillremarkablyimprovebythen.

AlittlepackagefromRoseandmewillreachyouadayortwo.Wehopethesmallthingwillinterestyou.Sincerelyyours,LiMingDearJohn,Iamshockedtohearthatyouhaveasevereinfluenzaandnowareinhospital.Igetthisnewsfromyourmotherandknowyoumustbeabsentforhalfamonthfromtheclasses.Dobecarefulwhileyouareill.Don’tworryaboutyourlessonandIamwillingtohelpyoulearnitwhenyoureturn.WearebestfriendssoIwillneverallowyoutofallbehind.Youcanwatchtelevisionorlistentoradioprogramstohelppassthetimeandforgetyourpainswhileyourecuperate.IdohopethatIcanseeyousoonandbringyousomefunnycartoons.Ifthereisanythingyouneedmetodo,justletmeknow.Weallmissyouandshallbehappywhenyouareback.Yourstruly,LiMing据报道，7岁的美国女孩AmyBruce得知自己身患肺癌(lungcancer)后处于极度的痛苦之中，美国抗癌协会(ACS)决定，每当Amy收到一封慰问信，就给她增加3美分的治疗款。假如你是新华中学的学生李华，请你用英文给Amy写一封慰问信，主要内容包括：自我介绍得知的情况表示鼓励DearAmy,I’mLiHuafromXinhuaMiddleSchoolofChina.I’msorrytohearthatyougotthelungcancerwhichbroughtyougreatpain.Butyoushouldrealizethatyouareyoungandhaveapromisinggreatfuture.So,standupandfightagainstthedisease!I’msureyouwillwin.ItisreportedthattheAmericaanti-cancerassociationwilldonatethreecentsuponeverycomfortletteryoureceive.SoIwilltellyoursituationtoallmyfriendsandaskthemtowritetoyou.Inthatway,youwillgetenoughmoneyforyoutobecured.Hopeyoucanbewellsoon.Yours,LiHuaPractice：Aletterofconcern为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了Heart-To-Heart专栏。假设你是该栏目的剪辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下：1.表示理解并给予安慰2.提出建议并说明理由参考词汇：temperTenminutesforyoutowritetheletter!Beginning:(表示理解并给予安慰)：很遗憾听到对方有此问题，并指出每个人都有可能遇到这样的问题，所有让对方不必担心，但要学会控制脾气。Body：（提出建议）：与人交流，告诉别人你的困扰，释放自己的压力，多参与一些户外的活动，保持乐观的心态。当然，这部分也是因人而异的。Ending：（提出希望）希望建议能够起到作用或对方的问题能够解决。OutlineKeywordsandphrases发脾气控制脾气避免伤害他人驱除消极的情绪保持乐观的态度…有益参加户外运动与…分享释放压力振作精神loseone’stempercontrolone’stemperavoidhurtingothersgetridof(remove)negativefeelingskeepoptimisticattitudesbebeneficialto(benefitsth)takepartin(participatein)outdooractivitiessharesthwithsbreleasestressliftone’sspiritPossiblesentences1.每个人都会有一段时间，一切好像都变得非常糟糕。（when引导的定语从句）2.没有必要担心。（it做形式主语）3.你应该学会自控，这会帮助你避免去说或去做你将后悔的事情。（that引导的定语从句）4.与老师和朋友分享心情是个不错的选择，因为这样做可以消除你的消极情绪。（it做形式主语，as引导原因状语从句）5.你应该多锻炼身体，这可以让你振作精神。（which引导的非限制性定语从句）6.保持乐观的生活态度，你将享受生活给你的快乐。7.希望我的建议对你有益。8.祝你消除烦恼。Possiblesentences1.Everyonewillhavethoseperiodswheneverythingseemstogowrong.2.Itisunnecessarytobeworried.3.Youshouldlearnself-controlanditcanhelpyouavoidsayinganddoinganythingthatyouwillregret.4.Itisagoodchoicetoshareyourfeelingswithyourfriendsandteachersasyoucanremoveyournegativeemotions.5.Youaresupposedtotakemorephysicalexercise,whichcanliftyourspirit.6.Ifyoukeepanoptimisticattitudetowardlife,youwillenjoythepleasurethatlifebringstoyou.7.Idohopethatmysuggestionswillbebeneficialtoyou.8.Mayyougetridofyourtroublesoon.Polishthesentences1.用which引导的非限制性定语从句改写句3。2.用动名词作主语改写句4。3.用“祈使句+and+陈述句”改写句6。Youshouldlearnself-control,whichcanhelpavoidsayinganddoinganythingthatyouwillregret.Sharingyourfeelingswithyourfriendsandteachersisagoodchoiceasyoucanremoveyournegativeemotions.Keepanoptimisticattitudetowardlifeandyouwillenjoythepleasurethatlifebringstoyou.DearWorried,I’msorrytoknowthatyou’rehavingsuchabadtimeatthemoment.Actually,everyonewillhaveoneofthoseperiodswheneverythingseemstobegoingwrong.Therefore,it’sunnecessarytobeworried.Youshouldlearnself-control,whichcanavoidsayinganddoingsomethingthatyou’llregret.Thefollowingarethreesuggestions.Tobeginwith,sharingyourfeelingswithyourfriendsandteachersisagoodchoiceasyoucanremoveyournegativeemotionsbydoingso.Anothereffectivesuggestionisthatyoushould

takemorephysicalexercise,whichcan

liftyourspirits.Lastbutnottheleast,keepandoptimisticattitudetowardslifeandyouwillenjoythepleasurelifehasbroughttoyou.Ihopemysuggestionswillbebeneficialtoyou.Mayyougetridofyourtroublesoon.Yours,Jamie

Apossibleversion1.FromwhereIstand,anumberoffactorscancontributetothisphenomenon.2.Thereisalwaysatimewhenpeopleareinabadmood.3.Asisknowntoall,everyonehassomeupsanddownsintheirlife.4.YouareexperiencingwhatIonceexperienced5.Itcanbeunderstoodthatyougetangryeasily.WhatIwanttosayistakingiteasyanddon’tpushyourselftoohard.6.Therearealwayssomedayswhenpeoplefeelanxiousandimpatient,forwhichpeopleareeasilytobeoutoftemper.7.Forthesakeofcalmingyourselfdown,whenyoufeelimpatient,itisurgentforyoutofindawaytoputyourselfatease.8..Whatyouneedtodoistotakeyoureaseandcalmdown.

Abriefbeginning1.Inaddition,doingwhatyoulikecanhelpyouleadabetterlifesothatyoucanhaveapeacefulmood.2.Itisalsosuggestedthatyoushoulddosportstocalmyou