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Summarywriting2017高考新作文概况PARTI应用文写作:80±20词共15分PARTII读后续写:原文350词左右

续写150±20词PARTIII概要写作:原文350词左右

概要60±20Asummaryisa

shortstatementthatgivesonlythemainpoints

ofsth,notthedetails《牛津高阶英汉双解词典》

读者在正确理解文章的基础上,在不改变原文中心思想、体裁和结构的前提下,用简明、精练的语句高度浓缩文章的主要内容和观点。

Itisabrief,thorough

and

objective

restatementofthemainideaandkeypointsofalongercomposition.01Whatisasummary?Maryisabeautifulgirlwhoalwayssmilestoothers.Maryisagirl.ContainthemainideaIgnoretheunnecessarydetails√a60-wordsummaryuseyourownwordsinthethirdpersonwithabriefsentenceconnectionbetweensentences(句子衔接)02RequestsofSummaryWritingStep1.Determinethetypeofwritingandidentifythetopicaswellastheauthor’spurposeStep2.Dividethepassage&summarizethemainideaofeachpartStep3.HighlightthekeyinformationofeachpartStep4.MakeanoutlineofthepassageStep5.WritethefirstdraftStep6.Revisethesummary03StepsofSummaryWriting

提炼要点整合删除细节删除具体例子(引用一两个说明问题即可)避免重复

同义转换:近义词、同义词等替换语言

句子重构:调整词类、时态、语态等

逻辑:衔接(照应、替代、省略、连接和词汇衔接)

04SkillsofSummaryWritingDuringtheRenaissance,newideasandvaluesgraduallyreplacedthoseheldintheMiddleAges.Peoplebegantoconcentratelessonreligiousthemesandadoptamorehumanisticattitudetolife.AtthesametimepaintersreturnedtoclassicalRomanandGreekideasaboutart.Theytriedtopaintpeopleandnatureastheyreallywere.Richpeoplewantedtopossesstheirownpaintings,sotheycoulddecoratetheirsuperbpalacesandgreathouses.Theypaidfamousartiststopaintpicturesofthemselves,theirhousesandpossessions,aswellastheiractivitiesandachievements.Oneofthemostimportantdiscoveriesduringthisperiodwashowtodrawthingsinperspective.ThistechniquewasfirstusedbyMasaccioin1428.Whenpeoplefirstsawhispaintings,theywereconvincedthattheywerelookingthroughaholeinthewallatarealscene.Iftherulesofperspectivehadnotbeendiscovered,noonewouldhavebeenabletopaintsuchrealisticpictures.Bycoincidence,oilpaintswerealsodevelopedatthistime,whichmadethecoloursusedinpaintingslookricheranddeeper.Withoutthenewpaintsandthenewtechnique,wewouldnotbeabletoseethemanygreatmasterpiecesforwhichthisperiodisfamous.TheRenaissance(15thto16thcentury)Step1.Determinethetypeofwritingandidentifythetopicaswellastheauthor’spurpose

确定体裁,明确主题体裁:主题:记叙文文艺复兴时期的艺术Step2.Dividethepassage&summarizethemainideaofeachpart明确文章结构Para2A.B.Para1Para1Para2√Step3.Highlightthekeyinformationofeachpart划主题句与关键信息DuringtheRenaissance,newideasandvaluesgraduallyreplacedthoseheldintheMiddleAges.Peoplebegantoconcentratelessonreligiousthemesandadoptamorehumanisticattitudetolife.AtthesametimepaintersreturnedtoclassicalRomanandGreekideasaboutart.Theytriedtopaintpeopleandnatureastheyreallywere.Richpeoplewantedtopossesstheirownpaintings,sotheycoulddecoratetheirsuperbpalacesandgreathouses.Theypaidfamousartiststopaintpicturesofthemselves,theirhousesandpossessions,aswellastheiractivitiesandachievements.TheRenaissance(15thto16thcentury)Para1TopicSentence:“DuringtheRenaissance,newideasandvaluesgraduallyreplaced…”Idea1:“Peoplebegantoconcentratelessonreligiousthemesandadoptamorehumanisticattitudetolife.”Idea2:“Atthesametimepaintersreturnedtoclassical…peopleandnatureastheyreallywere.”Example:“Richpeoplewantedto…”Oneofthemostimportantdiscoveriesduringthisperiodwashowtodrawthingsinperspective.ThistechniquewasfirstusedbyMasaccioin1428.Whenpeoplefirstsawhispaintings,theywereconvincedthattheywerelookingthroughaholeinthewallatarealscene.Iftherulesofperspectivehadnotbeendiscovered,noonewouldhavebeenabletopaintsuchrealisticpictures.Bycoincidence,oilpaintswerealsodevelopedatthistime,whichmadethecoloursusedinpaintingslookricheranddeeper.Withoutthenewpaintsandthenewtechnique,wewouldnotbeabletoseethemanygreatmasterpiecesforwhichthisperiodisfamous.TheRenaissance(15thto16thcentury)Para2TopicSentence:“Oneofthemostimportantdiscoveriesduringthisperiodwashowtodrawthingsinperspective.”Informationaboutperspective:Putforward:Masaccio;1428Content:“…lookingthroughaholeinawallatarealscene.”Assistance:“Bycoincidence,oilpaintswerealsodeveloped…”Step4.MakeanoutlineofthepassagePara1TopicSentence:Idea1:Idea2:Para2TopicSentence:Informationaboutperspective:Putforward:Content:Assistance:Step5.WritethefirstdraftPara1TopicSentence:

DuringtheRenaissance,newideasandvaluesgraduallyreplacedthoseheldintheMiddleAges.Rewrite:IntheRenaissance,newviewpointswereinplaceofthosehundredsyearsago.

同义转换Idea1:Peoplebegantoconcentratelessonreligiousthemesandadoptamorehumanisticattitudetolife.Rewrite:Firstly,peoplefocusedmoreonhumanisticthemesratherthanreligiousones.Idea2:AtthesametimepaintersreturnedtoclassicalRomanandGreekideasaboutart.Theytriedtopaintpeopleandnatureastheyreallywere.Rewrite:Secondly,paintersreturnedtoclassicalideas,whichattachedgreatimportancetorealpeopleandnature.

同义转换句型转变短语连接删除细节Para1IntheRenaissance,newviewpointswereinplaceofthosehundredsyearsago.Firstly,peoplefocusedmoreonhumanisticthemesratherthanreligiousones.Secondly,paintersreturnedtoclassicalideaswhichfocusedonrealpeopleandnature.(38words)Step6.RevisetheSummaryPeoplehadnewviewpointsduringtheRenaissance.Meanwhile,painterspreferredtheclassicalideasandpaintedrealpeopleandnature.Firstly,Secondly,PeoplehadnewviewpointsduringtheRenaissance.Peoplefocusedmoreonhumanisticthemesratherthanre

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