新教材高中英语UNIT2OnwardsandupwardsPart4Writing提升训练含解析外研版选择性必修第一册

PAGEPAGE3Part4Writing记叙文写作写作题目假定你是李华,曾经在一所聋哑学校做过助教,请根据以下要点用英文写一篇关于你的助教经历。1.一位对生活失去信心的失聪女孩Jean在你的帮助下重拾生活信心;2.当时你遇到的最大困难是沟通障碍;3.你是如何克服困难的,并学到了什么。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

思路点拨主题助残经历体裁记叙文人称以第一人称为主时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主文章布局第一部分:概述助残经历;第二部分:遇到的困难及解决办法;第三部分:你的收获。遣词造句Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词填空1.adj.难堪的,尴尬的

2.adj.令人愉快的,讨人喜欢的

3.n.友谊;友好交往

4.adj.心烦意乱的,烦恼的

5.adv.然而,不过

6.v.锲而不舍,坚持不懈

答案1.panionship4.upset5.nevertheless6.persevereⅡ.本单元语块、语法运用1.完成句子(1)总的来说,帮助Jean重拾生活信心是一次愉快的经历。Onthewhole,Jeanrestoreherconfidenceinlifeis.

(2)我面对的最大的困难是沟通障碍。Thebiggestdifficultywasthecommunicationbarriers.

(3)此外,我尽一切努力与她建立友谊及互相的信任。Furthermore,Imadeeveryefforttowithher.

答案(1)helping;adelightfulexperience(2)Ifaced(3)establishcompanionshipandmutualtrust2.句式升级(4)用it作形式主语改写句(1)

(5)将句(2)改为强调句

答案(4)Onthewhole,itisadelightfulexperiencetohelpJeanrestoreherconfidenceinlife.(5)ItwasthecommunicationbarriersthatwerethebiggestdifficultyIfaced.连句成篇

参考范文Onthewhole,itisadelightfulexperiencetohelpJeanrestoreherconfidenceinlife.Frommymemory,whenwefirstmet,shewasalwaysupset,makingmeembarrassed.Meanwhile,itwasthecommunicationbarriersthatwerethebiggestdifficultyIfaced.Nevertheless,Imadeit.First,Iadvisedhertogathercouragetoconfrontthedifficultiesinsteadofescapingfromthem.Furthermore,Imadeeveryefforttoestablishcompanionshipandmutualtrustwithher.Eventually,whatmatteredmostwastopersevereinwhatIwasdoing.Fortunately,whatIgetfromthisexperienceisthatconfidenceanddeterminationcanreallycontributetooursuccessandthateveryoneshouldbeconfidentaboutlife.写作积累1.OnceIwasinvitedto...butwhathappenedlatermademefeel...2.AtfirstIthought...butitturnedouttobe...whichmademefeel...3.OnlywhenIwastoldby...didIbegintorealizewhatasillymistakeIhadmade.4.Seeingthis,MrSmithcouldn'thelplaughingandtoldmehowto...实战演练P108()假设你是Tom,请根据以下提示讲述你和父亲一起爬山的一次经历。1.去年暑假我和父亲早晨出发去爬山;2.在半路上,下起雨来,我们全身被淋湿了,又冷又累;3.我开始抱怨,想要放弃;4.父亲给予我鼓励和温暖;5.最终我们成功到达山顶,享受了美景。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

Part4Writing实战演练Onepossibleversion:IstillrememberthedaywhenIwentclimbingwithmyfatherinthelastsummervacation.Wesetoffearlyinthemorning.Unluckily,itbegantorainonthehalfway.Igotwetallthrough,feelingcoldandtired.SoIcouldn'thelpcomplainingandwantedtogiveup.Justatthattime,myfatherencouragedmenottogiveupandputhiscoatonmesoftly.Hetoldme,“Wewon