专题12 读后续写 高考英语二轮复习练案(教师版)

题12读后续写--讲练练案时间：分满分：1.【东省烟台市2021年考断性测试读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。ItaSaturdayJune,1988.Outofa-year-earlysummerboredom,setupatentinruralandintendedtosleepinit,stayedthefinishwatchingtheLakers'offwasalmostmidnightDadhadasleepupstairsforhourswhenknockedatthefrontoccurredtomenottoanswermysurprise,itwasagirlaboutagewithabloodyonforehead.“Hi.Maria.What'swrongyou?”Iaskedherwithconcern.embarrassed,shereplied:“I'mJane.”shehesitatedandthenaskedmecarefully,“Maystayfornight?I'llofftomorrowmorning.Seeingheruneasiness,Icomfortedher,“Takeeasy,Staymetonight.Iinvitedherintothehouse.Lookingaround,Janeappearedtohavecalmeddown.“LettreatyourinjuryIsaidandsheagreed.Icleansedbandaged(包)herinjuredforeheadandthenhersomebreadandbaconto“Wanttosleepinmytent?”Iaskedhershenodded.leftherthebathroom,Iwentlookforanothersleepingbag.Ireturned,Janewasseatedontheherfacecloudedbysadness.Walkingacrossthedarkyard,accompaniedintothetent.Welaydownsidebyside.Seizedbycuriosityconcern,constantlyturnedover,whathadtoherandhowshecamehere.Janetohavesensedthatandstartedtospeak.Jane'sfatherdiedcanceryearsbefore.didoddcleaningtoraiseher.tighthermothertriedtodowhatshecouldtosatisfyJane.Severalweeksbefore,accidentallyfancywhiteinstorewindow,whichshefellinlovewithatfirstsight.excitedlytoldheraboutthat,whopromisedtobuyasherbirthdaygift.Fromthenon,Janewaslookingforwardto注意：1.续写词数应为左；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应置作答。Jane's16thbirthdaycamebuthermotherdidn'thometheevening.________________________________________________________________________________________________112

________________________________________________________________________________________HavingtoldherJanesaidregrettedbeinginconsideratetoher________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Jane16thbirthdaycamebutherdidngethomeuntiltheevening.Thirstyforthedress,gotextremelydisappointedwhenseeinghermotherback-Shestormedbeforehermothercouldstopher.Janeangrilyaimlesslyonlyfindherselfinanunknownplacehourslater.Worsestill,shefelldownthedark,hurtingforehead.Painfulandhungry,shecametorealizesheshouldnsowillful,buttherenobodyaroundcouldturntoforhelp.Soshehadtomoveonuntiltheourhouse.HavingtoldherJanesaidregrettedbeinginconsideratetoher.Ikeptcomfortingheruntilweasleep.WhenDadawokeuswastoldthewholestorythemorning,hetoJaneseriously,’sdangeroustorunawayfromhome.Yourmommustanxiousaboutyoursafety.I’lldriveyouhomeimmediately.”Afterhour’sride,wereachedJanehome,infrontofwhichstoodaworriedwoman.Janerushedoverandhuggedhertightly,sayingtearfully,Mom.Witnessingthis,DadandIbreathedasighofrelief.【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者晚上在户外帐篷里睡觉时，遇到了与母亲赌气离家出走的，收留了她，第二天和爸爸送回家，母女和好的故事。1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容简16岁生日来了，但她的母亲直到那天晚上才回家可，第一段可描写简因为母亲没有给自己买喜爱的裙子而生气离家出走，最后来到作者的家里的经过。①由第二段首句内容了的事后，简说她后悔不体谅她的妈”可知，第二段可描写作者安简，告知爸爸简的故事，送简回家，母女和好的经过。2.续写线索：简与母亲生气—家出——到作者家里—安慰告父—送回家母女和好——感欣慰3.词汇激活行为类①生气离开stormedout/goangrily①.求帮助：turntofor/askforhelp/seekforhelp情绪类①.望：disappointed/discouraged/frustrated/depressed212

①.慰：【点睛】[高分句型Thirstyforthedress,Janegotextremelydisappointedwhenseeingherback-handed.使用了形容词短语作伴随状语和状语从句的省略结构[高分句型2].Painfulhungry,shecametorealizesheshouldnsowillful,buttherenobodyaroundshecouldturntofor使用了宾语从句和定语从句[高分句型3].Afterhour’sride,wereachedJane’shome,infrontofwhichstoodaworriedwoman.使了介词关系代词引导的定语从句2.【宁省辽阳市2021届三模】读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。ashopmustwalkedpastamilliontimesbefore,buthaveonlynoticeduntilnow,neverthoughttoenter.It'sabrownbrickbuildingwithsmallwindowdisplayofferingvariousforgettablethatofinteresttohaveextratimetodayanddecidetotakeaquicklook.Theinterior里)oftheisandittakesamomentformyeyesto-just.Astrongrosesmellhangsthicklyinair,isnearlytoturnmeaway.Inspiteofthis,continuefurthertheeyesscanningshelvesforanythinginteresting.Indeed,therearedifferentitems,andappealstome.“CanIyou?”Ilooktoseeelderlywomanbehindthecounter.Shelooksasurprised,Iwondershesawacustomerentershop.“Justlookingcasually,”Ireply.IafullcircleoftheplaceandthereisindeednothinghereIwishtopurchase.Ithemanagestostayinbusiness.Iheadtowardsdoor,butwhenInoticeabookonstand.Therevisibletitleon-leathercover,anditislockedcombinationlock密码锁).Besidethebook,thereisapaperwithnumbersonit.Thenumbersread:--32.Itrylockthecombination,butitdoesopen.Iamnowevencurioustodiscoverliesbetweenthebook'spages.thisbookabout?”Iaskthehasbeenstaringatmequietlythewholetime.“Dothecombination?“Ido,thewomanreplies,butnothingmore.Iambyherresponse,andI'vehadofthisplace.IturnleaveamalmostthewhenIhearsay,“Tryyourbirthday.312

Iwanderbackovertobook.She'scrazy,Ithink.Withindexfinger,hitthenumbersintosothattheynowmybirthmonth,year.注意：1.续写词数应为左；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应置作答。myastonishment,thelockopens._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Suddenly,Ihearavoice,tellingmeI'mtheshopassistantfindthenextcustomer._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】myastonishment,thelockopens.Ipullbacktheheavycoverandglancethroughthepages.can’tberight,”Iwhisperinshockasrealizebookisabiographyaboutme!Ilookupquestionthewoman,butsheisgonetheshopsuddenlydifferentandbrighter.Theshelvesarenowfilledwithallfavoritethings.Iwanderaroundtheagain.HowdidImissthisshopbefore?Iwouldoftheseitemsinitgladly!Suddenly,Ihearavoice,tellingmeI'mtheshopassistantfindthenextcustomer.sitbehindthecounter,waitingforacustomertocomein.However,theypastthewindowasthoughthewereinvisible.fewthatenterseemuninterestedhavetoorcomplainthatthesmellintheairistoostrong.Untilday,youngtakesaninterestinthebook.“Itwon'topen,shenotes.“Trybirthday,”Isay.【解析】本文讲述了主人公光顾了一家平平无奇的商店，就在准备离开的时候，他发现木架上有一本用码锁锁着的旧书，旁边的纸片上面还写着一串密码。在尝试用密码打开书失败后，他对这本书产生了更大的趣。这时店主告诉他，真正的密码是他的生日。强烈的好奇心驱使他在密码锁上输入了自己的生日。果然，打开了！但与此同时，原来的店主消失了，他成为了新的守店人，直到下一位对书感兴趣的客人出现。1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容令吃的是，锁开了”知，第一段可描写锁开后我所看到的书中的内容和这一行为引起的变化。①由第二段首句内容突，听到一个声音，告诉我我是店员，直到我找到下一个顾客可知，第二段可写我接替前任成为守店员后的工作和等待来下一个守店员的过程。412

2.续写线索：打开——店主消失周围的变——成为守店人—等待下一个顾客3.词汇激活行为类①.意到：noticed/see①.一看：aquicklook/havelook情绪类①.惊：surprised/astonished①.奇：【点睛】[高分句型1]can’tberight,Iwhisperinshockasrealizethebookabiographyabout（引时间状语从句）[高分句型2]Suddenly,hearavoice,tellingmetheshopassistantuntilIfindthenext（在分词短语作伴随状语、引时间状语从句）[高分句型theywalkpastthewindowasthoughtheplacewereinvisible.(as引导方式状语从句3.【苏等八省市新高考届三模拟试题】读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Jennyabrighteyed，fiveyearoldgirl.sheherwerecheckingoutthegrocery，sawaplasticnecklacepricedat$2.50.shethatandwhensheaskedherifwouldbuyitformothersaidisaprettyitcostsanawfullotofmoney.After，’llyouthenecklace，whengethomewecanmakeupalistofchoresthatyoudotoforthenecklace.Andforgetthatforyour，Grandmamightgivedollar，Okay？Jennyagreed，andhermotherboughtthepearlnecklaceforJennyworkedonherchoreshardevery，andsureenoughhergrandmagaveherbrandnewdollarbillforherbirthday.Soonhadpaidoffthepearls.HowJennylovedthose！Sheeverywheretokindergarten，andwhenshewentoutwithhertoerrands差)．shedidnwearwasintheshower.Hermotherhadtoldthattheywouldturnherneckgreen!JennyaverylovingDaddy.Jennywent，hewouldgetuphisfavoritechaireverynight512

readJennyherfavoritestory.Onenightwhenhefinishedthe，，，love？“Oh，，love”thegirlsaid.，，givemepearls.“OhpearlsJennyrefused.“ButyoufavoriteRememberhertomeyearforbirthday.herteapartytoo.Okay”“Oh，，okay.fatherbrushedhercheekkiss.“Good”注意：1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2．至少使用5个文中标有下线的关键词语；3．续写部分分为两段，每段的头语已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph：Aweeklater，fatheronceagainaskedJennyafterherstory________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph：Severaldays，Jennysfathercameintoreadaas，wassurprisedtofind________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

Possibleversion:Aweek，fatheronceagainaskedJennyafterstory.“Doyoulove，？“Ohyes，，youloveyou.meyourpearls.”mustyouaskfor？Jennyrefusedagain，“Notonlyfinishthose，alsoIspentthedollarbillgivenformybirthdayjusttopayforit.”Theybothfellintosilence.Thenherfatherherwarmhug.’sGoodnight，612

myone.”Severaldays，’sfathercameintoreadheraas，surprisedtofindsomethingunderthestorybookwhichturnedouttobethenecklace.canhaveit.”Jennyraised“Youknowloveyou.”fatherwasmovedbeyondwords.pulledsomethingoutofhispocket.Itwasaprettynecklacewithrealpearlsshining.“Themoreyouarewilling，morearelikelytoreceive.That’sthemeaningofsharinggiving.fatherhelpedJennyputonpearls.“You，love，【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了珍妮在和妈妈逛街时看上了一条仿制的珍珠项链，她很喜欢，过自己作杂务付清了珍珠项链的钱妮天戴着天晚上爸爸给珍妮讲完故事后珍妮爱不爱自己果爱的话，就把仿制的珍珠项链给他，珍妮拒绝了。1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容一后她的父亲讲完故事后再次问珍妮可知，第一段可描写珍妮爸爸再次问珍妮不爱自己，如果爱的话，就把仿制的珍珠项链给他，珍妮再次拒绝了。①由第二段首句内容几后当珍妮的父亲像往常一样进来给她读故事时，他惊讶地发可知，第二段可写珍妮把仿制的珍珠项链给了爸爸，爸爸很感动，给了珍妮一条真的珍珠项链。2.续写线索：询问—拒绝安给感—感悟3.词汇激活行为类①要求：for/want①拒绝：refusedturneddown①安慰：comforting/consoling情绪类感动：moved/touched【点睛】[高分句型1].NotdidfinishthosebutalsoIspentthedollarbillgivenforbirthdayjusttofor（于句首，使用部分倒装结构）[高分句型2].Thenfather，comfortingwithawarm（了现在分词短语作状语）[高分句型3].Severallater，whenJenny’sfathercameinreadastory，surprisedtofindsomethingthestory，turnedouttobethe（了由which引导的非限制性定语从句）4.【建省莆田市2021届中业班下学期3月）第二次教学质量检测】读后续写712

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Onceuponathecolorsoftheworldstartedtoquarrel.Allclaimedthattheywerethebest.Theymostimportant.ThemostThefavorite.Greensaid,“ClearlyIthemostimportant.Ithesignoflifeofhope.waschosenfortreesandleaves.Withoutme,allanimalsdie.”Blueinterrupted:“YouonlythinkaboutearthbutconsidertheskyandtheItisthewaterthatthebasisoflife.Theskygivesspacepeace.Withoutmypeace,wouldallbenothing.”Yellowchuckled,“Youaresoserious.Ibringlaughterwarmthintotheworld.Thesunisyellow,themoonisyellow,theareyellow.Everyyoulookatasunflower,theworldstartssmile.Withoutmetherewouldbenofun.Orangestartednext.“Iamcolorofhealthstrength.IpreciousforIserveneedsofhumanlife.Icarrythemostimportantvitamins.WhenIfilltheskyatsunriseorsunset,mybeautyissostrikingthatnogivesanotherthoughttoanyofyou.”ThenRedshoutedout,rulerofofyou.bringfireintotheblood.colorofpassionoflove.Withoutme,theearthwouldbeasemptythemoon.Purpleroseuptohisfullheight,“Iamthecolorofroyaltyandpower.Kings,chiefs,andbishopsalwayschosenmeforIamsignofauthorityandwisdom.Peopledoquestionme!Theylistenandobey.Finally,Indigospoke,ofme.colorofsilence.Youhardlynoticeme,butwithoutmeallbecomesuperficial.representthoughtreflection,twilightdeepwater.Andsocolorson，convincedofhisorherownsuperiority.Theirquarrelingbecamelouderandlouder.注意：1.续写词数应为左；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应作答。Suddenlytherewasflashofbrightlightening,thunderrollingbooming.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Doingtheyweretold,thecolorsunitedandjoinedhands.812

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Para1:Suddenlytherewasaflashofbrightlightening,thunderrollingbooming.startedpourdownrelentlessly.Thequarrelcametoanabruptstop,panicenvelopingthesecolors.Theycrouchedindrawingcloseanotherforcomfort.Rightthen,avoicepiercedthroughthemidsttheclamor,Youfoolishcolors,fightingyourselves,eachtryingtodominatetherest.thatyouwereeachmadeforaspecialpurpose,uniqueanddifferent?Joinhandswithanother.”Para2:Doingtheywerethecolorsunitedandjoinedhands.Togethertheyarainbowacrossthesky,drivingoffthethunderandtherain.Therunslowlyroseraysgoldenlightscatteringontheearth.Allthecolorssmiledateachother,brighteningthewholeworld,withhopefulgreen,peacefulcheerfulyellow,energeticorange,passionatered,powerfulpurplethoughtfulindigo.Fromon,agoodraintheworld,arainbowwillappearinthesky,remindingpeopletheworkmiracle.【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了从前，世界上的各种颜色进行过一次争吵。所有人都声称自己最好的。他们最重要的、最有用的和最受人喜欢的，且各自陈述了理由，最后突然打起了雷，一个声音说他都是独一无二的该此携手后色们按照声音说的那样团结在一起牵它们一起形成了一道横跨空的彩虹，驱散了雷声和雨水。金色的光芒慢慢地洒向大地。1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容突，道闪电闪过，雷声隆隆，轰隆轰隆”知，第一段可描写是什么终止了颜色们的争吵。①由第二段首句内容颜们照声音说的那样团结在一起，手牵手可知，第二段可描写颜色听了个声音的话后，团结在一起形成了美丽的彩虹。2.续写线索：颜色争吵开打雷—一个声音告诉颜色它们都很特别—颜团结在一起形成一道彩虹3.词汇激活行为类912

突然停止：comeanabruptstop/breakoff靠近：close/getclose驱散：off/dispel情绪类无情：relentlessly/heartless愚蠢：/stupid【点睛】[高分句型1]Donthatyouwereeachmadeforaspecialpurpose,uniqueanddifferent?用that引宾语从句[高分句型2]Togethertheyarainbowacrossthesky,drivingoffthunderandthe用了现在分词作状语)5.【北省2021届三二轮复习联考（一）新高考II卷读续写阅读下面材料其容和所段落开头语续写两段构一篇完整的短文的词数应左右。FarupthemountainsofCanada,thereanoldabandonedhouse.itwasoccupiedbyyoungcouplewhotodistancethemselvesthetroublesomeaffairsofthismodernworld.theyweremilesawayfromnearesttown.Bob,thehusband,theoccasionaltripintotownbuysupplieswhereasJan,hiswife,spentherfreetimebyfire,sewing.Theirlifewassimplypeaceful.Then,onemidwinterday,wokeupbedwithastrangeherbones.Puttingdownoverwork,Bobaskedhertobedandmadesuresherested.ThoughJanwasimpatienttogettoherchores杂,Bobcomfortedher,“Relax,Sugar.You’reoverdoingthings.thesechoreswillbeherewhenyourecover.”However,Janseemedtogettingworseinsteadofrecovering.Byevening,shewasrunningafeverandingreaterpain.Inspitehisefforts,Bobcouldnoteasehersuffering.thensuddenly,shestartedtogetintounconsciousness.wasobviousthatshewasseriouslyWhatcoulddo?hadexperiencetreatingthesickJanwasgettingworsetheminute.thatthereanolddoctorintownlivedthreedownhill.fat,therewasnowaythedoctorcouldmakeuptheirhouse.Somethinghadtodonequickly!Bobrackedhisbrainsbuthadideaatall.Theonlythingtodotogotothedoctor.In’scondition,couldneverwalkthatinthedeepsnow.Bobwouldhavetocarryher!Bobsearchedhismindforwaytopoor,sickThen,heremembered.madeasledge橇sothattheycouldridetogetherthemountain.nevergotaroundtoitthough,becausethewholemountainthicklycoveredwithrocksand