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雅思写作考试介 Writing Writing TASK1答题 TASK2答题 评分标 TASK2大作文写作解析与训 雅思写作TASK2写作步 审 构 TASK2写作驳论类题型解题方 TASK2大作文解题技巧总 TASK1小作文写作解析与训 TASK1写作步 有趋势的图表解题方 无趋势的图表解题方 流程图&地图题解题方 1/3≥150202/3≥250WritingThegraphbelowshowstheproportionofthepopulationaged65andoverbetween1940and2040inthreedifferentcountriesSummarizetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeaturesandmakecomparisonswhererelevant0图总结信息WritingTask1－数据类>2ndline 4thpie1 5thflow 6thWritingYoushouldspendabout40minutesonthistaskWriteaboutthefollowingtopicSomepeopleargue ernmentsshouldsupportthefundforartswhile2suggestthatthemoneyshouldbeusedforpublichealthandeducationDiscussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion reasons examplesfromyourownknowledgeorexperienceWriteatleast250words话题＋问题TowhatextentdoyouagreeorDiscussbothviewsandgiveyourIsthisapositiveornegative原因影响3TASK1答题45TASK2答题6PAGEPAGE7Task2评分区评分标严重扣分项目<5underlengthNo.ofwords 保证基本分数Task1100Task2 TaskResponse(TR)内容CoherenceandCohesion(CC) LexicalResources(LR) 评分标准-TR5or66分or7题目Therateofcrimescommittedbyteenagersisincreasingthroughouttheworld.Discussthepossiblereasonsandgivesuggestionsonhowtosolvetheproblem原因150words解决30words6分内容－完成但不平衡题目:Somepeoplebelieveernmentsshouldcontroltheuseoffreshwaterwhileothersthinktheyshoulduseaswhatevertheyneed.Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion(2013.9.28)ernmentsaresupposedtocontrolthefreshwaterconsumptionsincetheresourceisnotinexhaustible.Globalwarmingleadstotheriseofsealevel,thenextgenerationswouldbeshortoftheresource.ernmentsaresupposedtocontrolthefreshwaterconsumptionsincetheresourceisnotinexhaustible.Thenextgenerationswouldbeshortoftheresource.ernmentsaresupposedtocontrolthefreshwaterconsumptionsincetheresourceisnotinexhaustible.Althoughthereisconsiderablewaterfromoceansonearth,itisnotthecaseforfreshwater.Infact,theusablefreshwatertakesuplessthan1%ofthetotalresources.Nextgenerationswouldbeshortoftheresourcegivencurrentusage.Itisestimatedthattwo-thirdsofglobalpopulationwouldfacewaterstressby2050.评分标准-CCor6or7ernmentsshouldsupportthefundsforartsbecauseernmentscanencouragecitizenstolearnmoreaboutartssuchasmusic,painting,andphotography.Artsareernmentsshouldsupportthefundsforarts.Becauseitcanencouragecitizenstolearnmoreabouttheartssuchasmusic,painting,andphotography.Itisimportantforthemcitizens’mentaldevelopment.ernmentsshouldsupportthefundsforarts.Becausethispracticecanencouragecitizenstolearnmoreaboutthisformofculturesuchasmusic,painting,andphotography,whichisimportantformentaldevelopmentofthepublic.ernmentsshouldsupportthefundsforarts.Becausethispracticecanencouragecitizenstolearnmoreaboutthisformofculture,whichisimportantfortheernmentsshouldsupportthefundsforarts.Becausethispracticecanencouragecitizenstolearnmoreaboutthisformofculturesuchasmusic,painting,andphotography,whichisimportantforthepublic.Thefirstreasonforartinvestmentinvolvescitizens.Specifically,thispracticecanencouragethepublictolearnmoreaboutthisformofculture.Ifernments-fundedpaintingexhibition,concert,andoperaareorganizedandopentocitizensfor,theywouldliketovisitandgainmoreicunderstandingandevendevelopart分结构－递进清楚,评分标准-LRor6分or7 education-parenting;schoolingart-music;painting;operagointolosespendmoneyinGirlsaregorgeousItismagnificent ernmentstosupportpublicItisobligatory ernmentstosupportpublic评分标准-GRA5or66分or7SupportartimportanternmentswhichshouldsupportthefundsforernmentssupporthealthandeducationratherthanartisimportantforernmentsupportthefundsforartsernmentsinvestatartWhenpeopledidnothaveTV,theyreadbooksandtheywouldimaginethedetailinthestories.ButnowpeoplewatchTVwitheverydetail,andtheydonotneedtothink.WhenTVwasnotinvented,peoplewhooftenreadbooksintheirsparetimewouldimaginethedetailsinstories.ButtodayTVviewerswatchTVwitheverydetail.Itisnotnecessaryforthemtothink.BeforetheadventofTV,peoplewhooftenreadbookswouldimagineeverydetailinthestories,whichisquitedifferentfromtodaywhenTVviewersareexposedtopassiveinformationwithouttheexercisesofimagination.写审工作满意VSSomepeoplearguejobsatisfactionismoreimportantthanjobsecurity.Othersbelieveapermanentjobismoreimportant.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.People’slifeexpectancyislongerthanWhatarethepossibleeffectsoflongerlivingonindividualsandthesociety?FAIL(2014-Somepeoplebelievethatyoungpeoplewhocommitseriouscrimesshouldbepunishedinthesamewayasadults.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?2012.5.26题目 ernmentsshouldsupportthefundfor2014.2.22题目： ernmentsshouldpaysomeoforallthecostofchildren’spre-school&primary解决：审题时,划出题目中的who,whatwhen,wherewhyStudentsshouldspendsometimestudyingandlivinginanothercountryinordertolearnlanguageandculture.TowhatextentdoyouagreeorSomepeoplethinkcommunicationbyusingcomputersandphoneswillhavesideeffectsonyoungpeople’swritingandreadingskills.Towhatextentdoyouagreeor Nowadays,peoplealwaysthrowtheoldthingsawaywhentheybuynewthings(第一句somepeopleclaimthatthebrokenthingsshouldberepairedandusedagain第二句).Whatfactorscausethisphenomenon?Whateffectthephenomenonleadsto?同意与否－观点(e.gSomepeopleargue…)原因解决－事实(nowadays,recently…)审题－跑题情况4Somepeoplebelievethatlivinginbigcitiesisbadforpeople’shealth.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?不同意－xxx是不好的≠ Somepeoplebelievethatlivinginbigcitiesisbadforpeople’shealth.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?构Youshouldspendabout40minutesonthistaskWriteaboutthefollowingtopicSomepeoplearguethaternmentsshouldsupportthefundforartswhileotherssuggestthatthemoneyshouldbeusedforpublichealthandeducation.DiscussbothviewsandgiveyouropinionGivereasonsforyouranswerandincludeanyrelevantexamplesfromyourownknowledgeorexperienceWriteatleast250因果构思－deductiveernmentsdonotsupportthefundsfor→nomaintenancefortangibleandintangibleculturalheritage(e.g.artworkinmuseumsandPekingOpera)→坏的结果thelossofculturalernmentsdonotsupportthefundsforeducation(e.g.no scholarship,schoolsubsidiary)→thefinanciallydisadvantageddropoutoftheschools&theadvantagedattendschoolseveneliteschools→theformerfindslabourworkwithlow e&thelatterfindsdecentandwell-paidjobs→坏的结果theincreasinggapbetweentherichandthe因果构思练题目：Somepeoplethinkalllawbreakersshouldbeputintoprisons换角度考虑问题（站在参与者角度ernmentssupportthefundsforart,healthoreducation ernments?ernmentsinofficegainmore→healthandForcitizensorPaytax→gainrewards→healthand换角度考虑问题题目：Moreadultsworkfromhomeandmorechildrenstudyfromhomeascomputer escheaperandmoreaccessible.Doyouthinkitisapositiveornegativedevelopment?(2011.3.19)TASK2写作对比论证类题型解题Studentsatschoolanduniversitylearnfarmorefromlessonswiththeirteachersratherthanothersources(forexample,internetandevision).TowhatextentDoyouagreeordisagree?Theenvironmentalproblemintheworldcannotbesolvedbyordinarypeople,andernmentsandlargecompaniesshouldberesponsibleforthisproblem.whatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?SomepeoplethinkwatchingTVisbadforchildren,whileothersthinkthatwatchingTVhasmorebeneficialeffectsonchildren.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion2013.2.2≈2012.8.4≈2010.9.25≈2010.3.27≈2009.5.16Moreadultsworkfromhomeandmorechildrenstudyfromhomeascomputer escheaperandmoreaccessible.DoyouthinkitisapositiveorStudentsatschoolanduniversitylearnfarmorefromlessonswiththeirteachersratherthanothersources(forexample,internetandevision).TowhatextentDoyouagreeordisagree?.Introduction背景＋题目＋引出下文Body1：第一个方面对比(time)Body2：第二个方面对比(effect)Body3：第三个方面对比(content)Conclusion：总结立场（对比以上面or无立场（分情况讨论SomepeoplethinkwatchingTVisbadforchildren,whileothersthinkthatwatchingTVhasmorebeneficialeffectsonchildren. Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion找出对立面：TV&withoutTV划出限定内容:children(2-12)介绍背景－该存在,发展状Therebee.g.therehavebeenmanyenvironmentalproblemsinthepastwitness/experience+变化e.g.ThepastdecadeshavewitnessedtheemergenceofmanyenvironmentalThepreviousdecadeshavewitnessedtheemergenceofvirtuallearning,whichmeansstudentsareallowedtolearnonlineorthroughTV存在Thenewmodehasbeenwell-adoptedinmanyeducationalinstitutionsespeciallyuniversities Itisunclearwhetherstudentsgainmoreviathenewapproachorconventionalclasseswithteachers(题目),whichisopentodiscussionconsideringthefollowingaspects(下文).Thepreviouscenturieshavewitnessedtheemergenceofenvironmentalissues,rangingfromregionalproblemslikepollutiontoglobalissuessuchasozonedepletionandglobalwarming背景Thesolutionsseemsimplyeitheraddressedbycommonpeopleorjustblamingadministrationsandlargebusiness (题目whichwillbefurtherexploredasfollows下文Introduction相关词汇emerge=appearv. (emergence=appearance=advent)n. change=transformv. （change=transformation)n.改变 v.发展mon=prevalentadj.explorev.探讨presentv.呈现reportv.报告Introductionexample,SomepeoplethinkwatchingTVisbadforchildren,whileothersthinkthatwatchingTVhasmorebeneficialeffectsonchildren.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion对比论证 sampleTVhasaffectedourlifeineverypossibleway介绍背景Itsinfluenceonchildreniscontroversialeitherbeingbeneficialorharmful引出题目whichwillbefurtherexploredasfollows(引出下文).对比论证body中心句:对比论证bodyparagraphsThefirstconsiderationistime.Thereistimelimitinconventionalteacher-studentsmodes.Studentscanonlylearnfromlecturesortutorials.Ontheotherhand,studyingfromTVoronlinemeanstheycanlearnanytimeandrepeatthecontentatwill.Besides,itisfarmoretime-savingtolearnanywherewithouttravellingtocampus.Thistimeefficiencyleadstomoreknowledgeacquisition.对比论证body中心句Thefirstconsideration(factor/variable/reason/exnation/justification)istimeLearningmoreorless题目dependson＝relyonbesubjectto/beinvolvedwith/bedeterminedby)time(第一个方面)对比论证body对比论证body与之相比whereas=bycontrast=in =ontheother 句与之相反reversely=onthecontrary对比论证bodyparagraphexample,仿写以下题目bodySomepeoplethinkwatchingTVisbadforchildren,whileothersthinkthatwatchingTVhasmorebeneficialeffectsonchildren.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion对比论证bodyparagraphssampleThefirstconsiderationisentertainment.BeforetheadventofTV,childrenoftenengageinoutdooractivitiessuchassportsandgamestoentertain.However,therecreationalactivityforchildrentodayistositoncouchesandwatchTVforageswithoutexercisebutexcessiveintakeofjunkfood.Inthiscase,healthproblemssuchasobesitycanbeexpected,whichcanbepartiallyattributedtoTV.Body1BodyBody3对比论证bodymoreover=inadditionadditionally=furthermore＋句Thefirstreason…anotherfactor…apartfrom=inspiteofBody1Thefirstconsiderationis Body2Apartfromtimeitisfarmoreeffectivetolearnfromlecturersandtutors.Body3Anothervariableis 对比论证bodyparagraph参照example,仿写以下题目body段中心 SomepeoplethinkwatchingTVisbadforchildren,whileothersthinkthatwatchingTVhasmorebeneficialeffectsonchildren.DiscussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinionsampleanswerBody1Thefirstconsiderationisentertainment中心句Body2:Inspiteofrecreation,TVaffectsearlyeducationtosomeextent(中心句).Body3:Besides,inter alcommunicationisessentialaswell (中心对比论证or无立场（part-timestudents和remoteareastudentsconsideringtimebutitisnotcaseintermsofeffectandlearningcontent总结teachingmethodcanguaranteemoreknowledgeskillandthinkingacquisition比consideringtimebutitisnotcaseintermsofeffectandlearningcontent(总结）.Forpart-timeandremoteareastudentsitissuggestedtostudyintheformerway.Yetforthosewhooftenfailtocontrolandgainskillsandthinkingratherthanjustknowledgetheycanlearnmorefromtraditionallearning（分情况讨论总结－thediscussion(argumentation)suggest(=show/demonstrate/illustrate)that…=Ibelieve…建议：itisadvised exampleSomepeoplethinkwatchingTVisbadforchildren,whileothersthinkthatwatchingTVhasmorebeneficialeffectsonchildren.DiscussbothviewsandgiveyourownTheenvironmentalproblemintheworldcannotbesolvedbyordinarypeople,andernmentsandlargecompaniesshouldberesponsibleforthisproblem.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?Everybodyshouldstayinschooluntil18.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree(2010.6.11/2014.3.8)Somepeoplethinkthatwecanuseanimalinanywayforthebenefitsofhumans.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree Crimeisaproblemallovertheworldandthereisnothingtodotopreventit.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree? Ifaproductisgoodorifitmeetspeople’sneeds,peoplewillbuyit.Therefore,advertisingisunnecessaryandnothingmorethanaformofentertainment.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?(2009.4.18)Somepeoplethinkthatmenandwomenhavedifferentqualitiesandsosomejobsaresuitableformenandsomejobsaresuitableforwomen.TowhatextentdoyouagreeorSomepeopleholdthattechnologicalprogressinthelast100yearshasbroughtnegativeeffectsonthesociety.TowhatextentdoyouagreeorSomepeoplebelievethatlivinginbigcitiesisbadforpeople’shealth.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?(2014.03.01)Task2写作驳论类题型解题方过于绝对(any/nothing/allagreeordisagree有因果关系(sothereforeagreeordisagree利弊类话题(XXisbad)＋agreeordisagreeIfaproductisgoodorifitmeetspeople’sneeds,peoplewillbuyit.Therefore,advertisingisunnecessaryandnothingmorethanaformofentertainment.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?(2009.4.18)原因：ifaproductisgoodormeetpeople’sneedpeoplewill结果：advertisingisunnecessaryandjustAdvertisingisunnecessaryandjustIfaproductisgoodormeetspeople’sneed,peoplewillbuyPeoplewillnotbuy-cannotPeoplewillnotbuy-theproductisnotAdvertisingisnecessary–itisnotjustforsalesbutmoreaimslikeraisingawarenessorpublicitySomepeopleholdthattechnologicalprogressinthelast100yearshasbroughtnegativeeffectsonthesociety.Towhatextentdoyouagreeor划出限定内容-限定－technologicalprogressinthelast100yearse.g.phone,Internet,aircraft,nuclearweapon…观点Technologicalprogressinthelast100yearshasbroughtnegativeeffectsonthesociety.thelossofabilities(Internet,phone,home1－theproblemcanbelessqualitycommunication(phone,Internet,TV,2－theproblemcanbesevenwar(WMD-weaponofmass3－theproblemcanbe驳论结构Introduction:题目＋观点Body1：反驳1Body2Body3Ps：Body2or3个都可，看具体文章情况驳论Introduction介绍对方观点，可用insist,assert, 等Advertisinghaspenetratedlifeineverypossibleway,fromntoTVshowsponsorship背景Itisassertedthatadvertisementsareredundantsinceconsumerswouldnaturallypurchasegoodswhichcaterfortheirneeds（对方观点－题目).However,thestandcannotbewell-justified(我题目：Somepeopleholdthattechnologicalprogressinthelast100yearshasbroughtnegativeeffectsonthesociety.Towhatextentdoyouagreeor(背景).Itisassertedthattechnologicaladvancesaredetrimentalforcommunities（对方观点－题目).However,Ibelievetheopinionis Thelastcenturyhaswitnessedtheemergenceofmanytechnologicaladvancesinmanyfieldssuchas munication,transportationandnationalsecurity(背景).Itisassertedthattheadvancesaredetrimentalforcommunities（对方观点－题目).However,Ibelievetheopinionis Introductionexample写出以下题目的somepeoplethinkthatmenandwomenhavedifferentqualitiesandsosomejobsaresuitableformenandsomejobsaresuitableforwomen.Towhatextentdoyouagreeor驳论 sampleGenderdiscriminationhasbeencontroversialanddebatable(背景Thereisanassumptionthatmenandwomenaredesirablefordifferentpositionsduetogenderdifferentiation(题目),which,however,isnotlegitimatetogreatextent(观点).驳论Bodyparagraph驳论body驳论body （e.g.学技术没有有前途驳论body反驳原因：学技术没用e.g.or驳论body对方观点：internationaltourismshouldbe驳论bodytechnologicalprogresseshavenegativeeffectson对方原因：air nesandotherelectronicdeviceswhichrelyonfossilfuel–environmentalproblems提出解决方法：technologicaldevelopmentsuchasalternativeenergycanbe驳论body对方观点：Mediashouldnotreportcrime对方原因：peoplewillknowhowtocommitcrimesandtake反驳因果关系：NotallwillcommitcrimesInsteadpeoplewouldknowhowtoprotectthemselvesfromcrimes.驳论body对方观点：internationaltourismshouldbe对方原因：thetourismbringsprofitstolocalbody对方观点：StudentslearnmorefromothersourcessuchasInternetand对方原因：Theycanaccessmore反驳对方原因：theinformationmaybe反驳对方因果关系：accessingmoredoesnotmeanlearningmoreThestudentsmaybedistracted.驳论body对方观点：Studentsshouldstudyorliveinanother对方原因：theycanlearnlanguageandcultureeffectivelyinthis反驳原因somestudentscannotlearniftheydonotblendinlocal其他方式也可以得到这个好处theycanlearnfromInternetandmediainamorecost-effectiveway.驳论body驳论bodyBecause=as=since=inthat+句.Becauseof=dueto=owington.However=yet=nevertheless＋句inotherwordswhichmeansthat驳论bodyparagraphItisclaimedthatmarketsdonotrequireadvertisingsinceconsumerswouldpurchaseprovidedthesoundproductscanfulfillneeds(对方观点＋原因).Despitesomerationalitytocertainextent,thisargumentcanbeeasily (承认＋反驳).Tobespecific,consumersdonotnecessarilypurchaseinthiscaseiftheycannotaffordortheproductsremainedunknownwhichmeansadvertisingcanacttointroducetheproductstothepublic(解释反驳).驳论bodyparagraphexample,仿写以下题目bodysomepeoplethinkthatmenandwomenhavedifferentqualitiesandsosomejobsaresuitableformenandsomejobsaresuitableforwomen.TowhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreebodyparagraphSampleanswerThereisaperceptionthatjobsaresuitablefordifferentgendersduetogenderdistinction(对方观点＋原因).Althoughthepointissomehowsensible,itisnotthecaseconsideringpresentsituation(承认＋反驳).Therehasbeenlessdifferenceinrecentdecades:todaymanymalespossesscertainfemininefeatures(likewearingperfume)andviceversaforfemales(suchasbeingphysicallyfit) 驳论驳论直接回答问题“Towhatextentdoyouagreeorpartiallyagree/agreetosomeagreetogreat/largecompley/totallydisagreeObjectto/refuteOverall,Itendto(beinclinedto)objecttotheopinionTheargumentationshowsthattheopinionhasmadelimited驳论建议or预 (让结论不重复6分TR-7分建议：itisadvised Without+Inbrief,Iaminclinedtoobjecttotheopinionstated.Advertisingisindispensibleinmanyways(总结－重申立场).Withoutthemarketingtool,therewillbepoorconnectionbetweenmanufacturersandconsumers(预测).conclusionexample,somepeoplethinkthatmenandwomenhavedifferentqualitiesandsosomejobsaresuitableformenandsomejobsaresuitableforwomen.TowhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreesampleOverall,jobcategorizingbasedongenderisunnecessaryandillegitimate(总结－重申立场).Actually,mysuggestionistointroducelegislationsincetoavoidthesituation.(建议).somepeoplethinkthatmenandwomenhavedifferentqualitiesandsosomejobsaresuitableformenandsomejobsaresuitableforwomen.TowhatextentdoyouagreeorInmanypartsoftheworld,childrenandteenagersarecommittingmorecrimes.Whyisthecasehappening?Howshouldchildrenandteenagersbepunished?(2010.08.05)OlderpeoplewhoneedemploymenthavetocompetewithyoungerWhatproblemwillthiscause?Howtosolvethisproblem?Somepeoplethinkthefunctionofuniversityeducationistopreparestudentsforemploymentbutothersbelievethatuniversityeducationcanoffermanyotherfunctions.Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.GivereasonsandincludeanyrelevantexamplesfromyourknowledgeandexperienceTASK2写作因果论证类题型解题Inmanypartsoftheworld,childrenandteenagersarecommittingmorecrimes.Whyisthecasehappening?Howshouldchildrenandteenagersbepunished?childrenandteenagerparentingissuesmediaissuesschoolingissuesparentingissues:parentshaveactedpoorerthanthepastmediaissues-mediahasbeenmoreinfluentialthanpunishmentissues:legislationhasbeenmoretolerabletowardsthe结论：Sotheycommit1：Childrenandteenagersareexposedtoexcessiveviolentmoviesand2Childrenandteenagershavepoorjudgmentcomparedwithadults前提 4itisthecaseforalongperiod结果theymay进一步结果theymaybullyotherswhichcanescalateintoviolentcrimessuchasvandalismandassault.childrenandteenagerswithpoorjudgmentMedia-moreinfluentialthanbeforechildrenandteenagerswithpoorjudgmentisdepictedasattractiveandheroicinthefiitisthecaseforalongperiodaccessorbeexposedtomoreTVshowsandfi-Imitate-moremoreviolentMoreparentingmorechildrenandteenagerMoreparentingincreasingworkingpressureandlessparentingMorechildrenandteenagersareharborlackofattentionvulnerableeasytobemisledBody1：回答问题1Body2：回答问题2IntroductionInmanypartsoftheworld,childrenandteenagersarecommittingmorecrimes.Whyisthecasehappening?Howshouldchildrenandteenagersbepunished?因果论证 sampleCrimesnotjustconcernadultsbutinvolvemoreoffendersunder 背景Juveniledelinquencyorevenchildrencrimerateshavebeensoaring(题目).Itis(因果论证Bodyparagraph因果论证body中心句-概括全段内容Bothparentsandmediayapartindrivingmorechildrenandadolescentstobe因果论证Body因果论证bodyA because=as=since=inthat (A+because+B,AB都是句子)becauseof=dueto=owingtoAdueto+BA是句子B是名词) (AresultfromBAB都是名词A so=therefore=asaresult=asaconsequence=whereby(A+so+B,AB都是句子)leadto=resultin=contributeto=beresponsibleforAresultinBAB都是名词)Bothparentsandmediayapartindrivingmorechildrenandteenagerstooffenders(中心句).Mediahasenjoyeditspopularityinthepastyearsandithasunderstandablyaffectedyoungergenerationssignificantly.ThisgroupofpeoplewithpoorjudgmenthaveaccessandareexposedtomorefiandTVshowsinwhicharedepictedasattractiveandheroic.Ifitisthecaseforalongperiod,imitationandviolentbehaviorsuchasbullycanbeexpected,whichmayleadtoviolentcrimessuchasvandalismandassault(1扩展因果论证BodyItislikely/possible/probable因果论证bodyparagraphOlderpeoplewhoneedemploymenthavetocompetewithyoungerpeople.Whatproblemwillthiscause?Howtosolvethisproblem?(2015.04.11)→Theyoung→advantageinworkce→Lessmotivation→Mediocreworkperformancelessprofits→Theold→disadvantagein Thecompetitionaffectsboththeagedandyoungeremployees中心句Iftheformergroupshavetocompetewiththelatter,oldpeopleunderstandablywouldbedisadvantagedinworkceduetotheirphysicalandmentalweakness(suchashealthproblemsandslowreactionTherefore,frustrationandotherpsychologicalissuescanbeexpected(原因1扩展).Apartfromtheinfluenceontheelderly,youngeremployeeswouldbelessmotivatedandevenreluctanttoimproveowingtotheiradvantageinthecompetition.Foreach seekingforhigheroutputandprofitsthisdeficiencywouldbeunpleasantforeveryemployer2扩展因果论证Body例如educationWho(谁教育／谁被教育？）What(教育什么？)Where(在哪教育？）How(如何教育？)(Parents(who)shouldattendparentinglectures(how)givenbypsychologicalscholars(who),inwhichexamplesofpoorparentingapproachanditsconsequence(suchasaspoiledchildwhoendsupinjail)wouldbepresented(what).Thislectureshouldbecompulsoryeveryyear(when).Inthisway,theparentswouldbewellawareofrighteducationalmethods(why).因果论证Tosummarizetheincreasingoffencescanbeattributedtothefailuresofmediaandparents.Theseoffendersshouldbepunishedinspecificapproaches(总结).Assumingtheissueisnotaddressedproperly,therewillbebotheconomicandsocialproblems(预测).Olderpeoplewhoneedemploymenthavetocompetewithyoungerpeople.Whatproblemwillthiscause?Howtosolvethisproblem?(2015.04.11)均分5.2分以下方法针对需要6.5分及以上人群TASK2大作文解题技巧总雅思写作Task21.教育2.科技3.4.就业5.环境6.社会7.文化8.9.10.其Advertisingdiscouragespeoplefrombeingdifferentindividualsbymakingusallwanttodothesameandlookthesame.Doyouagreeordisagree?2004.8.14Thereisageneralincreaseofanti-socialbehaviourandalackofrespecttoothers.Whatdoyouthinkarecausesofthis?Whatsolutionscanyousuggest?Advertisingdiscouragespeoplefrombeingdifferentindividualsbymakingusallwanttodothesameandlookthesame.Doyouagreeordisagree?2004.8.14Research中文资源－，知乎(6.5分以下） (6.5分及以上）majornuisance(e.g.unsolicitedcommercialandother适用题目：Todayconsumersarefacinganincreasingamountofadvertisingfromcompetingcompanies.Towhatextentdoyouthinkconsumersareinfluencedbyadvertisement? Whatmeasurescanbetakentoprotectthem?适用题目：Todayconsumersarefacinganincreasingamountofadvertisingfromcompetingcompanies.Towhatextentdoyouthinkconsumersareinfluencedbyadvertisement?WhatmeasurescanbetakentoprotectthemAdvertising’smanipulationofwomen’saspirationtocertainidealtypesportrayedinadvertising.Advertising’smanipulationofwomen’saspirationtocertainidealtypesportrayedinadvertising.适用题目：Advertisingdiscouragespeoplefrombeingdifferentindividualsbymakingusallwanttodothesameandlookthesame.Doyouagreeordisagree?2004.8.14/2012.10.27练习时请计时40mins,期间不能查字典TaskResponse(TR)内容CoherenceandCohesion(CC) LexicalResources(LR) TaskResponseTR):2:（看不懂－不清楚分or6分内容or7分内容TaskResponseTR)题目：Advertisingdiscouragespeoplefrombeingdifferentindividualsbymakingusallwanttodothesameandlookthesame.Doyouagreeordisagree?2004.8.14Bodyparagraph1:Somepeoplebelieveadvertisingmakesallconsumerstobehavesimilarlyandlooksimilar.However,advertisingisimportantforsales.Withoutadvertisement,productscannotbeintroducedtoconsumers.题目：Advertisingdiscouragespeoplefrombeingdifferentindividualsbymakingusallwanttodothesameandlookthesame.Doyouagreeordisagree?2004.8.14Bodyparagraph1:Somepeoplebelieveadvertisingmakesallconsumerstobehavesimilarlyandlooksimilar.However,itisnotthecaseformostconsumerswhoaredifferent.Itisunlikelythatadvertisementwillchangethediversity.5分内容－6题目：Advertisingdiscouragespeoplefrombeingdifferentindividualsbymakingusallwanttodothesameandlookthesame.Doyouagreeordisagree?2004.8.14Bodyparagraph1:Somepeoplebelieveadvertisingmakesallconsumerstobehavesimilarlyandlooksimilar.However,itisnotthecaseformostconsumerswhoarediverseinmanywayssuchasgender,financialstatus,purchasingbehavior.Forexample,mostmalesareunlikelytoprefersamecommoditiesasfemales,likegoodsinpink,purses,andcosmetics.Itisunlikelythatadvertisementcanmakeallgenderstobuysameproductsandresembleseachother.(6分内容－7分内容2CoherenceandCohesion 结替代找到重复部分，替代／找到所有代词，看是否有替代不清的部分，改正递进：每段写topicsentence,整理段落内容顺序，先宽泛再详细分or6分结构or7分结构 重复问题：积累同义词advertisementcommercial(TVorradioadvertisement);sponsorship,promotion5分or6分词汇6分or7分词汇3LexicalResources DevelopicWeshoulddevelopthe改为：theeconomyshouldbedevelopedThismethoddefiniywillimproveeconomy.改为：Thismethodislikelytoimprove4.GrticalRangeandAccuracy 语5分or66分or7分语法Ifteenagersareexposedtoexcessiveviolentmoviesaredescribedascoolandattractiveinthemovie,theymayimitatethebehaviour.