高考英语基础写作正反观点

基础写作评分标准Criteria

MarksContent（内容）５４３２１(是否包括所有提示要点,是否用5句话表达全文）Language（语言）８７６５４３２１０

(观点表达是否清晰、明确，句子是否得当)

Coherence（连贯）２１０（是否用恰当的连词，副词，短语来衔接句子）第一种：

要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。

1．

有一些人认为……2．

另一些人认为……3．

我的看法……如何写好正反观点的文章？Writingstructure

--Howtowriteanessay(议论短文)(Inmyopinion，Ithink---/Asforme,Ithink---/Personally,Ithink---.)(Therearedifferentopinionsaboutwhether---.)

(Somepeoplethinkthat---.What’smore/Moreover---.

However,otherpeopleholdtheoppositeopinionthat---.andworsestill---.)Thethemeoftheessay(陈述议论的主题)Opinion1Opinion2Reasons1,2Reasons1,2Personalopinion注意事项：①条理要清晰，观点明确；②文章必须包括所有提示要点，同时切记用5句连篇；③运用适当的连词，副词，短语等来衔接句子；④注意时态，议论文形式还是以现在时为主.⑤对立观点式议论短文的基础写作模板：

Therearedifferentopinionsaboutwhether______.Somepeoplethinkthat_____________.What’smore/Moreover/Furthermore______.However,othersholdtheoppositeopinionthat_____,andworsestill，________.Asforme/Inmyopinion/Personally,Ithinkthat___________.表示不同观点的套语总起:

Differentpeopleholddifferentopinions.Peoplehavetakendifferentattitudestowards…

Peoplehavedifferentopinionsonthisproblem.

1.学会使用恰当的过渡词罗列观点时常用的过渡词:1.Firstly…;Secondly…;Thirdly…;2.Besides…;Inaddition…;3.What’smore…;Moreover;Furthermore;4.Atlast;Finally;Eventually;表转折时常用过渡词\句1.Ontheotherhand;2.However;3.Onthecontrary;4.Everycoinhastwosides二、学会使用正确的句型陈述观点:Somepeoplesaystudentsshould…Somepeoplearefortheideathat…Somepeopleholdtheviewthat…Somepeoplesaystudentsshouldn't…Somepeopleareagainsttheideathat…3.Somepeopledon’tagree,theythink…正方观点陈述常用句型:反方正方观点陈述常用句型:不同观点之间的衔接:

Onthecontrary,othersholdadifferentview.Ontheotherhand,peopleobjecttothereasonthat….对比观点题型常用句型：(综合)Therearetwosidesofopinionsaboutit.Somepeoplethinkthat…whileothersthinkthat…Theyholdtheirviewforthereasonof/that…whileothersthink…inthefollowingreason.First,…,Secondly(besides),…Thirdly(finally).Frommypointofview,/Inmyopinion,/Asforme,(我的观点)第二种：

给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点Somepeoplebelievethat①----------------（观点一）.Forexample,theythink②-----------------（举例说明）．Anditwillbringthem③---------------(为他们带来的好处).Inmyopinion,Ineverthinkthisreasoncanbethepoint.Foronething,④-------------(我不同意该看法的理由一).Foranotherthing,⑤---------(反对的理由之二)．FromwhatIhavesaid,Iagreetothethoughtthat⑥-----(我对文章所讨论主题的看法)．TaskWriting

۝人们对网上购物持有不同意见。请你用英语写一篇关于网上购物的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达你的看法。赞成的理由反对的理由自己的看法1

网上购物更方便，省时2

人们可以在网上买到各种各样的东西，而且价格也较便宜.3是一种时尚而新潮的购物方式1无法预先体验商品2人们容易上当受骗，因为很难确保商品的质量[写作内容]1文章必须包括所有提示要点,但不要逐条译成英语;2请根据以上提示，最后谈谈你的观点；[写作要求]

只能用5个句子表达全部的内容。词汇:商品:

goods

体验:

experience

预先：inadvance

上当受骗:becheated1网上购物更方便，省时.2人们可以在网上买到各种各样的东西，而且价格也较便宜.3是一种时尚而新潮的购物方式.4无法预先体验商品.5人们容易上当受骗,因为很难确保商品的质量.1.句子翻译：Shoppingonlineismoreconvenientanditcanhelppeopletosavemuchtime.

PeoplecanbuyallkindsofthingsatalowerpriceontheInternet.Itisafashionableandnewwayofshopping.

Peoplecan’texperiencethegoodsinadvance.Peopleareeasytobecheated,becauseitisdifficulttomakesureof/guaranteethequalityofgoods.参考范文：

Therearedifferentopinionsaboutwhetherpeopleshouldgoshoppingonline.Somepeoplethinkthat

shoppingonlineismoreconvenientanditcanhelppeopletosavemuchtimeandthatpeoplecanshopforavarietyofthingsatalowerpriceontheInternet.What’smore,

Itisafashionableandnewwayofshopping.However,othersholdtheoppositeopinionthat

peoplecan’texperiencethegoodsinadvance，andworse

stilltheyareeasytobecheated,becauseitisdifficulttomakesureof/guarantee

thequalityofthegoods.Asforme,

Ithinkthatpeoplecouldbemoreenjoyablewhenshoppingonlinecarefully.

Let'stry!写作训练：[写作内容]根据以上内容，写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文。介绍正反两方观点；表达自己的看法。[写作要求]只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容；已给出的句子不包括在五句话中；不要逐字逐句翻译所给信息。[评分标准]句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。赞成的理由：反对的理由：你的看法广交朋友，可自由表达思想，利于外语学习浪费时间，影响学习，可能上当受骗？人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。以下是正反两方所持观点。Shouldstudentsmakefriendsonline?Somepeoplesayyes.

Theinternethelpsusmakefriendsbychattingonlinesothatstudentscanexpresstheirfeelingsandopinionsmorefreely,andevengethelpwiththeirforeignlanguagestudies.Others,

however,

thinkstudentsshouldnot.Theysaymakingfriendsonlineisawasteoftime,whichshouldbespentmoremeaningfullyonstudy;besides,somestudentsgetcheatedonline.Itismyopinion

that

studentsshouldplacetheirstudy,healthandsafetybeforeotherthings.近几年，“考生该不该复读？”这一话题一直为社会各界所关注。下表是某班同学就此问题的讨论结果，请你给某英文报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论的情况,并写出你的观点．多数同学认为少数同学认为1.不该复读2.对于应届生不公平3.增加家庭经济负担4.精神压力大，易出问题1.应该复读2.可以考上理想的大学3.上何种大学是人生重要的转折点，直接影响将来的就业Deareditor,

I’mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe’vehadaboutwhether

studentsshouldretakeclassesafterfailingtheentranceexamination.

Mostofthestudentsareagainsttheideaofretakingclasses.Theythinkitisunfairforthestudentswhotaketheexamforthefirsttime.Besides,italsoaddstothefamilyburden.What’smore,theyaredifferentfromthosetakingtheexamforthefirsttime,fortheyhavefailedonce.So,theyhavemuchmorementalpressureandthereisoftensomethingwrongwithmanyofthem.

Ontheotherhand,

somethinkthatitcanbedonebecausethroughone-yearhardwork,theycangetachancetoentertheirsatisfactoryuniversity.Aboveall,whatkindoftheuniversitytoenterwilldirectlyaffectstheirfutureemployment.

Inmyopinion,everyonecanbesuccessfulinlifesolongashetrieshisbest,whetherornothecangotocollege.

Yourstruly, LiHua据报道，一位１２岁的少年救起了一名落水儿童，此事在当地引起了强烈反响．你班同学就“少年见义勇为行为是否应该提倡”为主题展开了讨论．请你根据下表提供的信息写一篇短文，客观的介绍讨论情况并说明你的观点．有些同学赞成有些同学反对１.见义勇为是中华民族的传统美德，应给予鼓励；２.会鼓励更多的英雄出现；３.促使社会变得更美好．１.少年的行为不理智；２.少年很有可能牺牲自己的生命；３.用其他方法来救这个儿童，如丢块木头给落水儿童，喊大人帮忙．写前热身：翻译下列短语和句子：１.见义勇为２.中华民族的传统美德３.使．．．变得更美好鼓励某人做某事４.某人做某事不理智５.少年很有可能牺牲自己的生命．６.我们可以用其他方法来做这件事．fightforajustcause

thetraditionalvirtuesoftheChinesepeopleItisunwiseforsbtodosthItislikely/possiblethat…Wecandoitinotherways.make…morebeautifulencouragesb.todosth.

Ourclassheldadiscussiononwhetherteenagersshouldbeencouragedto