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高考英语写作训练五月：写作、模拟题2021年福建质检续写Whenmydaughtersreachedthethirdandfourthgrades,Ioccasionallyallowedthemtowalktoandfromschoolaloneiftheweatherpermitted.Onewarmspringday,alittledogfollowedthemhomeafterschool.Ithadshortlegsandlonglovelyears,withafawn-coloredcoat.ItwasthecutestdogIhadeverseenandthegirlsbeggedmetokeepit.作者的女儿捡到了一条可爱的小狗Thedogwasbarelytwelveweeksold.Ithadnocollaroridentifyingmarksofanysort.Ididn’tknowwhattodo.Ithoughtaboutrunninganadvertisementinthelost-and-foundbutIreallydidn’twantto.Itwouldbreakthekids’heartsifsomeoneshouldshowup.Besides,itsownersshouldhavewatcheditmoreclosely.作者心理活动：不想把狗还回去Bytheendoftheweekthedogwaspartofourfamily.Itwasveryintelligentandgoodwiththegirls.Thefollowingweeksomethingtoldmetocheckthelost-and-foundsectioninthelocalpaper.OneparticularadvertisementjumpedoutatmeandmyheartpoundedwithfearatwhatIread.Someonewasbeggingforthereturnofalostdogintheneighborhoodofourgradeschool.Theysoundeddesperate.Myhandshook.Icouldn’tbringmyselftopickupthephone.作者心理活动：内心不安，看到找狗，更加不安Instead,IpretendedIhadn’tseentheadvertisement.Iquicklyputthepaperawayinthedrawerandcontinuedwithmydusting.Ineversaidawordaboutittothekidsormyhusband.作者心理活动：掩饰Bynowwehadnamedthedog.ItlookedlikeaMolly,sothatwaswhatwecalledit.Itfollowedthegirlseverywheretheywent.Whentheywentoutside,itwasonestepbehindthem.Whentheydidhousework,itwastheretolendahand.狗和家人关系融洽（反衬）描述心理活动的写法1直接使用情感词汇Iamhappy.2使用表述情感的短语或句型MyfacelituplikeaChristmastree.Joydancedallthewaytomyheart.3如实写出内心的真实想法4通过周围环境或人物动作进行反衬Therewasonlyoneproblemwiththisotherwiseperfectpicture:myconscience(良心)wasbotheringme.IknewinmyheartIhadtocallthatnumberandseeifourMollywasthedogtheyweredesperatelyseeking.ItwasthemostdifficultthingI’veeverdone.作者心理活动：良心煎熬、抉择Withmixedfeelings,Ifinallypickedupthephone.HowIwishtherewouldbenoonetoanswer,orsomeonewouldjustsaythedoghadalreadybeenfound.Butnoneofthesehappened.Ontheotherendwasavoiceofamiddle-agedwoman,wholistenedtomydescriptionofthedogandimmediatelyofferedtocomeover.Duringtheconversation,Mollysatquietlyatmyside,rubbingmywaistwithitstinywarmbody.Itwasonlylessthan30minutesbeforethedoorbellrang,buttomeitseemedtolastacentury.Iopenedthedoorandmyworrywasstandingrightinfrontofme.IaskedthewomantocomeinandshequicklybentoverandhuggedMollytightly.Thedoghesitatedforasecond,thenitstartedwaggingitstailandbarkingexcitedlyasifithadrecognizedsomeonefamiliar.Myheartsank.ItwasjustlikemyworstnightmarecomingintorealitythatMollydidbelongtothatwoman.Sheofferedtogivemesomecashasareward,butIrefused.ActuallyIwouldverymuchliketopayagoodsumofmoneytokeepMollyinstead.ThewomanappreciatedonceagainandtookMollyaway,leavingmealoneinthisemptyandunfamiliarhouse.作者不想还—必须还—郁闷把人不能解决的问题交给狗去解决：是否合理？女人把狗送给我们了：是否合理？Agirlwassittingunderthetree.人物状态whowasreadingabook.人物动作Agirlwhowasreadingabookwassittingunderthetree.Sittingunderthetreewasagirlwhowasreadingabook.Ourlibrary