大学英语六级考试写作(新东方续志贤老师讲义)

主要题型：对峙看法，给定看法，问题解决，数字图表，书信应用，题干的第一句是背景句，第二句用于判断题目种类Agoodparagraphshouldbe:well-connected,clear,economical(usethefewestwordstosaythemost),tight(don‘ands’‘buts’‘ors’ect.)※：gratefulbepleasanttoread.Topic=exploration+example

’tusemassof段落的三个要素：框架结构——信息的轻重，语意表达——语意的上下，语法运用——语法的一致主题句：Sthcanproducepositiveeffectson

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)measurestoaddressthesituation.Firstly,itisessentialthatthesupervisoryroleoflawsandregulationsshouldbestrengthenedtopunishthoseperformingdrunkendriving.Secondly,thepublic,especiallydrivers,shouldenhancetheirawarenessofpublicsafety.Inthefirstplace,wemustdoourutmosttoenhancepeople’sawarenessofhowbanefulnon-biodegradabletrashcanbetoourenvironmentandourdescendants.Inthesecondlyplace,thegovernmentandthetechnologistsshouldsparenoeffortinadvocatingtheuseofenvironmental-friendlycontainers.Withstringentlawsandalertpublic,itwillonlyamatteroftimefordrunkendrivingtobecomethingsofpast.HowtoManageStressCauses:Youmayfeelphysicalstresswhichistheresultoftoomuchtodo,notenoughsleep,apoordietortheeffectsofanillness.Nowadaysthesocialcompetitionisbecomingfiercerandeveryonewantstocopewithadversityandtoflourishintheireducation,vocation,andpersonalrelationships.给定看法型——一种看法或看法Recentlytheissueof(whetherornot)hasbeeninthelimelightandhasarousedwideconcerninthepublic.Nowpeopleingrowingnumbersarebeginningtobelievethatcanproducepositiveeffectsonusinmorethanoneway.Thesituationisencouraging.(theirreasonsareasbelow)Frommyownperspective,part-timejobcanproduceafar-reachingimpactonstudentsandtheyshouldbeencouragedtotakepart-timejob,whichwillbenefitstudentsandtheirfamily,eventhesocietyasawhole.Frommyownperspective,Iholdtheoppositeviewonthesamecase..canreallyproducepositiveeffectsonthesocietyandthepeople.Foronething,..Foranother/Therefore,.shouldbeencouragedto.whichwillbenefitthepeopleeventhesocietyasawhole.十个全能原由：（二段阐述的10个方面）1．物质回报：It（the30’sofreformingandopeningupinChina）canprovidepeoplewithdeliciousfood,fashionableclothes,comfortabledwellingsandhandsomeautomobiles.Somoreandmorepeoplearebeginningtopayattentiontotheirspiritualmoney,obtainwealth,profitfrom,benefitfrom.2．节约时间：Itsavetime;takeupmuch(little)time;occupylittletime;Itcanmakethemostofone’stime,浪费时间：Itwasteshours;lavishesdays;squandersyears;frittersawaytime;idlesawayone’stime;killstime;murderstime.3．效率：Itextendsone’slearninghours,makespeoplewearyofotherimportantthings,discourageshimtolearnmore,andfinallylosetheirinteresttolearn,andleadtolowgrades.One’senergygraduallywearsoff.4．方便快捷：WorldWideWebprovidespeoplewithup-to-date,concreteandaccurateandvividinformation.MSNandelectronicmailboxcanshrinkthedistancebetweentownsandcities;smooththecommunicationbetweenresidentsandgetridofthebarrierbetweenpeople.5．安全：Hecansecurehisfoodandshelter.Itcanimproveone’slivingstandardsandmakeaneasyandcomfortablelife.表现：Itcanshield(保护)peoplefromvariouskindsofhazardsrangingfrominjury,robbery,assaultstotrafficaccidents.6．身心健康：Itcanrelievepeopleressure,’panxiety,depression,stress,isolationandsolitude.Peoplecankeepfitphysicallyandmentally.Bytakingpartinavarietyofsportactivities,peoplestayhealthy,andthereforepreventheartdiseases,hypertension,diabetesorfattiness.Itcanlessenpeople’sstress,pressureandtension.Itcultivatesanoptimisticviewtowardtheworld,7．娱乐方式：It’samajormeansofentertainmentthatrelieveone’spressure,boredomandstress,burden.表现：Peoplegotoamusementparkstorelaxthemselves;theygototheseasidetoenjoysunshineorfreshair;theytryseafood;theyvisitplacesofinterestsinordertocontactadifferentculture;收益：broadenone’smind;enrichone’sexperience;enhancevigorandputmoreenthusiasmtoone’swork.Itiswellreceivedasaninstructivemodeofeducationthatprovidespeoplewithnotonlyabulkofinformation,butasourceofimaginationaswell.Inalessrigid（严格的）manner,itcanenhancepeople’sunderstandingonasubject,improvepeople’ndslearningskills,capaorcreateavigorousatmosphere.Itprovidesavarietyofleisureactivitiesthatenhanceyourenergy,enthusiasmandcharm.Itaddsaspecialmeansofentertainmenttoyourseeminglytedious,routineandmonotonouslife.Peoplecancommunicatewitheachothersthroughdinners,parties,orexcursion.8．有利于他人：Peoplecanobtainfinancialaids,materialsupport,mentalcomfort,orspiritualfromyoursupport.Theycandrawonexperiencefromyou.Throughyourspeeches,instructionsorassistance,theycanbroadentheirminds,increasetheirincome.Throughyourencouragement,theycultivatethespiritofcompetition,participationandcooperation.Itcanpromotecommunicationbetweenpeopleandridofbarriersbetweenpeople.Throughyourassistance,theycanaccumulatewealth,establishtheircareer,fitintosociety,andattainsocialstatus.Theycanfeelrelaxed,confiden