北京中考英语作文模版

1、北京中考英语作文模版一、写作评分标准分值：15分难易度： 易中难 12分容易 13-14分中等15分难原则：分档给分 第一档：(1513分)完全符合题目要求，观点正确，要点齐全。句式多样，词汇丰富。语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，具有逻辑性。第二档：(129分)基本符合题目要求，观点正确，要点齐全。语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要。语言基本通顺，语意基本连贯，表达基本清楚。虽然有少量语言错误，但不影响整体理解。第三轴档：(85分)部分内容符合题轴目要求，要点不齐全。语法结构和轴词汇错误较多，语言不通顺，表达轴不够清楚，影响整体理解。第四轴档：(40分)与题目有关内容帚不多，只是简单拼凑词语，所写内

2、雁容难以理解。阅卷老师的实际操作雁14分作文 用词准确，句式变换雁多样 如：长短句搭配使用 谚语雁的使用 被动句的使用 语法错误雁2个以内13分作文 句型使用较靴多且正确 连词使用恰当且正确靴语法错误少于3个 时态使用正确靴 书写工整规范 字数80-10靴0词 12分作文 标准线 主靴旨正确，要点齐全 语法错误2个秩以内 卷面、字迹清楚 字数看起秩来不是很少 11分作文主旨准确秩，少要点 2-3个秩语法错误扣1分 时态使用不正确抑扣1分 字迹潦草扣1-3分 大抑小写和标点符号错误扣1分 字数抑不够扣1分 9 7分作文需主旨表达不太清楚，要点不全 语需法错误较多(多于5-6个) 字需迹潦草、卷面

3、不太清楚 大小写和需标点符号有错误 6 4分作需文 主旨、要点几乎没有找到 只衣有个别句子能看懂 字数明显不够衣 3 0分作文 几乎白卷，衣有几个单词拼对了 3分 写衣字了，但是一个也看不懂衣2分 交白卷 0分 ：1.铸作文中人称不明确，扣2分。2铸.文章时态出问题，1-2个错铸扣1分，3-5个错扣2分，最高铸可扣4分。3. 学生感悟与文章铸所写事件不匹配，扣3分。4.铸写作不分段，扣5分。5. 字迹旨潦草，字迹不清楚，根据程度，可旨扣1-2分。6. 文章详略不当旨，可扣1-3分。7. 第一段仅旨一句话，对于题目第一个问题回答旨过于简单，扣1分。8. 文章缺旨少要点，扣5分。9. 文章没有旨结

4、尾，扣1分。三、可套句型及所墟用范围 (按近几年考查话题多少墟排序)一、校园生活与友谊 (所墟用范围：写人、记事)1. 开头墟段xxx, who is a墟15-year-old stu墟dent, is an out墟going and kind-砚hearted boy/gir砚l.My best frie砚nd is a boy/gir砚l named xxx, 2w砚ho is 15 years砚old this year.W砚e are graduatin砚g from school s砚oon. I miss so砚many good frien袖ds, especially袖my

5、 best friend-袖-xxx.2. 中间段 (人物袖具体介绍部分)外形、性格特点及袖爱好Hes/shes of袖medium height袖and wears glass袖es.He/she is o侦utgoing and har侦dworking and is侦always ready t侦o help others.H侦e/she is active侦, cute and ener侦getic.Hes/she侦s not only kind侦but also helpf侦ul.Besides, he/置she is friendly置and enthusiast置ic.He/sh

6、e has置a lot of inter置ests and xxx an置d xxx are his/h置er favorite.朋友做置的事情xxx is a top置student, to re置alize his/her d置ream, who devot置ed himself /her置self to his/her置studies.Once I置saw him help a置n old woman cro置ss the road.I h置ave a crystal c置lear memory tha妖t he/she used t妖o give me a hel妖ping hand

7、(help妖me out) whenev妖er I was in tro妖uble.We get on妖well with each妖other so we oft妖en discuss our妖study together癣and he/she can煮always find out煮new ways to he煮lp me work out煮problems.3. 尾段S煮uch is xxx, a w煮arm-hearted and煮outgoing boy/g煮irl. He/she is煮so good a boy/g煮irl as everyone煮likes.Im prou跃d

8、of having suc跃h an outstandin跃g friend. I sho跃uld learn from跃him/her and try跃to be helpful.跃I care so much跃about him/her跃that I want to很do something me很aningful for hi很m/her. I hope h很e/she will have很a bright futur很e and that our很friendship will很last forever.很the + best + 名词很 + (that) + 主词吵+ have ev

9、er + s吵een ( known/hea吵rd/had/read，et吵c)the most +吵形容词 + 名词+ (tha吵t) +主词+ have彻ever + seen ( k诡nown/heard/had/诡read，etc) 例句：H诡elen is the mos诡t beautiful gir诡l that I have e诡ver seen.海伦是我诡所看过最美丽的女孩。 Mr.鼓Chang is the k鼓indest teacher鼓that I have eve鼓r had.张老师是我曾经鼓遇到最仁慈的教师。 二、我有吠我观点 (所用范围：建议类)学魁习语言类：L

10、earning E魁nglish can help魁broaden our mi魁nd and enrich o魁ur school life.魁Satisfy people魁s desire.Practi魁ce makes perfec魁t.Firstly, its扳very important扳to listen to t扳he teacher care扳fully in class扳and make some n扳otes so that yo扳u can go over y扳our lessons lat扳er. Secondly, t扳ry to catch eve扳ry chanc

11、e to pr姐actice speaking姐, both in and o姐ut of class. Do姐nt be afraid o姐f making mistak姐es. Then try to姐listen and rea姐d more in Chine姐se. Whats more姐, youd better姐plan your time姐well and study铰it regularly ev铰ery day.Above铰all, you should铰be confident i铰n yourself and铰dont give up w铰henever you mee铰

12、t with difficul铰ty. Im sure yo铰u will succeed苍through your ha苍rd work.信件建议类作文苍学会可套用句型首段 I a苍m glad to hear苍from you. I com苍pletely underst苍and you because苍I used to have苍the similar ex苍periences, but创I dont think y创ou are supposed创to Here are创my suggestions.创中间段First of all创/To begin with/创Above all

13、, if I创were you, I wo创uld probably 创in the first pl创ace to so that盐/which will 盐Whats more/Fur盐thermore/Beside盐s, just as the盐proverb goes li盐ke that , it w盐ould be a great盐idea to. By d盐oing this,.盐In addition/帐Last but not th帐e least, You帐might as well t帐urn to sb. for帐help since 尾段I帐hope what I m

14、e帐ntioned here ca帐n be helpful. /帐I hope the sugg帐estions mention张ed above can be张helpful.三、关注社张会 热爱家国(所用范围：绿色出张行/节水等)1. Its o张ur duty to save张water.2. We ca张nt live withou张t water.3. The袖amount of water袖which is suita袖ble to drink is袖less and less.袖4. But some peo袖ple dont care袖about it.5. Man袖y ri

15、vers and la袖kes are serious岩ly polluted. So岩mething must be岩done to stop t岩he pollution.6.岩If everyone ma岩kes contributio岩n to protecting岩the environmen岩t, the world wi岩ll become much岩more beautiful.盾7. We should pl盾ant more and mo盾re trees in ord穿er to live bett穿er and healthie穿r in the future穿.8.

16、There is no穿denying the fa穿ct that air pol穿lution is an ex穿tremely serious穿problem: the c穿ity authorities穿should take st板rong measures t板o deal with it.板9. If everyone板does one thing板for our school,板we will turn o板ur school into板a better place板to study and li板ve in.10. Belie撑ve that by doin撑g all th

17、ese sma撑ll things we ca撑n improve our e撑nvironment and撑help make our w撑orld a better p撑lace to live in撑.11. We all kno撑w, the environm撑ent around us i孩s getting worse孩and worse . In孩some places we孩cant see fish孩swimming in th孩e river or tree孩s on the hills.孩Some people ev孩en have no clea孩n water to

18、drin孩k, no fresh air孩to breathe, no彬quiet places t彬o live in.12.彬Before leaving彬we took some ph彬otos to record彬our green actio彬n. Seeing the l彬ines of trees,彬we all had a se彬nse of achievem孩ent. We feel it孩s our duty to孩protect and bea孩utify our envir孩onment.四、身心健康(孩所用范围：减压)段一：is c孩oming/ approach孩i

19、ngare under gr贾eat pressuretry贾ing to find som贾e ways to solve贾it段二：Most of m贾y classmates ch贾oose to relie贾ve stressWhile贾others prefer t瘩oBut I think /瘩as for meBy d瘩oing , I can瘩relax myself a瘩nd/as well as k瘩now more 段三：瘩In short, I thi傀nk is a good傀way for us to傀relieve our str傀ess, Through 傀I

20、could get th傀e pleasure that傀I will never g傀et through othe傀r ways.四、中考英语常秽见作文话题 (按要点分类)(一秽) 难忘的事(1) 别人帮助我秽We became frien秽ds by accident.秽One day Jack w秽as playing bask秽etball on the p秽layground. Amaz秽ed at how skill秽ful he was, I m秽ade up my mind秽to play as well秽as he. I was g秽rateful when he秽agre

21、ed to teac秽h me. Every tim秽e when I wanted秽to give up hal秽fway, it was Ja秽ck who encourag戒ed me. Graduall戒y, I mastered t戒he skills and b戒ecame confident戒enough to chal戒lenge the best戒players in our戒school.(2) 我帮助戒别人It happened o戒n a Friday when饯I was seated i饯n a crowded bus饯, heading for m饯y schoo

22、l. It wa饯s just at that饯moment that an饯elderly lady wi饯th her little g饯randson stepped饯onto the bus.饯Immediately, I节offered my seat艰to them withou艰t hesitation. T艰he elderly lady艰expressed her艰great appreciat艰ion to me and w艰e enjoyed a ple艰asant short tri艰p together.(3)艰做家务表示对父母的感恩Bei棉ng a 15-year-

23、ol棉d middle school棉student and fe棉eling my parent棉s have done so棉much to me, I h棉ave been consid棉ering what I ca棉n do for them t棉o show my grati离tude. Last Sund排ay, when my par排ents went out s排hopping, I deci排ded to take thi排s opportunity t排o do something排helpful for our排family. Not on排ly did I clea

24、n排the bowls and c排ookers, but I p排ut all the mess漏y things away.漏Tired and sweat漏y, I was about漏to open the doo漏r to throw rubb漏ish when my par漏ents showed up漏at the door. Th漏ey were amazed漏to see what I h漏ad done and pra缮ised me. From t缮hen on, I deter缮mined to work h缮arder to do mor缮e for my famil

25、y缮.(二) 写人(1) 外貌M缮y favorite teac缮her is Mr. Wang缮who is handsom缮e and of medium甩build.My best甩friend is Lind甩a who is a beau甩tiful girl with甩long black hai甩r and beautiful甩bright eyes.(2甩)性格Mary is alw甩ays wearing a s天weet smile and天willing to help天others.Mr. Lee天is our favorit天e teacher who h天as gr

26、eat sense天of humor and al天ways makes his天class lively an天d interesting.(纬3)爱好He is not纬only good at pl纬aying basketbal纬l but also does纬well in playin纬g chess.Swimmi纬ng is his favor纬ite thing to do纬in his free ti纬me and he also锣shows great int锣erest in playin锣g soccer.(4) 学习锣成绩She is very g锣ood at le

27、ssons锣especially Engl锣ish, so she is锣one of the top锣students in our锣class.(5) 难忘的一挝件事 (见话题一)(6) 感想挝 (体会)I feel luc挝ky to have such挝a good teacher挝/ friend who al挝ways holds on t挝o achieve his d挝ream. Thats hi挝s best quality梁I should learn梁from him.Maybe梁thats only a s梁mall thing and梁its not worth梁be

28、ing mentioned梁. But I always梁believe a small梁act of kindnes梁s will make a b辖ig difference,辖so I make up my辖mind to learn辖from him to be辖the person who辖offers timely h辖elp to those in辖need.(7) 祝福 (祝辖愿)I sincerely h辖ope Li Lei will民make greater p民rogress in a ne民w high school.民And I also wish民he will

29、have a民bright future.民(三) 与人相处，友情(How民to get on well民with others)建朋议式In our daily朋life, it is of朋great importanc镰e to know how t镰o get along wel镰l with other pe镰ople. First, sh镰aring common ho镰bbies or happin镰ess with others镰may be of grea嚏t help for you嚏to make new fri嚏ends. Then, bei嚏ng a friendly

30、 p嚏erson, youd be嚏tter learn to s嚏mile to others嚏often. Because嚏smile passes lo嚏ve and friendsh嚏ip and helps sh嚏orten the dista妮nce between you妮and other peop妮le. Last but no妮t least, when f妮acing problems,妮always remembe妮r to communicat妮e with each oth妮er patiently, t妮ry to overcome妮the difficultie

31、凝s together, whi凝ch will also de凝epen your frien凝dship.(四) 与父母沟通凝例题：如何与父母建立良好关系(凝1)父母与子女关系良好的重要塞性An ideal relat塞ionship between塞parents and ch塞ildren is very塞important for o塞ur growth.(2)森这种良好关系应该是怎样的Par森ents always sho森w love and conc森ern for us. The森y are our good森listeners, advi森sers and suppor缮t

32、ers. With thei缮r help, we can缮overcome many d缮ifficulties in缮our life.(3) 如何缮建立良好关系In my opi缮nion, the relat挝ionship between挝parents and ch挝ildren should b挝e one filled wi挝th love, care a挝nd understandin挝g, in which par挝ents and childr纫en show respect纫to each other纫and exchange id纫eas freely. To纫bui

33、ld a relatio纫nship of this k纫ind, parents sh纫ould become fri莽ends of their c莽hildren while c莽hildren ought t莽o place more tr莽ust in their pa莽rents and give莽voice to their莽feelings frankl侣y.Only in this侣way can we enj侣oy a harmonious侣relationship b侣etween parents侣and children.(五破) 课余生活，兴趣爱好(1)破集邮版Ive

34、 always破been fond of co破llecting stamps破since I was a破little child. A妮s far as Im co妮ncerned, collec妮ting stamps is妮a meaningful ho妮bby, making my妮spare time inte妮resting and exc妮iting. Besides,嫩when reviewing铣my collection铣of valuable sta铣mps, my heart i铣s filled with g铣reat sense of s铣atisfaction

35、and铣I can relax my斩self and keep a斩way from the gr斩eat pressure of斩school study l斩ife. Although m斩y parents are s斩trongly against斩my hobby , for斩they consider斩it as a waste o斩f money and the斩y also think th酗at searching fo酗r stamps may ta哲ke up much of m哲y time which sh哲ould be spent o蛰n my studies,

36、 I蛰will try my be蛰st to communica蛰te with them pa蛰tiently and I b蛰elieve they wil蛰l understand an蛰d support me ev蛰entually.(2) 运动蛰版户外运动 (健康话题)幼If the weather幼is fine, I wil幼l always spend幼my weekends jog幼ging in a park幼to breathe fres幼h air ,which ca幼n refresh my mi幼nd and make me幼energetic enoug峙h

37、to concentrat峙e better on my峙study.团队运动 (峙与人相处话题) Playing峙basketball / v峙olleyball / foo峙tball with your臃classmates aft臃er school will臃be a good idea,臃which will be臃of great help t臃o not only keep臃you physically臃strong but bui臃ld up team work诌spirit and dee诌pen the friends诌hip between you诌and your f

38、rien诌ds.(六) 环保(1) 环诌保的重要性It is of e诌xtreme importan诌ce to protect t诌he environment咱by leading a lo咱w-carbon life s咱tyle which is e咱nvironmentally咱friendly.(2) 具体咱做法种树Firstly,咱planting trees药in a park on we药ekends with you药r friends will药be a good choic药e. Because by d药oing so, the ai药r will be refre

39、药shed and the en药vironment where药we live will b冶e beautified.走路枣/骑车上学Besides,枣if I were you,枣I would walk t枣o school instea枣d of driving so枣that the gas t责hat does harm t责o our health wi责ll be reduced e责ffectively.随手关水责龙头Last but no责t least, it is针necessary to sa针ve water by tur针ning off the ta针p af

40、ter washing针hands. Or wel针l run out of fr针esh water very针soon.(3) 结尾，呼吁大政家一起来保护环境The env铀ironmental prot铀ection is not o铀nly the busines铀s of the govern铀ment, but also铀the responsibil铀ity of each of铀us. Even a smal铀l effort can ma迂ke a great diff迂erence, so let迂s take actions迂from now on to迂protect

41、our env迂ironment.(七) 学习迂方法(1) 学习英语 听迂It is of great戒help for you to戒listen to Engl戒ish songs and r戒adio in order t戒o improve your戒English pronunc戒iation every mo戒rning on your w戒ay to school.(2疥)学习英语 说It i创s strongly sugg创ested to make f创riends with nat创ive English spe创akers so that y创ou will know t

42、h创e culture of En创glish speaking般countries bette般r and speak the般language fluen般tly.(3) 学习英语般读Reading some般English newspap般ers and books w般ill be a good i般dea. In this wa苛y your English苛vocabulary will苛be enlarged ef苛fectively.(4) 学苛习英语 写If I we苛re you, I would苛write to my pe苛n pal who lives粗in Amer

43、ica bec粗ause by doing s粗o, my writing s粗kills will be i粗mproved.(5) 老师指粗导Having an Engl粗ish teacher is粗of great import粗ance. Because y胯ou can hardly l胯earn English we胯ll without inst胯ruction.(6) 有信心胯If you believe胯in yourself, yo胯u will be stron胯g enough to ove胯rcome any diffi胯culty that you很face in

44、 studyin很g English.(7) 团很队合作式学习Study wit很h a group by di很scussing proble很ms that you can很solve and lear很n from the prac很tical study met亨hods shared sel逼flessly by othe逼rs.(八) 假期计划(1)逼志愿者做法Our scho逼ol is home to m逼any special you逼ng people who a逼ll volunteer th逼eir free time t腑o help others.腑I have b

45、een alw腑ays dreaming of腑becoming a pro腑fessional singe腑r. So in the co腑ming vacation,腑I volunteer to腑sing for groups腑of the elderly腑people at the腑old peoples ho鉴me to cheer the鉴m up. Whats mo鉴re, I love read鉴ing, and I put鉴this love to go鉴od use by being鉴a volunteer an鉴d working in th鉴e after-school

46、鉴care center at鉴local elementar苛y school. Here,苛I help young c苛hildren to read苛.感想Volunteer苛ing is great! N苛ot only do I fe苛el good about h苛elping other pe苛ople, but I get苛to spend time烩doing what I lo烩ve to do.(2) 旅行烩放松 (减压话题)After烩a tiring and st烩ressful school烩term, the summe烩r vacation whic诽h I

47、have been l诽onging for is a诽round the corne诽r.回老家度假I will诽go to visit my诽grandparents a诽nd spend my sum诽mer vacation th诽ere because bea诽utiful natural产views of that s产mall country al惨ways flash in m秀y mind during t秀he busy school秀days. I was bro秀ught up by them秀and I always t秀ake the place a秀s my se

48、cond hom秀etown.国内外旅行Tr秀aveling around诸China or abroad诸will be my fir诸st choice to sp诸end the summer诸vacation. It ca诸n enrich my kno诸wledge that can诸t be gained fr诸om school books诸and broaden my诸horizons. What以s more, I will以be completely以relaxed and fre以e from the stre以ss and tirednes以s of busy scho

49、o以l study life.(九以) 健康话题(1) 以H1N1以为例，说明健康的重要性Pres闸ently, the dise闸ase H1N1 is flo闸oding every cor闸ner of the worl闸d , which serio闸usly threatens闸peoples health闸. Therefore, it闸is a hot topic闸among people t闸o keep healthy.枣(2) 具体做法吃To s枣tart with, its枣very essential枣for us to form枣good habits of枣eati

50、ng and dri枣nking. Eating m枣ore fruits and枣vegetables serv腰es us benefit.腰Meanwhile, keep腰ing balanced di腰et is equally i腰mportant to our腰health.运动Wha腰ts more, wed腰best take part腰in the proper s绣port activities绣such as playin绣g basketball or绣running. As an绣old saying goe绣s : no health w绣ithout sports

51、 ,绣because sports绣can keep us re绣freshed and imp盈rove our immuni盈ty system.作息习惯盈(充足睡眠)Additio盈nally, a good l盈ifestyle matter盈s a lot. Early盈to bed, early t盈o rise, makes a盈man healthy, w盈ealthy and wise砚.乐观的生活态度Last砚but not the lea砚st, an active a砚ttitude keeps t砚he doctor away.砚We are suppose砚d to

52、 get along砚well with our f砚riends and keep砚happy all the灶time.(3) 总结To c灶onclude, if we灶hope to lead a灶healthy life an灶d be strong, we灶must bear in m灶ind these words灶: healthy diet,灶proper sports,灶good lifestyle震and active att震itude.(十) 周围环境(震1)交通安全(红灯) It震s very importan震t for students震to know abou

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54、risk. (绿灯) Its讯safe to cross讯the road when t卧he light is gre卧en. (黄灯) When t卧he orange light卧is on, you mus卧t wait and be c卧areful, because卧the red light卧will be on very卧soon.Here are卧some suggestion尿s to protect ou尿rselves. First,尿we should foll尿ow the traffic尿lights and can尿t break the tra尿ffic ru

55、les. Sec尿ond, wed bette尿r look left and尿right to make尿sure we are saf尿e before steppi散ng forward to c散ross the street散. Last but not散least, dont fo散rget that its散very dangerous散to play on the散street. From no散w on , not only散I myself will散strictly obey t酋he traffic rule酋s but Ill also酋call on my cla酋

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59、the n离egative effects离of the Interne离t.(十一) 介绍北京写作重点离：去北京哪里参观，为什么？（W离hat are some go恃od places to vi恃sit in Beijing？恃）（1）总体介绍北京Longi恃ng to the ancie恃nt culture and恃amazing traditi恃on? Looking for恃ward to the bri恃ght lights? Bei论jing, the capit论al of China, mi论ght be a right论choice for you.论With a hi

60、story论of more than 30论00 years, Beiji论ng used to be t论he capital of s论ix dynasties .觅For this reason觅, it is home to觅many places of觅interest, such觅as Forbidden C觅ity, Summer Pal觅ace, and Temple觅of Heaven. Amo觅ng them , Forbi觅dden City appea觅ls to visitors觅most. Built in菱1460, it was an菱amazing maste