高中作文进阶技巧

1、作文句子进阶写好作文的要点：1.认真审题：确定作文格式、题材以及要点2.罗列要点，组词成句：u 扩写句子u 使用“高级词汇”u 使用“高级句型”切忌满篇华丽辞藻却没有深刻的立意3.谋句成篇：u 句与句、段与段之间的顺畅衔接u 添加必要的从属连词和并列连词第一部分 句子扩写一个简单的句子，就像冬天的树干，光秃秃的。为此我们要对我们写的句子进行“改造”。1.把中文说清楚。2.套句型：五大基本句型3.添修饰。u 如何在句子中添加修饰每个基本句型都是树的树干，分句就像树的树枝，而修饰用的定语和状语等就是这颗树的绿叶。我们需要给句子增加树枝和绿叶方法：抽象变具体尽力选择表意明确的单词，并适当增添细节成分

2、。【例句1】我每天去学校。Igotoschool every day.Withthe sunrisingfromtheeast,I,togetherwithTomandJerry,ridetoschoolat6:00everymorning, laughing and talking.具体在哪里：画面感：太阳、我和谁、怎么去、什么时候、什么状态【例句2】我去车站买票。Iwenttothestationtobuythetickets.ItookthesubwaylineNo.2totheBeijingrailwaystationtobuytheticketstoBeidaihe.具体在哪里：如何

3、去，去哪里【例句3】Smith先生是一个好老师。MrSmithisagoodteacher.MrSmithisakind,patientandknowledgeableEnglishteacher.具体在哪里：什么样的人，什么老师方法：“加叶”在一些名词和动词上面加上修饰成分。名词增添定语、同位语等；动词增添副词。(1)名词的修饰手段：l 在名词后面加上一个同位语：形式：A，B，.其中，A=B，A是名词或代词，B是名词或从句；以音乐剧音乐之声中的歌词为例：Doe, a deer, a female deerRay,adropoffallingsun.Me,anameIcallmyself.常用

4、的同位语技巧：将代词具体化We_.Wehighschoolstudents.我们高中生.WeChinese.我们中国人.Weteenagers.我们青少年.WeChineseyounggeneration.我们中国年轻的一代.us_.us customers.us Chinese people.例句1.我们青少年应该掌握英语这门世界上最广泛使用的外语WeteenagersaresupposedtomasterEnglish,themostwidelyusedforeignlanguageintheworld.2.他们那些外国人对我们中国人评价很高(speak highly of)。Theyfo

5、reignersspeakhighlyofusChinesepeople.3.这家店为我们客户提供了优秀的服务。The shop provides excellent services to us customers.4.姚明是一位出色的篮球运动员，2011年从NBA退役。Yao Ming, an excellent basketball player, retired from NBA in 2002.l 在名词前面加上一个或多个形容词。You should understand your mother.Youshouldunderstandyourkind,dearandhard-work

6、ingmom.l 在名词后面添加定语从句You should understand your mother.Youshouldunderstandyourmom,wholovesyoumostintheworld.l 在名词前面或后面加上非谓语动词作定语The flying kite belongs to that boy who is running happily in the park.The broken cup is my fathers favourite cup bought in Jiangxi.I still have a lot of homework to do.（2）动

7、词的修饰手段l 在适当的位置加上副词(状语)句中可以位置通常包括：主语之前、宾语之后及“小状语位置”（所谓“小状语位置”是指“助系情之后，实义动词之前”）。主语之前：Everymorning,IreadEnglish.宾语之后：IreadEnglisheverymorning.小状语位置：1.Youshoulddeeplyunderstandyourmom.2.Icandefinitelydoit.3.Idontreallyknowhim.常用副词：always, never, even, ever, sometimes, usually, often, seldom, hardly, luc

8、kily, unluckily, surely, certainly, extremely, surprisingly(令人惊讶地), amazingly(令人惊讶地), badly, unexpectedly(出人意料地), unfortunately, fortunately.l 将几个意思接近的动词并列使用Youshouldunderstandyourmom.Youshouldunderstand, loveandappreciateyourmom.Youshouldunderstandandloveyourmomaswellasappreciateeverythingshehasdon

9、eforyou.方法：“添枝”可以在句子前面或后面追加一个从句，既能使句型复杂化，又能有效完善句意。状语从句/状语(1)表“原因”because.for.as.since.now thatin case(万一)as a result of.due tothanks tobecause ofconsidering that.鉴于，考虑到seeing that.既然，因为，鉴于例句1.ItgoeswithoutsayingthatyoushouldlearnEnglishwell, becauseitisstill amustinthefuturesociety.好词好句Itgoeswithout

10、sayingthat.毫无疑问：(2)表“结果”so.sothat.如此.以至于suchthat.如此.以至于otherwise / or else否则asaresult, .因此，所以therefore, .因此，所以consequently, .因此，所以accordingly, .因此，所以【例句】1.YoushouldlearnEnglishwell,consequently,youcanachievegreatsuccessinthefuture.2.IhavelivedinEngland foroneandahalfyears,accordingly,IdowellinEnglis

11、hcommunication.3.Youareshy.-Youaresoshythatyouseldomchatwithothers.4.Tomrunsfast.-Tomrunssofastthatnoneofuscouldcatchupwithhim.5.Theflowerisbeautiful.-Theflowerissobeautifulthatwealllikeit.6.Tomisahumorousteacher.-Tomissohumorousateacherthatweoftenlaughinhisclass.(3)表“目的”., sothat.+句子., inorderthat.

12、+句子（可放句首）to+动词原形inorderto+动词原形（可放句首）soasto+动词原形【例句】1.Youshouldwear your mask,inorderthatyou wont be affected.2.Youshouldwear your maskinordernot tobe affected.3. Youshouldwear your maskso asnot tobe affected.3.IfIwereyou,Iwould wear my mask, sothat I wouldnt be affected.第二部分 如何避免写作中语法结构的“重复”？方法：用物做主

13、语（物称主语）主语：句子的主角、句子描述的对象；谓语：描述主语的行为或特征；经常使用I、You、We等人称代词做主语，会使文章显得单调，不妨试试换用“物”来做主语，使句式更加灵活多变！常见的方法有以下三种：（一）宾语做主语（常使用被动语态）注意：有些动词能用物做主语，而有些动词不行【例句】1. I like English.改：English is my favourite subject.My favourite subject is English.English attracts me.English interests me.English appeals to me.2. I hav

14、e been using the cell phone for a year.改：The cell phone has been used for a year.This cell phone has kept me company for a year.This cell phone has been serving me for a year. （二）谓语动词变成动名词，作主语【例句】Firstly, youd better chat more with your classmates.改：Chatting more with your classmates is beneficial f

15、or you.Chatting more with your classmates will help you know others well.Chatting more with your classmates will help you make yourself known to all. （三）引入其他的名词【例句】You should improve your communicating ability.改：Firstly, a computer could be used to communicate with others in order to improve your co

16、mmunicating ability. 方法：陈述变倒装当需要强调句子中的某些成分时，谓语或谓语的一部分（助系情）被提到了主语之前，这个就是倒装。倒装属于英语中的特殊句式，包括“完全倒装”和“不完全倒装”两种情况。（一）完全倒装当表示地点或方位的状语开头时，句子变完全倒装。如：公交车来了。Here comes the bus.上课铃响了。There goes the bell.注意：当其中的名词用代词代替时，主谓不倒装 Here it comes. There it goes.（二）部分倒装1 强调句子中的否定词：第一步：把否定词置于句首第二步：把助、系、情提到主语之前常见否定词hardly

17、 ; at no time; by no means; little; few; never;【例句】1. I have never seen him before. 改：Never have I seen him before.2. I know few teachers in the school. 改：Few teachers do I know in the school.2 “only+状语”置于句首一般用于以下四种句式：1. Only in this way can we do sth.2. Only then shall we do sth.3. Only when.(陈述句).

18、 can we do sth.4. Only if. can we do sth.【拓展】If only 如果.就好了（用虚拟语气表示强烈的愿望）eg: If only we could spend more time together! If only we could meet each other earlier! If only we could enjoy ourselves in Beijing before long! If only we could spend the Spring holiday together in Jinan! If only you would ad

19、apt to the new environment before long!【万能结尾句】Only in this way can our society/family/life be filled with harmony and happiness.Only then shall we have the chance of achieving our dreams.【更多例句】1. You should understand your mom. 改：Only when you understand your mom can you really grow up.2. You should

20、 come to our school . 改：Only when you come to our school will you realize how enjoyable your school life could be.3. You should recite as many as 30 articles. 改：Only when you have recited as many as 30 articles can you master English. 3当想要强调句子中的形容词、副词时的倒装：句型：so+adj/adv+倒装+that.【例句】Tom runs fast.改为结果

21、状语从句：Tom runs so fast that none of us could catch up with him.第一步：adj前面加so第二步：adj后面加that第三步：that后面用一个句子写adj的程度改为倒装句：So fast does Tom run that none of us could catch up with him.so 和adj / adv提前，并将助动词提到主语之前 【例句】1. You are shy.改：You are so shy that you seldom talk with others.改：So shy are you that you

22、seldom talk with others.2. Yao is tall.改：Yao is so tall that he can touch the ceiling.改：So tall is Yao that he can touch the ceiling.3. It is cold outside.改：It is so cold outside that we have to put on our coat.改：So cold is it outside that we have to put on our coat. 方法：普通变强调（一）强调谓语动词强调谓语动词的方法是：把助动词

23、从谓语动词中提出来。我的确爱你。I do love you. 我的确爱过你。I did love you.（二）强调其他成分强调句中其他成分一般套用这样的句式：It is/was + 被强调部分 + that/who +句子剩余部分。在进行句式变换是只需要进行两遍“复制+粘贴”即可。【例句】1. 我每天早上在户外大声朗读英语。I read English loudly in the open air every morning.如何对句子中的成分进行强调呢？方法：重复可省略（一）并列句中的省略：I go to school and (I) study English.but or as wel

24、l as 等并列连词都具有这个性质（二）状语从句中的省略：“当状语从句主语和主句主语一致，且从句中用到be动词时，同时省略从句的主语和be动词。”When (I was) sleeping, I drew a map of China.When (I was) sleeping, I visited the Great wall.When (I was) in Beijing, I tasted Beijing roast duck.When (I was) young, I listened to the radio.常见的状语从句省略1.时间状语从句的省略由when，while，until

25、，after，before，since等引导，如：Fear is something innate that we actually rely on to keep us safe when(we are)faced with danger.When(the brain is)multitasking, the brain is concentrating on one task and then switching to the other,in sequence.2.条件状语从句的省略由if，unless，once引导，如：If(these projects are)successful,

26、these projects have amazingly positive potential.Once opened,the museum will be very popular with the citizens.3.让步状语从句的省略由although，though，even if，even though，wherever，whenever，however等引导，如：Although(he was)the youngest in the group,Tom won all the prize.This viewpoint, however understandable(it is),

27、 is not practical.4.方式状语从句由as，as if，as though引导，如：He did it as required.The girl looked as if afraid of nothing.5.比较状语从句在比较状语从句中，常在as和than引导的分句中省略某些与主句相同的成分，有时甚至省略整个as和than引导的从句，如：He can play basketball as well as I.解析：由as引导的比较状语从句省略了do。You finished the work three weeks earlier than(you were)expecte

28、d.6.其他形式（1）在状语从句中，从句主语和主句主语一致，有时候从句谓语没有系动词，也可以省略，如：When comparing different cultures,we often pay attention only to the difference without noticing many similarities.解析：这里when comparing different cultures就是when we compare different cultures。（2）由if引导的习惯用法，常有：if not，if possible，if necessary等，如：Correct

29、 the mistake in your composition if any.解析：这里的if any相当于if there is any。方法：用itit的三个句型（一）客观评价句型：专门用来对一件事、一个行为或一个人做评价。It is+ adj./n+for sb+to do sth. 评价一件事或一个行为It is+ adj.+of sb+to do sth. 评价一个人【例句】It is beneficial for you to be more outgoing.It is wise of you to turn to the policeman for help.It is a

30、wise choice for you to be more outgoing.It is a requirement for us teenagers to respect our parents.（二）主观评价句型：同样专门用来对一件事、一个行为或一个人做评价。Sb think/find/regard/believe it + adj/n +for sb +to do sth.【例句】I make you happy. 主 谓 宾 补宾语补足语：补充说明宾语的性质I think (it is harmful for you to be so shy).I think it harmful

31、for you to be so shy.I think it vital/significant for us to master English.I think it stupid of you to go out in such a cold day.I think it stupid of you to say so.I think it a beneficial habit for you to read regularly. （三）“使”句型：碰到“使”字一般都能用上这个句型：sth make it +adj/n + for sb+to do 使.变成.【例句】1.良好的学习环境使

32、我们更容易集中注意力在学习上。A quiet, clean and comfortable environment makes it easier for us to concentrate on our study.2.骄傲使人落后Pride makes it hard for one to grow.第三部分 如何将繁琐的复杂句“化繁为简”？方法：非谓语动词“非谓语动词”是一种特殊的演员，除了谓语这个角色不能当，什么角色都能当。什么时候想到用非谓语动词？当一个句子中用到多个动词时，除了主句的谓语动词外，在没有从句和并列句的情况下，其他动词要用非谓语动词！【例句】我看见一个骑自行车的人。I saw a man (riding a bike).其中