最新高考英语专题解析课件-基础写作[经历感受]

1、1. 广州开展快 2. 担忧游客过多会破坏环境 1. 早上9点出发，10点到达 2. 欣赏沙雕 3. 中午吃海鲜 4. 下午去湿地公园赏鸟 1. 南沙区政府主办 2. 宏伟、壮观 3. 最大的沙雕高达7米，长达12米 感受 活动经过 沙展介绍 假设你们班同学听说你和家人上周末去了广州南沙参观沙雕后都对此很感兴趣，邀请你在课堂上介绍这次参观活动。请你根据以下内容, 写一篇短文, 向你的同班同学讲述此次旅游经历及感受。 写作内容 写作要求 1. 只能用5个句子表达全部内容； 2. 文章开头已给出, 不计入总句数。 评分标准 句子结构准确, 信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。(注：因篇幅限制, 以下写作要

2、求、评分标准、例题导写和能力提高等栏目可能被省略, 但教师课件中仍会保存) Last weekend, I enjoyed a wonderful trip to Nansha with my family. 参考范文 Last weekend, I enjoyed a wonderful trip to Nansha with my family. We set out at 9:00 a.m. and arrived at 10 a.m. On arriving, we couldnt wait to enjoy the exhibition of sand statues there,

3、which was hosted by the local government of Nansha. The statues were very grand and fantastic, with the largest one as high as 7 meters and as long as 12 meters. Then, we had delicious seafood for lunch, after which we went to watch birds in the Nansha Wetland Park. It is an unforgettable trip and w

4、e are all happy because Guangzhou has been developing fast, but I am a little worried that too many tourists may destroy the ecological balance of Nansha. * 1. have a discussion讨论 2. pack sth into the suitcase把某物装进箱子 3. search the Internet上网查询 4. see sb off为某人送行 5. a five-day tour为期五天的旅行 6. drop out

5、 of school辍学 相关短语 7.live a.life过着的生活 8.pay the tuition fees支付学费 9.once-in-a-life-time难得的 10.together with sb 同某人一起 11.win the first prize获得一等奖 12. be thought highly of 受到高度赞扬 13. come to a conclusion that. 得出结论如下 14. take great pains to do sth不遗余力地做某事 15. set a good example for us为我们树 立了一个好典范 16. be

6、 impressed by. 对印象深刻; 为所感动 17. devote ones spare time to helping others 利用业余时间帮助他人 1. Last Monday, we were having our Chinese class when the teacher suddenly slipped and fell.我们正在上语文课, 老师突然滑倒了。 2. We were about to set off when it began to rain. 我们正要出发, 这时天下起雨来了。 相关句式 3. I had just lain down when the

7、 telephone rang. 我刚刚躺下, 这时 铃响了。 4. Hardly had he finished his speech when the audience started cheering. 他一演讲完 观众就欢呼起来。(同义句式: no sooner. than. /as soon as.) 5. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately.一到达, 我们就开始工作。 6. On hearing the bell, students ran into the classroom as quickly as they could.一听

8、到铃声, 学生都尽快跑进教室。 7. Shortly after I let him come in, he cried on his desk.我让他进来后不久, 他就伏在桌上哭了起来。 8. After that we had a party. Some of us sang; others danced or told stories in turn. 在那之后, 我们举行了聚会。有的人唱歌, 有的人跳舞或轮流讲故事。 1. 记叙事件的写作一般按照事件开展的顺序来写作。 2. 由于活动往往有很多环节, 考生可以用一些与时间相关的副词如then, later, next, afterwar

9、ds, soon after that等或一些时间状语从句After., before.等把要点合理连贯地连接在一起。 3. 假设试题要求考生写自己的感受, 考生不能只是用I am very happy等简单句, 而是尽量用复合句来充分表达自己的观点。另外, 记叙文多涉及情感相关的用词, 考生平时可以多积累这样的单词或短语, 如an unforgettable experience, to my joy/delight, be satisfied/ content with等等。 (2021年深圳一模) 假设你参加了你校组织的“关爱生命 携手艾滋儿童的活动。 写作内容 请你写一篇英文日记，表达

10、活动情况, 内容包括： 时间：2007年12月1日 星期六8：30 启程 集合地点：校门口 车程：一个半小时自行车车程 目 的 地：红十字会医院 活动内容：亲切交谈、牵手跳舞、赠送礼物、拍照留念、共进午餐后返回 感受： 写作要求 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。注意: 日记的开头已写好。 评分标准 句子结构准确，信息内容完整, 篇章结构连贯。 December 1st 2007SaturdayFine 例题导写 认真审题。因为是日记, 所以用第一人称; 表达已发生的事应该用一般过去时, 感受那么用一般过去时或者一般现在时都可以。 信息重组。第一个句子为总起, 描述自己何时何地参加了何种活动。由于

11、是记叙事件, 接下去可以按照时间开展顺序进行信息点的划分。第二句是出发时间, 出发地点和路程。活动的内容比较多, 可以用两句话分别表述。最后一句就是活动的感受。 句1：(1) 组织活动：_ 句2：(2) 志愿者：_ 句3：(3) 红十字会医院： _ 词汇整理 翻译或完成以下词汇或短语。 the Red Cross Hospital organize an activity volunteer (4) 同亲切交谈： _ (5) 牵手跳舞： _ 句4： (6) 赠送礼物： _ (7) 拍照：_ take photos have close chats with sb. dance happily

12、together present gifts 难句翻译 翻译以下每组句子并合并成一 句。 句2： (1) 8：30 启程, 在校门口集中, 开始车程。 (1) We volunteers gathered at the school gate and started our bike trip. (2) 花了一个半小时自行车车程。 (2) It took us about one hour and a half. 合并: We volunteers gathered at the school gate and started our bike trip, which took us abou

13、t one hour and a half. 参考范文 December 1st 2007 Saturday Fine Today is the World Aids Day, so our school organized an activity called “Take care of our lives, hand in hand with Aids children. At 8:30 a.m. , we volunteers gathered at the school gate and started our bike trip, which took us about one ho

14、ur and a half. Soon after we got to the Red Cross Hospital, where most Aids children are staying, we began to have close chats with them to see how their life is going, and then we danced happily together. Having got to know them so well, we presented our gifts, took lots of photos and ate lunch tog

15、ether before we came back. I feel very great to see the Aids children so happy when they are not ignored and taken good care of. 能力提高 1. 作文填空 请考生将括号中的中文翻译成英文完成此篇作文。 I (1) _ (参加)a fantastic English talent show in Peoples Park on Dec. 25， 2021. Middle school students from all over Guangzhou (2)_ (表演了各种各样的节目), like English songs, English short plays and English stories. performed all kinds of programs participated in / took part in / joined in (3) _ _ (