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1、2021/8/61Made by Ye XiaolanMade by Ye Xiaolan 2021/8/62I. Some Problems You Often Meet in Your Writing and the Way Out.1. Having too few vocabularies2. Do not know if the sentences are correct3. Translate the sentences in a Chinese way2021/8/63The way out In order to write out good sentences in Engl

2、ish, you must try you best to learn the sentences you have learned before by heart. Read the texts again and again, use the sentences you have met in your text books, do not make a sentence in a Chinese way.2021/8/64高考作文类型：高考作文类型： 1. exposition 2. argumentation3. narration4. description2021/8/65影响高考

3、英语书面表达得分的几个影响高考英语书面表达得分的几个因素因素1.语篇信息是否完整语篇信息是否完整2.行文是否连贯流畅，语言是否得体。行文是否连贯流畅，语言是否得体。3.是否使用高级词汇是否使用高级词汇4.是否使用复杂句是否使用复杂句5 .卷面整洁卷面整洁,书写工整书写工整2021/8/66写作基本步骤：写作基本步骤： 仔细审题，列举大纲。仔细审题，列举大纲。 围绕要点，写出句子。围绕要点，写出句子。 添加过渡，确保连贯。添加过渡，确保连贯。 先求正确，再求灵活。先求正确，再求灵活。.认真眷写，卷面整洁。认真眷写，卷面整洁。2021/8/67现在正是春暖花开的春游时节。你校学生以现在正是春暖花开

4、的春游时节。你校学生以“高三学生要不高三学生要不要参加春游活动要参加春游活动”展开了讨论。请根据以下讨论结果，写一展开了讨论。请根据以下讨论结果，写一篇短文。篇短文。的学生认为的学生认为的学生认为的学生认为应该春游应该春游不应该春游不应该春游接触大自然，呼接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健吸新鲜空气，有利健康康高考临近，没有心高考临近，没有心情玩情玩活动是精神放松，活动是精神放松，大脑休息，有利于学大脑休息，有利于学习习春游耽误学习春游耽误学习2021/8/68Introduction (topic)Body (supporting ideas)Conclusion2021/8/692021/8

5、/610The outline of the writing:Conclusion paragraph: Introduction paragraph: Point 2BodyPoint 1supporting idea 1supporting idea 2supporting idea 1supporting idea 22021/8/611 Key words:1.introduction(topic):高三学生（senior 3 students）春游(go spring outing）讨论（discussion）2.body(supporting ideas): 接触自然（be clo

6、se to nature） 呼吸新鲜空气（ breathe some fresh air ）精神放松（relax themselves ）大脑休息（rest their brains ）高考临近（ with college entrance examination drawing near ）没心情玩（dont feel like going ）耽误学习(waste the time)3.conclusion: in my opinion2021/8/612 Key words:中学生middle school students 身体差in a poor state of health In

7、bad condition 充足的睡眠enough sleep 加强锻炼，增加户外活动 take more exercise and do more outdoor activities 定时吃饭少吃零食 have three meals regularly,eat less non-staple food. 讲卫生2021/8/613 Form/develop the habit of hygiene2021/8/614主题句的内容要明确具体，语言简洁，主题句的内容要明确具体，语言简洁，开门见山，句式力争多样性开门见山，句式力争多样性How will you start you passag

8、e?How will you start you passage?问句：问句： 从句：从句： Introduction:（sample） Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion. 2021/8/615巧用过渡句，过渡词，理顺文章的逻辑巧用过渡句，过渡词，理顺文章的逻辑关系关系Pay special attention to the transition sentences:Opinions are divided on the question. 2021

9、/8/616The body partPoint1: 65%的人认为应该春游（亮明观的人认为应该春游（亮明观点）点）Sentence pattern: Most of us (about 65%) hold the opinion that,since it tends to,which is unfavorable to Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing.2021/8/617Reason1Reason1：接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空：接触大自然，呼吸新鲜

10、空气，有利健康气，有利健康Sentence pattern: They think it good to do sth/ sth do good to sth In their opinion, it is of great benefit to do sth Eg:They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air 2021/8/618Reason 2:活动是精神放松，大脑休活动是精神放松，大脑休息，有利于学习息，有利于学习 （注意：两个观点之间的连接）递进递进whats m

11、ore ；besides ; moreover ; in addition；furthermoreEg: they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic.2021/8/619Conclusion: Conclusion: 小段总结，进一步亮小段总结，进一步亮明观点，前后呼应明观点，前后呼应。 Eg: They think it will do good to their students.2021/8/620 Point 2:的学生认为不应该的学生认为

12、不应该春游（亮明观点）春游（亮明观点） 注意：使用过渡句，自然衔接句子和段落注意：使用过渡句，自然衔接句子和段落（承上启下）（承上启下） Sentence pattern: However, others prefer to Some others have just the opposite opinion. On the other hand. Eg: On the other hand, about 35% students are against the idea.2021/8/621 Reason 1:Reason 1:高考临近，没有心情玩高考临近，没有心情玩 Sentence pa

13、ttern: They say/believe/hold the opinion that. Eg: They say that with college entrance examination drawing near, they dont feel like going anywhere. 2021/8/622 Reason 2:春游耽误学习春游耽误学习 （注意：两个观点之间的连接）（注意：两个观点之间的连接）Eg:Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They cant afford

14、the time. They think they should fix their attention on their studies2021/8/623 Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion. Opinions are divided on the question. Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing.

15、They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and whats more, they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic. They think it will do good to their students. On the other hand, about 35% students are against the id

16、ea. They say that with college entrance examination drawing near, they dont feel like going anywhere. Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They cant afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their studies2021/8/624 表示观点对比类写作套语表示观点对比类写作套语A.总起总起: O

17、pinions are divided on this question.Different people hold different / opposite opinions. People have taken/adopted different attitudes towards People have different opinions on this problem. People take different views on this question.B.表达观点一表达观点一: of them hold the opinion that . of them are in fa

18、vor of the idea that People who are for the idea think 2021/8/625C.表达不同观点之间的衔接表达不同观点之间的衔接:However, of them hold a different view. / of them hold the opposite opinion. People who are against it dont think so. However, every coin has two sides. Different from those., people think .On the other hand, p

19、eople think .D.结尾常用套语结尾常用套语: In my opinion/Personally, As far as Im concerned, In short/ in brief/ in a word, 2021/8/626 Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion. Opinions are divided on the question. Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Se

20、nior 3 students should go spring outing. They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and whats more, they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic. They think it will do good to their students. On the other ha

21、nd, about 35% students are against the idea. They say that with college entrance examination drawing near, they dont feel like going anywhere. Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They cant afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their studies.

22、Opinions are divided on the question.Most students, about 65%, are for the idea thatOn the other hand, about 35% students areagainst the idea.2021/8/627表列举说明的关联词表列举说明的关联词: Firstly/ First of all/ To begin with, . Secondly Thirdly In the first place In the second place In the third place Finally/ Last

23、 but not least/, .表示递进、强调的关联词表示递进、强调的关联词 . Besides/Apart from/ Whats more/ In addition/ Furthermore/ Moreover/worse still/ to make matters worse 2021/8/628 Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion. Opinions are divided on the question. Most students,

24、about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing. They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and whats more, they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic. They think it will do good

25、 to their students. On the other hand, about 35% students are against the idea. They say that with college entrance examination drawing near, they dont feel like going anywhere. Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They cant afford the time. They think they should fi

26、x their attention on their studies.Opinions are divided on the question.Most students, about 65%, are for the idea thatOn the other hand, about 35% students areagainst the idea.whats more,Besides2021/8/629A A、运用高级词汇或短语、运用高级词汇或短语B B、增加形容词或副词、增加形容词或副词C C、灵活运用各种句型、灵活运用各种句型 亮点点拨亮点点拨2021/8/630 Whether or

27、 not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion. Opinions are divided on the question. Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing. They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and w

28、hats more, they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic. They think it will do good to their students. On the other hand, about 35% students are against the idea. They say that with college entrance examination drawing near, they dont feel like goin

29、g anywhere. Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They cant afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their studies.be close toenergeticfeellike goingaffordfix theirattention onheatedfresh2021/8/631 Notes to your writing1. Use direct, simple and s

30、hort sentence e.g. It is frequently her custom to come and see us on Sunday. She frequently comes to see us on Sunday. It is her custom to come and see us on Sunday.2. Avoid too many pronouns e.g. Tom and Rose are classmate. He likes swimming, while she likes skating. One day she and he went out together, she talked much but he said no words.2021/8/6323. Use more active voice sentences and less pas