Unit5 Writing

1、 演讲英语作文写作演讲英语作文写作 1结构：称呼，正文和结束语，结束语通常结构：称呼，正文和结束语，结束语通常 表达演讲者对听众的感谢，祝贺和祝愿等。表达演讲者对听众的感谢，祝贺和祝愿等。 称呼和结束语是演讲作文的必要格式，是称呼和结束语是演讲作文的必要格式，是 对听众的尊重，因此，礼貌用语必不可少。对听众的尊重，因此，礼貌用语必不可少。 2、正文：演讲作文的核心部分。、正文：演讲作文的核心部分。 1）好的开头是成功的一半。激发听众的好）好的开头是成功的一半。激发听众的好 奇心或设置悬念都是很好的开头方式。可奇心或设置悬念都是很好的开头方式。可 以以具体的事例，令人震惊的数据或提问以以具体的事

2、例，令人震惊的数据或提问 的方式开始。的方式开始。例子或具体的数据可以从很例子或具体的数据可以从很 大程度上帮助普通听众理解抽象的陈述。大程度上帮助普通听众理解抽象的陈述。 开始就向听众提出问题也可以激活他们开始就向听众提出问题也可以激活他们 的思维，吸引他们全身心沉浸于演讲中。的思维，吸引他们全身心沉浸于演讲中。 例例1： Failure Dear teachers and students: Today it is a great honor that I stand here and give a speech titled “Failure”. In the past, I alway

3、s thought that I was not the lovely girl in the Gods eyes, because bad luck seemed to be my best friend who always followed me. I remember when I was a primary school student I always did a good job in the preparation exam, but always failed in the final. The same thing happened during my junior hig

4、h school years. 例例2: On the Way to Success Ladies and gentlemen: Good afternoon! Today it is my great honor to give a speech here. The title of my speech is “On the Way to Success”. My dear friends, first let me ask you a question. How do you define success? . 例例3： Where There Is a Will, There Is a

5、Way Honorable Judges，dear teachers and my fellow students： Good morning! Today it is my great honor to be here and make a speech. My topic is “Where there is a will, there is a way”. I think we are all very familiar with this proverb. It means that if you are really determined to do something, no ma

6、tter how difficult it might be，you will find a way of doing it at last. 2）核心部分：说服力是主体部分的重中之）核心部分：说服力是主体部分的重中之 重。可以结合实际例子展开论述。重。可以结合实际例子展开论述。 演讲者讲个人亲身经历，写内心感受，描演讲者讲个人亲身经历，写内心感受，描 写细腻真实，充满人情，具有很强的感写细腻真实，充满人情，具有很强的感 染力。染力。 例：例： Just to Try I would like to begin with a story. Half a year ago, I worked a

7、s a journalist for the English newspaper of my school. One day I was given a special task: to interview a manager of a foreign company. I made full preparation for the interview. But as it was my first time talking with a foreigner, I found it rather difficult. I always thought, “What if he refuses

8、to answer my questions? What if he is arrogant（傲慢的（傲慢的 ）? What if he pays no attention to me because I am just a senior high school student?” But whenever these questions came to my mind, I told myself immediately, “Now, he is the manager, so what? Big deal! He used to be a student before. He may ha

9、ve had the same experience as what I have now. If you are too shy to sell your ideas, if you are too shy to present yourself, if you are too shy to speak in public, you will never have any opportunity! God does not require you to succeed. God only requires you to try!” 可以通过层层递进的论理方式展开演说，可以通过层层递进的论理方

10、式展开演说， 如在如在”On the Way to Success”一文中，开一文中，开 头，主体，结尾处分别使用了三个设问句，头，主体，结尾处分别使用了三个设问句， “如何定义成功如何定义成功”？ “如何获得成功如何获得成功”？ （I am sure everyone wants to succeed. But how?) “道德与成功有没有什么关系道德与成功有没有什么关系”？ （Does success have something to do with morality?) 极好地架设起全文的整体构架，极好地架设起全文的整体构架， 条理非常清晰。条理非常清晰。 还可以通过正反对比的方式论

11、理，使全还可以通过正反对比的方式论理，使全 文逻辑严密，分析透彻有利。文逻辑严密，分析透彻有利。 3）好的结尾与好的开头同样重要。通常）好的结尾与好的开头同样重要。通常 结尾总结演讲的要点，加强听众对主结尾总结演讲的要点，加强听众对主 题（旨）的理解。在听众坐立不安之题（旨）的理解。在听众坐立不安之 前，或希望你能讲更多的时候结束演前，或希望你能讲更多的时候结束演 讲，听众会认为你是个出色的演讲者。讲，听众会认为你是个出色的演讲者。 演讲者还可以通过呼吁某种措施结尾，演讲者还可以通过呼吁某种措施结尾， 用一些富含哲理的谚语，诗歌或为人用一些富含哲理的谚语，诗歌或为人 熟知的歌词。熟知的歌词。

12、英语演讲作文的特点英语演讲作文的特点 1、与普通演讲作文的相同之处：必须具备、与普通演讲作文的相同之处：必须具备 强烈的鼓动性和感染力，用演讲者自己强烈的鼓动性和感染力，用演讲者自己 的炽热感情引发听众的感情之火，但必的炽热感情引发听众的感情之火，但必 须是真情实感，切勿口号式说教，更不须是真情实感，切勿口号式说教，更不 可矫揉造作。在内容上还可旁征博引，可矫揉造作。在内容上还可旁征博引， 增强演讲的可信度和说服力。增强演讲的可信度和说服力。 2、英语演讲作文显著特点：长短句，排比、英语演讲作文显著特点：长短句，排比 句与简短句的大量运用。大量运用长短句与简短句的大量运用。大量运用长短 句，有

13、张有弛，使演讲富有节奏感和韵句，有张有弛，使演讲富有节奏感和韵 律感。律感。 (09安徽安徽) 假设你正在参加全省中学生英语演假设你正在参加全省中学生英语演 讲比赛，请你针对有些父母经常翻看孩讲比赛，请你针对有些父母经常翻看孩 子日记或书包这一现象，写一篇演讲稿，子日记或书包这一现象，写一篇演讲稿， 陈述你的观点。陈述你的观点。 演讲稿的主要内容应包括：演讲稿的主要内容应包括： 认为同学们不必为此苦恼；认为同学们不必为此苦恼； 希望能够体谅父母的苦衷；希望能够体谅父母的苦衷； 建议与父母进行交流和沟通。注意：建议与父母进行交流和沟通。注意： 1. 词数词数100左右；左右； 2. 可以适当增加

14、细节，以使行文连贯；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词 数。数。 Good morning, ladies and gentleman. Some of us are having problems with our parents, as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries. Thank you! 【参考范文参考范文】 Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. Some of us are having proble

15、ms with our parents, as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries. I fully understand why we are not comfortable about it, but theres no need to feel too sad. Our parents are checking our bags or diaries to make sure were not getting into any trouble. They have probably heard some hor

16、rible stories about other kids and thought we might do the same. Or perhaps they just want to connect with us but are doing it all wrong. My suggestion is: Tell them we want them to trust us as much as wed like to trust them. If you dont think you can talk to them, write them a letter and leave it l

17、ying around-they are bound to read it. Thank you! 【2013天津卷天津卷】书面表达书面表达 61.假设你是某大学的学生李津，你校英语俱乐部将假设你是某大学的学生李津，你校英语俱乐部将 选举新一届副主席，负责规划、组织俱乐部的相关选举新一届副主席，负责规划、组织俱乐部的相关 活动，你欲参选，请按以下提示，写一篇竞选演讲活动，你欲参选，请按以下提示，写一篇竞选演讲 稿。稿。 个人的优势介绍（如性格、特长等）个人的优势介绍（如性格、特长等） 组织校内的活动的设想（如举办讲座、英语晚组织校内的活动的设想（如举办讲座、英语晚 会等）会等） 组织校际交流活动的设想（如举办辩论赛、演讲组织校际交流活动的设想（如举办辩论赛、演