高考英语二轮短文改错专项突破：短文改错集训(15)

1、【专项突破】 2016 高考英语 - 短文改错集训（十五）【专项突破】短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）,并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意： 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10 处，多者（从第11 处起）不计分。passage 1on a snowy winter night, a bus with 45 passenger had an ac

2、cident because the wet road. and all of them were trapping in the bus and what is worse, the bus ran out of gas and it was very cold in it. they could do nothing but to wait for help. a man who lived nearby saw that had happened. he and some villagers succeeded in open the door and helped all of the

3、m out of the bus. he took them to his home but offered food and water and even some warm clothes to the children. they spent two days in their home and finally help came. all of them were thankfully for their help.passage 2a foreign student graduated with honors from a finely university in germany.

4、he expected tofind a good job and have a bright future. but in his disappointment,he wasnt even giving thechance for an interview! the third time he was refused, he phoned the company to ask how. wedont employ dishonest people in germany is the answer. what was wrong? shortly before hearrived in ger

5、many, he found easy to steal subway rides. but he often rode without a ticket and wascaught up three times. now he had to pay a high price for his own behavior. we should all keep inminds: honesty is the best policy.passage 3one year ago,i had a special english lesson hold at the railway station. it

6、 was quite differentfromthe regular english classes we were familiar to, for we had no textbooks, no blackboard or nofixedseats.gathering at the entrance ofthe station, we told to collectas many english words andsentences as possible here. curious and excited, we walkedaround the stationand lookedev

7、erywhere, search for any information in english. whenever an english word comes into sight, theclass would burst into the cheers as if we had discovered a new world. with the chinese translation and vividly pictures, we could figure out its meaning with ease.now, this unforgettable lesson still enco

8、urages me to be an active learner where i go.passage 4dear mandy ，pm not doing well in my lessons at school ， especial in maths. my dad says i must try hardbecause he wants me go to university. he thinks im lazy ， but its not true. i work really hard，often study late into the night！ ive tried to tal

9、k to my mother， but she always said i have to workas hard like my brother does. my brother doesnt study very hard ， and he always gets excellent grades. its not fair ！the only thing i like it is art. my teacher says rm the best student shes had for year. when i told my dad ， all he said was， “ you m

10、ustnt waste your time in art. you must focus your mind on your lessons！ ” pm feeling quite puzzling what to do now would you please help me out? thanks a lot！yours sincerely，lisapassage 5there ans old man in our village calling old joe who said to be 110 years old. this can betproved though he doesn

11、 t have a birth certificate. all his personal papers were destroy during theworld war ii. i don t know if he really is so old, and it doesn t matter. he certainly looks very ocourse, he is often asked question by people who want to be told the secret of long life. old joealways answered them like th

12、is,“ if you arecigarofferedtte, never accept it; if you are annoyedby someone, never lose his temper; and if you are asked foolishly questions, never answer them.passage 6dear jin jing，your problem is common one among middle school students maybe the following advices can help you first in all, beli

13、eve in yourself your greatest problem is that you lack self-confidence the first thing you must do it is to smile at your classmates one smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any words your smile will show that you are friendly to him next, trying talking with a student who is as sh

14、y as you or who share the same interest as you you can discuss yourstudies with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbies unless anyone is in trouble, youshould be ready to help him or her once you have confidence, you can make as many friends aspossibly yours,lily2016 高考英语 - 短文改错集训（十五）答案

15、passage 1on a snowy winter night , a bus with 45passenger had an accident becausethepassengersofwet road .and all of them weretrapping in the bus and what is worse, the bus ran outtrappedwasof gas and it was very cold in it. they could do nothing buttowait for help . a man wholived nearby saw that h

16、ad happened . he and some villagers succeeded in open thewhatopeningdoor and helped all of them out of the bus .he took them to his homebut offered foodandand water and even some warm clothes to the children . they spent two days intheir hishome and finally help came . all of them werethankfully for

17、 their help.thankfulpassage 2a foreign student graduated with honors from afinely university in germany. he expected tofinefind a good job and have a bright future. butin his disappointment, he wasnt evengiving thetogivenchance for an interview! the third time he was refused, he phoned the company t

18、o askhow . wewhydont employ dishonest people in germanyis the answer. what was wrong? shortlybefore hewasafterarrived in germany, he found easy to steal subway rides. but he often rode without a ticket anditsowas caught up three times. now he had to pay a high price for his own behavior. we should a

19、llkeep in minds : honesty is the best policy.mindpassage 3one year ago, i had a special english lesson hold at shijiazhuang railway station. it was quite differentheldfrom the regular english classes we were familiarto, for we had no textbooks, no blackboard or nofixed seats.withandgathering at the

20、entrance of the station, wetold to collect as many english words andweresentences as possiblehere. curious and excited, we walked around the station and lookedthereeverywhere, search for any information in english. whenever an english wordcomes into sight, thesearchingcameclass would burst into the

21、cheers as if we had discovered a new world. with the chinese translationand vividly pictures, we could figure out its meaning with ease.vividnow, this unforgettable lesson still encourages me to be an active learner where i go.whereverpassage 4dear mandy,i m not doing well in my lessons at school,es

22、pecial in maths. my dad says i must try hard especiallybecause he wants me go to university. he thinks i m lazy, but it s not true. i work really hard,tooften study late into the night! i ve tried to talk to mybutmother,shealways said i have to workstudyingsaysas hard like my brother does. my brothe

23、r doesn t study veryand hard,healways gets excellentasbutgrades. it s not fair!the only thing i like it is art. my teacher says i m the bestyearstudent.whensheyearsi told my dad, all he said was,“ you mustnyourtime tinwasteart.you must focus your mind onon / overyour lessons!” i m feelingpuzzlingqui

24、te what to do now. would you please help me out? thanks s had forpuzzleda lot!yours sincerely,lisapassage 5试题分析：题目主要考查学生对冠词、名词、并列连词、形容词、过去分词、定语从句、状语从句、时态等语法知识的掌握情况。【小题 51】考查过去分词作定语。 man 和 call 之间是动宾关系，即一个被叫做.的人，应该用过去分词作定语，故把calling 改为 called。【小题 52】考查定语从句。 who 引导一个定语从句，sb be said to be/do sth据说某人 .，根据 “theres an old man可知”短文用的是一般现在时，故在who 和 said 之间加 is。【小题 53】考查状语从句。句意：这得不到证明，