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1、期中考试作文评讲,With society developed. With time goes by. With mordern techology had been development. Internet become a part of daily life. In the reality society Internet have already come into our daily life. As we are known, Internet already into our life. Computer has been became in our lifes content

2、s.,We can shopping at home, and the Internet shop dont expensive than store. It is very expensive than in store. But, it will worried about mass. And we have more choose. There is all kinds of thing in the Internet. So it is easy that we are cheated. But sometimes, we bought the goods is different f

3、rom we wants. We can worry taken in.,Shopping of Internet not be see, we can be worry to that is lie. Internet shopping have a disadvantage that is not see the good. But this goods we dont see it, so we worry about was not true! It is the reason why we couldnt see goods and worry about taking in. On

4、ly we can see his goodful and harmful, do live are varitious.,1. Following the development of technologe, the internet have already into our daily life. 2. Many of people. especiely teenages like use Internet to shopping. 3. We always are fear of being lies. Because we cant see the goods. 4. The int

5、ernet cant show goods to us, we are worry. Although, the goods cheaper. We dont know them quality. 5. It is likely to cheat that we should careful.,6. Not only have an great effect on our life internet but also have an oppositive effect on our life. 7.网上的商品不仅种类繁多，价格还比商店便宜。,Time goes by, the developm

6、ent with science. Internet is made up of our daily life, it is most importantly. Above all, we can go shopping in Internet. As is known to all. First we can take shop stay with home instead of going out. Next, the online shopping is more cheaper than shop store in road, and it has everything we need

7、, just like clothes, shoes, foods and so on. But we also should pay some attention to, we should protect ourselves dont be deapted in Internet. Have a good fun!,It is known to all that the Internet has become a part of our life. We can be free to buy something that we need at home. There are a varie

8、ty of goods. Only by this way can we save time to do other things. Shopping by the Internet has a advantager over others.For example, we can spent little money on it. On one hand, shopping by the Internet makes our life easy. On the other hand, we cant see the truth of goods, so we dont trust easily

9、. Above all, we believe our life will be better and better.,From now on, Internet come to our life with morden hi-tech development. Recently, there is a theme that Internet purchurs is very hot. Internet become our a part of life, we can purchurs at home by Internet, the way is save money very than

10、in shop, even so, we also have disadvantage. We will be care of goods, in case of us be cheat. In a world, we should have a porper way to be chosen.,Now, Internet has been a part of our life, whatever we do, we can do it online, for example shopping. We can shopping at home by Internet. The goods on

11、 line is cheaper than makets. Meanwhile, we always are fear of being lies. Because we cant see the goods. Shopping on line give we convenient, and give many bad bussiness convenient, too. We must be careless. Following the development of modern techenolgy. Internet is more and more important, when w

12、e are shopping on line, we should be care for.,一、文章总体模板,1. 文章开头的总体交待, 起 （ 引出主题）,A. With the development of science and technology B. As science and technology develop, Shopping online becomes more and more popular./More and more people prefer shopping online. It has both advantages and disadvantages

13、./ Here are its advantages and disadvantages,2. 呈现不同观点的句式, 转承 （陈述观点）,呈现论据时常用的连接词 观点一Its advantages are as follows. Inthefirstplace, shopping online is more convenient./ shopping online does make our shopping more convenient._(论据一). Furthermore,inthesecondplace, _(论据二). 观点二A. However, every coin has two sides. There is no exception when it comes to online shopping. B. Although we can benefit a lot from shopping on the Internet, there is still something we are worried about,3. 结尾部分表达个人观点和总结的用语, 结 （ 总结观点）,As far as