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1、初中英语写作技巧B部分,大路边中学 林秀芬,2017年2月23日 星期四,中考英语书面表达： A部分读写综合，分值5分； B部分作文，分值15分。,本节课主要讲B部分的写作技巧,Structure 结构,Beginning(开头),Ending(结尾),Body (主干),首尾呼应，点题，倡议,when,写作的一般框架,where,who,what,how,点明主题或写作意图,写作三步曲,第一步曲：Pre-writing (写前),1.审： 2. 列： 3. 确定人称和时态 写作常用时态 : 一般现在时 一般过去时 一般将来时 写作常用人称: 第一人称 第二人称 第三人称,仔细阅读题目，明确写

2、作要求。,根据写作内容要求，列出信息点。,注意：要包含写作要求的所有信息点, 尽量用自己会写的单词、句型来表达。,第二步曲：While-writing (写中),1.加： 2.连： 3.美：,加首尾，使结构完整， 可以采取总分总结构。,妙用关联词连接句子，使语意更连贯。,善用高级词汇；,活用多种句型；,妙用谚语、引文或例子。,Which is better?,这本故事书很有趣，你会喜欢的。,A. The story book is very interesting, you will like it. B. The story book is so interesting that you w

3、ill lose yourself in it.,so,that,善用高级词汇,活用多种句型,What a beautiful flower! Could you give us some advice? I will go to play football if it is sunny this afternoon.,感叹句,疑问句,复合句,第三步曲：Post-writing (写后),查： 1. 词汇拼写是否正确？ 2. 标点符号和词语大小写使用是否得当？ 3. 人称、时态是否正确？ 4. 要点是否全部涉及，文章是否完整?,写作技巧,审,列,加,连,美,necessary,If possi

4、ble,Summary,（关于写作）常见写作套路： 1、First of all， secondly ,thirdly,at last 2 、 First. next . Then. Finally. 3、 Generally speakingon one hand.on the other hand.in one word,书面表达,书面表达 健康对我们来说非常重要，我们可以用很多方法来保持身体健康。请根据下面表格的提示，以“Good Ways to Keep Healthy”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，倡议“健康生活”，从三个方面说明如何保持健康。短文首句已给出，不计入总词数，可适当发挥

5、。,It is very important for us to keep healthy._,可能要用的词汇、短语： 肉meat 蔬菜vegetables 大米rice 水果fruit 健康食品healthy food, 保持健康 keep healthy 一顿很快的午餐 a quick lunch面包bread 鸡蛋egg 饮料 drinks 茶 tea 牛奶milk 水water 奶茶milk tea 啤酒beer a balanced diet, less meat.,do more exercise, take a walk, play ball games.,keep happy,

6、 make friends, smile,【优秀满分范文】 Good Ways to Keep Healthy It is very important for us to keep healthy. But do you know the ways to keep us healthy? First, we need to have healthy eating habits, we can eat a lot of vegetables and fresh fruit, but wed better eat less meat. Different kinds of food are ne

7、cessary, its also important to eat a balanced diet. Then, playing sports every day can also help us keep fit. We can take walks after dinner, we can walk to school instead of taking a bus, after school we can spend hours playing basketball or soccer with our friends. We should try to do more exercise every day. Happiness is another way to keep healthy. When we are lonely or unhappy, try to make friends. It is a good way to keep us happy. If you smile o