Unit2Writing课件人教版英语八年级下册

I’llhelptocleanthecityparks.单元作文讲练Unit2【语境应用】根据汉语意思完成句子。1)

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为了能独自抚养孩子们，Green太太一直努力工作。Mrs.Greenalwaysworkshardto____________________byherself.raiseyourhandtoraisemoneyraiseherchildren/kidsIwanttobeadoctor,volunteeringinahospitalisadreamcometrueforme,Icouldlearnmoreknowledgeaboutmedicineandhelpmegetmyfuturedreamjob.Whydoyouwanttodovolunteerwork?Let’sdiscussWhydoyouwanttodovolunteerwork?Let’sdiscussVolunteeringcanhelpotherpeoplelivebetterandmakedifferencetoallofus.cleanuptheplaygroundhelptheteachergiveoutexercisebookskeeporderatthesportsmeetingplanttreesWhatcouldwevolunteertodoatschool?helpcleanuptheCityParksvisitsickchildreninthehospitalhelpstophungerraisemoneyforpoorpeopleWhatcouldwevolunteertodooutsideschool?Wheredoyouwanttovolunteeratandwhy?volunteerin

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museumvolunteerinaparkvolunteerinthecommunityI’dliketo/I'minterestedin/I’mfondof/Iwantto…because…/ˈɪntrəst/Welcometojoinusandbeavolunteer!Ifyouwanttocome,pleasewritealetterabouttheplaceyouwanttovolunteeratandthejobyoucandotous.Howcanwewritethisletter?DearSirorMadam,I’maGrade8studentfromXXmiddleschool.Iwouldliketovolunteerinanoldpeople’shome.IamgoodatcleaningthehouseandIamalsointerestedincooking.What’smore,Iamstrongincommunicatingwithothers.Therefore,Icandoalotfortheoldpeople.Firstly,Icanhelptheoldpeopletodosomecleaning.Secondly,Icancookdeliciousfoodforthem.Finally,Icantalkwiththemwhentheyfeellonelyandunhappy.IbelieveIamgoodatthisjob.Iwanttohelpoutasavolunteerinanoldpeople’shomebecauseitmakesmedowhatIlovetodoandhelpothersatthesametimeAsfortheworkingtime,IamfreetohelponSaturdays.Fromthebottomofmyheart,Iwanttogetthisjob.Ihopeyoucanoffermethechance.Yourstruly,LiHuaDearSirorMadam,I’maGrade8studentfromXXmiddleschool.Iwouldliketovolunteerinanoldpeople’shome.IamgoodatcleaningthehouseandIamalsointerestedincooking.What’smore,Iamstrongincommunicatingwithothers.Therefore,Icandoalotfortheoldpeople.Firstly,Icanhelptheoldpeopletodosomecleaning.Secondly,Icancookdeliciousfoodforthem.Finally,Icantalkwiththemwhentheyfeellonelyandunhappy.IbelieveIamgoodatthisjob.Iwanttohelpoutasavolunteerinanoldpeople’shomebecauseitmakesmedowhatIlovetodoandhelpothersatthesametimeAsfortheworkingtime,IamfreetohelponSaturdays.Fromthebottomofmyheart,Iwanttogetthisjob.Ihopeyoucanoffermethechance.Yourstruly,LiHua本单元谈论的话题是“志愿与慈善”。围绕这一话题，主要谈论了如何提供帮助及宣传、倡导公益活动等。针对该话题，考试中常见的考查角度有：介绍自己或者他人某次的志愿者活动；志愿活动的安排；志愿者的招聘启事或者自荐信等。体裁以记叙文、应用文为主，多用第一人称，时态多使用一般现在时和一般过去时。写作此类话题作文，常用的相关句型：话题分析Lookatthesekindsofvolunteerwork.Canyouaddmore?Whatwouldyouliketodo?Discussitwithapartner.3aHelpingkidsinanafter-schoolprogramWorkinginanoldpeople’shomeBeingaguideatamuseumPre-writingAnalyzethecontent（分析内容）Wouldyouliketobevolunteers?Thelawofpalm手掌定律Whichvolunteerjobdoyouwanttodo?Whatareyourinterestsandhobbies?Howcanthesehelpyoutodothejob?Whydoyouwanttodothevolunteerjob?When

areyoufreetodothejob?expressyourhopePre-writingWhatareyourinterestsandhobbies?Iaminterestedin/Iamfondof/Iamcrazyabout…Iamstrongin/Iamskilledat…Whydoyouwanttodothevolunteerjob?

Iwanttogetthejobbecause…….Therefore,…….Thereasonisthat……forthereasonthat…expressyourhopeIsincerehopethat…Couldyoupleaseoffermethechance?Whichvolunteerjobdoyouwanttodo?Iwouldliketo/Iwantto/Ihopetovolunteerin/at/as…Sincerely,Ihope…

BrainstormmoreusefulexpressionsLet’sdraftWhatsentencescanweusetodescribethisparagraph?application1.purpose2.introduction&ability3.reason4.time/promise/expectation/contactsIamwritingtoyouaboutvolunteeringin…...I'mgoodat.../Iamstrongin...Inmyfreetime,/Iliketo...soIthinkI'dbegoodatthisjob.Ican...Iwanttohelpoutasavolunteerinyouroldpeople'shomebecause...I’mfreetohelponweekends.Thankyouforreviewingmyapplication.IwouldbeverypleasedifIcouldmakemycontributiontotheproject.EmailmeatLucy@.Learnthestructure（学习结构）Pre-writingHowmanypartsarethereinthemainpartoftheletter?threeDearSirorMadam,Iwouldliketovolunteerinanoldpeople’shome.IamgoodatcleaningthehouseandIamalsointerestedincooking.What’smore,Iamstrongincommunicatingwithothers.Therefore,Icandoalotfortheoldpeople.Firstly,Icanhelptheoldpeopletodosomecleaning.Secondly,Icancookdeliciousfoodforthem.Finally,Icantalkwiththemwhentheyfeellonelyandunhappy.IbelieveIamgoodatthisjob.Iwanttohelpoutasavolunteerinanoldpeople’shomebecauseitmakesmedowhatIlovetodoandhelpothersatthesametimeAsfortheworkingtime,IamfreetohelponSaturdays.Fromthebottomofmyheart,Iwanttogetthisjob.Ihopeyoucanoffermethechance.Yourstruly,LiHuaBeginningBodyEndingReadandmarkthecontent（内容）Pre-writingWhydoyouwanttodothevolunteerjob?expressyourhopeHowcanthesehelpyoutodothejob?Whatareyourinterestsandhobbies?Whichvolunteerjobdoyouwanttodo?Whenareyoufreetodothejob?DearSirorMadam,Iwouldliketovolunteerinanoldpeople’shome.IamgoodatcleaningthehouseandIamalsointerestedincooking.What’smore,Iamstrongincommunicatingwithothers.Therefore,Icandoalotfortheoldpeople.Firstly,Icanhelptheoldpeopletodosomecleaning.Secondly,Icancookdeliciousfoodforthem.Finally,Icantalkwiththemwhentheyfeellonelyandunhappy.IbelieveIamgoodatthisjob.Iwanttohelpoutasavolunteerinanoldpeople’shomebecauseitmakesmedowhatIlovetodoandhelpothersatthesametimeAsfortheworkingtime,IamfreetohelponSaturdays.Fromthebottomofmyheart,Iwanttogetthisjob.Ihopeyoucanoffermethechance.Yourstruly,LiHuaLearnthelanguagePre-writingWritingtip:makethewritingmorelogic.allowthereaderstofollowourthoughts.Moreconjunctions:next,afterthat,inaddition,additionally,also,then...Conjunctions（连接词）Transitionalsentences（过渡句）DearSirorMadam,Iwouldliketovolunteerinanoldpeople’shome.IamgoodatcleaningthehouseandIamalsointerestedincooking.What’smore,Iamstrongincommunicatingwithothers.Therefore,Icandoalotfortheoldpeople.Firstly,Icanhelptheoldpeopletodosomecleaning.Secondly,Icancookdeliciousfoodforthem.Finally,Icantalkwiththemwhentheyfeellonelyandunhappy.IbelieveIamgoodatthisjob.Iwanttohelpoutasavolunteerinanoldpeople’shomebecauseitmakesmedowhatIlovetodoandhelpothersatthesametimeAsfortheworkingtime,IamfreetohelponSaturdays.Fromthebottomofmyheart,Iwanttogetthisjob.Ihopeyoucanoffermethechance.Yourstruly,LiHuaBody(正文)陈述观点WhatHowWhyWhenWhich你的兴趣/爱好它们对你工作的帮助说明你想做这份工作的原因你做这份工作的时间引出话题Salutation(称呼)Signature(署名)结束语表达想做什么样的志愿者工作Will表达意愿，感谢ThestructureoftheletterThinkanddiscusshowtowriteanapplication.purposeintroduction:interestsandhobbiesabilityreasonfreetimepromise/expectationcontactsApplication申请书Let’sdraftWhatsentencescanweusetodescribethisparagraph?Howtomakethepassagebetter?谚语能帮忙让文章变得更优美哦：Helpingothersisavirtue.Rosesgiven,fragranceinhand.Helpingotherstostandupisgoodexerciseforourmind.Virtueisitsownreward.Itisbettertogivethantotake.Wecan’thelpeveryone,buteveryonecanhelpsomeoneelse.Draftyourletteraccordingtoyouroutline.（起草）While-writingDearSirorMadam,I’dliketo/I'minterestedin/Iwanttovolunteerin______________.I'mgoodat/I’mstrongin/Inmyfreetime,Iliketo_________________,soIthinkIdbegoodatthisjob.Iwanttohelpoutasavolunteerin________________because_______________________.Asfortheworkingtime,I’mfreetohelpin/on__________________.Fromthebottomofmyheart,_____________.Yourstruly,__________010203

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时态一般现在时审题While-writing你在网站看到这篇学生中心公开招募志愿者的招聘启事，你也很想去帮助需要帮助的人，请写一封回信申请一份你喜欢的志愿者工作。申请内容：1.写明你要申请的志愿者工作是什么；2.说明你有怎样的能力或兴趣爱好能胜任这份工作。要求：80字左右，内容充实，结构合理，语言流畅得体。Task1审题I’dliketo/I’minterestedin/Iwanttovolunteeras…I’mgoodat/I’mstrongin/Inmyfreetime,Iliketo…soIthinkI’dbegoodatthejob.Iwanttohelpoutasavolunteerinyouroldpeople’shome/school/museum/groupbecause…I’mfreetohelpin/on…Somepatternsforreference:DearSirorMadam,Yourstruly,____While-writingWritealetterforavolunteerjob.DearSir,I’mamiddleschoolstudent.MynameisLiHua.Iwanttovolunteerasateacherinanafter-schoolprogram.Icanreadstorybookstokidsthere.Inmyfreetime,IliketoreadbooksandIthinkI’dbegoodatthisjob.Iwanttohelpoutasavolunteerintheafter-schoolprogrambecauseIlikespendingtimewithkids.AndIlikereadingverymuch.I’mfreetohelponSunday.I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yourstruly,LiHua引出话题Salutation(称呼语)结束语HowWhyWhenSignature(署名)What篇章方面词语方面代词的主格、宾格等形式使用是否正确？名词单复数是否准确？动词搭配、动词的形式正确？形容词、副词的使用是否达?与修饰的对象是否相符？

。句子方面主谓是否一致？时态、语态是否正确？连词使用是否正确？句式是否多样？是否用到好词好句？细节方面单词拼写、标点符号、大小写等是否正确？布局是否完整？逻辑是否合理？要点是否齐全/丰富？After-writingTask1:Self-checkDearSirorMadam,I'dliketohelpkidsinyourafter-schoolprogram.I'mamiddleschoolstudentandIwanttobeateacherwhenIgrowup.I'mgoodatsinginganddrawing.Icansingforthekidsandpl