25八省联考英语读后续写解读与示范讲义-高三英语二轮复习

25八省联考英语读后续写解读与示范第二节阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。人与自然（对接同步课本B1U5/B2U6/X2U6最优）IwasinPhiladelphiaforaconferencewhenIsawanadinthehotel.Anearbytheaterwasshowingadocumentary(纪录片)aboutseverallocalanimalsheltersthatwerehelpingtosaveabandoneddogsacrossthecountry.Iloveanimals,andIfeltanurgetogotothisfundraisingevent.However,noneofmycoworkerswouldgowithme,andIwasworriedaboutwalkingonthestreetaloneatnight.Iresigned【放弃】myselftospendingtheeveninginmyhotelroom,butassoonasIgotbacktomyroomIfeltrestlessandbored.Thetheaterwheretheeventwastakingplacewasonlyaboutfiveblocksfromthehotel,andtheareaaroundthehoteldidn'tseemparticularlydangerous.So,Idecidedtobraveit.Igatheredupmywalletandroomkeyandsetoff.Itwasalreadygettingdarkandthestreetswerenearlydeserted.Imanagedtofindthestreetthetheaterwason,butwhenIturnedthecorner,Istoppedinshock.Infrontofthetheaterwereagroupofbikers—verybig,toughlookingbikers.I'veknownlotsofmotorcycleenthusiastsandmostarenicepeople.However,inthiscase,Iwasawomanallalone,inastrangeneighborhood,atnight,andthereweretwentyorsoverylargemenallwearinginsignia(徽章)thatindicatedtheywereinsomesortofclubstandingbeforeme.Warningbellsbegantosoundinmyhead,andmyheartwaspounding.WasIattherighttheater?HadImisreadthedateoftheevent?AsignoutsidethetheatertoldmethatIwasintherightplaceontherightevening.Nevertheless,IwonderedifIshouldrushbacktomyhotelinsteadofwalkingthroughthatcrowdofbikers.IfinallydecidedthatIwouldbesaferinsidethetheater.Hopefully,thebikerswouldhavegoneawaybythetimethefilmwasover.注意：(1)续写词数应为150个左右；(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1：Ihurriedintothetheater,onlytofindtherewereevenmorebikersinside._________________________________第一段续写：我急忙走进剧院，结果发现里面有更多的自行车手。——本段续写的关键在于描写“恐惧”情感的进一步加深和自己进退两难的处境，这样才能巧妙地与二段续写行为反转与连接，同时注意“电影开始”这一元素的合理涉及与利用将会成为本文的亮点。（注：无声胜有声）——参考词汇涉及：biker；theater；street；deserted；myheart；poundingParagraph1：Ihurriedintothetheater,onlytofindtherewereevenmorebikersinside.Atthatmoment,Icouldn’tbelievemyeyes,withmymindimmediatelygettingblankandmymouthopeningwide.SofrozenandstillatthetheatergatewasI,whichmadethebikersinsideallthrow/casttheirgazesonmethatIfeltnothingbutmyheartpoundingevenmorestrongly,pletelyunawareofwhatactionIwouldadopt.Iwasnotsurehowmuchtimehadpassed,butonlygreetedbyeachofthebikeringinfromtheoutsidewhoIhadencounteredinthedesertedstreet.Suddenly,thecurtainopened.（4句）Paragraph2：Whenthefilmbegan,Irealizedthatthebikerswereananimalrescuegroup._______________________________第二段续写：当电影开始时，我发现这些自行车手是一群动物求助小组。——本段续写的关键在于我得知真相后，面对一群“志同道合”的新朋友，我决定加入其中，并一同开启保护流浪狗的行动中，从而升华主题——体现人与自然的和谐共处——参考词汇涉及：saveabandoneddogs；dangerous；toughlookingbiker；animalrescuegroup；filmParagraph2：Whenthefilmbegan,Irealizedthatthebikerswereananimalrescuegroup.Withofstart,recallinghowridiculousmyoverreactionhadbeeninstantlyhelpedmenolongerfeeldangerous.Naturally,bythelightfromthefilm,Ifoundaseatandsatnexttoatoughlookbiker.Afterashortconversationwithhim,Iexpressedmywishtosaveabandoneddogs.Hearingthis,heenthusiasticallyweledmetojointheanimalrescuegroup.Then,withthefilmending,heintroducedmetoallthemembers.Seeingsomanyanimalloversaround,Ididbelievewewouldfindawaytohelpthewildlivewithusharmoniouslytogether.（6句）点评：本次2025年八省联考的读后续写又一次选择了“人与自然”主题，命题思路和2023年的四省联考一样，同样都选择了“弱小的动物”作为帮助对象（这次是“狗”，上次是“松鼠”）。当然选择“人与自然”主题是很难得的，但是确直接宣布今年的高考真题可能这个主题又不会出现了。所以对于考生而言既是“好事”，也是“遗憾”。不过，虽然“人与自然”主题在真题的层面到目前为止5年来没有出现在新课标1/2卷的试卷上，但是通过本次八校联考出现，也算“露面”了。（今年的高考，这个主题同学们在备考层面可以靠后了）。从行文与设计角度而言，“人与自然”是变化最小的主题，虽然内容的距离与人类较远，但是主题立意高度一致，都是揭示“人与自然的和谐共处”，只要把第一段续写的反转处理好，第二段的难度较其余两类主题而言是简单的。锦言妙语积累：1.独立主格：withmymindimmediatelygettingblankandmymouthopeningwide；withthefilmending2.部分倒装与结果状语从句结合：SofrozenandstillatthetheatergatewasI3.主补：pletelyunawareofwhatactionIwouldadopt4.形宾逻辑的宾语从句：Iwasnotsurehowmuchtimehadpassed5.非谓语做主语：recallinghowridiculo