Module 7 My past life-2021-2022学年七年级英语下学期模块话题满分写作（外研版）

2021-2022学年七年级英语下学期单元话题满分写作Module7:Mypastlife单元话题：描述过去生活范文11．“Myprogressinthepastyear”Youmusthavemademuchprogressinthepastyear.Maybetheprogressisinyourlifeskillsorhabits.Maybeyouhavemadeprogressinyourstudyorattitude.Chooseoneaspectandwriteanarticleof80-100wordswiththefollowingquestions:1.Inwhichaspect/fieldhaveyoumadeprogress?2.Whathaveyoudonetomaketheprogress?3.Whathaveyoulearntfromit?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________1．例文：Inthepastyear,Ihavemadegreatprogressinreading.Before,Ididn’tlikereading.Ithinkreadingisawasteoftime.Inmysparetime,IwouldratherplaygamesandwatchTVthanreadbooks.ButafteraChineseexam,Irealizedtheimportanceofreading.Ithinkbooksareourbestfriends.Theygiveusmuchknowledge.Ifindreadingbooksisagoodwaytorelaxmyself.Atthesametimeitcanalsohelpmeopenupmyeyestotheoutsideworld.ThoughI’mbusywithmylessons,myfreetimeisfullofhappinessandjoy.Ilovereadingbecauseithelpsmestudybetter.Ioftendosomereadingintheevening.SoIsuggestthatteachersshouldgiveuslesshomeworksothatwecanhavemoretimetoread.IlikereadingandIwanttobeawriterinthefuture.【解析】1.题干解读：文章属于材料作文，主要是以过去一年自己取得的进步为主线展开描写，内容可以按照题目中所提出的问题提示进行描写，按照自己的情况适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。2.写作指导：文章主要用一般现在时和一般过去时相结合，人称用第一人称展开描述。主要是介绍自己在某一方面取得的进步。写作时语言要简单易懂，文章结构要完整，多使用简单词语表达，意思要通俗易懂。范文22．假如你的英语老师叫陈华，请根据所提供的信息，以MyTeacher’sPastLife为题，写一篇60词左右的英语小短文，介绍她过去的生活情况。NameChenHuaBorninAsmallvillageinZhuchengBornonJune18th,1990PrimarySchoolTaolinPrimarySchoolFirstEnglishTeacherMr.ZhangCharacter(性格)Friendly__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．参考范文：MyTeacher’sPastLifeChenHuaismyEnglishteacher.ShewasborninasmallvillageinZhuchengonJune18th,1990.ThenameofherprimaryschoolisTaolinPrimarySchool.Mr.ZhangwasherfirstEnglishteacher.Atthattime,shewasfriendlytoeveryone.Ithinkallofherteachersandclassmateslikedherverymuch.Allofusloveher.Sheisaniceteacher.【解析】1.

题干解读：题目要求根据表格提示要点，介绍英语老师的过去，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。2.

写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般过去时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。范文33．时光飞逝，一转眼你即将升上八年级。过去的这一年，学校丰富多彩的生活中一定有开心、美好、难忘……的日子吧？请以“A(n)_______DayThisYear”为题写一篇不少于80个单词的短文，要求内容适切，意思连贯，标点符号不占格。内容包括：1.今年在学校最……的是哪一天？为什么？2.那一天你是怎样度过的？(和谁一起，做了什么？感受如何？)__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．例文AnUnforgettableDayThisYearEveryonehashisorherunforgettableday.I’llneverforgetJune11th,2012.Itwasasunnyday.Onthewaytoschool,myfrienddidsomethingrudetome.Itmademesad.What’sworse,Igota“C”inmyfavoritesubject.Afterschool,Iwenthomeunhappily.Itwasdarkintheroom.Suddenlythelightswereon,andIheardthesong“HappyBirthday”.Iwassurprisedtoseemanypeopleandabigcake.“Oh,it’smybirthday.”Iwassoexcitedandhappy.Itwasmyfirsttimetohaveabirthdayparty.I’llneverforgetthatday.【解析】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“今年难忘的一天”为题写一篇短文。2.写作指导：本文主要以一般过去时为主，人称为以第一人称和第三人称为主。分为两段式：第一段引出主题；第二段讲述自己那天的经历。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。范文44．初一生活即将过去，在这一年里，你一定有很多快乐和收获，也不可避免的留有遗憾。请根据下面表格所提示的内容，写一篇英语短文，对自己的初一学习生活进行总结和回顾。对自己满意的方面1.personalities2.abilities3.thingsIdid4.…(自拟)对自己不满意的方面1.seldomdoexercise2.…(自拟)对自己初二生活的打算1.…(自拟)2.…(自拟)要求1.所写内容必须包括表格提示的所有要点，可适当发挥。2.词数：80词左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。3.不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。Timeflies!IspendawholeyearstudyinginGrade7.Attheendofthisterm,Iwanttosummarize(总结)myschoollife.IamveryhappythatIdidsomethinggoodinGrade7._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．例文Timeflies!IspendawholeyearstudyinginGrade7.Attheendofthisterm,Iwanttosummarize(总结)myschoollife.IamveryhappythatIdidsomethinggoodinGrade7.

Ijoineddifferentkindsofclubs.Imadesomefriendsandhadagoodtime.SoIammoreoutgoingnow.Itookpartinalotofgamesandwonprizes.ButIwassocarelessthatIcouldn’tmakemyparentshappy.Iseldomdidexercise.Ididn’tworkveryhardinclass.NextyearIwilltakemoreexercisetokeepfit.IamgoingtobeseriousaboutwhatIdo.IwillstudyharderandtrytogetbettergradeswhenIaminGrade8.Iwanttomakemyparentstakeprideinme.【解析】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据表格提示信息进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态综合使用一般过去时和一般将来时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍过去一年对自己满意和不满意的方面；第三段介绍自己初二生活的打算。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。范文55．ZhangTao是你的新同学,介绍一下他过去的生活。可根据内容适当增添。要求60个字以上...wasborn...Beijing,2003...hisfirstschool...No.3PrimarySchoolHewas...nice,good...hisfirstteacher......hisfirstfriend...MissLi,strictZhangMeng,good...hisfavoritesport...swimming__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．例文MyfriendZhangTaoisnewhere.HewasborninBeijingin2003.HisfirstschoolisNo.3PrimarySchool.Heisniceandgood.HisfirstteacherisMissLi.Sheisstrictwithherstudents.HisbestfriendisZhangMeng.Sheisagoodgirl.Theyoftendidtheirhomeworktogetherafterschool.Hisfavoritesportwasswimming.Ithinkhewillgetonwellwithothers.【解析】1.题干解读：本文为一篇小记叙文，主要描写自己新同学的过去。表格内容比较清晰，且内容充分。学生只需将表格内容进行整理加工即可。2.例文点评：例文采用了两段式，描写他的过去的事情，采用一般过去时,描写客观事实,用一般现在时。最后一段一句话独立成段，写出了自己对同学的美好祝愿。3.高分亮点：短语：beborn；bestrictwith；afterschool；getonwellwith。句型：Hewasniceandgood；HisbestfriendwasZhangMeng。范文6每个人都有自己的童年生活。你过去的生活是什么样子的？请你以“Mypastlife”为题，写一篇70词左右的英语短文。要求：1、不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名；2、语句连贯，70词左右。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．例文MypastlifeIwasborninasmallvillageinthewestofChinaon14thMay,2006.IoftenplayedandhadfunwiththeboysnearMinjiangRiver.IwenttoschoolwhenIwassevenyearsold.MyfirstschoolwasShiyanPrimarySchool.Ihadagoodtimeandfinishedtheprimaryschoollessonsthere.MyfirstteacherwasMrsWang.Shewasverystrictbutveryfriendly.Now,Iamstudyinginamiddleschool.IwanttobeadoctorwhenIgrowup.【解析】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。要求以“Mypastlife”为题，介绍自己过去的生活，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态用一般过去时。作文可分为两段，第一段回忆过去的生活，包括家乡、小学生活、学校老师等；第二段介绍现在的状态以及未来的打算。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。范文77．假如你是来自英国的交换生Mike，写信给英国的朋友Nick，讲述自己过去一年在中国的生活并他分享自己新年的计划。信件的开头已给出。内容要点如下：1、游览了中国名胜，熟悉了中国文化；2、交了新朋友，中文进步了；3、打算培养一项爱好，学习制作中国食品；4、多做运动保持健康；5、补充一两点寒假计划。参考词汇：placesofinterest名胜古迹，culture文化，traditional传统的。要求：文中不得出现个人姓名和学校姓名；书写整。要点齐全，词数80词左右。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________