2025年湘师大新版必修3英语上册月考试卷含答案

…………○…………内…………○…………装…………○…………内…………○…………装…………○…………订…………○…………线…………○…………※※请※※不※※要※※在※※装※※订※※线※※内※※答※※题※※…………○…………外…………○…………装…………○…………订…………○…………线…………○…………第=page22页，总=sectionpages22页第=page11页，总=sectionpages11页2025年湘师大新版必修3英语上册月考试卷含答案考试试卷考试范围：全部知识点；考试时间：120分钟学校：______姓名：______班级：______考号：______总分栏题号一二三四五总分得分评卷人得分一、选择题(共6题，共12分)1、Generallyspeaking,almostallthekidsare___________abouthoweverythingaroundthemworks.A.curiousB.carefulC.anxiousD.excited2、________inreadingherstudents’minds,themathsteachercouldtellthattheboy’sheartwasnotinit.A.ExperiencingB.ToexperienceC.ExperiencedD.HavingExperienced3、Babiesare________abouteverythingaroundthem,theytrytofigureouthowtheworldworks.A.seriousB.certainC.curiousD.worried4、Whenfirst____tothemainlandmarket，thefruitsfromTaiwanIslandenjoyedagreatsuccessimmediately.A.introducingB.introducedC.introduceD.beingintroduced5、________asmayorofDorset,Minnesota,USA,3-year-oldJames,theyoungestmayorinAmericanhistory,tookanactivepartincharitablecauses.A.ElectedB.ElectingC.ToelectD.Tobeelected6、____toperformatthebirthdayparty,littleLindafeltnervousandexcited.A.InviteB.InvitingC.InvitedD.Toinvite评卷人得分二、概要写作(共1题，共2分)7、Directions:Readthefollowingpassage.Summarizeinnomorethan60wordsthemainideaandthemainpoint(s)ofthepassage.Useyourownwordsasfaraspossible.CitiesintheSeaTheymaybesmall,buttheybuildbigthings!Coralpolyps(珊瑚虫),whichliveinthewarm,shallowpartsoftheEarth’soceans,areprobablythebiggestbuildersontheplanet.Coralpolypsturncalciumfromseawaterintoahardmaterialcalledlimestone.Slowly,theybuildupahardskeleton(骨架)aroundtheirbodies.Whenpolypsdie,theirskeletonsremain.Youngpolypsattachthemselvestotheoldskeletonsandmakenewskeletons.Overtime,weirdandwonderfulshapesareslowlybuiltupintoamazingcoralreefs(珊瑚礁).Scientistssometimesthinkofcoralreefsasunderwatercities.Aquarterofallknownmarinespeciesliveinreefhabitats―therearenearlyathousandcoralspecies.Reefsarealsohometomillionsofseacreatures,likefish,crabs,turtles,andsharks.Humansdon’tliveincoralreefcities,butwebenefitfromthem.Reefscreatejobsforpeopleinthefishingindustryandotherrelatedbusinesses.Coralreefsarealsopopularfordivers一manycountriesbenefitfromthetouriststhattheyattract.Lastly,chemicalsfromreefcreatureshelpscientistscreatenewmedicines,whichhelpdoctorstreatdifferentillnesses.Coralreefsareveryimportant,yetwedon’ttakegoodcareofthem.Environmentalproblemshavealreadykilledabouttwentypercentoftheworld’sreefs.Abouthalfoftheremainingreefsaredying,andexpertsbelieveallofEarth’scoralreefswillbeindangerby2050.Whyarethereefsinsuchtrouble?Foronething,peoplecatchtoomanyreeffishandoftendamagethereefs—diverssometimesbreakoffpiecesofcoral.Pollutedwateralsocausesproblemsbecausereef-destroyingalgaegrowsindirtywater.Evenairpollutionhurtscoralreefs.Globalwarmingcauseswarmeroceanwater,whichcancausepolypstolosehelpfulalgae.Withoutthatalgae,coralturnswhite.Thisiscalled"bleaching”，andifitcontinues,thecoraldies.

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________评卷人得分三、句型转换(共4题，共8分)8、Whenwesawthelakefromthetopofthemountain,itlookedamazing.（用适当的非谓语动词改写句子）

________,thelakelookedamazing.9、Tomisinterestedinscience,soheaskshisDadtotakehimtothesciencemuseumeveryweek.（用适当的非谓语动词改写句子）

________,TomaskshisDadtotakehimtothesciencemuseumeveryweek.10、Whenitisseenfromthehill,thecitylooksmorebeautiful.(同义句转换)

→__________ _____ _____,thecitylooksmorebeautiful.11、Althoughhehadbeenremindedtwotimes,hestillforgothishomework.(同义句转换)

→__________ _____,hestillforgothishomework.评卷人得分四、提纲类作文(共3题，共30分)12、人们之间的沟通除了通过语言外；还可以借助身势语。在英语课上，老师让你根据下列要点用英语写一篇关于身势语对人们交流的帮助的短文。

学会使用身势语的好处：

1.帮助传递信息；

2.借此了解一个国家的文化；

3.

要求：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节；以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：身势语bodylanguage_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________13、假设你是红星中学高一学生李华，你的英国朋友George要来北京；期间他想参加中国传统文化方面的课程，来信希望你能推荐一个课程。请你给他回信，内容包括：

1.你推荐的课程；2.该课程的内容；3.推荐该课程的理由。

注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节；以使行文连贯。

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________14、假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的英国笔友Peter对科学研究感兴趣；他来信请你介绍一位中国的科学家及其研究成果。请你给他回信，内容包括：

1.科学家的姓名;

2.科学家的研究成果；

3.该研究成果的意义。

注意：1.词数不少于50；

2.开头和结尾已给出；不计入总词数。

DearPeter,

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Yours,LiHua评卷人得分五、读后续写(共4题，共36分)15、阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Twomonthsago,RyderKillam,a15-year-oldFrenchboywasregisteredinanewschoolinHawaii.Hejustmovedtherewithhisparents.Althoughhemissedhisoldfriendsverymuch,hemanagedtoadapttohisnewschoollifeandsoonmadealotoffriends.However,waitingfortheschoolbuseverymorningoftenmeantarealsufferingbecauseRyderwasbornwithspinabifida（脊柱裂）andhehastoliveinawheelchair.Hawaiiisoneoftherainiestplacesintheworld.Thisisnotanissueforotherstudents,butforhimthiswasadifferentstory.Heoftengotwetalloverbeforetheschoolbusarrivedduringtherainydays.Inthatcase,hecouldonlyhaveclasseswithwetclothesonorcalledhisparentstosenddryclothestoschoolandfindingaplacetogetchangedwasalsoabigchallengeforthisdisabledboy.TokeepRyderprotectedfromthebadweatherwhilewaitingforthebuseverymorning,thestudentsinRyder'sschooldecidedtotakeaction.TheyfirstuploadedapostonFacebookaskingforanunusedbusshelterbutgotnoreply.Notbeingabletofindone,thestudentsfromtheconstructionclassdecidedtotakeonthechallengeofbuildingacustomizedbusshelterforhimandquicklyputtheirhandstowork.Aspartofthehighschool'sCareerandTechnicalEducationprogram,theconstructionclassteachesitsstudentsbasicbuildingskills.Itsmaingoalistoprovidestudentswithtoolsandskillsthatwillhaverealapplicationsinfuturejobsandameaningfulimpactontheircommunity.Theyhadalreadyperformedseveralbuildingprojectsforthecommunity.Twoyearsago,theymanagedtobuilddozensofsheltersforstraycatsinthelocalpark.Soonenough,theycameupwithanideaofbuildingatwo-windowshelterforRyder.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。However,theseteenagersfoundbuildingthisbusshelterwasnoeasyjob.

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thedayfinallycamewhenthenewbusshelterwasputtouse.

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________16、阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Rishalovedschool.However,therewasoneclassRishaworriedaboutmorethananyother—art.Shedidn’tknowwhyshejustwasn’tanygoodatdrawing,painting,orcutting.Ms.Clay,theartteacher,stoodatthefrontoftheroom.“Class,nextFridayourschoolisgoingtohaveanartcompetition.”sheannounced.Ms.Claywasagreatteacher,andRishalikedheralot.ButthisannouncementmadeRishanervous.“Everyoneintheschoolwillcreateapieceofartworktoshowinthelibrary.Youcanusethedifferenttypesofartworkwehavebeenstudying.”Ms.ClaywasquiteexcitedwhenshespokewhileRishafoundherselfsinkinglowerinherchair.Rishahadthewholeweekendtoworkonherproject,butshecouldnotthinkofanythingtodo.OnMonday,Rishafeltfrightened,soafterschoolRishaaskedMs.Clayifshecouldwriteanartpaperinsteadofdoinganartproject.“Iunderstandthisprojectscaredyou,Risha,”Ms.Claysaid.“Justremember,youcancreateanykindofartyouwant.”Ms.Claysmiledather.“Artisaperson’swayofexpressinghisorherfeelings—itisn’talwayspainting,drawing,orcutting.Iknowyouwillthinkofsomethingverycreative,andIcan’twaittoseeit.”WhenRishaarrivedhome,shetookoutapieceofpaperandapencil.SherememberedMs.Clay’swords.“Artisaperson’swayofexpressinghisorherfeelings.”Rishawrotetheword“terrified”onherpaper.Shecrumpled(弄皱)thepaperandthrewittothesideofherdesk.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

ThenRishastaredatthecrumpledball.

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OnFriday,Rishacarefullycarriedherprojectintothelibrary.

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________17、阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。DaysofJanuarywerepassingandeverygirlofthegirls’schoolwasveryhappyastheselectionsforplaysanddancesfortheannualfunctionwerestarted.Sneha’sclassteacher,Pravina,askedSneha,herfavoritestudent,toplaytheleadingcharacterinaplay.Becauseshewasneverallowedtoplayamalecharacter,Snehajumpedwithjoy,butsuddenlyshebecamesoseriousaboutthecostumes(戏服).“HowmanytimesIhavetotellyounottoparticipateinplaysanddances!Can’tyouunderstandthatwecan’tbuyorborrowthecostlycostume?Youcantakepartindebates,quizes,oressaycompetitionsinwhichyoudon’thavetospendmoneyandyoucanenrichyourknowledge,”hermothersaidangrilywhenSnehatoldheraboutit.Thereasonbehindallthiswastheirfinancialcondition.SnehaalwayshadanideaaboutitinherhomeandshewasmatureenoughtosayNOtoanymoneydemandingcondition.Thistime,however,thedesireoffameandtheexcitementoftheactivitywereovercomingherfear.Snehawentinherroomhidinghersadnessdeepinherheart.ShewassonervousaboutwhatwasgoingtohappenwhenshewouldtellPravinaaboutleavingtheplay.Wouldshewarnhernottoallowherinanycompetition?Nowitwasclearthatshehadtoleavetheplay.Thenextday,downheartedSnehaactedlikenothinghadhappenedandgotreadyforschool.HermomorderedhertosayNOfortheplay.SnehaalwayslovedPravinabecausewhenevertherewasaplayordance,thegirlsdidnotneedtobeworriedaboutanythingrelatedwithmoney.Shewouldfindawaytohelp.ButSnehadidn’twanttotellherthetruth.

Paragraphl:Snehawenttotheteacher,“Idon’twanttotakepartintheplayandI’mleaving.”

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Paragraph2:Pravinastoodpatiently,waitingfortheperformancetobegin.

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________18、阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。IntheGame“I’mgonnaplaybasketball,Daddy.”Mydaughter,Lauren,whooped,skippingintotheroom.“ThereareonlyelevengirlsinVerden,andeverybodymakestheteam.”High-schoolsportsisthebiggestthingthathappensinVerden,soIshouldn’thavebeensurprisedwhenLaurenannouncedshewasgoingoutforthegirls’basketballteams—LadyTiger.ButIwas.MywifeandInevertoldLaurenthatshewasdisabled.Wedidn’twanthertofeeldifferentfromotherchildren.ShehasDownsyndrome(唐氏综合征).Whatiftheothergirlsontheteamfailedtoaccepther?WhatifLaurenspentmostofhertimeonthebench?Whatifshegotinjuredduringthegame?WhatshouldIsaytothecoach?Thenextafternoon,Iparkedbythebasketballcourt.“Hey,Johnny,”CoachForthythecalled.“We’regladLaurencameoutfortheteam.”“Well,Mr.Forthythe,youknowwedon’texpectyoutoplayherinagame.justincludeherwhenyoucan.”ThegamearrivedthenextSunday.Isettledintoaseatonthesecondrowwithmywife.Momentslater,atrainofgirlschuggedoutofthelockerroom.LastinlinewasLauren.Istoodalongwiththecrowdandclapped.Shesearchedthestands.spottedusandwavedbroadly.Thegamegotofftoagoodstart,butsoonVerdenwasbehind.IgazedatLauren,themostexcitedontheteam.Sheslapped(拍打)herkneewhentheopponentsscored.HerarmsmovedaroundintheaireachtimeVerdenshot.Eventhoughshewasn’tplaying,shelookedasifshewerehavingthetimeofherlife.Now,Ifeltadmirationformydaughter.Herteamwasgettingbeat,yetshestillenjoyedtheaction.Justlessthantwominuteswereleft,andVerdenwasdownby17points.Coachcalledatime-out.Thenboomedtheannouncer’svoice,“Numberthirty-three,Lauren,infortheLadyTigers.”

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Withaslaponherback,CoachsentLaurenrunningontothecourt.

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________“Didyousee?DadandMum.Iscored!Imadeabasket!”

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考答案一、选择题(共6题，共12分)1、A【分析】【详解】

考查形容词词义辨析。句意：一般来说，几乎所有的孩子都对周围所有一切是怎么发生的感到好奇。A.curious好奇的；B.careful细心的；C.anxious着急的；担忧的；D.excited激动的。结合句意及“howeverythingaroundthemworks”可知，此处指对周围所有一切是怎么发生的感到“好奇”。故选A项。2、C【分析】【详解】

考查非谓语动词。句意：这位数学老师对学生的心思很有经验，看得出这个男孩心不在焉。此处为短语beexperiencedin表示“在方面有经验”，做非谓语，此处省略be动词，用过去分词作状语。故选C。3、C【分析】【详解】

考查形容词词义辨析。句意：婴儿对周围的一切都很好奇，他们试图弄清楚世界是如何运作的。A.serious严重的，认真的；B.certain确定的；肯定的；C.curious好奇的；D.worried担心的。becuriousabout对感到好奇。根据“theytrytofigureouthowtheworldworks.”可知，婴儿对周围的一切都感到很好奇。故选C。4、B【分析】【详解】

考查非谓语动词。句意：从台湾引进的水果一进入大陆市场就大获成功。选项中introduce意为“引进”，句中enjoyed为谓语动词，设空处使用非谓语动词，同时thefruits和introduce之间是被动关系，故使用过去分词作状语，同时表示完成。故选B。5、A【分析】【详解】

考查非谓语动词。句意：3岁的詹姆斯当选美国明尼苏达州多塞特市长，是美国历史上最年轻的市长，他积极参与慈善事业。分析句子可知，句中已有谓语动词took，所以空处用非谓语动词。句子主语3-year-oldJames与动词elect为动宾关系，所以空处用过去分词，表被动、完成。故选A。6、C【分析】【详解】

考查非谓语动词。句意：在生日派对上受邀表演节目时，小琳达感觉紧张又激动。分析句子结构可知，此处为非谓语动词作状语，结合句意可知，invite与逻辑主语littleLinda间为被动关系，且该动作已经发生，所以使用过去分词形式。故选C项。二、概要写作(共1题，共2分)7、略

【分析】【导语】

本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍了珊瑚礁的成因及对人类的益处以及珊瑚礁受到威胁的各种各样的原因。

【详解】

1.要点摘录。

①Youngpolypsattachthemselvestotheoldskeletonsandmakenewskeletons.Overtime,weirdandwonderfulshapesareslowlybuiltupintoamazingcoralreefs

②Scientistssometimesthinkofcoralreefsasunderwatercities.Aquarterofallknownmarinespeciesliveinreefhabitats.

③Humansdon’tliveincoralreefcities,butwebenefitfromthem.

④Coralreefsareveryimportant,yetwedon’ttakegoodcareofthem.Environmentalproblemshavealreadykilledabouttwentypercentoftheworld’sreefs.

⑤peoplecatchtoomanyreeffishandoftendamagethereefs—diverssometimesbreakoffpiecesofcoral.

⑥Pollutedwateralsocausesproblemsbecausereef-destroyingalgaegrowsindirtywater.

2.缜密构思。

将第1；2两个要点进行重组；将第4、5、6三个要点进行整合。

3.遣词造句。

Coralreefsconsistsofskeletonsofcoralpolyps,beinghometomarinespeciesandseacreatures.

Webenefitalotfromthem.

However,wedon’ttakecareofthembecausetheyarethreatenedbyenvironmentalproblems,fishing,divingandpollution.

【点睛】

[高分句型1]

Coralreefs,builtofskeletonsofcoralpolyps,arecalledunderwatercities,wherelivemanymarinespeciesandseacreatures.(运用一个复杂的主从复合句对原文第一段和第二段进行了概括。其中where引导的非限制性定语从句，built过去分词作的后置定语等表达高级)

[高分句型2]

Onefifthofthemhavedisappearedduetoenvironmentalproblems.(运用了现在完成时表示已经造成的结果，对第四段进行了概括，dueto表示原因，表达恰当)【解析】Onepossibleversion:Coralreefs,builtofskeletonsofcoralpolyps,arecalledunderwatercities,wherelivemanymarinespeciesandseacreatures.Theyprovidehumanswithjobs,sceneryandmedicines.However,reefsaren’twellprotected.Onefifthofthemhavedisappearedduetoenvironmentalproblems.Fishinganddivingdoharmtothem;waterpollutionandairpollutionaretoblametoo.三、句型转换(共4题，共8分)8、略

【分析】【详解】

考查非谓语动词。句意：从山顶上看，湖水令人惊叹。句中逻辑主语thelake与see之间为被动关系，所以用过去分词作状语。故填Seenfromthetopofthemountain。【解析】Seenfromthetopofthemountain9、略

【分析】【详解】

考查非谓语动词。句意：汤姆对科学感兴趣，他要求他的爸爸每周带他去科学博物馆。beinterestedin对感兴趣，在句中作状语，所以用过去分词形式。故填Interestedinscience。【解析】Interestedinscience10、略

【分析】【详解】

考查非谓语动词作状语。句意：从山上看，城市看起来更漂亮了。主语thecity和see之间是被动关系，故转化的句子用过去分词作状语，即seenfromthehill，故填：①Seen；②from；③the；④hill。【解析】Seenfromthehill11、略

【分析】【详解】

考查非谓语。句意：尽管他已经被提醒了两次，他还是忘了他的家庭作业。原句为状语从句，可以转化成非谓语作状语，主语he与remind为被动关系，所以用过去分词作状语。故填：①Reminded；②two；③times。【解析】Remindedtwotimes四、提纲类作文(共3题，共30分)12、略

【分析】【分析】

本篇书面表达是提纲类作文；要求写一篇关于身势语对人们交流的帮助的短文。

【详解】

第1步：根据提示可知；本文要求介绍身势语对人们交流的帮助：人们之间的沟通除了通过语言外，还可以借助身势语。在英语课上，老师让你根据下列要点用英语写一篇关于身势语对人们交流的帮助的短文。学会使用身势语的好处：1.帮助传递信息；2.借此了解一个国家的文化；3，时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如；benefit（益处），bodylanguage（身势语），communicate（交流），effective（有效的），express（表达）及comfortable（舒适的）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句；注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文；注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。

本文内容完整；层次分明，结构紧凑，表达准确。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。

【点睛】

范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有communicatewith（与交流），getacross（使被理解），haveawideknowledgeof(在方面有广泛的知识)，travelabroad（出国旅游）以及asweallknow（周所周知），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“Asweallknow,besideswords,wecanalsousebodylanguagetocommunicatewithotherpeople.”及“whenwedon’tknowhowtoexpressourselvesclearly,wecanusebodylanguage,whichisespeciallytruewhenwemeetforeigners.”，宾语从句“Therearemanybenefitsitcanbringuswhenwelearnhowtouseit.”及“Inconclusion,Ithinkthatitisimportantforustolearnandusebodylanguage.”，非谓语动词“Havingawideknowledgeofaforeigncountry’sbodylanguagecanalsohelpuslearnaboutitsculture.”及“Besides,usingbodylanguageinacorrectwaywillhelpmakeourstayinaforeigncountryeasyandcomfortablewhilewe’retravelingabroad.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。【解析】Asweallknow,besideswords,wecanalsousebodylanguagetocommunicatewithotherpeople.Therearemanybenefitsitcanbringuswhenwelearnhowtouseit.

Firstofall,ithelpsustogetourmessagesacross.Sometimesitmaybemoreeffectivethanwords.Also,whenwedon’tknowhowtoexpressourselvesclearly,wecanusebodylanguage,whichisespeciallytruewhenwemeetforeigners.Havingawideknowledgeofaforeigncountry’sbodylanguagecanalsohelpuslearnaboutitsculture.Besides,usingbodylanguageinacorrectwaywillhelpmakeourstayinaforeigncountryeasyandcomfortablewhilewe’retravelingabroad.Inconclusion,Ithinkthatitisimportantforustolearnandusebodylanguage.13、略

【分析】【分析】

本文书面表达属于应用文；要求写一封回信。

【详解】

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇是一封回信：假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友George要来北京；其间他想参加中国传统文化方面的课程，来信希望你能推荐一个课程．请你给他回信，内容包括：你推荐的课程；该课程的内容；你推荐的理由。

第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：Chinesetraditionalculture（中国传统文化）；BeijingOpera（京剧）；onthehistoryofBeijingOpera（关于京剧的历史）；basedonthefollowingreasons（以下面的理由为基础）；thefivemaincharactersofBeijingOpera（北京京剧的五个主要代表人物）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句；注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。

第4步：连句成文；注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】

本文是一封回信。内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。IamdelightedtohearthatyouwanttotakeacourseaboutChinesetraditionalculture．句中使用that引导的宾语从句；whichwillbeheldinBeijingnextmonthfortwoweeks，containstwosections．使用which引导的定语从句；Whattakesthecoursetoanewheightisatheatertrip．句中what引导主语从句；Itisalsoaninteractivecourse，inwhichyouwillhaveachancetocommunicatewithoperaperformersfacetoface．介词加which引导非限制性定语从句。【解析】DearGeorge,

IamdelightedtohearthatyouwanttotakeacourseaboutChinesetraditionalculture.IamwritingtorecommendoneonBeijingOpera.

Thiscourse,“IntroductiontoBeijingOpera”,whichwillbeheldinBeijingnextmonthfortwoweeks,containstwosections.AlectureonthehistoryofBeijingOperawillintroduceitstime-honoreddevelopment,includingthedetailedprocessofhowitspread.Whattakesthecoursetoanewheightisatheatertrip.SteppingintoMeiLanfangTheatre,you’llgetatasteoftheperformancetechniquesbyappreciatinghowthevoicesandmotionsareperfectlycombinedonthestage.

Iheartilyrecommendthiscoursetoyoubasedonthefollowingreasons.Iknowyoulovedramasomuch,soyouwillbeabletomoreeasilyunderstandSheng,Dan,Jing,Mo,Chou,thefivemaincharactersofBeijingOpera.Itisalsoaninteractivecourse,inwhichyouwillhaveachancetocommunicatewithoperaperformersfacetoface.

Ihopemyintroductionishelpful.Pleaseletmeknowifyouhavefurtherquestions.

Yours,LiHua14、略

【分析】【分析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇一封信，给英国网友Peter介绍一位中国的科学家及其研究成果.

【详解】

第一步：审题。

体裁：应用文。

时态：根据提示；时态应为一般现在时和一般过去时。

结构：总分法。

   总分法指把主题句作为总说；把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1.科学家的姓名;

2.科学家的研究成果；

3.该研究成果的意义。

第二步:列提纲（重点词组）

Beinterestedin;scientificresearch;TuYouyou;antimalarialsubstance;malaria-fighting;sweetwormwood;volunteertodo;humansubject;successful;NobelPrize;significantly;deathrate.

第三步：连词成句。

1.Iknowfromyourletterthatyouareinterestedinscientificresearch.

2.DoyouknowTuYouyou?

3.TuYouyouandherteamdiscoveredtheantimalarialsubstanceqinghaosu,oneoftheworld’smost-effectivemalaria-fightingdrugsfromsweetwormwood.

4.Shevolunteeredtobethefirsthumansubject.

5.Itwassafe,soshedidsuccessfulexperimentswithhumanpatients.

6.Shewonthe2015NobelPrizefordiscoveringthemedicinethathassignificantlyreducedthedeathratesforpatientssufferingfrommalaria.

7.Ifyouwanttoknowmorescientistsandtheirresearch,doletmeknow.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句；注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/SecondAndthen,Finally,Intheend,Atlast

2.表并列补充关系：Whatismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,InadditionAswellas,notonlybut(also),including,

3.表转折对比关系：However,Onthecontrary,but,Although+clause(从句),Inspiteof+n/doing,Ontheonehand,OntheotherhandSome,whileothers,asfor,sothat

4.表因果关系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult

连句成文；注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰；

第五步：润色修改。

【点睛】

范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。文中长短句结合，有高级句型，如：Shewonthe2015NobelPrizefordiscoveringthemedicine____使用了that引导的定语从句。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。【解析】DearPeter,

Iknowfromyourletterthatyouareinterestedinscientificresearch.DoyouknowTuYouyou?TuYouyouandherteamdiscoveredtheantimalarialsubstanceqinghaosu,oneoftheworld’smost-effectivemalaria-fightingdrugsfromsweetwormwood.Andshevolunteeredtobethefirsthumansubject.Itwassafe,soshedidsuccessfulexperimentswithhumanpatients.Shewonthe2015NobelPrizefordiscoveringthemedicinethathassignificantlyreducedthedeathratesforpatientssuffering