高考英语复习读后续写练习+好奇的杰森与姐姐的生日惊喜+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习好奇的杰森与姐姐的生日惊喜1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文WhenJasonwaseatingbreakfast,hismothersaid,“Afterbreakfast,Jason,Iwantyoutogointotownwithme.It’syoursister’sbirthday,andweneedtoshopforhergifts.”Jasonwaseagertogo,becausebuyinggiftswasalwaysfun.Astheydrovetotown,Jasoncouldn’thelpbutaskthequestionthathadbeenonhismindsinceyesterdaywhenAuntNancycame.“What’sinthebigboxthatDadtooktothebarn(畜棚),Mom?IsitsomethingAuntNancyboughtforMegan’sbirthday?”“It’sasurprise,Jasonanddon’tgonearthatbarntoday.Doyouhearme?”4续写原文Jasonknewnothingwouldchangehermind.Onlynowhewasmorecuriousthanever!Backhome,MeganranouttomeetJason.“Jason,Jason,I’msixyearsold!”shecried,jumpingupanddown.“Iknow,Iknow.”Jasongaveherabighug.Soonthehousewasfilledwithexcitement.MegansatonthechairwatchingwhileMomandAuntNancywerepreparingthebirthdaydinner.Dadwouldn’tbebackforatleasttwohours.Jasonwentoutsidetryingtothinkofsomethingtodo,buthisthoughtskeptreturningtotheboxinthebarn.5续写原文Jasonwishedhecouldjustturnbacktothehouse,buthislegscarriedhimintothebarn.Heopenedtheboxandfoundalittledoginit!“Megan’sgoingtoloveyou!”Hesecretlywishedthedogwasforhim.Afterall,MomandDadknewthathehadbeenwantinghisowndog.SoonJasonwasplayinghappilywiththedog,andheforgotthatheshouldn’tbeinthebarn.Suddenly,thedogranoutofthebarnasfastasitcouldandintothefield.6段首句Paragraph1：Jasongotoutofthebarnlookingforthedog.Paragraph2：Attheparty,whenthelastgiftwasopen,Dadsaid,“Waitamoment!I’llberightback.”7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9文章讲述了早餐时，妈妈告知杰森要和她进城给姐姐梅根买生日礼物，杰森却对爸爸拿到畜棚的大盒子充满好奇，妈妈警告他别靠近。回家后，家里洋溢着梅根生日的欢乐氛围，而杰森满脑子都是盒子。趁爸爸还没回来，他忍不住走进畜棚打开盒子，发现里面是一只小狗，他开心地和小狗玩耍，还私心希望小狗是自己的。但玩着玩着小狗突然跑向田野，杰森可能将面临如何向家人交代擅入畜棚以及小狗丢失的问题，故事在此留下悬念。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：Jasongotoutofthebarnlookingforthedog.杰森从畜棚出来后，心急如焚地四处寻找小狗。他的双眼瞪得大大的，不放过任何一个角落，嘴里不停地呼喊着小狗的名字，豆大的汗珠从额头滚落。他深一脚浅一脚地在草丛中奔跑，不小心被绊倒了好几次，但他顾不上疼痛，立刻爬起来继续寻找。随着时间的流逝，他的心里越来越绝望，泪水在眼眶里打转。他深知自己闯了大祸，不仅违背了妈妈的叮嘱，还可能让姐姐失去这份珍贵的生日礼物。最终，他拖着沉重的脚步，怀着忐忑不安的心情往家走去，想着该如何面对家人。11续写思路分析Para2：Attheparty,whenthelastgiftwasopen,Dadsaid,“Waitamoment!I’llberightback.”派对上，当梅根打开最后一份礼物后，爸爸神秘兮兮地说：“等一下，我马上回来。”大家都面面相觑，不知道爸爸要干什么。不一会儿，爸爸抱着那只小狗走了进来。杰森看到小狗，惊讶得合不拢嘴。爸爸笑着解释说，他其实早就看到杰森进了畜棚，也明白他对小狗的喜爱。原本打算在梅根的派对结束后，给杰森一个惊喜，把小狗送给他。但是看到小狗跑掉后，他便立刻出去寻找，好在最终找到了。接着，爸爸把小狗正式送给了杰森，大家都为杰森感到高兴，派对的气氛也变得更加欢乐温馨，杰森抱着小狗，脸上洋溢着幸福的笑容，心中暗暗发誓以后一定不再调皮捣蛋、违背父母的话了。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Jasongotoutofthebarnlookingforthedog.Hisheartwasthumpingwildlyinhischestasherushedoutintotheopenfield.Thesunwasshiningbrightly,butJasonwasoblivioustothebeautyoftheday.Hecalledoutthedog'snameatthetopofhislungs,hisvoicecrackingwithdesperation."Comebackhere,littlefella!"heshouted.Hescouredeveryinchofthefield,partingthetallgrasswithhishands,hopingtocatchaglimpseofthefurrycreature.Butastheminutestickedby,hishopebegantowane.Thedogwasnowheretobeseen.Tearsstartedtostreamdownhisface,notonlybecausehewasafraidoflosingthedogbutalsobecauseheknewhehaddonesomethingterriblywrong.Withaheavyheartandasinkingfeelinginhisstomach,heslowlymadehiswaybacktothehouse,tryingtocomeupwithanexcusetotellhisparents.14范文呈现Attheparty,whenthelastgiftwasopen,Dadsaid,“Waitamoment!I’llberightback.”Everyoneintheroomexchangedpuzzledglances.Jason'sheartskippedabeat,wonderingwhathisfatherwasupto.Afewminuteslater,Dadwalkedthroughthedoor,holdingthelittledoginhisarms.Thedogwaswaggingitstailexcitedly,asifitknewitwasabouttobepartofawonderfulcelebration.Dadsmiledbroadlyandsaid,"Jason,Isawyougointothebarnearlier.Iknowhowmuchyou'vealwayswantedadog,sothislittleguyisforyou."Jason'seyeswidenedindisbeliefandthenfilledwithtearsofjoy.Hecouldn'tbelievethathisfatherhadknownallalongandhadplannedthissurprise.TheroomeruptedincheersandapplauseasJasoncarefullytookthedogfromhisfather'sarms.Fromthatmomenton,thedogbecameJason'sbestfriend,andhelearnedanimportantlessonabouthonestyandpatience.15升级版范文呈现Jasongotoutofthebarnlookingforthedog,hisheartpoundinglikeadruminhischest.Withthesuncastingabrightglareoverhead,hedashedintothefield,shoutingthedog'snameatthetopofhislungs,desperationclingingtoeverysyllable.Tearingthroughthetallgrass,hiseyesscannedeverynookandcranny,butitwasallinvain.Nowherecouldthelittlefurrycreaturebefound.Itwasnotonlythefearoflosingthedogthatbroughttearsstreamingdownhischeeks,butalsotherealizationofhisdisobedience.Slowlyanddejectedly,hemadehiswaybacktothehouse,hismindracingtofabricateanexcusethatmightsomehowlessenthewrathhewassuretoface.16升级版范文呈现Attheparty,whenthelastgiftwasopen,Dadsaid,“Waitamoment!I’llberightback.”Inaninstant,alleyeswerefixedonthedoor,curiosityhangingthickintheair.Momentslater,incameDad,holdingthelittledoginhisarms.Behold!Itwasasightth