2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习+周六奶奶的暖心饼干+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习周六奶奶的暖心饼干1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Istoodinfrontofthehouse,waitingforGrandma’sboxofcookies.EverySaturday,aboxofcookieswouldarriveonourdoorsteptiedwithabrownstring.AsfarasIcouldremember,Grandma,carryingthebox,wasalwaysthereontime.Jack,myyoungerbrother,hadalwaysbeenfonderofthecookies.Hewasstillchildish,maybenotunderstandingthevalueoftimewithfamily.Asforme,IwasalwaysGrandma’slittlegirl,andpossiblyshelovedmemorethanMom.TherewassomethingaboutGrandmathatmadehersospecial.Infact,seeinghereverySaturdaywasthehappiestthingallweekforme.4续写原文Jackplayedintheyardandpickedflowersforthedinnertable.Momalwayswantedtheprettiestones,andJackjustknewwhichonesshewouldlovemost.“Theweatherreportsaystodaywillbearainyday.SowillGrandmastillcome?”Jackasked.“I’mnotsure,”Ianswered,lookingupatthesky.Thecloudsweredarkgrayandthick,whichjustmadememoreupset.However,Jackdidn’tseemtooexcitedaboutthecookiesthistime.Hewasarranginghisflowersattentively.5续写原文“You’dbettercomein!Icanfeelafewraindropsonmyhead,”Momshouted.Jackquicklyrantowardsher,carryingmanyflowers.Someevenslippedoutofhishands,creatingacolorfultrailbehindhim.“Ibroughtyousomeroses,Mom!”Jacksaid,shoving(猛推)theflowersintoherhands.Ifoundheleftsomeflowersinhishand.Whowashegoingtogivethemto?Momthenlookedbackatme.“Wouldyouratherbeoutsideintherain?”shequestioned.Ishookmyhead.“It’sjustaboxofcookies.IcangetitnextSaturday,”Ithought.However,Iknewitwasmoreaboutthecookies—itwasalotoflovefromGrandma.Momgavemeasmallsmileandrepeated,“Iknewyouwouldn’twanttogetwet.Comein,baby.”Iwasabouttostepinsidewhenafamiliarvoicecame,“Jenny,I’mcoming!”IturnedbackandsawGrandmashuffling(拖着脚走)towardsme.6段首句Paragraph1：IrushedtowardsGrandmawithopenarms.Paragraph2：“Grandma,youbroughtthecookiesagain!”Jacksaidhappily.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9文章讲述了每周六，奶奶都会带着一盒饼干来到家门口。弟弟杰克很喜欢饼干，还会为餐桌挑选花朵。一次周六，天气不好，大家都觉得奶奶可能不会来了。然而，奶奶不顾风雨，还是带着饼干来了。奶奶的到来让大家感受到了满满的爱，一家人围坐在一起分享饼干，其乐融融。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：IrushedtowardsGrandmawithopenarms.我冲向奶奶，张开双臂紧紧抱住她。奶奶的身上带着雨水的湿润，她的头发被风吹得有些凌乱，脸上却依旧挂着温暖的笑容。我拉着奶奶进了屋，看到她鞋子也湿透了。我心疼地说：“奶奶，下这么大的雨，您还赶来，太辛苦了。”奶奶摸了摸我的头，说：“答应给你们的饼干，怎么能不送来呢。”她的话让我心里暖暖的。11续写思路分析Para2：“Grandma,youbroughtthecookiesagain!”Jacksaidhappily.“奶奶，您又带来饼干了！”杰克开心地说。奶奶把盒子放在桌上，拿出一朵小花递给杰克。杰克接过花，脸上满是惊喜。奶奶笑着说：“这是给你的，你是个懂事的好孩子。”杰克拿着花跑去给妈妈看。我们围坐在桌旁，一起吃着饼干，奶奶的笑容和话语让整个家充满了温暖。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现IrushedtowardsGrandmawithopenarms.Grandmawaswetfromtherain,herhairwasabitmessy,andshehadawarmsmileonherface.Ihelpedherintothehouseandnoticedhershoeswerewet.Isaidworriedly,“Grandma,it'ssohardforyoutocomeinsuchaheavyrain.”Grandmapattedmyheadandsaid,“Ipromisedtobringyouthecookies,ofcourseImustcome.”Herwordsmademefeelwarminmyheart.14范文呈现“Grandma,youbroughtthecookiesagain!”Jacksaidhappily.GrandmatookoutaflowerfromtheboxandgaveittoJack.Jacktooktheflowerwithsurpriseonhisface.Grandmasmiledandsaid,“Thisisforyou.You'reagoodboy.”Jackrantoshowtheflowertomom.Wesataroundthetableandsharedthecookiestogether.Grandma'ssmileandwordsmadethewholefamilyfullofwarmth.15升级版范文呈现IrushedtowardsGrandmawithopenarms,myheartpoundingwithjoyandconcern.Grandmawasdrenchedfromtherain,herhairdisheveledandherfaceradiatingwarmth.AsIhelpedherintothehouse,Inoticedhersoddenshoesandthewaterdrippingfromherclothes.“Grandma,it'ssohardforyoutocomeinsuchaheavyrain,”Iexclaimed,myvoicelacedwithworry.Grandmagentlypattedmyhead,hereyestwinklingwithloveasshesaid,“Ipromisedtobringyouthecookies,andIcouldn'tletyoudown.”Herwordsfilledmewithasenseofcomfortandgratitude.16升级版范文呈现“Grandma,youbroughtthecookiesagain!”Jackexclaimed,hiseyeswidewithexcitement.Grandmareachedintotheboxandpulledoutaflower,handingittoJackwithawarmsmile.Jacktooktheflower,hisfacefilledwithsurpriseanddelight.“Thisisforyou,mydearboy,”Grandmasaid,hervoicesoftandaffectionate.Jackranofftoshowtheflowertomom,hisstepsquickandfullofenergy.Wesataroundthetable,thesmellofcookiesfillingtheair,andGrandma'ssmileandwordscreatingawarmandcozyatmosphere.Asweatet