2024届高考英语复习读后续写高分表达讲义

2024届高考英语复习读后续写高分表达讲义

高考复习——读后续写高分表达（四大类情绪）

一、常见的四大类情绪

词块一（开心）：happiness/joy/delight/exhilaration兴奋，

欢欣/thri11/excitement

delighted/cheerful

/overjoyed/exhilarated/thrilied/excited

Facialexpressions：©eyestwinkle/sparkle/glitter/brim

with（充满，洋溢）tears

②one'slaughbroaden/stretchfromeartoear

（§）abright/brilliant/radiant（灿烂的）smilespreadacross

one'sface.

④one'sfacebeam笑容满面，眉开眼笑/flush发红with

excitement

⑤giggle/grin/burstintolaughter/breakintojoyful

smiles

Bodylanguages：①spring/leaptoone'sfeet

②Handsclap/rubone'shandsinexcitement

③jump/dancewithjoy

词块二（发怒）：

anger/rage/outrage/annoyance/irritation/furlous

burn/explodewithanger怒火中烧

blowupatsb冲某人发火flyintoafury/flyoffthe

handle大发雷霆

Facialexpressions：①glareat②eyesshinewith

anger.闪烁着愤怒的光芒

Bodylanguages：①gnash[n]（气得咬牙切齿）theteeth

咬牙切齿

②growl咆哮

③sbwastongued-tiedwithanger气的张口结舌

④clasp/clenchthefists紧握双拳

⑤tap/stampone'sfeet跺脚stormoutof/into/off气冲冲

地

词块三（害怕）：fright/fear/panic/terror/horror

frightened/panicked/scared/horrified/terrified/fearful/alar

med

Facialexpressions：①turnpale/wearabigfrown眉头

紧缩

②witheyesopenwide

Bodylanguages：①sbfrozewithterror,tooscaredtoir.ove

aninch

②hands/paln】sweat

@shake/quiver/tremb1ewithfear,unabletoutterft]v.

说；出声asingleword

④sitonpinsandneedles如坐针毡

⑤screamatthetopofone,slungs声嘶力竭地尖叫

©makeone,shairstandonend毛骨悚然

⑦one'sthroattightenedandkneesfeltweak.嗓子发紧，

膝盖发软

词块四（悲伤）sadness/sorrow/grief

sad/sorrowful/grieved/heart-broken

Facialexpressions：©Tearsroll/stream/rundownone's

cheeks.

②Greatsorrowcloudedone,seyes.满眼忧伤.

③tearsblurredone'seyes（泪水模糊了双眼）

Bodylanguages：©hide/buryone'sfaceinhands

②withone'sheaddrooping聋拉着脑袋

③handsandshouldersshakewithoutaword

公式一：表情感名词+waswrittenalloverone'sface,with

复合结构/独立主格

1.Guilt(一脸愧疚),(with)hisfaceburiedinhis

hands.

2.Annoyancewaswrittenalloverhisface,withhisfists

(clench)andhisface____(turn)red.

3.Happinesswaswrittenalloverhisface,withhislaugh

(broaden)fromeartoear.

公式二：情感名词1gavewayto/wassweptawayby情感名

词2

4.Herpreviouscalmness(变为.…/为....

所取代)terror/horror.

Mypreviousfrightwassweptawaybydelight,andIjumped

withjoy,withmyeyes(sparkle).

公式三:情感名词+welledupinside/in/withinsb,with复

合结构/独立主格

Thescenejustmademyhairstandonend,_(恐惧勇

上心头)

Fright(well)upinme,Itiptoedtowardthewindowwith

afrownonmyface.

Angerwelledupwithinhim,withhercheeksred,eyeswide

openandherclenchedfists(raise)

公式四：Fear/Sadness/Embarrassment/Surpriserootedsbto

thespot,with复合结构/独立主格结构

5.Sadnessrootedhertothespot,tears(roll)down

hercheeksandherlegs(shake)withoutaword.

6.Fearrootedhertothespot,herthroat(tighten)

andheart(jump)wildly.

公式五：whendoingsth,sbdid.....with复合结构

7.Whenhearingthegoodnews,heleapttohisfeetand

jumpedwithjoy,withabrilliantsmile(spread)

acrosshisface.

8.When(see)thehugedog,hewastoofrightenedto

dashforward,withhisface（turn）paleandhiseyesfull

ofhorror.

二、情绪描写万能片段

1、复杂心情（震惊/害怕/迷茫）

Foramoment,withinmyheartwasacomplexfeeling,which

mademerootedtothespot.Ishouldnothavebehavedinthat

way.

有一瞬间，我心中有一种复杂的感觉，令我定在原地。我不应该

那样做。

真题运用：

2016年浙江卷：Withinherheartwasacomplexfeeling.Jane

remainedrootedtothespot,exhaustedandunabletomove.

2021年八省联考：Withinmyheartwasenormoussurpriseand

gratitude,Istoodrootedtothespot,staringthegirlwhowas

abouttotakeoutherlunch.

2021年全国1卷：Withinhisheartwasacomplexfeeling.

Dadremainedrootedtothespotindisbelief,watchingthe

terriblekitchenandimaginingwhattheyhaddone.

万能片段2：不知所措（茫然/紧张/害怕）

Heartbeatingbeatingwildly,shehadnoideawhattodo.

Asafewsecondspassed,anideacameintohermind.心在狂

跳，她不知该怎么办。随着数秒后，她的脑海里出现了一个想法。

Heartbeatingwildlylikeabeast,shewasatalosswhat

todonext.Acoupleofsecondsslippingaway,anideastruck

herlikelightning.（升级版）

真题运用：

Cheeksburningwithembarrassment,shewonderedwhattodo.

Allofasudden,hermindgoingblank,shehadnoideawhat

todo.

Terrifiedbywhathadhappened,hewasrootedtothespot,

notknowingwhattodonext.

万能片段3：感激（感激+感悟）

Chokedwithoverwhelminggratitude,Macbowedlowtothem

repeatedly,withoutwhosehelphecouldnothavegonethrough

it.Mac被巨大的感激之情所哽咽，一再向他们深深鞠躬，没有他

们的帮助，他就无法度过难关。

ItwasthisuniqueexperiencethatremindedMacofthevalue

ofstrangers'help,inspiringhimtospreadthiskindnessto

others.正是这个独特的经历让Mac想到了陌生人帮助的价值，激

励他将这种善意传播给他人。

真题运用：［2022全国1卷theforestrun］：构思结尾David

完成跑步，明白勇气的重要

Chokedwithoverwhelmingexcitement,Davidhuggedmeand

hiscoachtightly,withoutwhoseguidancehecouldnothave

finishedtherun,asheinsisted.

David因巨大的兴奋而哽咽，他紧紧地抱着我和他的教练，没有

（我们的）指导，他就无法完成跑步，他坚持这样说。

ItwasthisuniqueexperiencethathadremindedDavieof

thevalueofcourageandfaith,inspiringhimtoaddress

challengesbravelyeversince.

正是这次独特的经历让大卫想到了勇气和信心的价值，激励他从

此勇敢地应对挑战C

万能片段4：激动（开心/紧张/害怕）情绪+肢体+语言

Overwhelmedbywildjoy,Irosetomyfeetandpunchedmy

fistintheair,shoutingoutloud,MImadeit!".被狂野的

喜悦所淹没，我站越来，在空中挥拳，大喊道："我做到了"

练习：1.惊慌失措，我跳了起来，尽可能大声地尖：”救命！

Overcomebyasenseofpanic,Irosetomyfeet,screair.ing

asloudasIcouldHelp!".

2.被一阵紧张所支配，我跳了起来，问自己说：”我该怎么办？;

Dominatedbyaflushofnervousness,Ijumpedtomyfeet,

askingmyself,“WhatshouldIdo

真题运用[2021全国1卷Mother*sDaySurprise]

“Itwasasuccess!Wemadeit!'1Jeffshoutedasshe

punchedherfistintheair.

”成功了！我们做到了！Jeff大喊大叫，她在空中挥舞着拳头。

Asenseofwarmthfilledtheirheartsinthatitwastruly

amemorableexperienceforthem.Believeitornot,theypulled

offadelightfulsurprise.

一种温暖的感觉充满了她们的心，因为这对她们来说真的是一次

难忘的经历。不管怎样，她们胜利完成了一个愉悦的惊喜。

万能片段5：紧张+成功

Heartracingandpalmssweating,hedraggedhistrembling

legsforward.Takingadeepbreath,hemurmuredtohimself

firmly,MEverythingwillbegreat.I'11makeit!”

心跳加速，手心出汗，他拖着颤抖的双腿向前走。

深吸一口气，他坚定地喃喃自语道，”一切都会很好的。我能做

到！二

（成功后）Hearingtheinspiringnews,heleapedintothe

airwithjoy.

听到这个鼓舞人心的消息，他高兴地跳到了空中。

真题运用：[2022全国1卷Theforestrun]

Heartracingandpalmssweating,Daviddraggedhis

tremblinglegsbacktothecourse.Hecouldfeelnothingbut

hishandsshaking,heartpoundingandtaroattightening.Taking

adeepbreath,hemurmuredtohimselffirmly,nEverythingwill

begreat.I'11makeit!.

心跳加速，手心出汗，David拖着颤抖的双腿走回跑道。他什

么也感觉不到，只有手在颤抖，心脏砰砰直跳，喉咙紧绷。（独立主

格）深吸了一口气，他坚定地喃喃自语，”一切都会很好的。我能做

到！二

Havingfinishedtherun,Davidleapedintotheairwith

joy.

终于完成了比赛，Dav