北师大版高三英语一轮复习类型二第5讲续写话题爱心援助课件

第三部分写作专题突破类型二读后续写第5讲续写热门话题爱心援助阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。(2022·浙江卷改编)Ineededtodosomethinginmycommunity(社区)inordertocompletethecommunityservicehoursrequiredtograduatefromhighschool．Someofmyfriendshadsigneduptospendtimeatasoupkitchen，soIdid，too．Itseemedlikeagoodthingtodo．Ithoughtthatwewouldjustbepassingoutdinnerstothoseinneed，butIfoundoutwewouldbedoingeverythingfrompreparingtoservingthedinner．Webeganpreparingthefood，frommixingsaladdressingtoseparatingfrozenmeat．Muchstillneededtobedonebeforedinnerwasserved，butalreadyoutsidethebuildingmanyhomelesspeopleweregathering．Itwasn'tuntilacoupleofhourslaterthatweopenedthedoorsandbeganservingdinner．Asthelineofpeoplecametowardme，Igotalittlescared．I'dcomefacetofacewiththehomeless:HowshouldIact?Howwouldtheytreatme?Wouldtheyhatemeforhavingmorethantheydid?Whilesomeofthepeoplelookedveryfriendly，someofthemlookedsodangerous．Ididn'thavetoomuchtimetoworryaboutit．Iwasassigned(分配)toservethesaladwiththeladynexttome．ShesmiledatmeandsaidifIneededhelp，she'dberightthere，whichIfoundquitecomforting．Ihadneverseensomanypeoplewantingfood．Theywereofallagesandnationalities．Mostofthemworeclothesthatweretornanddirty．Somelookedliketheyhadtotallygivenuponlife，whileothersseemedtobemakingthebestofthesituation，smilingandjoking．Somewerebetteroffthanothers，buttheyallneededagoodmealandawarmplacetoeat．Itsaddenedmetothinkofhowmanypeopletherewerewhodidn'thaveaplacetocallhomeandthattheonlyfoodtheygotcamefromasoupkitchen．注意：1．续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式作答。Astheycameinmydirection，Iputonmybrightestandhappiestsmile．_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IwassohappythatIhadearnedmyservicehoursinthisway．_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________写作指导：Ⅰ．梳理原文细节，理清篇章结构。Ⅱ．依据首句提示，构思后续情节。第一段：由续写第一段及续写第二段的提示语可知，该段应该描述我怎么为无家可归的人提供色拉，过程是令人满意的，但也会出现小的困难。第二段：由续写第二段的提示语可知，该段应该描述我对这次社区服务的感悟，最后可以进行适当的升华。范文佳作：As

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way．NotonlydidIclearmypreviousprejudiceagainstthosewhoseemedtobedangerousandunamiable，butalsoIextendedahelpinghandtothosewhowantedfood．Isuddenlycametorealizethatnoteveryonewasblessedwithfortuneandborntobewealthy；therefore，weshouldalwaysbegratefulforwhatlifeblesseduswith．However，wedidhavethepowertoshareourhappinesswithothers，thatis，spreadinglove．Loveiseverything，liketheclearmoonhanginghighinthesky，spreadingitsmildmoonlightselflesslytoeveryone．话题佳句：1．Withwindsblowingharder，thefirewentoutofcontrol．随着风越刮越猛，火失去了控制。2．Athickburningsmellfilledtheair．WhenTomopenedthefrontdoorofhisflattocheck，athickcloudofsmokegreetedhim．空气中弥漫着浓浓的烧焦的气味。当汤姆打开他公寓的前门查看时，一股浓烟迎面扑来。3．Simpsonnoticedtheflamewasgrowing．Frozenwithfear，hestoodrootedtothespot．Bythen，hewascoughingandhiseyeswerestinging．辛普森注意到火势越来越大。他吓呆了，站着一动不动。到那时，他已经开始咳嗽，眼睛刺痛。4．Hearingthescreams，Henryrantotheriverside，threwoffhisclothesandjumpedintothewaterwithouthesitation．听到尖叫声，亨利跑到河边，把衣服扔在一边，毫不犹豫地跳进了水里。5．Hedivedintothewater．Inafewseconds，hewasnexttothestrugglinggirl．他跳入水中。几秒钟后，他就到了那个苦苦挣扎的女孩旁边。6．Thewaterwasuptoherlap，butMarywasverystrongandshestruggledthroughthewaveswithmeonherback．水涨到了她的大腿处，但玛丽非常强壮，她背着我穿过海浪艰难前行。7．Withonlysecondstoact，hesuddenlyremovedherseatbeltandpushedheroutofthecarbeforeitfelldownhillagainwithhimtrappedinside．只有几秒钟的时间行动了，他匆忙地解开了她的安全带，把她推出了车，然后车又向山下坠落，他被困在了车里。8．Thecarhadcometorestontopofaroadsidewall，literallyswingingontheedgeofdisaster．Evenasmallsuddenmovebyanyoneinsidecouldsenditover．汽车卡在路边的一堵墙上，简直是在灾难的边缘摇摆着。里面任何人的一个小小移动都可能让它翻过去。9．Someonecameandpulledbothkidsawayfromthewater．Thelittlegirllayontheground，toofrightenedtocry．有人来把两个孩子从水里拉了出来。那个小女孩躺在地上，吓得哭不出来。10．Nomatterhowcoldthewinterwas，allthattheycouldfeelnowwasthesurpassingwarmth．无论冬天多么寒冷，他们现在能感受到的