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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。“Daddy,IwanttoaskyourpermissiontostudyinAmerica,”Isaidtomyfatherafewmonthsbeforemygraduationfromhighschool.ButhardlybeforeIfinished,heshouted,“No!”“Butwhy?”Ireplied.“Ifyouareworriedaboutmoney,itwillbeOKsinceIhavegotascholarship...”Butherefusedtogivein.Atthemoment,Ididn’tknowwhattosay.Formorethantwoyears,Ihadbeenworkingveryhardtopassallthenecessaryexaminations.IhadnottoldmyfatherbecauseIwantedtogivehimapleasantsurprise.Ithoughthewouldbeveryproudofmebecauseitwasmanyofmyclassmates’parents’dreamtosendtheirchildrentostudyabroad.“WhydoIhavetogetyourpermission?Iamalready18andI’mnotakidanymore,”Isaidangrilyandrushedtomybedroom,shuttingthedoorviolently.Blindedbyanger,IfoundthatIcouldnotstayatmyhometownanylonger.Latethatnight,Islippedoutofthehouseanddecidedtotakethebustotherailwaystationtostartmyownlifeasfarawayfrommyhomeaspossible.Thebusstopwasjusttwoblocksawayfrommyhome.WhenIgotthere,IfoundthatIforgottotakeanymoneywithmeandmissedthelastbus.Ididnotwanttogobackhome,soIsatdownonthebenchandclosedmyeyestohaveabreak.Suddenly,Iwaswokenupbymyphone.IlookedaroundandfoundtheroadwasdesertedandthestreetwassoquietthatIregrettedthatIhadlefthomeinsuchahurry.Ipickedupthephoneandansweredthephoneevenwithoutcheckingthenumber.“Haveyouhadagoodsleep?It’sgoingtorain.Shallwegohomenow?”注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。第一段:Itwasmyfather’svoice!第二段:Igrabbedmybagandhurriedtowardhim.文章大意“我”在高中毕业前几个月获得奖学金并想赴美留学,征求父亲意见时却遭到坚决拒绝,“我”愤怒地与父亲争吵后离家出走,前往公交站准备离开家乡开启新生活,却因忘带钱且错过末班车而被困在车站,此时接到父亲电话。几处伏笔以及在续写中的回应伏笔:“我”为留学努力准备两年多且未告知父亲,以为能给他惊喜,结果被拒。回应:续写中父亲可解释拒绝原因是不舍得“我”远走,担心“我”独自在外吃苦,体现深沉父爱。

伏笔:“我”冲动离家,忘带钱且错过车被困车站。回应:父亲电话关心并来接“我”,续写可描写“我”听到父亲声音的复杂心情,以及见面后父子间的情感交流与矛盾化解。续写要点第一段:听到父亲声音,“我”心中五味杂陈,既惊讶又感动,同时为自己的冲动感到愧疚。父亲在电话里温柔地说他一直在找“我”,很担心“我”的安危,外面天凉又快下雨了,让“我”别任性,跟他回家。第二段:“我”拿起包快速走向父亲,看到父亲焦急的面容和关切的眼神,泪水在眼眶里打转。父亲轻轻拍了拍“我”的肩膀,说他知道“我”有梦想,但他是因为太爱“我”,害怕“我”在异国他乡受委屈才拒绝的。“我”向父亲道歉,说自己太冲动,父子俩相拥而泣,矛盾就此化解。情感线起初,“我”因父亲拒绝留学请求而愤怒、委屈,冲动离家后有懊悔与无助。听到父亲电话时惊讶、感动与愧疚交织,走向父亲时心情复杂且感动升温,最后与父亲和解,心中充满对父亲理解的温暖与对亲情珍贵的感悟。故事线“我”欲留学遭父亲反对后离家,困于车站接父亲电话,听到父亲关切话语后走向他,父亲解释拒绝原因,“我”道歉,父子化解矛盾,重归温馨。主旨升华句Intheheatofanger,weoftenoverlooktheprofoundlovethatliesbeneaththesurfaceofaparent'srefusal.(在愤怒之中,我们常常忽略了父母拒绝背后深沉的爱。)Trueunderstandinginafamilyisachievednotthroughtheabsenceofconflict,butthroughthewillingnesstoforgiveandbeforgiven.(家庭中的真正理解并非源于没有冲突,而是源于愿意原谅与被原谅。)Thebondbetweenaparentandachildislikeasturdyropethatmayfrayinthestormofdisagreementbutneverbreaks.(亲子之间的纽带就像一根结实的绳索,可能在分歧的风暴中磨损,但永远不会断裂。)Sometimes,amomentofimpulsiverebelliongiveswaytoaprofoundrealizationoftheunshakableloveandcarethatsurroundsus.(有时,一时冲动的叛逆会让位于对围绕在我们身边的不可动摇的爱与关怀的深刻领悟。)Familyloveisalighthouseinthetempestoflife,guidingusbacktotheharborofwarmthandforgivenessevenwhenwestray.(家庭之爱是生命暴风雨中的灯塔,即使我们迷失方向,也能引领我们回到温暖与宽恕的港湾。)写作示范第一篇Itwasmyfather’svoice!Iwasstunnedforamoment,myangerandresentmentmeltingawayinstantly.Therewasonlyconcernandtendernessinhistone.HesaidhehadbeensearchingeverywhereformesinceIleft.HeknewIwasangry,buthejustcouldn'tbearthethoughtofmebeingsofaraway.Ifeltapangofguilt,realizinghowselfishandimpulsiveIhadbeen.TearswelledupinmyeyesasIlistenedtohiswords.

Igrabbedmybagandhurriedtowardhim.Hewasstandingunderastreetlight,hisfigurelookingabithaggard.Whenhesawme,heopenedhisarmswide.Irushedintohisembrace,sobbing.Hestrokedmybackgentlyandsaid,"I'msorry,son.Ijustloveyoutoomuchanddon'twanttoloseyou."IapologizedformyrudenessandtoldhimIunderstoodhislove.Atthatmoment,thecoldnightseemedtowarmup,andourheartswerecloserthanever.第二篇Itwasmyfather’svoice!Amixtureofemotionsfloodedoverme.Surprise,relief,andshameallmingledtogether.Hesoundedsocalmandgentle,askingmeifIwasokayandifIwascold.Hesaidhehadbeenworriedsickaboutmeandthathehadbeenwalkingaroundtheneighborhoodlookingforme.IrealizedhowfoolishIhadbeentothinkthatrunningawaywasthesolution.

Igrabbedmybagandhurriedtowardhim.AsIapproached,Isawtheworrylinesonhisfaceandtheloveinhiseyes.Hedidn'tscoldmeorlectureme.Instead,hesimplyhuggedmetightly.Heexplainedthathisrefusalwasn'tbecausehedidn'tbelieveinme,butbecausehecouldn'tbearthethoughtofbeingseparatedfrommeforsuchalongtime.Ihuggedhimback,promisingtocommunicatebetterinthefuture.Thenightthatstartedwithangerandrebellionendedwithanewfoundunderstandinganddeeperlovebetweenus.Onepossibleversion:Itwasmyfather’svoice!

Irubbedmysleepyeyesandlookedaround.There,aboutonehundredmetersfromthestopstoodmyfatherintheshadows.ThenIrealizedthatmyfatherhadbeenstandingthereallthetime.Perhaps,heknewitwouldbeuselesstoarguewithhisstubbornlittlegirl.Whathecoulddowaswaitingformyangertodieaway.Atfirst,Iwantedtoignorehim,buthisvoicesoundedsoassuringinthefrighteningquietnessofnight!Igrabbedmybagandhurriedtowardhim.

Onthewayhome,myfatherexplainedapologeticallythathewascaughtoffguardbythenewsandthathewasveryw

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