2025届高考英语二轮复习专项解密23书面表达之应用文含解析

解密23书面表达之应用文序号题型真题Part1解密高考考点综述备考建议Part2对点解密考点精准说1...真题对点析1...对点模拟练1...Part3强化集训真题模测、典题模测Part1解密高考【考点综述】书面表达应用文是历年高考英语的重点主观测试题之一，它有利于考查学生运用英语语言学问的综合实力，这种综合实力包括从单词拼法、词语搭配、词法结构到语法，从遣词造句、把握要领、谋篇布局到修辞风格等。该题在英语卷中占25分，约占全卷分值17%，是重要题型。而在听、说、读、写四项技能中，“写”是最令学生头疼的，有些学生对书面表达题手足无措，无从下手。因此，在中学阶段尤其是在高三备考阶段的英语教学中，如何进行有针对性的强化训练和学法指导，培育学生的英语书面表达实力是极为重要的。【备考建议】1．审题 动笔之前，必需细致审题，分析命题意图。有的考生生怕时间不够，急于成文，不细致审题，结果写出的文章抓不住重点，杂乱无章，缺乏逻辑性。其实审题的过程是一个思索加工的过程，并不是奢侈时间。在审题的过程中，考生可以依据题目确定文章体裁，考虑文章结构，内容。把与题目有关的材料分析、整理加以取舍，这样初步形成这篇文章的大致框架，这在很大程度上关系到整篇文章的成败。2．拟提纲抓要点，列提纲。依据格式要求和内容提示，分清主次，理顺关系，抓住要点，列出提纲。因考试时间有限，宜用简易英文提纲。(1)文章的主要要点要有逻辑地结合起来，使其结构严谨，内容连贯，层次分明，分好段落，设计好文章的开头和结尾。同时要有意在句子之间运用一些过渡性词语(比如表示因果、条件、时间等逻辑关系的词汇或结构)。高考高分作文的共性就是有效地运用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，意思连贯，给人以一挥而就之感。恰当地运用过渡词可以使文章结构紧凑，过渡自然，避负脱节现象。(2)语言表达。新的评分标准激励学生尽量运用较困难的结构和高级词汇。语言要精确，长短句结合。学着运用一些高级词汇，为文章增色。评价一篇文章的好坏，一条重要的原则就是“上下文连贯”，要让评卷者有一种通篇流畅、一挥而就的感觉。可采纳下列策略：①运用高级语法与句型，如：名词性从句，分词作状语和定语，还有如不定式、强调句、感叹句、倒装句。常见词的复合结构，如“with+复合宾语结构”等等，这些形式来提高文章的档次，写出亮点句子。②运用过渡性词汇，增加文章的逻辑性与连贯性。因为过度词可使文章结构更紧凑，上下文更连贯，逻辑性、可读性更强。比如常见的过渡性词语有表列举的first，second，third，next，then等等；表因果的becauseof，thanksto等。③为了避开重复和连接上下文，多用指代词。对于出现过的非关键次和短语，常用指代词来代替，保持文章的简洁，使文章跟紧凑。3．修改 写完之后，肯定要细致细致地修改。可遵循下列修改校对的方法：(1)检查格式，内容要点。(2)检查句子时态、语态是否正确，结构是否完整。(3)检查大小写、单词拼法是否正确，书写要工整细致。通过这样的检查过程，能够最大程度的削减错误的发生，从而削减人为失分。Part2对点解密【真题对点析】1（2024•全国卷3）假定你是李华，你和同学依据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教MissEvans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:1.剧情简介；2.指导内容；3.商定时间地点。留意:1.词数100左右;2.结束语已为你写好。【答案】DearMissEvans,Howiseverythinggoing!Iamwritinginsinceritytoaskyouafavorregardingaplayweadaptedaccordingtothetextbook.We’dliketocombineyourculturewithoursbyadaptingtheclassicnovelTheSteamboatforashortEnglishplay.Theplayissetonabigstormaftermidnight,ontheraftdowntherivernavigation,weseeasteamboatthatisgoingtosink.Wesavedascaredboy.However,theadaptionisquiteachallenge.HavingwrittentheEnglishscript,wedon’twantanythinginappropriatetospoiltheplay.Sowouldyoupleasesparesometimetoreviewthedraftscriptattachedtothisemailandmakenecessarychanges?Ifitisconvenient,mayIpayyouavisitatyourofficenextTuesdaytogiveyoumoredetails?Givenyourbusyschedule,I’dbeveryappreciativeifyouoffertogivesomeprofessionaladvice.Lookforwardtoyourearlyreply.Bestregards!Yourstruly,LiHua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，恳求外教MissEvans对于《theSteamboat》改编短剧的支持。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：依据提示，时态应为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。结构：总分总法第一段说明写这封邮件目的；其次段具体说明英语戏剧的剧情介绍和指导内容细微环节问题；第三段表达感谢，并期盼早日得到回复。其次步:列提纲（重点词组）writeto；accordingto；combine；adaption；challenge；attachedto；convenient第三步：连词成句依据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，留意主谓一样和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（连接词）连句成文，留意运用恰当的连词进行句子之间的连接与过渡，书写肯定要规范清楚。第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中运用了较多主从复合句，如：Ifitisconvenient,mayIpayyouavisitatyourofficenextTuesdaytogiveyoumoredetails?这句话运用了if引导的条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的实力。另外，文章思路清楚、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。【对点模拟练】1你是李华，你校学生会即将组织一次徒步活动，已在校内网发布方案，征求师生的修改看法。你须要写一封邮件，包含以下两点:1.提出你觉得须要改进的地方；2.须要改进的缘由。徒步活动主题:发觉重庆时间:5月1日下午2点路途:从人民大礼堂(theGreatHallofthePeople)到解放碑、(LiberationMonument),全程徒步。留意:1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细微环节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearSir/Madam,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【范文】DearSir/Madam,I’mreallyexcitedtohearthatahikingactivityfromtheGreatHallofthePeopletotheLiberationMonumentisgoingtobeheldontheLaborDayholiday.However,theremaybefurtherimprovementoftheschemeyou’vepostedonthecampuswebsite,asI’dliketopointout.Firstofall,thehikeneedstobeplannedinmoredetailsastheinformationreleasedonlineappearstobetoogeneral.Asparticipants,weneedtoknowhowlongthehikewilllast.Inthemeantime,wearewillingtohaveaclearerpictureofsecurityprecautionsandnecessarymedicalsupportfortheactivity.Onlybydoingsoareyoulikelytomakeitasuccess.What’smore,Isuggestthehikebemoresuitedtothetheme“DiscoverChongqing”throughadditionalactivities.IproposeanintroductionofthearchitectureonChaotianmenSquare.Byappreciatingtheartisticstyleofthelandmark,wecangainadeeperinsightintotheprosperityofourcity.Allinall,ifthehikeisorganizedinmoredetailsandinamoresupportiveway,itissuretosucceed.Ihopethatmyvoiceabovecanbeheardandconsideredandwishtheactivityagreatsuccess.Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求李华写一封邮件，对徒步活动方案提出修改看法。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：建议信人称：第一人称时态：一般将来时；一般现在时要点：1.听说学校徒步方案，指出有待改进。2.需改进的地方和具体缘由。其次部列要点写提纲Para.1beexcitedtohearthat…;isgoingtobeheld;furtherimprovement;postonthecampuswebsitePara.2planindetails;haveaclearerpictureofsth;securityprecautions;medicalsupport;proposeanintroductionofsth;gainadeeperinsightintosthPara.3inamoresupportiveway;besuretosucceed;第三步连词成句1.I’mreallyexcitedtohearthatahikingactivityfromtheGreatHallofthePeopletotheLiberationMonumentisgoingtobeheldontheLaborDayholiday.2.Theremaybefurtherimprovementoftheschemeyou’vepostedonthecampuswebsite.3.Thehikeneedstobeplannedinmoredetailsastheinformationreleasedonlineappearstobetoogeneral.4.Weneedtoknowhowlongthehikewilllast.5.Wearewillingtohaveaclearerpictureofsecurityprecautionsandnecessarymedicalsupportfortheactivity.6.Isuggestthehikebemoresuitedtothetheme“DiscoverChongqing”throughadditionalactivities.IproposeanintroductionofthearchitectureonChaotianmenSquare.7.Whenweappreciatetheartisticstyleofthelandmark,wecangainadeeperinsightintotheprosperityofourcity.8.Ifthehikeisorganizedinmoredetailsandinamoresupportiveway,itissuretosucceed.9.Ihopethatmyvoiceabovecanbeheardandconsideredandwishtheactivityagreatsuccess.第四步润色提高1.添加关联表达However;Firstofall;Inthemeantime;What’smore;Allinall2.句式升级However,theremaybefurtherimprovementoftheschemeyou’vepostedonthecampuswebsite,asI’dliketopointout.Asparticipants,weneedtoknowhowlongthehikewilllast.Onlybydoingsoareyoulikelytomakeitasuccess.Byappreciatingtheartisticstyleofthelandmark,wecangainadeeperinsightintotheprosperityofourcity.第四步美丽书写【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，分段合理。本文句式运用敏捷，运用了种句式。比如运用了定语从句However,theremaybefurtherimprovementoftheschemeyou’vepostedonthecampuswebsite,asI’dliketopointout.运用了only的倒装句作小结：Onlybydoingsoareyoulikelytomakeitasuccess.运用介词短语，让文章更加连贯简洁：Byappreciatingtheartisticstyleofthelandmark,wecangainadeeperinsightintotheprosperityofourcity.【真题对点析】2【2024·浙江】假定你是李华，常常帮助你学习英语的挚友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括:1.表示感谢；2.回顾Alex对你的帮助；3.临别祝愿。留意:1.词数80左右；2可适当增加细微环节，以使行文连贯。【参考范文】DearAlex,Hearingthatyouwillreturntoyourcountrysoon,Ifeelabitupset.Butmeanwhile,IwanttosendmysinceregratitudeforyourkindhelpwithmyEnglishlearning.IstillrememberwhatyouhavedevotedtoimprovemyoralEnglishandEnglishwriting.Besides,youalsofranklysharedyourlearningexperiencewithme.Additionally,withoutyourhelp,IwouldnothavebeenatopstudentinEnglishandwouldnothavewontheEnglishSpeechContest.Allinall,wordsfailtoexpressmythankfulnesstoyou.Idohopethatyouwillhaveabrightfutureandthatourfriendshipwilllastforever!Yours,LiHua【思路点拨】本文是邮件，主题是感谢信，依据写作提示，考生应用英语给Alex写一封邮件，感谢他的帮助。写作内容主要包括三项：1．表达感谢；2．回顾Alex的帮助；3．临别祝愿。这封邮件由三段组成：第一段陈述写信的目的；其次段陈述写信的理由；最终一段为结束语。 【对点模拟练】2假如你是李华，上周在外教Mr.Jackson的口语课上运用手机被老师发觉，手机被收走。请给外教写一封致歉信，内容应包括以下要点：1.表示歉意；2.说明上课运用手机的缘由；3.提出自己的恳求并适当表态。留意：可适当添加细微环节使文章连贯；字数100左右；答案【参考范文】DearMr.Jackson,I’mreallysorryaboutmyusingthemobilephoneinyourlecturelastweek.Pleaseacceptmyheart-feltapologyforbeingsorudeastudent.Iknowanywordmightsoundamade-upexcuse.ButIdidn’tusethemobilephonefornoreason.IwastryingtoapplytosomeAmericanuniversitieslastweekandthatday,Igotanofferandtheyneededmyfurtherinformationimmediately.Therefore,IhadnootherchoicebuttotrysendingthematextmessageinclassandthatwasexactlywhatIwasdoingwhenyoudiscovered.Ipromiseitwillneverhappenagain.ButIdoneedmyphonebacktogetintouchwithothers.Willyoubekindenoughtogiveitbacktome?Isincerelyhopeyoucanacceptmyapologyandunderstandmysituation.Yours,LiHua【写作指导】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封致歉信。写作要求只给出了大体的框架，因此具有很大的开放性。致歉信主要是向收信人表明歉意，恳求对方谅解自己的过失。写致歉信时要明确不是找借口为自己辩护，而是承认自己的过错并提出弥补过错的具体建议和方法。此类信件的关键是用词精确，表达真诚。在写作时可以依据提示的要求依据三段式的模式布局谋篇。首段：重述自己做错的事，表示歉意。主体段：说明致歉的具体缘由，应尽量具体描述做错事的经过。写信时应当留意在申述理由时要照看读信人的感受，切忌强词夺理。结尾段：再次表明承认错误的看法，恳求收信人的谅解。也可以提出补救的方法。【真题对点析】3（2024·天津卷）假设你是晨光中学的机器人爱好小组组长李津，你的美国挚友Chris就读于天津某国际学校，他普在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你准备邀请他加入你的团队，参与即将于7月底在天津实行的世界青少学机器人技能竞赛。请依据以下提示代表爱好小组给他写一封电子邮件。学科%网（1）竞赛的时间、地点；（2）邀请他的缘由；（3）训练支配将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。留意：（1）词数不少于100；（2）可适当加入细微环节，使内容充溢、行文连贯；（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：世界青少年机器人技能竞赛theWorldAdolescentRoboticsCompetitionDearChris,Ihavegoodnewstotellyou.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiJin【参考范文1】DearChris,

Ihavegoodnewstotellyou.TheWorldAdolescentRoboticscompetitionwillbeheldinTianjinattheendofJulysoastopromotethedevelopmentofrobotics.

WhatIwouldliketostressisthatitislookingfornewmembersatthismoment.Iwouldliketoinviteyoutotakepartinit,sinceIknowyou'vejustwonfirstprizeintheRoboticscompetitionheldinyourinstituteandhaveshowngreattalentindesigningrobotics.Therefore,youarethemostsuitableperson,Isuppose.Thetrainingschedule,inadditiontoregulartraining,includesjoininginavarietyofactivities,suchasparticipatinginsomenationalcompetitions.Iwillsenditsdetailstoyoubye-mail.Iwouldappreciateitifyougiveussomeadviceonhowtomakeitperfect.I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,LiJin

【参考范文2】DearChris,Ihavegoodnewstotellyou.TheWorldAdolescentRoboticsCompetitionwillbeheldinTianjinattheendofJuly.HearingthatyouoncetookpartinaRoboticsSkillsCompetitionandwonanaward,I,onbehalfoftheRoboticsHobbyGroup,intendtoinviteyoutojoinourteaminthecomingcompetition.Iamsurethatyourinvolvementwillnotonlyhelpusinwinningtheawardbutalsoenhancethefriendshipbetweenourtwoschools.WiththisemailIalsosendyouourtrainingplan,aboutwhichIwishtogetyouradvicebecauseyouaremoreexperiencedthanus.Wesincerelyhopethatwecanparticipateinthecompetitionasteampartners.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiJin

【解析】试题分析：本篇书面要求写一封电子邮件。写作的时候要留意以下几点：一、动笔前，肯定要细致分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。内容要点包括：1.代表爱好小组发出邀请；2.介绍竞赛的时间、地点等支配；3.说明邀请他的缘由，包括Chris曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖；4．告知他训练支配将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。二、写作时留意精确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量运用自己熟识的单词句式，同时也要留意运用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。【对点模拟练】3假定你是李华，是某外语学校的学生会主席。你们学校的啦啦操社团(CheerleadingClub)正在招募(recruit)新成员。请你依据以下要点提示给交换生Lisa写一封电子邮件，邀请她加入。内容包括：1.拟开展的活动；2.报名方式和截止日期。留意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细微环节，以使行文连贯。答案DearLisa,HaveyouheardthattheCheerleadingClubofourschoolisrecruitingnewmembers?Iknowyouareinterestedinit.Iamwritingtoinviteyoutojoinit.Thecluboffersavarietyofactivities.NotonlydothemembersreceiveprofessionaltraininginthegymeveryFriday,theywillalsoputonperformancesattheschoolsportsmeeting.Besides,theywillcompeteintheStudentTalentShowinourcityinNovember.Iamsureitwillbegreat.Ifyouwanttojoin,pleasesignupintheschoolofficeorsendyourapplicationtocheerleadingsociety@163beforenextSunday.Yours,【真题对点析】4【2024·全国I】假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要剧版中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括:1.写信目的:2.个人优势:3.能做的事情。留意:1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细微环节，以使行文连贯；3.结束语已为你写好。答案【参考范文】DearSirorMadam,IamLiHua,a17-year-oldteenagerstudyinginLondon.LearningthatavolunteerisneededforanexhibitionofChinesetraditionalpainting,Iamwritingtoapplyforit.Ihavesomeadvantagesforthejob.Firstofall,havinglivedinChinaforyearsandlearntEnglishsinceIwasachild,IhaveagoodcommandofbothEnglishandChinese,whichisbeneficialwhenintroducingChinesepaintingstoforeignfriends.Besides,becauseofmyfamiliaritywithChinesepaintingculture,Icangetforeignersandthelocalstoknowmoreaboutit.Lastbutnotleast,throughmyefforts,Ibelieve,IcanstrengthenthefriendshipbetweenChinaandEngland.Iwouldappreciateitifthiswonderfulchancewouldbeofferedtome.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，申请信。【思路点拨】无论是在学校还是今后读高校再到走上工作岗位，写好一份申请都是你必不行少的一项技能。这种形式的写作，学生需结合自身优势，考生成文时应留意：1.要点要齐全：(1)提出写信的目的——申请做这个志愿者；(2)提出个人优势；(3)表达出自己能做的事情；2.时态：以一般现在时为主；3.人称：其次人称为主；4.留意恰当运用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅；5.适当运用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。【对点模拟练】4假定你是李华，英国中学生Peter在中国研学时曾暂住你家。他回国后给你寄来礼物感谢你的款待，并在信中委婉表示对你家三世同堂感到惊异。请你写一封回信，内容包括：（1）感谢对方赠送的礼物；（2）简要介绍中国人三世同堂的现象。留意：1.词数120左右；2.可以适当增加细微环节，以使行文连贯。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】DearPeter,I'msodelightedtoreceiveyourletterandknowyouaresafeback.Thankyouforsendingmethebook,whichisreallyafeastofwesternculture.Ienjoyreadingitverymuch.SinceyouseemtobesurprisedatthefactthatinChina,threegenerations—grandparents,parentsandchildren,oftenlivetogether,itwillbemypleasuretoexplainthisphenomenontoyou.Asourlivingconditionsimprove,it'sunnecessaryforseveralgenerationstolivetogetheranymore.However,manyChinesestilltendtolivetogetherbecausetheycanhelpandcareforeachother.Besides,bylivingtogether,allfamilymemberscandevelopastrongsenseofbelonging,aswellasstrengthentheiremotionalbonds.HopetoseeyouinChinaagain.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生回一封感谢信，并介绍中国人三世同堂的现象。【详解】第一步：审题结构：三段式时态：一般现在时其次步：列提纲第一段：问候并表达感谢其次段：介绍三世同堂第三段：祝愿并期盼下次见面第三步：列举重点短语和句型receiveyourletter；afeastofwesternculture；besurprisedat；astrongsenseofbelonging；aswellas；strengthentheiremotionalbonds第四步：连句成篇I'msodelightedtoreceiveyourletterandknowyouaresafeback.Thankyouforsendingmethebook,whichisreallyafeastofwesternculture.SinceyouseemtobesurprisedatthefactthatinChina,threegenerations—grandparents,parentsandchildren,oftenlivetogether.Asourlivingconditionsimprove,it'sunnecessaryforseveralgenerationstolivetogetheranymore.ManyChinesestilltendtolivetogetherbecausetheycanhelpandcareforeachother.Allfamilymemberscandevelopastrongsenseofbelonging,aswellasstrengthentheiremotionalbonds.连句成文，留意运用恰当的连词进行句子之间的连接与过渡，如however,besides等，书写肯定要规范清楚，第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中运用了较多主从复合句，如：Thankyouforsendingmethebook,whichisreallyafeastofwesternculture.此句为非限制性定语从句；However,manyChinesestilltendtolivetogetherbecausetheycanhelpandcareforeachother.这句话运用了because引导的状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的实力。另外，文章思路清楚、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。Part3强化集训【真题模测】Passage1（2024•全国卷2）上周末，你和同学参与了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括:1.农场状况；2.采摘过程；3.个人感受留意:1.词数100左右；2.题目已为你写好。题目:MyWeekend________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】MyWeekendOrganizedbythestudentunion,agroupofvolunteerswenttoHopeFarmtohelpthefarmerspickpeacheslastweekend.Thefarmissituatedatthefootofamountain,theskyisblueandtheairisfresh.Wewereattractedbythebeautifulscenery.Therearedifferentkindsoffruittreesaswellasavarietyofanimals.Onarriving,wesawredripepeacheshangingonthetree.Usingbasketsandladders,

Wefirstpickedtheonesthatweremostbeautifulincolor,thenthosethatwereripeandsoft.

Icouldn’twaittotakeabite,andthesweetjuicewentdownmythroat.Iwasgratefulforthisopportunitytogetclosetonature.NotonlywouldIbeabletoexperiencefruitpicking,butIcouldalsofeastonthesweetness!【解析】【详解】第一步：依据提示可知，上周末，你和同学参与了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动。内容包括：1.农场状况；2.采摘过程；3.个人感受。其次步：依据写作要求确定关键词（组），如：pickpeaches,issituated,beautifulscenery,fruittrees,avarietyofanimals,Usingbasketsandladders,

takeabite,begratefulfor,getclosetonature,feastonthesweetness.第三步：依据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，留意主谓一样和时态问题。本文用一般现在时和一般过去时。第四步：连句成文，留意运用恰当的连词进行句子之间的连接和过渡，书写肯定要规范清楚，保持整齐美观的卷面是特别重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中运用了较多高级表达方式，如Organizedbythestudentunion,agroupofvolunteerswenttoHopeFarmtohelpthefarmerspickpeacheslastweekend.和Usingbasketsandladders运用了非谓语动词；Wefirstpickedtheonesthatweremostbeautifulincolor,thenthosethatwereripeandsoft.

运用了定语从句；NotonlywouldIbeabletoexperiencefruitpicking,butIcouldalsofeastonthesweetness!运用了连词notonly…but…和倒装句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的实力。另外，文章思路清楚，层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。Passage2(2024·北京卷)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国挚友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感爱好，支配明年来北京上高校。他向你询问相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括：(1)表示欢迎；(2)举荐他上哪所高校；(3)建议他做哪些准备工作。留意：(1).词数不少于50；(2).开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearJim,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【写作指导】本文为提纲式作文，文章要求写举荐信，为英国挚友介绍北京的高校。首先可以介绍一下写作背景（Jim对中国文化感爱好，要来中国学习），表达欢迎。然后举荐一所高校，并简要介绍举荐的缘由（如高校的特色，可以学到什么等）。再次简洁介绍应当做哪方面的准备，如可以提前学习汉语，读点有关中国传统文化的书，了解中国的习俗，让自己更好地适应中国的生活。文章可采纳一般现在时，人称可以运用其次人称。【范文】DearJim,I’msogladtohearyourfutureeducationplaninBeijinginyourlastletter.FirstIwouldliketoexpressmywarmestwelcometoyouandIamsureyouwillhavethemostunforgettableexperienceduringyourcollegeinBeijing.LearningyourkeeninterestinChineseculture,IsuggestyouapplyforPekingUniversity,oneofthebestuniversitiesinChina.ItsChineseLiteraturemajorisperfectforyouwhereyoucanbecompletelysoakedinChineseprofoundhistoryandrichculture.Asforpreparation,somereadinginadvanceinneededlikeTheStoryoftheStonewhilesomeonlinecoursesofspokenChinesecanbehelpfulforyoutoadaptintotheChineselanguageenvironment.Isincerelyhopeyourdreamwillcometrueandit’smypleasuretoshowyouaroundinBeijingwhenthatdaycomes.Ifyouhavefurtherquestions,pleasefeelfreetoletmeknow.Yours,LiHua【亮点说明】文章中奇妙运用非谓语LearningyourkeeninterestinChineseculture,使句子结构紧凑。运用定语从句ItsChineseLiteraturemajorisperfectforyouwhereyoucanbecompletelysoakedinChineseprofoundhistoryandrichculture.使句子表达更完备；奇妙运用连接词while引出来中国前的准备，使句子结构对称。Passage3（2024·天津卷）假设你是李津，与你以前的外籍老师MrsGreen始终保持联系。近日她来信询问你的近况，请依据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。1．简要介绍自己的学习和生活；2．告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者，并介绍为此所做的准备(如深化了解天津等)；3．希望她有机会重访天津。留意：1.词数不少于100；2．可适当加入细微环节，使内容充溢、行文连贯；3．开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：第十三届全运会the13thNationalGamesDearMrsGreen，I'msogladtohearfromyou._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiJin【解析】首先，内容要点要全，三个要点都要包含：(1)介绍自己的学习和生活；(2)告知她你作为第十三届全运会志愿者所做的准备；(3)希望她重访天津。其次，要精确并恰当地运用词汇和各种复合句。留意运用定语从句，非谓语动词等表达。在行文过程中要留意时态的正确运用。第三，要留意上下文的连贯和语言的得体。留意运用一些表示连接和转折的词。最终，要留意一下卷面整齐，书写工整。【答案】DearMrsGreen,__I'msogladtohearfromyou.Inyourlastletter,youaskedmeaboutmystudyandlife.I'mverypleasedtotellyouthatIhavemadegreatprogressinmyspokenEnglishsinceyouleft.Asformylife,Itakeexerciseregularlyanddomoreoutdooractivities,whichbuildsupmybodyandcharacteraswell.IhavegoodnewstotellyouthatIhavebeenchosentobeavolunteerinthecoming13thNationalGamestobeheldinTianjinattheendofAugust.Tobeaqualifiedvolunteer,Imadesomepreparations.Iinterviewedmanypeoplefromallwalksoflife,whichimprovedanddeepenedmyunderstandingofTianjin.IhopeyoucanrevisitTianjinifyouhaveachance.Lookingforwardtoseeingyouagain.Yours，LiJin【典题模测】Passage1假定你是李华，想邀请你的新西兰挚友Kevin参与你校将要实行的“劳动周”相关活动。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.活动时间；2.活动内容（如：校内环境美化、校内垃圾分类等）；3.活动意义.参考词汇：LabourWeek劳动周留意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细微环节，以使行文连贯。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】DearKevin,IfeelextremelydelightedtoinformyouthatourschoolwillholdsomerelevantactivitiesduringtheupcomingLabourWeek.I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoexperiencethegreatactivities.TheLabourWeekwillstartonJune10thandlastforfivedays,whenwewillholdvariousactivities.Tobeautifyourschool,wewillplanttreesthataredefinitelygoodforourphysicalandmentalwell-being.Moreover,it’sawonderfulideatosortgarbageinaneco-friendlyway,makingourcampuscleanerandmorefascinating.Thereisalsoalaborknowledgecompetitionwhichissorewardingthatwecan’taffordtomissit.Asforthesignificance,wecanbenefitalotundoubtedly.Ourawarenessoflabourcanbedeveloped.Besides,wewilllearntocherishandrespectthefruitsofpeople’swork.Lookingforwardtoyourfavorablereply.Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】【分析】本篇写作属于应用文，主要是邀请新西兰的挚友Kevin参与学校实行的劳动周活动。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：依据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。结构：总分法。总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式支配所写内容。写作要求：1.活动时间；（thetimeofthisactivity）2.活动内容（如：校内环境美化、校内垃圾分类等）；（thecontentofthisactivity）3.活动意义。（thesignificanceofthisactivity）其次步：列提纲（重点词组）inform;relevant;upcoming;various;beautify;definitely;physicalandmental;asforthesignificance;undoubtedly;cherish第三步：连词成句IwanttoinformyouthatourschoolwillholdsomerelevantactivitiesduringtheupcomingLabourWeek.I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoexperiencethegreatactivities.Wewillplanttreesthataredefinitelygoodforourphysicalandmentalwell-being.WewillholdvariousactivitiestosupportourLabourWeek.It’sawonderfulideatosortgarbageinaneco-friendlyway.Sortinggarbagecanmakeourcampuscleanerandmorefascinating.Asforthesignificance,wecanbenefitalotundoubtedly.Ourawarenessoflabourcanbedeveloped.Wewilllearntocherishandrespectthefruitsofpeople’swork.在进行造句的时候肯定要留意时态和语态上面的问题。第四步：连句成篇（连接词）1.文章的结构依次：劳动周具体时间和地点；劳动周的活动内容；劳动周的实际意义。2.表并列补充关系：Whatismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,InadditionAswellas,notonly…but(also),including,连句成文，留意运用恰当的连词进行句子之间的连接与过渡，书写肯定要规范清楚.第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。范文开头IfeelextremelydelightedtoinformyouthatourschoolwillholdsomerelevantactivitiesduringtheupcomingLabourWeek.既运用了一个宾语从句，又开宗明义的点出了写作的主题和目的。此外范文中形容词和副词用得特殊好，比如extremely和definitely等，都能够表达出作者的情感。还用到了非谓语结构Moreover,it’sawonderfulideatosortgarbageinaneco-friendlyway,makingourcampuscleanerandmorefascinating.文章思路清楚，层次分明，上下句转换自然。为文章增色添彩。Passage2假设你是某中学的学生谢飞，你校国际部将选拔一些学生志愿者，参与国际部接待学访团等外事活动的策划和组织。你欲参选，请依据以下提示，写一篇竞选演讲稿。*个人优势介绍（如性格，特长等）；*接待学访学生的活动支配（校内，校外）；*表达当选的愿望。留意：1.词数不少于100；2.请勿提及真实学校名称；3.可适当加入细微环节，以使内容充溢、行文连贯；4.开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：竞选runfor…;学访学生studentsontheexchangeprogramGoodafternoon,mydearfriends,MynameisXieFei._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________