陕西省2024八年级英语上册Unit6I'mgoingtostudycomputerscience写作能力提升练课件新版人教新目标版

UNIT6I’mgoingtostudycomputerscience.UNIT6写作能力提升练目

录CONTENTS01写作任务02思路点拨03写作实践

假设你是李明，你梦想成为一名医生。请根据提示，给你的朋友李华写一封邮件，告诉他你将如何实现自己的梦想。提示：

getexcellentgrades；focusonscienceclasses(Science

classesarerequired(必需的)formedicalschools.)；improvemy

physicalhealth要求：

1.要点齐全，可适当发挥；2.不少于80词。［谋篇布局］厘清文章要素，构建文章结构。［遣词造句］就结构图中的要点和词语完成句子。1.当一名医生不容易，所以为此我制订了一个计划。It’snoteasy

，soI

⁠forit.2.

为了考上最好的医学院，我需要取得优秀的成绩。Togetintothebestmedicalschool，Ineedto

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⁠.tobeadoctormadeaplangetexcellent

grades3.

我打算更加努力地学习，以取得更好的成绩。I’mgoingto

sothatIcan

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我计划多锻炼来改善我的身体健康状况。I

⁠toimprovemyphysicalhealth.workhardergetbetter

gradesplantodomoreexercise5.

我打算尽全力实现自己的梦想。I’mgoingto

tomakemydream

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⁠.domybestcome

true［巧妙衔接］本文中，在叙述实现自己梦想的做法时，运用

firstly，secondly，thirdly，allinall(总之)来使文章结构匀

称、紧致。DearLiHua，IwanttobeadoctorwhenIgrowup.It’snoteasytobea

doctor，soImadeaplanforit.Firstly，togetintothebestmedicalschool，Ineedtoget

excellentgrades.SoI’mgoingtoworkhardersothatIcanget

bettergrades.［连句成篇］Secondly，I’mgoingtofocusonscienceclassesbecausethey

arerequiredformedicalschools.Thirdly，Iplantodomoreexercisetoimprovemyphysical

health.Mostdoctorsworklonghours，andit’sbadfortheir

health.SoIneedtohaveahealthybody.Allinall，I’mgoingtodomybesttomakemydreamcome

true.Whatareyougoingtodointhefuture？I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours，LiMing

请你以Myidealjob(我的理想职业)为题写一篇80词左右的短文，要求包括以下要点：1.

每个人都有自己的理想职业；2.

我的理想职业是什么；3.

我怎样为我的理想职业做准备。

Everyonehashisownidealjob.I’dliketosharemyideal

jobwithyou.Myidealjob

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Myidealjobisateacher.Firstofall，Iliketostaywith

youngpeopleverymuch.Besides，ateacherhastwo

vacationseveryyear.Icanenjoymyselfduringthesummer

andwinterholidays.Finally，Iwanttoteachthestudentsall

thatIknowandhelpthemtobecomeusefulpersons.

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Inordertobeagoodteacher，Iamgoingtostudyharderthanevertoenrichmyknowledge.