Unit3Immoreoutgoingthanmysister.-2023-2024学年八年级英语上册单元写作深度指导（人教版）（学生版）

Unit3I’mmoreoutgoingthanmysister.单元写作指导与演练近三年考情分析话题考查热度谈论人物的个性特征人物的外貌和个性特征本单元的话题是谈论人物的个性特征，本单元的写作题目与描写人物的个性特征相关。写此类短文时，要抓住所比较的人物的特点，从外貌特征(如tall,short,thin,fat,long/shorthair等)、个性特点(如outgoing,funny,friendly,hardworking,smart等)等方面来描述。若要进行人物个性特征的比较，则要写出他们的相同点和不同点，并能够正确使用比较级进行表达。语言要精炼、准确，行文要流畅。重点考查学生以下能力：掌握并熟练使用一般现在时；能使用一般现在时造句；能熟练运用形容词及形容词比较级句型。1.总分总结构。短文通常分为三个部分：总第一部分：开篇点题，引出话题。分第二部分：介绍相同之处与不同之处。总——第三部分：发表看法。2.人称：第一人称，第三人称。3.时态：一般现在时（注意单三）。【词汇积累】tall/thin/heavy/longhair/shorthair高的/瘦的/长发/短发funny/friendly/outgoing/hardworking/smart/lazy搞笑的/友好的/外向的/努力的/聪明的/懒惰的besimilarto与.......相似betalentedin在.......有天赋likedoingsth.喜欢做beseriousabout对.......认真careabout关心workhard努力学习playsports做体育运动begoodat擅长as...as与.......一样bedifferentfrom与.......不同bringout使显示thesameas和.......相同aslongas只要【句式积累】1.Ihaveabestfriend.His/hernameis...我有一个好朋友，她/他的名字是....2.Shehaslonghair/shorthair...她留着长发/短发......3.Butwehavesomedifferences...但是我们有一些不同.......4.Iammoreoutgoingthanhim.我比他外向。5.Sheisnotas...asIam.她不如我....6.Heisgoodat...他很擅长.......7.Webothlike...我们都喜欢........8.Iworkharderthanher.我比她学习努力。9.Sheistalentedinmusic.她在音乐方面有天赋。10.Helikestodothesamethingsasme.他喜欢做和我一样的事情。11.Myfriendtrulycaresaboutme.我的朋友真地很关心我。12.Wecantalkaboutandshareeverything.我们可以互相交谈并且分享一切。13.Weenjoystudyingtogether.我们喜欢在一起学习。14.Ithinkfriendsarelikebooksyoudon’tneedalotofthemaslongastheyaregood.我觉得朋友像书不需要太多只要足够好。15.It’snotnecessarytobethesame没必要一样。16.Ibelievewewillbeebetterandbetter.我相信我们会变得越来越好。17.Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.患难见真情。18.Truefriendsarealwaysthereforyou.真正的朋友会一直陪在你身边。19.Iwillmisshim.我会想念他。20.Ihopewewillbegoodfriendsforever.我希望我们将永远是好朋友。※开头句①MybestfriendisLiYun./LiYunismybestfriend. ②MyfriendsandIhavealotinmon，butwestillhavesomedifferences.③Asthesayinggoes，“Youdon'tneedalotoffriendsaslongasthey'regood.”※中间句①Sheoftenwearsapinkshirtandbluetrousers.②Ithinksheisverykindhearted.③Sheisoutgoingandalwaysmakespeoplearoundherhappyandrelaxed.④Bothofusliketomakenewfriendsandwealsolovetohelpotherpeople.※结尾句①Eventhoughwehavedifferences，wearestillverygoodfriends.②Ifeelhappytohavesuchagoodfriend.③Ihopeourfriendshipwilllastforever.【谚语积累】1．Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.患难见真情。2．Afriendiseasierlostthanfound.得朋友难，失朋友易。【万能写作模板】我和我最好的朋友介绍自己和朋友：MybestfriendisLinda.Webecamefriendsthreeyearsago.比较自己和好朋友的异同：Insomewayswearethesame.Insomewayswearedifferent.总结：Althoughwehavedifferences,wearegoodfriends.真正的朋友,在你获得成功的时候,会为你高兴;在你遇到不幸或悲伤的时候,会给你及时的支持;在你犯错误的时候,会给你正确的批评和帮助.这样的友谊才是真正可贵的.请你写一篇短文介绍一下你和你最好的朋友,80词左右.体裁:记叙文人称:以第三人称和第一人称为主要求:1.简要说明你的择友观;2.简单比较一下你和好友之间的外貌、性格、爱好的异同点(要求使用比较级);3.简述一件你们共同经历的事(如学校郊游、才艺表演等),体现好友对你的帮助.注意:短文中不允许出现与考生本人相关的真实姓名和校名等信息.Mybestfriend_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________思路导引表明自己的择友观→Idon'tthinkit'snecessaryforfriendstobethesame.比较自己和好友之间的外貌、性格、爱好的异同点Differences:Linda:quieter,taller,longhair,doeswellinEnglishandChineseMe:noisier,shorter,shorthair,begoodatmathSimilarities:likedoinghomeworktogether,helpeachother,likeplayingtennis简述一件和好友共同经历的事,表达对好友的感情Itookpartintheschooltalentshow,feltsonervousLindaencouragedmeandkepthelpingmedidmybestandwonfirstprizebringoutthebestinme,feelsoluckytohavesuchafriend词句积累词汇bethesameas和······相同bedifferentfrom与······不同begoodat擅长······dowellin在······方面做得好helpeachother互相帮助feellucky感到幸运bringoutthebestinme把我最好的一面表现出来winfirstprize获得一等奖句子1.Idon'tthinkit'snecessaryforfriendstobethesame.我认为朋友没有必要一样.2.Weliketodoourhomeworktogetherafterschoolandwealwayshelpeachother.我们喜欢放学后一起做作业,我们总是互相帮助.3.I'mgoodat...butLindadoeswellin...我擅长·····而琳达在······方面做得好.4.IstillrememberwhenI...,Ifelt..,atfirst.我仍然记得当我·····时,一开始我感到·······5.AssoonasLindaknewmyproblem,sheencouragedmeandkepthelpingme.琳达一知道我的问题,就鼓励我并一直帮助我.6.Atlast,Ididmybestandwonfirstprize.最终,我尽了最大的努力,并获得了一等奖.7.Sheoftenhelpstobringoutthebestinme.她经常帮我把最好的一面表现出来.8.Ifeelluckytohavesuchafriend.我很幸运有这样一个朋友.9.谚Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.患难见真情.佳作展示MybestfriendLinda①Idon'tthinkit'snecessaryforfriendstobethesame.MybestfriendisLinda.②Sheisverydifferentfromme.②Sheismuchquieterandtallerthanme.ShealwayshaslonghairbutIlikeshorthair.③I'mgoodatmathbutLindadoeswellinEnglishandChinese.Welikedoingourhomeworktogetherafterschoolandwealwayshelpeachother.Webothlikeplayingtennis.IstillrememberwhenItookpartintheschooltalentshow,Ifeltsonervousatfirst.Icouldn'tdomybestonstage.④AssoonasLindaknewmyproblem,sheencouragedmeandkepthelpingme.Atlast,Ididmybestandwonfirstprize.⑤Sheoftenhelpstobringoutthebestinme,andIfeelsoluckytohavesuchafriend.名师点评本文符合写作要求,条理清晰、结构严谨,运用了丰富的短语和句式,表明了自己的择友观以及自己最好的朋友Linda的情况.①用＂it's(not)+adj.+todosth."句式言简意赅地表明了自己的择友观.②用bedifferentfrom短语和＂比较级＋than"结构表明了作者和朋友的外貌以及性格差异.③用begoodat和dowellin短语表明了自己和Linda各自擅长的学科.④用含有assoonas引导的时间状语从句的复合句,强调Linda对自己的关心和帮助.⑤用bringout短语表明Linda对自己的帮助很大,同时体现了作者活学活用的能力.一、词汇积累(一)人物对比类短语1.与……不同________________________________2.与……相像的________________________________3.和……相同________________________________4.和……一样高________________________________(二)人物描述类短语1.在某方面有天赋________________________________2.擅长于________________________________(三)朋友相处类短语1.和某人相处得好________________________________2.真正关心我________________________________3.分享一切________________________________4.使我笑________________________________(四)写出下列形容词或副词的比较级和最高级形式1.tall→____________________→____________________2.short→____________________→____________________3.late→____________________→____________________4.lazy→____________________→____________________5.funny→____________________→____________________6.early→____________________→____________________7.thin→____________________→____________________8.popular→____________________→____________________9.good→____________________→____________________10.bad→____________________→____________________二、句子积累(一)佳句欣赏与模拟1.MybestfriendLarryisquitedifferentfromme.【quite为副词，可以用来修饰形容词，表示程度，意为＂十分＂】我十分擅长英语。________________________________________________________________________2.I’mshysoit’snoteasyformetomakefriends.【it’s＋adj.＋forsb.＋todosth.做某事对某人来说怎么样】取得好成绩对我来说很容易。________________________________________________________________________3.Larryismuchlesshardworking,though.【much/alittle/alot＋比较级】事实上，李明跑步比我快得多。________________________________________________________________________(二)表达个人的择友观1.在我看来，有相同点是必要的。Inmyview,it’s____________________tobethesame.2.我真的不介意朋友是与我相同或是不同。Idon’t________________________________________iffriendsarethesameasmeordifferent.3.我认为朋友就该像书——你不需要很多，只要他们好就行。Ithinkfriends________________________________________books—youdon’tneedalotofthem____________________________________________________________they’regood.(三)写作微技能：比较级的巧用形容词和副词的比较级，能帮助你更具体、生动、形象地描述所要描写的人物，写出评价人物的文章。如：I’mmoreoutgoingthanmysister.Iworkashardasmysister.你可以根据你的需要，用＂than，as...as＂等更具体、生动地描述人物间的相同点与不同点。1.Lisa唱得比Sam好。Lisasings________________________________________Sam.2.他和我一样外向。Heis____________________outgoing____________________me.3.Peter学习不如Tom努力。Peterdoesn’twork____________________hard____________________Tom.三、以读促写根据所给汉语或首字母提示，写出空白处所缺单词的正确形式。每空限填一词。完成后请找出文中的比较级并思考其在文中的用法。MyBestFriendandIMyfavorite1(谚语)is＂FriendsareGod’swayoftakingcareofus.＂ItmakesmethinkaboutmybestfriendLinda.Wehaveknowneachothersincewewerein2(最初的)school.Insomeways,welook3(相像的),andinsomeways,welookdifferent.B4ofushaveblackeyesandlongblackhair,butsheisalittletallerthanI.I’mquietand5(严肃的),soit’snoteasyformetomakefriendsandgetonwithother6(小孩).However,Lindaisnotasquietasme.Sheis7(外向的).Sheisso8(有才能的)intellingjokesthatshealwaysmakesmel9.It’ssoluckytohaveafriendlikeher.Asforstudy,bothofusare10(辛勤的)andliketolearneverythingnew.Weenjoystudyingtogether.ButLindaisbetteratstudyandgetsbetterg11thanIdo.Shealwaystriesherbesttohelpmeasl12asIhaveproblems.Withherhelp,Imadegreatprogressinmylessons.I’mverythankfulforallthatshehasdoneforme.IthinkI13(应该)learnfromherandtrytohelpothersjustlikeher.Inourfreetime,weoftentalkaboutand14(分享)everything.Inf15,IthinkI’magoodlistenerandalwaystheretolisten.16(虽然)Lindaisquitedifferentfromme,Idon’treally17(在意)ifmyfriendsarethesameasmeordifferent.I18(真正)understandthatalifewithoutfriendshipislikeadaywithoutsunshine.Lindaismytruefriendwhoreachesmyhandandtouchesmy19(内心).（一）1．根据表格中提供的信息，写一篇短文介绍你和你的好朋友Tina的相同和不同之处。要求：1)文章内容应包含所有要点，并适当发挥；2)开头已给，结尾自行补充；3)条理清楚，语义连贯，字迹工整。词数80左右。DifferencesSimilarities(相似点)Tina1.funny(***);serious(*)2.dosports(everyday)3.like...1.tallandthin2.begoodatmathandEnglish3....I1.funny(*);serious(***)2.dosports(hardlyever)3.love…Tinaismybestfriend.Wehavemanysimilarities._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．假如你叫刘星。你择友的标准是：性格外向；擅长打乒乓球，并可以教你打乒乓球。最近你就结交了这样一位新朋友——赵鹏。请根据表格提示，介绍一下你自己、你的新朋友以及你的择友观。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．假如你是张亮，请根据下面的表格信息，写一篇英语短文，介绍你和弟弟张翔的相同之处和不同之处，以便你们的美国朋友加深对你们的了解。要求：1.语句通顺，符合逻辑;2.包含表格信息的所有内容;3.70词左右，可适当发挥。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．今天网上讨论的主题是“MybestfriendandI”。假如你有一个最好的朋友Lucy，请根据表格所提供的信息进行跟帖，对你和Lucy的相同之处和不同之处做一个简单的描述。70词左右。NameLucyAge1213Height1.5m1.55mCharacterquiet,smart,calmoutgoing,goodatsportsInmonenjoygoingtoparties____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．《学习周报》联袂阳光中学正在举行“我的闺蜜我来谈”活动。请你根据下面表格中提供的信息，写一篇短文介绍你和你最好的朋友Nancy的相同之处和不同之处。要求：1.包括表格中提及的所有内容，语句通顺，条理清楚；2.80词左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数），可适当发挥。人物不同点相同点Nancy1.比我高得多，更外向2.更擅长唱歌、跳舞3.喜欢去听音乐会1.喜欢运动2.学习努力，各门功课都学得好3.喜欢阅读，通常在周末一起去图书馆Ⅰ1.喜欢上网2.喜欢旅游对朋友之间异同点的看法：……（至少两点）Nancyismybestfriend.Insomeways,wearethesame.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．你们学校英语俱乐部拟招聘一名学生助手，帮助一些小学生学习英语。苏珊和朱迪想去应聘。请你根据下面表格中的信息写一篇短文，介绍她们的情况并对二者进行比较，说一说你认为谁更适合这份工作以及你选择她的理由。要求：1.短文应包括表格中的所有内容，可适当发挥；2.80词左右。参考词汇：bepatientwith对……有耐心Susan:quietpatient（耐心的）hasgoodgradesinEnglishJudy:outgoinggoodwithchildrenstayedinEnglandforayeargoodatspeakingEnglish________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________1.（2023·福建·统考中考真题）某地“美丽乡村（BeautifulVillage）”项目吸引了不少外宾，暑假期间需要数名擅长英语的小导游。假定你是李华，希望成为其中的一员。请你结合以下表格提示，给该项目的外事负责人王先生写一封英文自荐信。词数80左右。Whatkindofpersonyouarefriendly,active…WhatyouaregoodatspeakEnglish,tellstories…Whatyoucandointroducelocalculture,helpforeigners…注意事项：1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。DearMr.Wang,IamLiHua.Iamgladtoknowthatyouareinneedofsometourguides.

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua2.（2022·四川·统考中考真题）假设你叫李平，你的姐姐李蓉今年七月要去伦敦Linda家住一段时间。请你根据表格信息，用英语给Linda写一封邮件，介绍你姐姐的基本情况。姓名LiRong年龄16外貌中等身高、黑色短发性格随和、外向、友好爱好历史、博物馆、烹饪、打篮球衣着T恤、牛仔裤注意：(1)文中不得出现个人真实