专题08书面表达15篇-2023中考英语逆袭冲刺名校模拟真题特快专递

2023上海中考英语逆袭冲刺名校模拟真题特快专递第一期专题08书面表达15篇一、话题作文1．（2022·上海静安·二模）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Themovingmomentinmylife”（请以“生活中让我感动的瞬间”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）在你的生活中一定有许多令人感动的记忆，请结合自己的个人经历，谈谈发生了哪件事，并具体讲述为何这个瞬间最能触动你的心灵。（注意：1.信中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。）______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：ThemovingmomentinmylifeHereisamovingmomentinmylifethatIwillneverforget.Istillrememberthatwasarainyday.Ifailedanexam,andIfeltveryupset.Whatwasworse,Ididn’tbringanumbrella.Countlessraindropsbeatagainstmybody,whichseemedthattheywerelaughingatme.Suddenly,theraindropsdisappeared.Atfirst,Ithoughttherainfinallystopped.ButwhenIlookedup,Isawabigumbrellaandthesmilingfaceofmydeskmate,Mike.Helookedintomyeyessincerelyandsaid,“Anexamcan’tstandforeverything.Ibelieveyoucangetgoodgradesnexttime.”Hiswordsreallytouchedmyheartandcheeredmeup.Afterthat,Istudiedharderandmadegreatprogress.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。以“Themovingmomentinmylife”为题，介绍生活中让自己感动的事情。2.写作指导：本文时态以一般过去时为主行文；人称以第一人称为主。写作时围绕主题展开适当的叙述，谈谈发生了哪件事，并具体讲述为何这个瞬间最能触动你的心灵。确保语句通顺，逻辑清晰，无单词语法错误。2．（2022·上海闵行·二模）Writeapassageofatleast60wordsonthetopic“________makesnodifference”.（以“……是无济于事的”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）阅读D篇怀特家的故事告诉我们：一旦事情已经发生，责备任何人都无济于事，相反会让被责备的人背负罪恶感。在我们的生活中，总会遇到困难或者发生一些不愉快的事情，这时候谩骂、责备、抱怨、生气、担忧等等都不会起到任何作用。我们应该改变自身，寻求智慧的解决办法。请结合你的经历或见闻，谈谈你的感受。写作前请你先把题目补充完整。注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。抄袭阅读理解语篇的不给分。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：BlamingothersmakesnodifferenceInourlife,therewillalwaysbedifficultiesorunpleasantthings.Blaming,plaining,gettingangry,worryingandsoonwillnotdoanygood.Weshouldchangeourselvesandseekintelligentsolutions.Iusedtoclimbmountainswithmyfriendwhoinsistedongoingtoremoteplaces.Finallywegotlost,andIknewitwasuselesstoblamemyfriend.SoIcalledforhelprightaway.Atlastweweresaved.Ithinkwhensomethingunexpectedhappens,weshouldtrytosolveitinsteadofblamingtheotherperson.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文，首先把题目补全完整。其次根据题目要求结合自己的经历和见闻写一篇短文。2.写作指导：本文在叙述过去的经历时用一般过去时，叙述感受时使用一般现在时。人称以第一人为主。写作时可以从“谩骂、责备、抱怨、生气、担忧”等词中选取一个把题目补充完整，然后围绕主题展开叙述。确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。3．（2022·上海虹口·二模）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Smalltrickstoimprovehappiness”(以“提升幸福感的小妙招”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)3月20日是国际幸福日。快乐、自信、充实、自豪，当你拥有这些感受，你就是一个幸福的人。生活中的一些小妙招可以让我们获得幸福感，请你结合自己或他人的经历和感受描述至少两个提升幸福感的小妙招，并说明一下理由。(注意:1.短文中不得出现任何真实的人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。)_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Thefeelingofhappinessisveryimportant.Wearenolongersatisfiedwithonlyenoughfoodandclothes.Instead,weneedhappiness.NowIwillsharesometipstoincreaseoursenseofhappiness.Thefirstisfriendship.Friendscanshareourfeelingsandhelptomakeushappywhenwearesad.Theycanprovideuswithhelpwhenweareinneed.Theycanalsokeepuspanywhenwearelonely.Thesecondisbeingthankful.Sometimeswecan’tgetwhatwewantandwewillbeunhappy.Butifwefocusonwhatwealreadyhave,andbethankfultoeverythingaroundus,Ibelieveourlifewillbealothappier.Trytomakesomefriendsandbethankfultoeverything.Iamsurewewillbemuchhappier.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文，以“Smalltrickstoimprovehappiness”为题参照所给提示中要点信息进行分析。写作时需选定至少两个提升幸福感的小妙招，并陈述理由。2.写作指导：本文以第一人称为主，时态为一般现在时；写作时注意分段叙述，第一段开门见山，引入话题；第二段介绍小妙招及原因；第三段总结全文；保证文章条理清晰，语句通顺。4．（2022·上海·模拟预测）Writeapassageofatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Thebest________Ihaveevermet”（请以“最美的遇见”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）。一场美丽的相遇是生命的恩赐，是缘分的开始。最美的遇见可以是雨后的彩虹，可以是陪伴的挚友，亦可是成长的鼓励等。请选择一个方面，结合你的经历，谈谈你的感受。注意：1.补全作文题目；2.抄袭试卷中内容不得分；3.文中不得出现任何姓名、校名以及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文：ThebestencouragementIhaveevermetLifeisfullofdifficulties,soweneedtogainencouragementfromothers.OnceImadeaspeechintheschool.Itriedhardtosayouteverywordclearly.Unfortunately,IwassonervousthatIforgotonepartofmyspeech.Iwantedtogiveup.“Youaregreat.”Someoneshouted.Isuddenlybecamepowerfulandpletedthespeechperfectly.Fromthattime,Ihaverealizedthatweneedencouragementfromothers.ThisisthebestencouragementIhaveevermet.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时首先要补全作文题目，然后根据题目要求，叙述自己的亲身经历——遇见的最好的鼓励，并写出自己的感受。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称为主来叙述故事内容，时态采用一般过去时为主。在描述故事时，场景应描写细致，并且故事发生的起因、过程和结果等需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。5．（2022·上海长宁·一模）Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“I’velearnedsomethinghelpfulformyfuturelife”（请以“我学到了对未来生活有用的东西”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)学校生活的目的不仅仅是为了升学，更重要的是学习对未来生活中有用的一种能力本领、一种精神品质、或者是获取一个经验教训。请你以一个具体的事例谈谈你学校生活中这方面的一点收获。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：I’velearnedsomethinghelpfulformyfuturelifeRecently,I’velearnedsomethinghelpfulformyfuturelife.I’vehadachangeinmylife.Itmakesmerealizedthathowimportantitisformetobeconfident.IwaspooratmathandmymathscorewassodisappointingthatIbecamemadatmyself.ButmyteacherMr.LitoldmethatIcouldhavedonemuchbetterifIbelievedinmyself.EverytimeImetwithsomemathproblems,Itoldmyself

“Youshouldbeconfidentandyoucandoit.”Andoutofmyexpectation,Igotan“A”inmymathexamamonthlater.NotuntilthendidIrealizeIhadagiftformath.ThereisnothingthatIcan’tdoifIamconfidentenough.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应根据题目要求讲述自己在学校生活中的收获及自己的感悟。2.写作指导：本文时态以一般过去时为主，人称以第一人称为主，讲述自己在学校生活中的收获及自己的感悟，要叙述完整，条理清晰。6．（2022·上海普陀·一模）Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothepicturesabout“A14thbirthdayceremony”【根据所给的图片，写一篇关于“十四岁生日仪式”的短文，题目可另拟，字数不少于60个词，标点符号不占格】____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：AnunforgettableexperienceLastSunday,wehadour14thbirthdayceremonyintheschoolhall.Thehallwasdecoratedwithballoonsandstreamers.Studentswithuniformsattendedtheceremonyat10:00a.m.First,theheadmastergaveaspeech.Hepraisedthegreatprogresswemade,andgavebestwishestous.Next,theparentrepresentativeappreciatedthemunicationwiththeteenagersandtalkedaboutthehappyfamilytimewithus.Tooursurprise,wereceivedlettersfromourparents,whichwerefilledwithloveandexpectation.Finally,cakeswithwhitehouseandcolorfulchocolatewerepresentedtous.Weenjoyedthecakesandhadagreattime.Whatanunforgettableexperience!【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应根据题目要求及图片显示的信息讲述14岁生日庆典的时间、地点、庆典的具体步骤及自己的感受。2.写作指导：本文时态以一般过去时为主，人称以第一人称为主，讲述庆典的具体内容，要叙述完整，条理清晰。7．（2021·上海杨浦·三模）

Writeatleast60wordsonthegivensituation(根据以下情景写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)Michael

Morpurgo认为当小学老师是他一生最快乐的时光之一。每个人的成长过程中都会有一些快乐时光，或长或短。请以“Thehappiestdaysofmylife”为题，分享你的经历和感受。（注意：1.短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分）2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：

Thehappiestdaysofmylife

Inmyopinion,beingastudentisthehappiestdaysofmylife.IrememberwhenIwasinjuniorhighschool,Ilearnedeverysubjectwell,butmyfavoritesubjectwasEnglish.EverytimeIhadanEnglishclass,theteacheralwaysgivesmethesmalltaskofdistributinghomeworkandtestpapers.EverytimeIdidthesethings,Ifeltveryproud.NotonlyEnglishteachers,butalsootherteacherspaidspecialattentiontomebecauseofmyseriousattitude.

Imissjuniorhighschoollifeverymuchnow,andthanktheteachersfortheirconcern,whichmakesmegrowupinhappiness.【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求以“Thehappiestdaysofmylife”为题，写一篇短文，叙述一下成长过程中的一些快乐时光，分享你的经历和感受。短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息。2.写作指导：文章要求叙述成长过程中的快乐时光，是对过去的叙述，所以时态上以一般过去时为主，人称上以第一人称为主。对过去的叙述，注意动词过去式的变化。最后表达一下自己的感受。二、材料作文8．（2022·上海宝山·二模）Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Sam在学校的英语学习论坛里发了一个帖子寻求帮助，请阅读他的帖子并针对他提出的问题写一份回帖为他提供帮助。Sam,Posted:(2daysago)MyproblemI’mveryworriedabouttheingEnglishoraltest(口语测试).I’mnotgoodatspeakingEnglish.I’venoideaabouthowtopracticeoralEnglish.MyparentsareangrywithmebecauseIhaven’tmademuchprogress.WhatshouldIdo?Canyougivemesomeadvice?YourReplyRe:Sam’sproblem_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________注意:1.文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇内容不得分。Thefollowingisforreferenceonly.(以下表达仅供参考)●bepatient●keeppractising●municatewith___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Don’tloseheart.Confidencewillsolvemanyproblems.TherearesomesolutionstoimproveyouroralEnglish.Firstofall,recitethewordsandbepatient.BecausethesentencesreadinEnglishareposedofwords,youwillbemorefluentwhenyouarefamiliarwiththewords.Secondly,youshouldreadaftertheradioandcultivateyoursenseoflanguage.Keeppracticingsothatyoucanspeakfluently.Finally,youshouldfindmoreclassmatestomunicatewithyouinyourclassroom.Ihopeaboveadvicewillbehelpfultoyou.【详解】1.题干解读：本文需要回复Sam发布的一个帖子，回复原贴中的问题：应该如何提高口语？2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时；主要以第二人称为主展开叙述；短文采用三段式：第一段鼓励对方，引出话题。第二段给出具体的三个提高口语建议；最后一段总结全文。在写作时要做到无标点符号和语法错误。9．（2022·上海·模拟预测）Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothegiveninformation（根据以下材料，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）Pleasepletethetopic“The________Iwillneverforget”andwriteatleast60wordsonyourtopics.（请补全题目并以此为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）.提示：生活中总有一些令人难忘的东西，或是一个给你帮助的人；或是一个意义非凡的日子或是一部令人深思的电影……请你搜索记忆的宝库，分享一段令人难忘的片段。注意：短文中不得出现任何人名，校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文TheEnglishspeechcontestIwillneverforgetDuringmymiddleschoolstudy,Ihavetakenpartinmanymatches,butIneverforgetanEnglishspeechcontest.WhentheteachertoldustherewasanEnglishspeechcontest,Ididn’tthinkmuchofit.Manyexcellentstudentswereinourclass.Besidesme,severalstudentsputuptheirhandstoshowtheirinterestinthecontest.Luckily,theEnglishteacheraskedmetotakeit.Iwasworriedaboutitverymuch.Iwaseagertogetit,butIwasafraidtofail.WiththehelpofmyEnglishteacherandmorethanaweek’shardwork,Iwonthefirstinourschool.AfterthatIworkedharder.IthinkIcansucceedifItrymybesttodoit.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.Doyouthinkso?【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇命题作文，首先把标题补充完成，本文题目“我永远不会忘记的英语演讲比赛”，根据所给提示，分享一段令人难忘的片段。要求要点覆盖全面，可适当扩充。2.

写作指导：本文用到的一般过去时态，人称用第一人称。写作时，注意承接上文，写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，注意在表达不同观点时，连词的使用。内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。10．（2022·上海·模拟预测）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“‘DoubleReductionPolicy’affectsme”.（以“‘双减政策’影响我”为题，写一篇至少60个单词的短文，标点符号不占格。）全国义务教育阶段都在实施“双减政策”。“政策”实施后，校内课后服务全面覆盖，学生作业有限定，周末培训机构不再提供服务。学生有了更多自主学习和享受家庭生活的时间了。对你而言，“双减政策”给你带来了哪些影响呢？你是如何看待这些影响的呢？以下短语供选用：putintoeffect实施

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serviceafterclass课后服务（注意：短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）文章首句“Since‘DoubleReductionPolicy’wasputintoeffect,somethinghaschangedinmylife.”已给，这些文字不计入文章字数。“DoubleReductionPolicy”affectsmeSince“DoubleReductionPolicy”wasputintoeffect,somethinghaschangedinmylife.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文“DoubleReductionPolicy”affectsmeSince“DoubleReductionPolicy”wasputintoeffect,somethinghaschangedinmylife.Thepolicybenefitsmealot.Afterthepolicy,serviceafterclassisfullycovered,theteacherscangiveindividualhelptothestudentswhoarepoorinstudy.Myhomeworkislimited,andweekendtraininginstitutionsnolongerprovideservices.Ihavemoretimetostudybymyselfandenjoymyfamilylife.Icanlearntodrawandplaywithmyfriends.Ithinktheseeffectsareveryusefultomystudyandlife.【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求以“‘双减政策’影响我”为题写一篇短文，介绍“双减政策”对“我”的影响。注意写作时要点要齐全，同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一、三人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时；文章开头已给出，写作时，注意承接上文，根据要点提示具体介绍“双减政策”给“我”带来的影响以及“我”对这些影响的看法；文中一定要包含题干中列出的所有要点，可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩；注意单词书写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文注意连接的流畅度，以及逻辑合理。三、电子邮件11．（2022·上海·模拟预测）假如你是李雷，今天你们班针对学校本周末开展的“无作业日”活动进行了讨论。你的外校好友张鹏对此很感兴趣。请你根据以下信息，给他写一封电子邮件，告诉他讨论的情况，并说说你的计划及理由。写作要点：1.讨论主题：如何让“无作业日”过得有意义。2.同学们的周末计划：（1）韩梅进行户外活动（2）魏军参加志愿者活动（3）我看喜欢的电影3.谈一谈你喜欢看电影的理由。写作要求:1.不得使用真实姓名、地点和班级、学校名。2.适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。4.至少80词。DearZhangPeng,I’mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutourdiscussiontoday.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yours,LiLei【答案】例文DearZhangPeng,I’mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutourdiscussiontoday.ThisweekendisHomeworkfreeDay.Myclassmateshadadiscussionabouthowtomaketheweekendmeaningful.Theyhavedifferentplans.HanMeiwilldooutdooractivities.Shewilltakeatripandhaveavolleyballmatch.WeiJunwillhaveavolunteertimeinChildren'sHome,hethinksitisinteresting.Ilikewatchingactionmovies.BecauseIthinkitisrelaxingandamazing.SoIwillgotothecinema.What’syourplan?Canyoutellme?Bestwishes!Yours,LiLei【详解】1.题干解读：题目是一篇邮件作文。要求以李雷身份给张鹏写一封电子邮件，介绍一下自己班就如何让“无作业日”过得有意义展开讨论的情况，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一、三人称来写，时态以一般将来时为主。应包括所提供的信息，把同学们的计划叙述完整，注意主谓一致问题，语句通顺。四、书信作文12．（2022·上海浦东新·模拟预测）Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation(假定你是Tony，根据以下情境续写这一封信，不少于60词，标点符号不占格)注意：1.文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。Note:entireadj.全部的，整个的DearEditor,IhavelivedinJacksonmyentirelife.IgotoLakeSchool.Iaminsecondgrade.IamwritingthisletterbecauseIdonotagreewithyourarticle.YouwroteaboutthenewshoppingmallthatwillbebuiltonFirstStreet.Ithinkitisexcitingtohavenewthingstodohere.IjustwishourcitydidnotdecidetogetridofHardyPark.Whyshouldweloseaparktogetamall?__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：DearEditor,IhavelivedinJacksonmyentirelife.IgotoLakeSchool.Iaminsecondgrade.IamwritingthisletterbecauseIdonotagreewithyourarticle.YouwroteaboutthenewshoppingmallthatwillbebuiltonFirstStreet.Ithinkitisexcitingtohavenewthingstodohere.IjustwishourcitydidnotdecidetogetridofHardyPark.Whyshouldweloseaparktogetamall?Nowpeopleareundermoreandmorepressurefromworkandstudy.Weneedaplacetorelax.Ithinkthisparkisthebestplacetorelax.Wecanseemanypeopleintheparkeveryday.Someoldpeopleexerciseinthepark,andchildrenflykitesinthepark.Therearealsomanypeopletalkinghappilywiththeirfriends.Iftheparkbeesashoppingcenter,therewillbenosuitableplaceforustorelax.SoIinsistonmyviewthattheparkcannotbegivenup.Nowthetransportationisveryconvenient.Peoplecantakethesubwayorcartogotoafarplacewhenshopping.Ithinkthisisabettersolution.That’sall.Thankyou!Tony.【详解】1.

题干解读：题目要求根据信件中的提示要点，介绍不同意公园变购物公园的理由以及建议，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。2.

写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，本文应该用第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时，提出建议可以多用情态动词；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。13．（2022·上海宝山·二模）Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothesituationgiven.(请根据所给情境，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。标点符号不占格。)假如你是李华，你的朋友小强最近在学习时注意力难以集中，学习效果不佳，感觉压力很大。请你给他写一封信对他表示关心，结合自身或他人的经历谈谈你对压力的看法，并给他提供一些缓解学习压力的方法，帮助他放松身心、提高学习效率。注意：1.文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇内容不得分。Thefollowingisforreferenceonly.(以下表达仅供参考)☺understress☺takeanactivepartin…☺trytorelaxandenjoy…DearXiaoQiang,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearXiaoQiang,Iamsorrytohearthatyouhavedifficultyconcentra