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短文。AMOTHER'SDAY

SURPRISEThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtof

the

surprisetheywereplanning

for

Mother's

Day.How

pleased

and

proud

Mother

would

be

when

theybrought

her

breakfast

in

bed.They

planned

to

make

French

toast

and

chickenporridge.They

had

watched

their

mother

in

the

kitchen.There

was

nothing

to

it.

JennaandJeff

knewexactlywhatto

do.The

big

day

came

at

last.The

alarm

rang

at

6

pair

went

down

thestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboil

the

porridge

first.They

put

somerice

into

a

pot

ofwater

and

left

it

to

boil

while

they

made

the

French

toast.Jeffbroketwocggsintoaplateandaddedin

somemilk.Jenna

found

thebread

andputtwo

slices

into

the

egg

mixture.Next,Jeff

turned

on

the

second

stove

burner

toheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeff

startedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewthe

burnt

piece

into

the

sink

and

put

in

the

other

slice

of

bread.This

time,she

turneddownthefire

soit

cookednicely.Then

Jeffnoticed

steam

shooting

out

ofthepot

and

the

lid

starting

to

shake.The

next

minute,the

porridge

boiled

over

and

put

out

the

fire.Jenna

panicked.Thankfully,Jeff

stayed

calm

and

turned

offthe

gas

quickly.But

the

stove

was

amessnow.JennatoldJeff

tocleanitup

sothey

could

continue

to

cook

the

rest

ofthe

porridge.But

Jeff's

hand

touched

the

hot

burner

and

he

gave

a

cry

ofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthe

smellof

burning.Ohdear!Thepieceof

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the

twins

looked

around

them

in

disappointment,their

fatherappeared.

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灵机一动◆关键人/物年份主题体裁出处2016.10吵架出走迷路记叙文浙江高考2017.6旅行途中遇狼2017.11健忘妈妈趣事2018.6度假骑马迷路2020.1抚平狗狗心伤2020.7拍照意外遇险2020.7爱心帮助他人山东高考2021.1少女南瓜卡头浙江高考2021.6母亲节给妈妈准备早餐新高考卷【2016浙江

·

吵架出走迷路】Oneweekend

inJuly,Janeand

herhusband,Tom,haddriventhree

hoursto

campovernight

by

a

lake

in

the

forest.Unfortunately,ontheway,anunpleasantsubjectcameup

andthey

started

to

quarrel.By

the

time

they

reached

the

lake,Jane

wassoangrythatshesaidtoTom,"I'mgoing

tofind

a

better

spotfor

us

to

camp"and

walked

away.With

no

pathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershe

had

climbedto

a

high

place,she

turned

around,

hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesaw

nothing

but

forest

and,far

beyond,a

snow-capped

mountaintop.She

suddenlyrealizedthatshewas

lost.“Tom!"she

cried."Help!”No

reply.Ifonlyshe

had

not

left

hermobile

phone

inthat

bagwithTom.Jane

kept

moving,butthefarthershewalked,the

moreconfusedshe

became,As

nightwas

beginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshe

had

to

stopfor

the

night.Lying

awake

in

thedark,Janewantedvery

muchto

bewithTomand

herfamily.Shewantedto

hold

himand

tell

him

how

much

she

loved

him.Jane

roseatthe

breakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecould

hearwatertricklingsomewhere

at

a

distance.Quickly

she

followedthesoundtoastream.To

hergreatjoy,shealsosawsome

berry

bushes.She

drank

and

ate

afew

berries.Neverin

herlife

hadshetastedanything

better.Feelingstronger

now,Jane

began

towalk

along

the

stream

and

hope

it

would

lead

hertothe

lake.Asshe

picked

herwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janeheard

a

helicopter

Isthatforme?Unfortunately,the

trees

made

it

impossibleforpeopletosee

herfromabove.Afew

minuteslater,another

helicopterflew

overhead.Janetook

off

her

yellow

blouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaand

flag

them

ifthey

came

back

again.But

no

helicopters

came

and

it

was

getting

dark

again.ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.反应：情感线told

herthat尝试：自我鼓励way.尝试：危机暂缓omorrow

is反应：情感线per

company.

衔接But

no

helicopters

came

andi①Awaveofterrorsweptoverhe②Her

heartpounding

fiercelyandshe

hadtofindasate

place.③Tired

and

terrified

as

she

was,④Luckily,itdidn'ttake

long

befo⑤Sighingwithrelief,shefeltaganother

day.”⑥With

that,

shewent

tosleep,

inm反应——尝试——转折——解决ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewoke

up.①Hungry

and

disappointed,

she

,

at

a

losswhatto

do.②Itsuddenlydawnedon

herth

first.③Havinggobblingdownsomebf.④

After

what

seemeda

century,⑤Herfacebrightened

up.⑥Meanwhile,

ahelicopterwas⑦Upon

its

landing,

out

dashed

tly,tearsv.冲welling

up

in

their

heart.口反应：情感线口转折：灵机一动口转折：关键事物口反应：情感线口转折：关键事物口解决!⑧Itwasatthemomentthattheydecidednottoquarrel

any

more

but

learned口点睛收尾反应→尝试→转折→解决to

compromise.v.要协v.争吵【2017浙江

·旅行途中遇狼】On

a

bright,warm

July

afternoon,Mac

Hollan,a

primary

school

teacher,was

cycling

from

his

home

to

Alaska

withhis

friends.One

of

his

friends

had

stopped

to

make

a

bicycle

repair,but

they

had

encouraged

Mac

to

carry

on,and

they

would

catch

up

with

him

soon.As

Mac

pedaled(

骑行

)

along

alone,he

thought

fondly

of

his

wife

and

two

young

daughters

at

home.

He

hoped

to

show

them

this

beautiful

place

someday.Then

Mac

heard

quick

and

loud

breathing

behind

him."Man,that's

a

big

dog!"he

thought.But

when

he

looked

to

the

side,

he

saw

instantly

that

it

wasn't

a

dog

at

all,but

a

wolf,quickly

catching

up

with

him.Mac's

heartjumped.He

found

out

his

can

of

bear

spray.With

one

hand

on

the

bars,he

fired

the

spray

at

the

wolf.A

bright

red

cloud

enveloped

the

animal,and

to

Mac's

relief,it

fell

back,shaking

its

head.But

a

minute

later,it

was

by

his

side

again.Then

it

attacked

the

back

of

Mac's

bike,tearing

open

his

tent

bag.He

fired

at

the

wolf

a

second

time,and

again,it

fell

back

only

to

quickly

restart

the

chase.Macwas

pedaling

hard

now.Hewaved

andyelled

at

passing

cars

butwas

careful

not

to

slowdown.He

saw

a

steepuphill

limb

before

him.He

knew

that

once

he

hit

the

hill,he'd

be

easy

caught

up

and

the

wolf's

teeth

would

be

tearing

into

his

flesh.At

this

moment,Paul

and

Becky

were

driving

their

car

on

their

way

to

Alaska.They

didn't

think

much

of

it

when

they

saw

two

cyclists

repairing

their

bikes

on

the

side

of

the

road.A

bit

later,they

spotted

what

they,too,assumed

was

a

dog

running

alongside

a

man

on

a

bike.As

they

got

closer,they

realized

that

the

dog

was

a

wolf.Mac

heard

a

large

vehicle

behind

him.He

pulled

in

front

of

it

as

thewolfwas

catching

up

fast,just

a

dozen

yards

away

now.Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontof

him.Afew

minutes

later,the

othertwo

cyclists

arrived.①Seeingthecarstop,N

thedoorofthe

car.②Sofrightenedwas

he"thewolf,please

let

me③Seeingthe

wolfrunnihesitation,pullingMac④Threemenin

the

carstandingthere,

thinkinghowtofightbackthewolf.口衔

接口

反

应：Mac动作线口尝试：上车求援口反应：情感线口

反

应

：Paul

动作线口

尝试：危机暂缓口

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接反应→尝试→转折→解决Thecarabruptly

ste

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口转机：关键人物

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bythrowing口转机：灵机一动gsidethe

meat.口解决!口

自然结尾togo

vacnhome

mrtase

uieywound

run

intothe②Being

aware

of

the

wolfs

crtostaywheretheywereand

a③Suddenly,

oneofthecyclist④Agood

ideaoccurredto

hin

theirbeefand

porkaway.⑤Smelling

the

flavor

of

the

m⑥The

two

cyclists

u-turned

in(

⑦

What

comforted

the

two

cy⑧“Thank

youfor

stopping

to(⑨Mac

and

his

two

friends

decucowolf

again.①Abouta

hundred

metersawhat

had

口

衔

接happenedtotheir

friend.Afew

minutes

later,theothertwocyclistsarrived.续写内容拆解好故事来源于好结构!反应：情感线动作线自身外在尝试：暂缓/失败衔接：第二段首句反应衔接转折/机解决!点睛收尾Para2-Para

1-解决问题第一步

：拆解问题

!原则：Don'ttell!Showme!口Iwasso

scared!我害怕口Awaveof

terrorsweptoverher.Herheart

poundingfiercelyandherpalmsweating,aninnervoicetold

herthat

shehadtofind

a

safe

place.读后续写万能反应之情绪