Unit1TeenageLifeReadingforWriting(课件)高一英语高效课堂(人教版2019)

Learningobjectives

◉1.Toanalyzethestructureandlanguagefeaturesofaletterofadvice.◉2.Tolearnhowtowriteandpolishtheletterofadvice.◉3.Toobtainsomeusefulwordsandexpressionsofgivingadvice.Lead-inIfyouwanttowritealetterofadvicetoher,howwouldyouwriteit?DearSusanLuo，Ihaveaproblem.MybestfriendChenLeibecomeagameloverrecently.Heisinterestedincomputergames.Everyweekend,whenIaskhimtogoforawalkoutdoors,healwaysrejectedmeastostayathometoplaycomputergames.Sometimes,Ithinkhemayevenforgettohavemealsorsleepinordertostayonlinealldaylong.WhatshouldIdotohelphimgetoutofthesituation?I’mveryconcernedabouthim.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Thankyouinadvance.Yourssincerely,StevenInternetaddictionReadforWritingObservetheformatofthisletterDateGreetingBodyCloseSignatureReadforWritingContentanalysisFindandmarkthepartsoftheletterthatmatchthefollowingpoints.A.Iknowwhattheproblemis. B.Iunderstandhowyoufeel.C.Thisismyadviceandreason(s). D.Ithinkmyadvicewillhelp.ReadforWriting

Markthebodypartsoftheletterthatmatchthefollowingpoints.A.Iknowwhattheproblemis. B.Iunderstandhowyoufeel.C.Thisismyadviceandreason(s). D.Ithinkmyadvicewillhelp.ReadforWritingContentanalysis__________Whohasaproblem?Whogivesadvice?__________ChenLeiInternetAddictionSusanLuotalktoyourfriendtrynewhobbiesdiscusstheproblemtogetherProblemAdviceWhat’stheproblem?What`stheadvice?1._________________2._________________3.______________________________________________ReadforWritingStructureanalysisWhat'sthefunctionofthefirstparagraph?ReadforWritingStructureanalysisFunction:introducethebackgroundinformationtoleadreaderstothenextpartsmoothlyBackgroundReadforWritingStructureanalysisTherefore,asanadviser,I'mwritingtogivemysuggestions.WritingpurposeReadforWritingStructureanalysisYoursuggestionsandreasonsReadforWritingWritingstructureReadforWritingWritingtechniquesWhydoesSusanrepeattheproblematthebeginningoftheletter?ReadforWritingWritingtechniquesWhydoesSusanrepeattheproblematthebeginningoftheletter?Shehasreadthelettercarefully.Sheknowswhattheproblemis.Shetreatsyourproblemseriously.Totellhimthat:

_________Emotionalresonance(情感共鸣)ReadforWritingWritingtechniquesWhat’sthefunctionoftheunderlinedwords?ReadforWritingWritingtechniquesWeusethecoloredexpressionsto________Tip:Usesomemodifiers（修饰语）toexpressyourmeaningsexactly.Toemphasizethatwecanmakesenseofwhatyouaresaying.ReadforWritingWritingtechniquesWhat’sthewritingpurposeoftheunderlinedsentence?ReadforWritingWritingtechniquesWeusetheunderlinedexpressionstotellreadersthat________Itisunderstandableforteenagerstobehavelikethat.Howtomakeyoursuggestionssoundlogicalandorganized?GivereasonstoexplainOrganizetheminorderReadforWritingLanguageBeginingBodyEnding★I’msorrytoknowthat...★Knowing/Learningthat...★Iunderstandquitewellthat...★Irecommendthat...★Itmightbeagoodideato...★IfIwereyou,Iwould...★Itwouldbebetterifyoucould....★Ithinkyouaresupposedtodo...★Ibelievethatifyoufollowmyadvice,you'll...★Idohopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.ReadforWritingWritingpracticeUsewhatyouhavelearnttowritealetterofadvicetooneoftheteenagersbelow.generationgap(代沟)withparentsIlikeagirlinmyclassbutIamtooshytotalktoher.greatpressurefromheavyschoolworkconflicts（矛盾）betweenfriends/classmateshighexpectations（期待）fromparentsandteachersfeelinglonelyandisolated（孤立的）ReadforWritingWritingpracticeWorkingroups.Listpossiblesuggestionsandreasons.StudentsuggestionsReasons/Results/ExamplesABCConnectwithyourparentsonlineJustbecausetheyarefaraway,itdoesn’tmeanthatyoucan’ttalktothemReadforWritingWritingpracticeWorkingroups.Listpossiblesuggestionsandreasons.1.遇到挑战_______________________________2.做某事有困难_________________________3.询问我关于...的建议______________________________4.建议如下_______________________________________5.给某人提一些建议________________________________________6.听从某人的建议_______________________7.得到改善________________________8.很有用_____________________________9.最有效(做sth.)的方法_____________________________________________10.发现我的建议有益处______________________________________befacedwithchallengehavedifficultyindoingsth.askmeforadviceon...Mysuggestionsareasfollowsshare/offer/giveyousometipsfollowmyadviceimprovealotbeofgreatuse=veryusefulthemosteffectiveway(todosth...)findmysuggestionsbeneficialReadforWritingProcedureHowtowritealetterofadvice?Analyse(审题)structurelanguagecontentoutlinedraftpolishReadforWritingWritingpracticePossibleversionDearXuTing,Youareworriedthatyoufeelveryterribleaboutbeinglonely.Iunderstandhowyoufeelbecauseyoudon'tstaytogetherwithyourparentswhoareworkinginanothercity.Tobehonest,Ithinkmaybeyoushouldjoinafter-schoolactivitiesbecausetherearealotofchildrenlikeyou.Ofcourse,duringtheperiodyoucanfocusondiscussinganythingwiththemevenplayingsomegames.Ifyoustillfeellonely,personallyyououghttoarrangesomestudytasksforyourselfandconcentrateonit.Whynotmakeupforyourcoursesandyouwon'tfeellonely.I'msureyouwillbeattractedtoyourstudyhere.Youshouldberesponsibleforyourself.Bestwi