专题07读后续写环境多样性教师版

课前检测赏析下列两个语段，并划出环境描写的句子，感悟环境描写的作用。IenjoyedmymealasIwatchedthesun'sdescentinacloudlesssky.Itwasarelaxingmoment.Thevaultoftheworldwasmagnificentlytinted.Thestarswereeagertoparticipate;hardlyhadtheblanketofcolourbeenpulledalittlethantheystartedtoshinethroughthedeepblue.Thewindblewwithafaint,warmbreezeandtheseamovedaboutkindly,thewaterpeakingandroughinglikepeopledancinginacirclewhoetogetherandraisetheirhandsandmoveapartandetogetheragain,overandover.教师版：段落翻译：我一边看着太阳从万里无云的天空落下，一边享受着晚餐。这是放松的时刻。世界的穹顶染上了绚丽的色彩。星星也迫不及待地想要参加进来；彩色的毯子刚刚拉开，它们便开始在深蓝色的天幕上闪耀起来。微风懒洋洋地温暖地吹拂着，大海惬意地起伏着，海浪升起来又落下去，像围成圆圈跳舞的人一起跑到圈子中间，举起手臂，又跑开来，然后又跑到一起，一次又一次。作用：此处环境描写主要围绕夜晚的天空，包括天空是深蓝色的幕布，懒洋洋的微风吹拂，都能衬托出“我”内心的舒畅自在，满心欢喜地欣赏着充满魅力的星空夜景。Theweatherwaschangingrapidly.Thesea,soimmense,sobreathtakinglyimmense,wassettlingintoasmoothandsteadymotion,withthewavesatheel;thewindwassofteningtoatunefulbreeze;fluffy,radiantlywhitecloudswerebeginningtolightupinavastfathomlessdomeofdelicatepaleblue.ItwasthedawnofabeautifuldayinthePacificOcean.Myshirtwasalreadybeginningtodry.Thenighthadvanishedasquicklyastheship.教师版：天气的变化非常迅速。如此广阔，广阔得令人惊讶的大海，渐渐平静了下来，海浪紧跟在后；风变得柔和，成了悦耳的微风；在无边无际的淡蓝色穹顶上，蓬松的白得耀眼的云朵开始被阳光照亮。这是平洋上美丽的一天的黎明。我的衬衫已经开始干了。夜晚就像船一样迅速消失了。作用：此处描写了黎明之后的海上场景，广阔无垠的大海平静了，风也柔和了，相对来说可能比较可怕的夜晚过去了，体现出主人公终于可以稍微缓解下的放松。（如果了解少年派的奇幻漂流，应该知道他晚上在海上会经历狂风巨浪各种风险。）

课中讲解SectionOneObjectiveEnvironment环境描写的总体要求：有声，有色，有质感，有味道环境描写的作用：烘托氛围，表现人物心情ElementOneWind1.Agustofwindblewandpartedthedroopingbranchesoftheweepingwillowlikeacurtain.一阵风吹，吹起了弯柳的低垂枝条，就像卷起的窗帘。2.Thewind,softandcold,clickedthroughtreebranchesandstirredthebushesthatsprinkledtheslope.风，轻柔却寒冷，轻点着树枝，搅动着斜坡下的灌木丛。3.Acoolbreezeblewthroughthequietpark.凉爽的微风吹拂着寂静的公园。4.Acoldbreezewaftedthroughmyhair.凉爽的微风吹拂过我的头发5.Thewindwasperfectforkiteflying,blowingjusthardenoughtogivesomelift.今日正是放风筝的好天气，强劲的风力带动了风筝的上升。6.Thestormisatitsheight.暴风雨正盛。7.Thedaywasbright,withafreshbreezeblowing.天气明媚，新鲜的微风拂来。8.Therewasabreathofspringinthegentlewind.在温柔的风中，有一丝春意。9.Thewindwasdeadagainstus.风往死里吹着我们。10.Asoftwindkissesthetreetops.柔软的风亲吻树梢。11.Theeastwindistheprevailingwindinspring.东风是春天的盛行风。12.Thereishardlyabreathofair.几乎没有一丝风。13.Theneedlecoldwindpiercedhisface.像针一样冰冷的风刺痛他的脸。14.Theicywindblewthroughhislayersofclothes.冰冷的风穿透了他的层层衣衫。15.Thewindhadrisenfromitsuncertainpuffsintoasteadyblow.忽大忽小的风开始猛烈地吹。16.Shiftsinthewindchangedthedirectionoftherainsothatpartsofmethatwerebeginningtofeelwarmweresoakedanew.风向的改变也改变了雨的方向，因此我身体上刚开始感到温暖的部分又被重新淋湿了。17.Thewindblewwithafaint,warmbreeze微风懒洋洋地温暖地吹拂着。18.Thewindhowledallnight,butIsleptalittle.

风整夜呼啸着，但我还是睡了一会儿。19.From

the

farnorth

they

heard

a

low

wail

of

the

wind.他们从老北方，听到一种风的低低的哀叫声。20.The

wind

roar,

scooped

upthe

wheezing

frozen

soil,

despite

theold

news.

虽然这是常有的事，但是怒风咆哮，搅起冰封的泥土。风的多样表达e.g.storm______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：agustofwind,wind,breeze,storm,breath,shift,puff描写风的多样表达：e.g.blow／softandcold____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：动词：part,click,stir,waft,pierce,howl，wail，roar形容词：fresh,gentle,dead,prevailing,needlecold,icy,steady,warm,faint介词短语：atitsheight过关检测翻译1.一阵风拂过面旁，把她的头发吹到两边。___________________________________________________________________________________________2.一阵微风，或者也许是一只动物，让一根树枝摇动起来。___________________________________________________________________________________________3.风变得柔和，成了悦耳的微风。（tuneful）___________________________________________________________________________________________4.冰冷的北风刺透了我的衬衫。___________________________________________________________________________________________5.一阵微风吹过树林，发出萧瑟声响。（moan）___________________________________________________________________________________________答案：1.Agustofwindwaftedhisface,partingherhairtosides.2.Abreeze,orperhapsitwasananimal,hadshakenabranch.3.Thewindwassofteningtoabreeze.4.Needlecold/icywindpiecedmyshirt.5.A

faint

wind

moaned

through

thetrees,

ElementTwoSea&Water1.Atonepoint,thefaintsoundofwatertumblingthroughthevalley.在某处，潺潺的的水声在山谷中奏响。2.Thewaterwasdeepblueandsunlightglitteredonitslookingglassclearsurface.水是深蓝色的，阳光在透明的玻璃表面闪闪发光。3.Alittlewayoffwasasmallbrook,rushingandsparklingalongbetweengreenbank.离此不远,有一条小溪，在绿色的河岸间奔腾闪耀。4.Itmurmuredinasoftvoicelikealittleinnocentgirlwhisperedtoherlovingmother.似乎它在温柔低语，就一位天真少女对着她那慈爱的母亲细细私语。5.Thingsfloatedinthewaterbutnonethatbroughtmehope.很多东西浮在水上,但是没有一样带给我希望。6.Theseamovedaboutkindly,thewaterpeakingandtroughinglikepeopledancinginacirclewhoetogetherandraisetheirhandsandmoveapartandetogetheragain,overandover.大海惬意地起伏着，海浪升起来又落下去，像围成圆圈跳舞的人一起跑到圈子中间，举起手臂，又跑开来，然后又跑到一起，一次又一次。8.Thesearoaredlikeatiger.Theseawhisperedinyourearlikeafriendtellingyousecrets.Theseaclinkedlikesmallchangeinapocket.Theseathunderedlikeavalanches.Theseahissedlikesandpaperworkingonwood.Theseasoundedlikesomeonevomiting.Theseawasdeadsilent.大海像老虎一样咆哮。大海在你耳边轻声低语，像一个朋友在告诉你秘密。大海像口袋里的硬币一样丁当作响。大海发出雪崩一般的轰隆声。大海发出像砂纸打磨木头一般的沙沙声。大海的声音仿佛有人在呕吐。大海死一般沉寂。9.Waveswerereachingup,andtheirwhitefoam,caughtbythewind,wasbeingwhippedagainstthesideoftheship.海浪涌来，白色的泡沫被风卷起来，吹打着船侧。10.Itwassurgingfrombelowlikeariotouscrowd,raging,frothingandboiling.水像喧闹的人群一样从下面涌上来，汹涌着，翻滚着，冒着泡泡。11.Stairsvanishedintowaterydarkness.楼梯消失在了黑暗的水中。12.Thesea,soimmense,sobreathtakinglyimmense,wassettlingintoasmoothandsteadymotion,withthewavesatheel.海洋如此广阔，广阔得令人惊讶的大海，渐渐平静了下来，海浪紧跟在后。13.Thewaterwascoveredwithalayerofmist.水上笼罩了一层水雾。水的多样表达e.g.sea______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：brook，wave，water描写水的多样表达：e.g.tumble/faintsoundofwater_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：动作：tumble翻滚;rush，sparkle，murmur，float，roar,whisper,clink,thunder,hiss,reachup,glitter听觉：deadsilent,faintsoundofwater，murmurofrunningwater视觉：deepblue／glassclearsurface／glittering／immerse／waterydarkness过关检测翻译1.钢琴音乐与小溪的潺潺流水混合在一起。___________________________________________________________________________________________2.水呈深蓝色，上面没有任何东西漂浮。___________________________________________________________________________________________3.瀑布在岩石上撞击翻滚。___________________________________________________________________________________________4.海湾在阳光下闪闪发光。___________________________________________________________________________________________5.海浪拍击礁石的轰隆声似乎要把其他的思绪都淹没。（blankout）___________________________________________________________________________________________答案：1.Thepianomusicmixeswiththemurmurofthebrook.

2.Thewaterwasdeepblueandtherewasnothingfloating.3.Waterfallscrashandtumbleoverrocks.

4.Thebayglitteredinthesunshine.

5.Thethunderoftheseaontherocksseemedtoblankoutotherthoughts.

ElementThreeSky1.Theskywasacurdledgrayburdenedwithlumpsofclouds.天空是浓浓的灰色，伴着拥挤的朵朵云。2.Blueskiesstoodtallandfar.蓝蓝的天空高高耸立3.Acorneroftheskychangedcolours.天空的一角改变了颜色。4.Thedaybroke,humidandovercast,withthewindwarmandtheskyadenseblanketofgreycloudsthatlookedlikebunchedup,dirtycottonsheets.天亮了，空气潮湿，阴云密布，风是暖的，天空像一块乌云织成的厚密的毯子，而乌云就像堆成团的肮脏的棉被单。5.Theskyclearedandthewavesseemedtofleewiththeclouds.天气变得晴朗，海浪似乎和乌云一起逃走了。6.Theskywaspletelycloudless,ofabluequiteshatteringtothesenses.天空万里无云，蓝得令人的感官都感到震惊。7.Theskywasaheavy,suffocatingblanketofgreycloud,butwithoutpromiseofrain.天空是一块灰色云层组成的令人窒息的厚重的毯子,却不像要下雨。8.Theskywasthinlyovercast.天空有一层薄薄的云。9.Buttheskywasblue,theairwaswarm,andtheseawasregularinitsmotion.但是天空碧蓝，空气温暖，大海有规律地起伏着。10.Theskywassoblack,daylookedlikenight.天那么暗，白天就像黑夜。11.Theseawasheavy,theskygrey.大海波涛汹涌，天空阴沉灰暗。12.Aplumeofsmokerosetothesky.一缕烟升到天空。13.Itseemstobeclearingup.似乎要放晴了。13.Itwasovercastingforrain.天要下雨了。14.Theskyisovercastwithdarkclouds.天空布满乌云。15.Theskywasadensityofdarkandblusteryraincloudsthatpassedbywithoutdeliveringrain.天空密布着黑色的汹涌翻卷的雨云，云过去了，却没有下雨。16.Theskywasafeaturelessmilkyhaze.天空是没有轮廓的乳白色的一片混沌。17.Theskywasamereblocktoallowavisualeffectonthehorizon:sunlightfloodingtheocean,theverticaledgesbetweenlightandshadowperfectlydistinct.天空只是地平线上表现视觉效果的一大块屏幕：阳光倾泻在洋面上，光与影之间垂直的边缘异常清晰。18.Theskywasadistantblackcurtainoffallingrain.天空是远处黑色的雨帘。19.Theskywasblackandspittingrainonmysmilingface.天空是黑色的，在把雨啐到我微笑的脸上。20.Theskywasnothingbutfallingwater,aceaselessdelugethatwrinkledandbloatedmyskinandfrozemestiff.天空就是落下的水，是无休无止的汹涌的洪水,让我的皮肤变皱肿起，将我的身体冻僵。描写天空的多样表达：e.g.beburdenedwithlumpsofclouds____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：晴朗：blue,tallandfar,cloudless，ofabluequiteshatteringtothesenses，clear，clearup,阴天：curdledgray，adenseblanketofgreyclouds；heavy,suffocatingblanketofgreycloud；black，grey有云：beburdenedwithlumpsofclouds；bethinlyovercast，beovercastwithdarkclouds天空中的事物：aplumeofsmoke，mist,kite,cloud,sun,moon,rain过关检测翻译1.天空放晴，高高耸立。___________________________________________________________________________________________2.天空湛蓝，蓝的令人的感官都感到震惊。___________________________________________________________________________________________3.天很暗，马上就要下雨了。___________________________________________________________________________________________4.天空布满乌云，组成了令人窒息的厚毯子。___________________________________________________________________________________________5.一缕烟缓缓升到天空。___________________________________________________________________________________________答案：1.Theskyclearedup,standingtallandfar.2.Theskywasblue,ofabluequiteshatteringtothesenses.3.Theskywasgray,andwasovercastingforrain.4.Theskywasovercastwithdarkclouds/burdenedwithlumpsofclouds,formingaheavy,suffocatingblanketofgrey.5.Aplumeofsmokesteadily／graduallyrosetothesky.ElementFourCloud1.Thedaywaslikethepreviousone,warmandovercast,thecloudslow,thebreezelight.这一天就像前一天一样，空气温暖，阴云密布，云很低，风很轻。2.Darknesscame.Therewasnomoon.Cloudshidthestars.夜幕降临了。没有月亮。云层遮住了星星。3.Ilookedupatthesky.Thecloudcoverhadvanished.我抬头看了看天。遮住天空的云层已经消失了。4.Theskywasinvadedbygreatwhiteclouds,flatonthebottombutroundandbillowyontop.天空被大片的白云占据了，云的底部是平的，顶部却是圆的，仿佛巨浪一般。5.Thecloudslookedasiftheywerestumblingalongbeforethewind,frightened.云仿佛受了惊吓，在风前面跌跌撞撞地跑。6.Fluffy,radiantlywhitecloudswerebeginningtolightupinavastfathomlessdomeofdelicatepaleblue.在无边无际的淡蓝色穹顶上，蓬松的白得耀眼的云朵开始被阳光照亮。7.Whilethestormcloudsgatherfaracrossthesea…暴风雨的乌云聚集在海洋远处。8.Greyishblackcloudscoveredthesky.灰色的乌云笼罩着天空。9.Everynowandthen,fleecycloudsfloatedacrossthesky.天空不时飘过多多毛茸茸的白云。10.Theblackcloudconcentratedintoadensemass.乌云聚集成稠密的一团11.Thecloudsarepaleandalightbreezeisblowing.云淡风轻。12.Darkcloudspiledupoverheadandrainbegantofall.乌云聚集，开始下雨了。13.Theskywasdappledwithsmall,white,fleecyclouds.天空被细小的羊毛般的白云点缀得斑斑驳驳。14.Theskywasstreakedwithhigh,thincloudsthatlookedlikeacottonballstretchedapart.天空有一条条高高的薄薄的云，仿佛棉花球向远方延伸。17.Theskywaspaintedwithasmallnumberofflatcloudsthatlookedlikesandbars.天空上涂画着几片像是沙洲的扁平的云。描写云的多样表达：e.g.low____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：乌云：Cloudshid星星／月亮／太阳；Thecloudcover；Greyishblackclouds，densemass；darkclouds；白云：Theskywasinvadedbygreatwhiteclouds；Fluffyclouds；fleecyclouds；pale，highthinclouds；cottonball；flatclouds云散：cloudsstumblealongbeforethewind；云聚：gather；piledup过关检测翻译1.心很空,天很大,云很重。___________________________________________________________________________________________2.我抬头看看天，天空被大片的白云占据。___________________________________________________________________________________________3.随着暴风雨褪去，松软的云朵开始聚集。___________________________________________________________________________________________4.云朵苍白，仿佛棉花球向远方延伸。___________________________________________________________________________________________5.灰色的乌云笼罩着天空。___________________________________________________________________________________________答案：1.Myheartisempty,skyimmenseandcloudoppressive。2.Ilookedupatthesky.Theskywasinvadedbygreatwhiteclouds,3.Asthestormfadedaway,fluffycloudsbegantopileup.4.Thecloudwasaswhiteasacottonballstretchingapart.5.GreyishblackcloudscoveredtheskyElementFiveSun1.Thesunwasshining,thebreezewassteady,andseagullsshriekedintheairaboveus.太阳照耀着，微风一直吹着，海鸥在我们头顶的天空尖声鸣叫。2.Therisingsunwasbehindher.Herflaminghairlookedstunning.她身后是初升的太阳。她红火色的毛发让人看得目瞪口呆。3.Thesunclimbedthroughthesky,reacheditszenith,begantoedown.太阳爬过天空，爬到天顶，开始落下。4.Thesunwasbeginningtopullthecurtainsontheday.太阳已经开始拉上帷幕，白天就要结束了。5.Soonthesunwasaloneinthesky,andtheoceanwasasmoothskinreflectingthelightwithamillionmirrors.很快太阳便独自挂在天上，而大海是光滑的皮肤，用一百万面镜子反射着阳光。6.Thesunsankbehindthehill.太阳下山了。7.HelayinthesunbytheriverwithBuck，watchingthewaterandlisteningtothebirds.他和巴克躺在河边的阳光下，看着水，听着鸟儿的声音。8.Sunnyinthemorning,perhapswindyatnoon.早晨阳光明媚，也许中午就刮风。9.Warmsunshinepouredoverthelittlebush.温暖的阳光洒在小灌木丛上。10.Thescorchingsunbeatdownonmyhead.烈日直射在我头上。11.Severalhundredyardsaheadofmethesunshonebrilliantly.在我前方几百码的地方，阳光灿烂12.Thesunsetcastanorangelightoverthelakeandglorifiedthegreengrass,whichattractedusimmediately.日落在湖上投下了橙色的光，使绿草美化，立即吸引了我们。13.Thebrightbluesky,thelimitlessgreengrass,thegroupofsheep,thesettingsunandthecountlessstarsinthecurtainofnightskeptmespellbound.湛蓝的天空，无边无际的绿草，一群绵羊，夕阳和夜幕下无数的星星让我着迷。14.Thefreshairwasfragrantwithscentsfromtheearth,awakeningallmycellstobreathegreedily.ThesuncastawarmgoldenglowonMom’sfacewhichseemedalittleexhaustedduetothefreezingcoldnight.新鲜的空气充满了大地的香气，唤醒了我所有的细胞，让它们贪婪地呼吸。太阳在妈妈的脸上散发出温暖的金色光芒，由于寒冷的寒冷夜晚似乎有些疲惫。15.Theyhuggedeachothertightlyinthewarmlightofthesettingsun.他们在夕阳的温暖的光线下互相紧紧拥抱。16.I

like

watching

theclouds

upward,

eventhough

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glare

can't

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eyes

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我喜欢仰头看着天空的云朵，即使太阳照得眼睛睁不开描写太阳的多样表达：e.g.shine_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：上升：climb,reachitszenith下降：pullthecurtain,sinkbehindthehill,thesettingsun;温日：sb.lieinthesun,sunny,warmsunshine,烈日：scorchingsun,thesunshonebrilliantly;glare美景：Thesunsetcastanorangelightoversth.;glorify;Thesuncastawarmgoldenglowon;inthewarmlightofthesettingsunElementSixMoon1.Theskywascloudlessandthemoonfull.Thelandwasrobbedofitscolour.天上没有一丝云彩，一轮满月挂在天空。大地失去了色彩。2.Themoonwasasharplydefinedcrescentandtheskywasperfectlyclear.天空异常明净，一轮弯月挂在天上，轮廓十分清晰。3.Themoonwasshiningbrightlyonthesnow，andinthecoldstillairnotaleafmovedonthetrees．月亮在雪地上闪闪发光，在寒冷的空气中，树上没有叶子在动。4.Moonbeamsstreamedinthroughawindow.月光从窗户照进来。5.Themoonisround,likeaspinningwheel,spinningherromanticreverie.月亮，圆圆的，像纺车，纺着她浪漫的遐思。

6.Themoonisliketheoldbshaveexperiencedyearsofwindandfrost,neitherfastnorslowashiningwhitemoonlight.月亮像饱经风霜的老人，不紧不慢地梳理着白花花的月光。

7.Afullmoonrises,likealamp,hanginginthesky.

一轮圆月升起来了，像一盏明灯，高悬在天幕上。

8.Themoonislikeanewwifetomarry,justupfromtheEasthorizon,andaddstothetreeleavestohide.月亮像一个新娶来的媳妇，刚刚从东天边上来，就又羞答答地钻进树叶子里藏起来。

9.Themoonhunginthesky,smiling,fullofstarsintheMilkyWay,blinking.月亮斜挂在天空，笑盈盈的，星星挤满了银河，眨巴着眼睛。

10.Moonislikebean,hook,eyebrow,sampan,likethesmileofmum弯弯的月亮象豆角,镰刀,眉毛,小船,妈妈笑起来时弯弯的嘴角11.ThemoonisacoinItossed,bothsidesaredreamingofyou.月亮是我抛的硬币，两面都是梦见你。描写月亮的多样表达：e.g.full____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：形状：round;full；sharplydefinedcrescent;动作：hanginthesky,blink,比喻：bean,hook,eyebrow,sampan,likethesmileofmum

月光：themoonshinebrightly;Moonbeamsstreamedin;过关检测翻译1.很快，太阳下山了，我们和苏珊道别。___________________________________________________________________________________________2.日落在屋顶投下橙色的光，立刻吸引我的目光。___________________________________________________________________________________________3.汤姆躺在温暖的阳光中，阳光在她的脸上投射出出温暖的金色光芒。___________________________________________________________________________________________4.月亮圆圆的，像妈妈的微笑。___________________________________________________________________________________________5.昨天的这个时候他们正在烈日下除草。___________________________________________________________________________________________答案：1.Soonasthesunsankbehindthehill,wesaidgoodbyetoSusun.2.Thesunsetcastanorangelightovertheroof,whichfascinatedmeimmediately.3.Tomlayinthewarmsunshine,whichcastawarmgoldenglowonhisface.4.Themoonisround,likethesmileofMom.5.They

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ElementSevenRain1.Onlyrain,maraudingwavesofblackoceanandtheflotsamoftragedy.只有雨，黑色海洋上劫掠一切的浪，和悲剧过后漂浮的残骸。2.Ontheraincatchertherainmadeadrummingsound,andaroundme,ingfromthedarknessbeyond,itmadeahissingsound,asifIwereatthecentreofagreatnestofangrysnakes.雨打在接雨器上，发出鼓点般的声响，而在我周围，从遥远的黑暗之中传来的，是嘶嘶的雨声，仿佛我正置身于一个满是愤怒的蛇的巨大蛇窝里。3.Theraingrewstrongerandthesearougherasthenightprogressed.夜渐渐深了，雨下得更大，大海也更加汹涌。4.Diditqualifyasastorm?It'struetherewasrain,butitwasn'tsoveryhard.Itcertainlywasn'tadrivingrain,likeyouseeduringthemonsoons.那能算是暴风雨吗？当时确实在下雨,但雨并不大。当然不是你在季风季节看见的那种大雨。5.Therewasnowafine,colddrizzlefalling.天空中飘来冷冷的毛毛雨。6.Thespringrainsquickenedtheearth.春雨让大地复苏。7.Rainfallsfromabovetheclouds.雨从云端掉落。8.Thespringrainissoakingintothefield.春雨正浸润大地。9.Rainisliketenmillionsilverheavenfloatingdown,leisurelylandinginthesouth.雨就像天庭飘下来的千万条银丝,轻悠悠地落在南方。10.Stormrainrolleduplikeawhip,blastedwindows.暴风雨像一条鞭子，抽打着窗户。11.Thethunderrangandtherainwasfallinglikeabrokenwire.雷声响过，大雨就像断了线的珠子一样不断地往下落。12.Theheavyrainpoundedontheroofandhittheglass,playingtheexcitingmusic.大雨猛烈地敲打着屋顶，冲击着玻璃，走出激动人心的乐章。描写雨的多样表达：e.g.drummingsound____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：多样化表达：drizzle；声音：hissingsound；动作：quicken；fall；soak；land;blast;pound;hitElementEightSnow&Ice1.Allnaturewasblanketedinwhite.大自然中的一切都盖上了一床白色的毯子。2.Finesnowwasfallingthroughtheair,glitteringinthesunlight.细细的雪从空中落下，在阳光下闪着光。3.Thesnowwasgoodandhard，andnonewsnowfell．Thetemperaturedroppedto45°

belowzero.积雪坚硬，没有新雪落下。温度降至零下45度。4.Itwasbeautifulspringweather．Thesnowandiceweremelting，theplantsweregrowing，andtheforestanimalswerewakingfromtheirwintersleep．这是美丽的春季，雪冰融化，植物生长，森林动物从冬天的睡眠中醒来。5.Thesnowsoonmeltedaway.雪很快融化了。6.Icecapsandglaciersaremelting.Oceanlevelsarerising.冰盖和冰川融化。海平面上升。描写冰雪的多样表达：e.g.fall___________________________________________________________________________________________答案：动作：wasblanketedin,glitter,melt状态：fine，hardElementNineSurroundings1.Thenightsettledin.夜幕降临。2.Asdaylightbegantofade,…天色渐晚。3.Therewasnopeace，norest—onlycontinualnoiseandmovement．没有和平，没有休息，只有不断的喧闹和动静。4.Thereisanipintheair.空气中有一丝寒意。5.Itwasmuggyandoppressive.空气闷热压迫。6.Theweatheriscoldoneminuteandhotthenext.天气时冷时热。7.Thelotusflowersarenowinfullbloom.Therosegivesoutasweetsmell.荷花盛开了。玫瑰散发出甜美的气味。8.Inthecirclingdarknessbeyondthefirehecouldseemanyeyes—theeyesofhungryanimalswaitingtoattack．在环绕着篝火旁的黑暗中，他可以看见许多眼睛—饥饿的动物的眼睛等着进攻。9.Thebeautifulsceneryisbeyonddescription.美丽的风景无法形容。10.ManyyearsagoIwasonabicycletripthroughsomeexceedinglypicturesquecountryside．许多年前，我骑着自行车在风景如画的乡村旅行。11.Themountainslopewaswrappedinathinmist.山坡上笼罩着一层薄雾。12.Mistsblurredthehills.迷雾模糊了山丘。13.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.令她惊讶的是，除了森林，她什么也没看到，远处是一座雪山。14.Therainmistswhichnowcrownedthewoodedhillsandthefreshclearnessofthedifferentgreenswerefantastic．雨雾现在像皇冠一样笼罩在山上，各种绿色植物的清新令人心旷神怡。描写周遭的多样表达：e.g.night_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：air:peace,nip,muggyandoppressive,coldandhot,flowers:infullbloom,giveoutdarkness:circlingcountryside:exceedinglypicturesque,beautifulscenery,beyonddescriptionmist:bewrappedin/blur/crown过关检测翻译1.雨拍打着玻璃，发出鼓点般的声响。___________________________________________________________________________________________2.细雨让大地复苏。___________________________________________________________________________________________3.冬天来了，大地盖上了一床白色的毯子。___________________________________________________________________________________________4.荷花盛开了，薄薄雨雾中的香气令人心旷神怡。___________________________________________________________________________________________5.雪像皇冠一样笼罩在喜马拉雅山上，这景色的美得无法用语言形容。___________________________________________________________________________________________答案：1.Pouchingonthewindowglass,therainmadeadrummingsound.2.Thedrizzleisquickeningtheearth.3.Winterhade,andtheearthwasblanketedinwhite.4.Thelotusflowersarenowinfullbloom.Thesweetscentinmistwasfantastic.5.ThesnowwascrowningtheHimalayas,whosebeautywasbeyonddescription.Sectiontwosubjectiveenvironment环境的主观描写是指寓情于景，在景物描写中融入情绪。常见句式如下：1.Sbfoundsth.adj./doing/done

e.g.Ifoundallnatureblanketedinwhite.中文一：我发现细细的雪从空中落下，在阳光下闪着光。________________________________________________________________________________________________中文二：Jack发现一切都在尖叫：海，风，我的心。________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：中文一：Ifoundfinesnowfallingthroughtheairandglitteringinthesunlight.中文二：Jackfoundeverythingscreaming:thesea,thewind,hisheart.2.Sbsaw/heard/felt/smeltsth.doing/donee.g.Tomheardthebreezesinginginthedarksoftly.中文一：她看到一个古老的玫瑰园，里面种满了矮小的、乱飞的玫瑰花丛。________________________________________________________________________________________________中文二：我听到雨打在接雨器上，发出鼓点般的声响。________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：中文一：Shesawanoldrosegarden,filledwithstunted,flyblownrosebushes.中文二：Iheardtherainmakingadrummingsoundontheraincatcher.3.Itwassoadj.thatwefound/felt…e.g.Itwassoviolentthatwefeltwewouldbeblownover.中文一：大海像老虎一样咆哮。________________________________________________________________________________________________中文二：周围一片寂静，我都能听到我的心跳声。________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：中文一：Thesearoaredsoloudthatwefeltitwasatiger.中文二：ItwassoquietthatIcouldheardmyheartbeat.4.Sth.keptsb.spellbound/amazed;Sth.heldsb.entirelyintheirpowere.g.Thedownpourwassteadyandcold,holdingeveryoneintheirpower.中文一：深蓝色的天空，鸟儿的歌声，月光和花朵迷住了我。________________________________________________________________________________________________中文二：大海升起又落下，让我的心都沉了下去，让我很是震撼。________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：中文一：Adeepbluesky,thesongofthebirds,moonlightandflowerscouldhavekeptmespellbound.中文二：Itstartedrisingandfallinginamannerthatmademyheartsink,whichkeptmeamazed.5.Itlooked/seemed/appeared/feltlike…e.g.Whenthetunefulbreezeblew,itfeltlikealittlegirlgigglednearyourear.中文一：这大山一样的海浪看着像要把这天吃了一样。________________________________________________________________________________________________中文二：太阳周围的云彩看起来就像在天边飘舞的美丽红绸缎。________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：中文一：Itlookedlikethe