2024年高考英语读后续写语料积累之如何表达激动背诵与测试 解析版

专题17读后揉写语料积累之如何表达激动背诵与测武（词-

句•文）讲义

解析版

一、必背单词

1.激动类形容词：

excited,thrilled,exciting,thrilling

2.激动类副词：

excitedly

3.激动类名词：

excitement,thrill

4.激动类动词：

excite,thrill

二、高频语块

1.cheerup振奋起来

2.with/inexcitement激动地

3.flushwithexcitement激动得满脸通红

4.conceal/hideone'sexcitement难掩激动

5.containone'sexcitement抑制内心的激动

6.toone飞excitement/thrill令某人激动的是

7.ascreamofthrill/excitement激动的尖叫声

8.aripple/shiver/wave/surgeofexcitement一阵兴奋

三、佳句赏析

1.Hisvoicewaschokedwithemotion.他情绪激动，难以成声。

2.Hisfacewaslitupwithexcitement.他的脸由于激动而放出光彩。

3.Herfacewasglowingwithexcitement.她因兴奋而显得容光焕发。

4.Arippleofexcitementranthroughthem.一阵兴奋的涟漪掠过他们。

5.Herflushedfacewasshiningwithexcitement.她红红的脸因激动而发亮。

6.MyheartisinmymouthwheneverIhearthenationalanthem.每当我听到国歌就激动不已。

7.Herheartwasflutteringwithanxietyaswellasexcitement.她的心又兴奋又不安，怦怦乱跳。

8.Ashiverofexcitementpassedthroughherstomachwhensheheardthenews.听到这个消息,一阵激动的

战栗传到她的胃里。

9.Theteacher'sencouragementwarmedhisheart.Hefeltasurgeofexcitement.老师的鼓励温暖着他的心,

他感到一阵兴奋。

10.Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,awildexcitementtookholdofher.当主持人宣布她

获奖时，她兴奋得不能自己。

11.Dadsaidwewouldgocampingnextweek,hiseyesglittering\twinklingwithexcitement.爸爸说下

星期去露营，他的眼中闪烁着兴奋的光芒。

12.Unabletocontainhisjoyandexcitement,hethrewhimselfintomyarms,murmuring,"Thankyou,

dearmum."不能抑制住他的高兴和激动，他一下子扑到我的怀里，喃喃道：妈妈，辛苦了。

测试巩固区：分级测试步步为赢

一、高频语块汉译英

L振奋起来

2.激动地

3.激动得满脸通红

4.难掩激动

5抑制内心的激动

6.令某人激动的是

7.激动的尖叫声

8.一阵兴奋

【参考答案】

1.cheerup振奋起来

2.with/inexcitement激动地

3.flushwithexcitement激动得满脸通红

4.conceal/hideone'sexcitement难掩激动

5.containone'sexcitement抑制内心的激动

6.toone'sexcitement/thrill令某人激动的是

7.ascreamofthrill/excitement激动的尖叫声

8.aripple/shiver/wave/surgeofexcitement一阵兴奋

二、佳句赏析汉译英

1.他情绪激动，难以成声。

2.他的脸由于激动而放出光彩。

3.她因兴奋而显得容光焕发。

4.一阵兴奋的涟漪掠过他们。

5.她红红的脸因激动而发亮。

6.每当我听到国歌就激动不已。

7.她的心又兴奋又不安，怦怦乱跳。

8.听到这个消息，一阵激动的战栗传到她的胃里。

9.老师的鼓励温暖着他的心，他感到一阵兴奋。

10.当主持人宣布她获奖时,她兴奋得不能自己。

11.爸爸说下星期去露营，他的眼中闪烁着兴奋的光芒。

【参考答案】

1.Hisvoicewaschokedwithemotion.他情绪激动，难以成声。

2.Hisfacewaslitupwithexcitement.他的脸由于激动而放出光彩。

3.Herfacewasglowingwithexcitement.她因兴奋而显得容光焕发。

4.Arippleofexcitementranthroughthem.一阵兴奋的涟漪掠过他们。

5.Herflushedfacewasshiningwithexcitement.她红红的脸因激动而发亮。

6.MyheartisinmymouthwheneverIhearthenationalanthem.每当我听到国歌就激动不已。

7.Herheartwasflutteringwithanxietyaswellasexcitement.她的心又兴奋又不安，怦怦乱跳。

8.Ashiverofexcitementpassedthroughherstomachwhensheheardthenews.听至U这个消息，一阵激动的

战栗传到她的胃里。

9.Theteacher'sencouragementwarmedhisheart.Hefeltasurgeofexcitement.老师的鼓励温暖着他的心,

他感到一阵兴奋。

10.Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,awildexcitementtookholdofher.当主持人宣布她

获奖时，她兴奋得不能自已。

11.Dadsaidwewouldgocampingnextweek,hiseyesglittering\twinklingwithexcitement.爸爸说下

星期去露营，他的眼中闪烁着兴奋的光芒。

三、情感表达片段运用

请运用以上必备单词或高频语块，把下面的语篇补充完整。

Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.Wedecidedtocampalong

theriver.Theviewsonthejourneyweresurprisinglybeautiful,]（妈妈激动不已）.

Everytimewegottoanewplace,Momcouldhardly2（抑制兴奋），andwould

3（振奋起来）likeachild.Shewouldgetoffthecar,laughinganddancingaround

4（兴奋地）.Themomentwearrivedatthecampingplace,5（激动得

尖叫起来），Momlocatedaclearingandimmediatelyguidedustopitchthetent6（眼

里闪着激动的光芒）,wesatonthegrass,enjoyingthesplendidnature.

【参考答案】

Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.Wedecidedtocampalong

theriver.Theviewsonthejourneyweresurprisinglybeautiful,awaveofexcitementtakingholdof

Mom.Everytimewegottoanewplace,Momcouldhardlycontainherexcitement,andwouldcheer

uplikeachild.Shewouldgetoffthecar,laughinganddancingaroundwithexcitement.Themoment

wearrivedatthecampingplace,lettingoutascreamofthrill,Momlocatedaclearingandimmediately

guidedustopitchthetent.Witheyesqlittering/twinkliiiYwithexcitement,wesatonthegrass,

enjoyingthesplendidnature.

四、情感表达语篇运用

1.（2023上•广西•高三校联考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构

成一篇完整的短文。

I'veforgottenalmosteverythingaboutmyearlychildhoodexcepttheconcert,andmymotheralso

remembersit.

WhenIwasafive-year-oldboy,Iwaslearningtoplaythepianoinamusicalschool.Oneday,afamous

pianomasterwassaidtoholdapianoconcertinourcity.Wishingtoencouragemyprogressonthepiano,my

mothertookmetotheconcert.Afterwewereseated,mymotherspottedafriendintheaudience,whoshehadn't

metforalongtime.Soshetoldmetostayinmypositionandthenwalkeddownthepassagetogreetherfriend.

Mymotherandherfriendstoodchattinghappilyforawhilebeforetheperformance.Meanwhile,Iwassoexcited

toseetheconcertstagethatIstoodupandeventuallymademywaythroughadoormarked“NoAdmittance^^to

explorethewondersoftheconcerthall.

Whenthehouselightsbecamedimandtheconcertwasabouttobegin,mymotherreturnedtoherseat.And

shediscoveredthatIwasmissing.Mymothersaidshefeltreallyguiltyatthattimeandthatshesaidtoherself,

“It'smyfault.Ishouldn'thaveleftmylittlesonaloneinhisplace."Confusedandanxious,shelookedaround,but

Iwasnowheretobeseen.Suddenly,thecurtainpartedandspotlightsfocusedontheimpressivepianoonthestage.

Tohersurprise,shesawmesittingbythekeyboardinnocentlyplayingTwinkleTwinkleLittleStaronthepiano.

Atthatmoment,thepianomastermadehisentrance.Seeingme,alittleboy,sittingatthecenterofthestage

andplayingthepiano,heseemedtobecompletelyataloss.Butthenhequicklymovedtothepianoand

whisperedinmyear,"Don'tquit.Keepplaying."Leaningover,hereachedaroundtotheothersideofmeand

soonaddedarunningobbligato（伴奏）.Together,wetransformedafrighteningsituationintoacreativeexperience.

Theaudiencehadneverseensuchaperformanceform.Theylistenedcuriouslyandattentively,lostinthe

wonderfulmusicworld.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右：

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Whenthepiececametoanend,thepianomasterbreathedasighofrelief.

Aftertheconcert,mymotherandIwaitedforthepianomasterbackstage.

【满分范文】

Whenthepiececametoanend,thepianomasterbreathedasighofrelief.Heturnedtome,huggedmeand

said,“Myboy,youreallydidagoodjob."Heroseandtookmetothecenterofthestage.Warmandloud

applausebrokeoutintheaudiencebeforehecouldsayaword.Peopleclappedandcheeredforourwonderful

cooperation.Excitedlyandhappily,Iranintomymother'sarmsandtookmyseatagain.Welistenedtothe

musicmorecarefullyandsatthroughtheconcerttogether.

Aftertheconcert,mymotherandIwaitedforthepianomasterbackstage.Seeinghimcoming,mymother

cameuptohimandsaidapologetically,t4Itakemylittlesontoyourconcertinthehopethathecanbenefitfromit.

Ididn'texpectthathe'druntothestage...Herepliedwithasmile,64Ilikeyourboy.Oneday,heisgoingtobe

somebody.9,Hearingthewords,mymotherwassorelievedandtouched.Thankstothemaster,Igotnotonly

thechancetosteponstagebutalsotheconfidenceformyfuturepathofmusic.

【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了小时候妈妈带着作者去看音乐会，作者误走入舞台上弹钢琴的故

事。

【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“当这首曲子结束时，钢琴大师松了一口气。”可知，第一段可

描写作者弹完钢琴后钢琴大师鼓励作者，观众也给作者鼓掌，作者很高兴。

②由第二段首句内容“音乐会结束后，我和妈妈在后台等钢琴大师。”可知，第二段可描写妈妈向钢琴大

师道歉，大师很欣赏作者，认为作者以后会有所作为，多亏了大师，作者现在能登上舞台，而且对未来的

音乐之路充满信心。

2.续写线索：弹完曲子一一钢琴大师鼓励作者一一观众鼓掌一一高兴，回到座位上欣赏音乐一一音乐会结

束一一向大师道歉一一大师很欣赏作者一一作者如今音乐有所作为

3.词汇激活

行为类

①拥抱某人：hugsb./givesb.ahug

②鼓掌：clap/applaud

③走近：comeupto/approach

情绪类

①兴奋地：Excitedly/withexcitement

②感动的：touched/moved

【点睛】[高分句型1]Excitedlyandhappily,Iranintomymother?sarmsandtookmyseatagain.（由副词作

伴随状语）

[高分句型2]Seeinghimcoming,mymothercameuptohimandsaidapologetically,“Itakemylittlesontoyour

concertinthehopethathecanbenefitfromit.（由现在分词作状语和that引导的同位语从句）

2.（2023上•湖南岳阳•高三校联考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之

构成一篇完整的短文。

Forsomeweeks,Ihadnoticedanelderlywomanwalkingpastourhouse,pushingagrocerycartfilledwith

trashbags.Icouldn'thelpbutfeelsorryforherassheshuffled（拖着脚走路）along.Occasionally,shewould

pauseandpickupacanfrombesidetheroad.Shewouldcarefullyputitintooneofthebagsandcontinueonher

way.

Iwonderedwhatcircumstanceshadbroughthertothispointinlife.Didshehavenofamily?Wasthereno

onetolookafterher?

Oneevening,Icouldnolongerstandit.Asshewalkedby,Iwentouttothestreetandstoppedher.

“Madam,“Isaid.uCanIaskyousomething?^^

Sheturnedtolookatmewithbeautiful,darkeyesthattwinkledinherwrinkledface.Iknewthenthatshe

wasnoordinaryhomelessperson.Therewasdignityand,yes,evenjoyabouther.Suddenly,Ifeltembarrassedto

askhermyquestions,butIinsisted.

'Tveseenyouforafewweekspickingupcans,“Iexplained.4tDoyousellthemtobuygroceries?^^

“No,"shesaidwithasmile."Idothistohelpthechildren.^^

Imusthavelookedconfusedbecauseshewentontoexplain.

“Ihadcancer-twice——andbothtimesIwenttoabighospitalinanothertown.Theycuredme.ButwhileI

wasthere,Imetthechildren,andI'veneverforgottenthem.Idon'thaveanymoney,butIcanstillwalk,andI

pickupthesecanstosellthemformoneyforthehospital.^^

Shetoldmethatshespendsmanyhoursaweekcollectingcans;atleasttwobusinessessavecansforher.

Whenshehasenough,sheloadsthemallintoafriend^pickup,andthetwoofthemtakethemtothecitywhere

thehospitalislocated.Theretheygetcashedout.

注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Aswecontinuedtotalk,Ilearnedmoreaboutwhatshethought.

“No,no.Idon'twantyourmoney,“sherepliedwithawaveofherhand,backingawayabit.

【满分范文】

Aswecontinuedtotall,Ilearnedmoreaboutwhatshethought.t4Iknowhowyoufeelwhenyouseealadyof

myagestillwalkontheroadtomakesomemoneybycollectingcans,"shesaid.“Iknowifsnotmuch,butevery

littlebitcounts.AndwhenIseethechildrensmile,itmakesallthehardworkworthit.I'vebeenblessedinmy

life.Iwanttodosomething,andthisissomethingIcando.Apartfromthat,thereisnothingIcandotoensure

personslikemeareblessed.Itdoesn'tcostmemuch-onlythecostofthegas-andithelpsthechildren.^^

Hearingthis,Ireachedintomypurseandpulledsomebillsout.

“No,no.Idon'twantyourmoney,9,sherepliedwithawaveofherhand,backingawayabit."ButIwantyou

totakeit,“Itoldher."Useitforgasorwhateveryouwant.^^ShesmiledandfinallytookthebillsIheldout.She

thengavemeahug.Iwatchedasshebeganwalkingdownthestreetagain,pushingthecartofcans,stopping

occasionallytopickuponeortwo.Atthecorner,sheturned,smiled,wavedandwasgone.AndIrealizedat

thatmomentthatnotallangelshavelightandwings.Somehavegrocerycarts.

【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了几个星期以来，作者注意到了一个推着一辆装满垃圾袋的购物车

的老妇人，于是询问老妇人的个人情况，在得知了老妇人遇到的困难后，作者想要给老妇人钱，但是开始

被拒绝了，在我的坚持下她收下了钱。作者认为老妇人像天使一样。

【详解】1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“随着我们继续交谈，我越来越了解她的想法”可知，第一段可描写作者和老妇人交

谈以及老妇人的感受。

②由第二段首句内容"不，不。我不要你的钱，'她回答说，挥了挥手，后退了一点」可知，第二段可

描写老妇人拒绝了作者的钱，作者如何说服她收下钱以及作者的感悟。

2.续写线索：交谈一一深入了解一一拿钱帮助一一被拒绝一一说服老人收下一一作者感悟

3.词汇激活

行为类

①捡起：collect/pickup

②看见：see/spot/notice

③确保：ensure/makesure

情绪类

①幸运：blessed/lucky

②值得：worthit/worthwhile

【点睛】[高分句型1]“Iknowhowyoufeelwhenyouseealadyofmyagestillwalkontheroadtomakesome

moneybycollectingcans,“shesaid.（运用了how引导宾语从句和when引导的时间状语从句）

[高分句型2]Iwatchedasshebeganwalkingdownthestreetagain,pushingthecartofcans,stopping

occasionallytopickuponeortwo.（运用了现在分词作状语）

3.（2023•全国•模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的

短文。

WhenIenteredmyfirstrodeo（牛仔竞技比赛）,Iwas12yearsold.Itwasmorelikeaplaydaythanarodeo,

buttoa12-year-oldgirllikeme,IfeltlikeIwasattheNationalFinalsRodeo!

Astobarrelracing（绕桶赛），Ididn'tknowmuchaboutit,onlywhatmydadhadtoldme.ButIhadbeen

determinedtoentertheplayandwintheplayeversinceIwastoldthatmynotsomucholdercompetitivecousin

Courtneywouldbethere.ThiswasmynighttofinallyshowherthatIcouldrideahorsejustasgoodorbetter,and

doanythingelseshecoulddo.Shewasinforasurprise!

Courtneyalwaysthoughtshewasbetterthanme.Shealwayssaidherhorsewasbetterthanmine,too.

CourtneyhadaPalominohorsenamedBuck.Hewasfast,andbeautiful.MyhorsewasabigAppaloosanamed

Zipper.Hewasn'tbeautifulorflashylikeBuckbuthewaskindandwillingtopleasetheskinnylittlegirlthatfed

himsugarseverydayafteradayofriding.ThatwasthereasonIknewwecouldbeatCourtney,becausewehad

somethingshedidn't-apartnership,onewebothrespected.

CourtneyandIwereinthe12-14agegroup.AsIwatchedthemeninthearena（竞技场）setthethreebarrels

upintheirplaces,Ifeltnervousandalittlescaredforthefirsttimethatnight.ThoughIhadpreviouslypracticeda

lotwithZipper,andZipperracedfastandmadeturnsstably,Istillgotupsetwhenthinkingaboutracingagainst

Courtney!

Iclosedmyeyes,takingadeepbreath.Suddenly,Ifeltawarmfamiliarhandonmyshoulder.ItwasDad.He

smiledatme,saying,t6Areyouscaredornervous?Orboth?”"Both,butFmmorescaredthatI'mgoingtomess

up,“Ireplied,truthfully.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式作答。

“Youwon't.Justhavefaithinyourself,andZipper,“Dadsaid.

Gameover,ItookZippertorest,givinghimsugarsforajobwelldone.

【满分范文】

“Youwon't.Justhavefaithinyourself,andZipper,9,Dadsaid.ThafswhenIrealizedIwasnotgoinginto

thatarenaalone,butwithmypartner!Zipperhadbeenpracticingjustashardasme.SoIthought,ifImessedup,

hewouldberighttheretocorrectme."Iknowwhattodo,Dad.Thankyou.^^Dadjustsmiled,€4Nowgowarmup

andwina