高考英语复习读后续写练习+成长类+跑步伴侣：Jenny与Bruce的动力之旅+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习跑步伴侣：Jenny与Bruce的动力之旅1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Jennyalwaysadmiredpowerfulandattractivemarathonrunnersanddreamedthatonedayshecouldalsorunamarathon.Tomakeit,oneday,shebegantoseriouslyprepare.Atfirst,sheonlysetthesmallgoalofrunningonekilometereachmorning.However,shestillfoundittiringandsoongaveuprunning.Asdayswenton,herweightgraduallyincreased.Upsetaboutherhealth,shefinallydecidedtoloseweightbydoingexercise.

Shebeganrunningagain.Asusual,inthefollowingdays,herbigproblemwithexercisingwashowtostaymotivated

allthetime.Shetriedtofindguidancefromrunningexpertsandbooks.

Andeverythingshereadindicatedthatshe’dbetterpairupwitharunningpartner.Shefollowedtheadvice,buthumanexercisecompanionsalwaysletherdown.

Herlastexercisecompanionquitwithexcuseslike,“It’smyturntodothedishes”atsixo’clockinthemorning!Shehatedtoadmitit,butshehadmadesimilarexcusestoothersanddisappointedtheminsimilarways.4续写原文ThenBruceappearedinJenny’slife,abirthdaygiftfromherhusband,John.Johncouldn’tworkoutwithJennybecausehehadabadback.SothatjobwaslefttoBruce,ayellowdog.Brucewasquiteenergetic,whichmadehimdestined

(注定的)tobearunningpartner.Inthebeginning,BruceandJennyranonlyfiftypacesatatime,eachsetmixedwithonehundredpacesofwalking.“Idon’tlookfoolishstartingthisway,”thoughtJenny,“becauseBruce’sbonesaretooyoungtomakehimrunmuchharder.”Shewasright,andBruce’searlylimitationsgavehertimetostartslowlywithoutfeelingawkward.Afteraboutninemonths,though,BrucewasoldenoughtorunseveralmilesadayandJennywasfitenoughtokeepup.Fromspringtoautumn,theyloggedthemilestogethereveryday.However,aswinterapproachedandtheweathergotcolder,maintaining

adailyrunningroutinerequiredlotsofdedication

(热忱)anddetermination.AndJennystartedtothinkthedogwouldbelikeherprevioushumanpartnersand

thatshecouldn’tcountonthelittledogforhelpwithmotivation.5段首句Para1：WhathappenedlaterprovedthatJennywaswrong.

Para2：Onespringmorning,Jennystartedherfirstmarathon,accompaniedbyBruce.

6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8文章主要讲述了渴望跑马拉松的Jenny在锻炼时一直苦于保持动力，直到她从丈夫那里收到了一只充满活力的黄色小狗Bruce做为生日礼物。起初，由于Bruce还很小，他们的训练进度较为缓慢。但九个月后，他们已经能每天共同跑下数英里。尽管Jenny曾怀疑Bruce能否在严冬中保持动力，但他最终证明自己是一位专注且可靠的跑步伙伴，这不仅加深了他们之间的情感，还帮助珍妮实现了健身目标。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1：WhathappenedlaterprovedthatJennywaswrong.由第一段首句内容“后来发生的事证明Jenny是错的”可知，第一段可描写Bruce非常可靠，成为Jenny理想的跑步伙伴，Bruce是如何陪伴Jenny跑步的以及他的存在让Jenny保持动力。10续写思路分析Para2：Onespringmorning,Jennystartedherfirstmarathon,accompaniedbyBruce.由第二段首句内容“一个春日早晨，Jenny在Bruce的陪伴下开始了她的首场马拉松比赛”可知，第二段可描写Jenny在比赛中的感受——她发自内心地感谢Bruce的陪伴，以及比赛结束后得到的感悟。11续写素材续写素材1.turnout证明是；结果是2.unwavering

adj.

不动摇的；坚定的3.milestone

n.

重要事件；里程碑4.finishline

终点线12续写素材续写素材1.Hisunwaveringdedicationandenthusiasmservedasaconstantreminderofthecommitmentshehadmadetoherself,helpinghermaintainhermotivationeveninthetoughestconditions.（动词-ing形式短语作状语）他坚定不移的奉献精神和热情时刻提醒着她对自己的承诺，即使在最艰难的条件下，这也能帮助她保持动力。13续写素材续写素材2.Astheycrossedthefinishlinetogether,

Jennycouldn’thelpbutfeeladeepconnectionwithherloyalrunningpartner,whohadnotonlyhelpedherachieveherdreambutalsotaughtherthetruemeaningofperseveranceanddetermination.（as引导时间状语从句、who引导限制性定语从句）当他们一起冲过终点线时，Jenny不禁与这位忠实的跑步伙伴产生了深厚的感情，他不仅帮助自己实现了梦想，还让她懂得了坚持和决心的真正含义。14Part3范文呈现15范文呈现WhathappenedlaterprovedthatJennywaswrong.

Bruceturnedouttobethemostreliablerunningpartnershecouldhaveeverhopedfor.Nomatterhowcoldanddarkitwas,hewouldalwayseagerlywaitbyherside,readytostarttheirdailyrunning

together.Hisunwaveringdedicationandenthusiasmservedasaconstantreminderofthecommitmentshehadmadetoherself,helpinghermaintainhermotivationeveninthetoughestconditions.16范文呈现Onespringmorning,Jennystartedherfirstmarathon,accompaniedbyBruce.

Theracewaschallenging,butwitheachstepshetook,shefeltanoverwhelmingsenseofaccomplishmentandgratitude.SheknewthatwithoutBruce’sunwaveringsupportandcompanionship,shewouldneverhavebeenabletoachievethisincrediblemilestone.Astheycrossedthefinishlinetogether,Jennycouldn’thelpbutfeeladeepconnectionwithherloyalrunningpartner,whohadnotonlyhelpedherachieveherdreambutalsotaughtherthetruemeaningofperseveranceanddetermination.17范文译文后来发生的事情证明珍妮错了。事实证明，布鲁斯是她所希望的最可靠的跑步伙伴。无论天气多么寒冷和黑暗，他总是热切地在她身边等待，准备开始他们每天的跑步。他坚定不移的奉献精神和热情时刻提醒着她对自己的承诺，帮助她即使在最艰难的条件下也能保持动力。一个春天的早晨，珍妮在布鲁斯的陪同下开始了