2024年高考英语应用文写作押题范文-投稿征文

专题01投稿正文

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假定你是李华，你校外教David正在策划一场英语辩论赛，现向同学们征集辩题。请你给他

写一封邮件，内容包括：

1.提供辩论题目；

2.说明选题理由。

注意：

1.词数80左右；

2.可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。

DearDavid,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearDavid,

Hopingthisemailfindsyouwell.Itwouldbedelightfulifmysuggestionsforthedebate

competitioncouldhelp.

Ipropose"SocialMedia-ProsorCons"asthetopic.Giventhesignificanceofsocialmedia,

thistopicwillsparkinsightfuldiscussionsonitsimpactandconsequences,encouragingexploration

ofvariousperspectives.Apartfromregularargumentspresentinganddebatingrounds,Isuggest

introducingan"AudienceQuestions"sessiontocreateaninteractiveatmosphere.

Thetopicandnovelsessionwillhopefullymaketheeventeducationalandengaging.Best

wishesfororganizingit!

Yours,

LiHua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于你校外教David正在策划一场英语辩论赛,

现向同学们征集辩题这一情况，给他写一封邮件。

【详解】1.词汇积累

令人愉快的：delightful—*enjoyable

建议：suggestion—>advice

各种各样的：various-allkindsof

除了，止匕夕卜：Apartfrom—*Inadditionto

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Giventhesignificanceofsocialmedia,thistopicwillsparkinsightfuldiscussionsonits

impactandconsequences,encouragingexplorationofvariousperspectives.

拓展句：Giventhesignificanceofsocialmedia,thistopicwillsparkinsightfuldiscussionsonits

impactandconsequences,whichcanencourageexplorationofvariousperspectives.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Itwouldbedelightfulifmysuggestionsforthedebatecompetitioncould

help.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句。）

【高分句型2jGiventhesignificanceofsocialmedia,thistopicwillsparkinsightfuldiscussionson

itsimpactandconsequences,encouragingexplorationofvariousperspectives.（非谓语动词中的现

在分词作状语。）

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同普通话一样，地方方言也是我们中华文化的重要组成部分。请你以“ProtectAndPassOnOur

Dialects”为题写一篇短文向你校英语报文化专栏投稿，内容包括：

1.地方方言的发展现状；

2.地方方言的重要作用；

3.呼吁大家保护地方方言。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

参考词汇：普通话mandarin

ProtectAndPassOnOurDialects

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【答案】

ProtectAndPassOnOurDialects

Recentyearshavewitnessedthatfewerandfeweryoungpeoplearecapableofspeakingtheir

dialects.Dialectsarefacingchallengesandlosinggroundgradually.

WhilemandariniscrucialformostChinesepeople,thesignificanceoflocaldialectsis

undeniable.Actually,notonlyaredialectscommunicationtools,buttheyalsoplayaveryimportant

roleinculturalheritage,representingourrootsandhistory.Furthermore,itisdialectsthatcontribute

tothediversityofculturesindifferentregions.

Therefore,itishightimethatdialectsshouldbepreservedsothattheycanbeheardbythenext

generations.Lefsembraceandcelebratethediversityofourdialects,ensuringtheirsurvivalfor

generationstocome.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“ProtectAndPassOnOurDialects”为题写一篇

短文向你校英语报文化专栏投稿。

【详解】1.词汇积累

重要的：crucial—vital

无可争辩的：undeniable—>incontestable

庆祝：celebrate—>observe

确保：ensure一makesure

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：Recentyearshavewitnessedthatfewerandfeweryoungpeoplearecapableofspeakingtheir

dialects.Dialectsarefacingchallengesandlosinggroundgradually.

拓展句：Dialectsarefacingchallengesandlosinggroundgraduallybecauserecentyearshave

witnessedthatfewerandfeweryoungpeoplearecapableofspeakingtheirdialects.

【点睛】「高分句型1]WhilemandariniscrucialformostChinesepeople,thesignificanceoflocal

dialectsisundeniable.（运用了while引导让步状语从句）

[高分句型2]Let'sembraceandcelebratethediversityofourdialects,ensuringtheirsurvivalfor

generationstocome.（运用了现在分词作状语）

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你校英文报社正在组织以“感恩(Gratitude)、独立(Independence)、青春(Youth)”为关键词的征稿

活动，请你结合自己经历，选择至少一个关键词投稿表达自己对高中生活的感悟。

注意：

1.将题目补充完整：

2.词数100词左右。

:thekeyword(s)ofmyhighschoollife

【答案】Sample1:

Gratitudeandyouth:thekeyword(s)ofmyhighschoollife

Myhighschoollifeissofascinatingthatitisbeyondthedescription.Nothingcanrepresentit

betterthan"gratitude"and"youth”.

Thefirstdayofmyhighschoolisstillfreshinmymind.Withyouthandignorance,Iwas

completelyatalossandhadnothingtoexpect.Icannotimaginehowlongthisphenomenawould

last,whichupsetmeseriously.Itwastheteachers9andclassmates9concernthatledmeoutofthe

initialconfusion.Gradually,Ideeplyrealizethatmyhighschoollifeisfullofbrilliantsunshine.

Thejourneyfromconfusiontogettingthedirectiontopersistinhastaughtmealot.Thatis,youth

livesfordiligenceandweshouldalwaysbegrateful!

Thereisnoyouthwithoutdiligence,andgratitudemakesmyschoollifefullofsunshine.

Sample2:

Whenitcomestomyhighschoollife,nothingcanbebetterthan"youth"and"gratitude”to

describeit.

Thefirstdayofmyhighschoolisstillfreshinmymind.Withpassionanddream,Ienteredthe

promisingcampus,seeingfacesfullofyouthandenergy.Hopefully,myheartwasfullofstrengthof

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strivingformydreams.However,youthcanalsohaveconfusion.IrememberonceIfailedtheexam

andfeltsodisappointedthatIevencouldn'tcheerupforlong.Itwastheteachers9andclassmates9

helpandconcernthatpulledmeoutofthedilemma.Withencouragementandgratitude,Fvebeen

workinghardtomakeprogress.

Cherishingyouthandlearninggratitude,IbelieveIwillachievemydream.

Sample3:

Independence:thekeyword(s)ofmyhighschoollife

Beforehighschool,Ilivedashelteredlife,withmyparentstakingcareofmostthings.

However,asIenteredhighschool,aboardingone,Ihadtoadapttoanewenvironmentandwayof

life,whichforcedmetobecomeself-reliant.

Withlesssupervision,Ihadtolearntomanagemytimeeffectively.Creatingastudyschedule

andstickingtoithelpedmekeeporganized.Besides,learningtomakedecisionswasanother

challenge:Whichsubjecttochoose?Whethertojoinaclub?Ihadtoconsidermypreferencesand

interests.MakingthesechoicesallowedmetodiscoverwhoIwasandwhatIwaspassionateabout,

whichfurtheredmypersonalgrowth.

Asaconclusion,highschoolisatransformativeperiodwhenIdevelopedasenseof

independence.ItteachesmeinvaluableskillsthatIwillcarrythroughtomyfuturelife.

【导语】本文是一篇报社征稿。要求考生表达对自己高中生活的感悟。考生需要扣题，把“感

恩(Gratitude)、独立(Independence)、青春(Youth)”三个关键词囊括在文中，还需要添加适合细

节使文章真实自然。

【详解】1.词汇积累：

受保护的：sheltered-protected/guarded

监督：supervision—oversight/monitoring

困境：dilemma—predicament/puzzle

感激：appreciation一gratitude/acknowledgment

2.句式拓展：

简单句变复合句

原句：Withpassionanddream,Ienteredthepromisingcampus,seeingfacesfullofyouthand

energy.

拓展句：WhenIenteredthepromisingcampuswithpassionanddream,Isawfacesfullofyouth

andenergy.

【点睛】【高分句型1]Itwastheteachers9andclassmates9concernthatledmeoutoftheinitial

confusion,（itwas...that引导的强调句型）

[高分句型2]Cherishingyouthandlearninggratitude,IbelieveIwillachievemydream.（现在

分词作伴随状语）

【高分句型3]MakingthesechoicesallowedmetodiscoverwhoIwasandwhatIwaspassionate

about,whichfurtheredmypersonalgrowth,（who和what引导的宾语从句，which引导的定语

从句）

你校正在组织以旅游为主题的英语作文比赛。请你以“一次旅游经历”为题，写一篇短文参赛,

内容包括：

1.叙述旅游经历；

2.表达感受。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.短文题目已为你写好。

Amemorabletrip

【答案】

Amemorabletrip

IhadalwayswantedtovisittheGreatWall,andIwasfinallyabletomakemydreamcometrue

lastsummer.

ItookabusfrommyhometowntoBadaling,whichisthemostpopulartouristdestination.The

GreatWallissohugeandsowell-preserved.Iwasreallyimpressed.Ialsoenjoyedthehikingon

theGreatWall.Theviewsfromthewallwasbreathtaking.Icouldseeformilesineverydirection.

IhadagreattimeonmytriptotheGreatWall.ItwasanunforgettableexperiencethatIwill

cherishforever.

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【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“一次旅游经历”为题，写一篇短文参加学校

组织的以旅游为主题的英语作文比赛。内容包括：

L叙述旅游经历；

2.表达感受。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

实现，成真：cometrue—»comeintoreality

珍惜：cherish一treasure

参观：visit一payavisitto

景点：touristdestination—>touristattraction/placeofinterest

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Icouldseeformilesineverydirection.

拓展句：ItisamazingthatIcouldseeformilesineverydirection.

【点睛】【高分句型1]ItookabusfrommyhometowntoBadaling,whichisthemostpopular

touristdestination.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2]ItwasanunforgettableexperiencethatIwillcherishforever.（运用了that弓I导的

定语从句）

你校英文报将以“志愿同行，点亮青春”为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿，介

绍自己曾参加过的一项志愿活动，内容包括：

1.志愿活动简介；

2.意义和启示。

注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Mymainresponsibilitywastointroducethehistoryofeachexhibit,usingclearandengaging

languagetovividlyconveytheintendedallusions.Whentellingthestoriesforeachexhibit,Ipaid

specialattentiontoculturaldifferencestofosterabetterunderstandingforvisitorsfromvarious

countries.

Thistourguiderolenotonlyenrichedmyknowledgeofnationalhistory,butalsohelpedshape

mypassionsandvalues.Inadditiontopersonalgrowth,volunteeringshowsthatevensmallefforts

canhaveasignificantimpactonmanypeople.Theworldcanbetransformedthroughourchoices,

actsofkindnessandengagementinvolunteeractivities.

【导语】

本篇书面表达属于记叙文。要求考生以“志愿同行，点亮青春”为主题，写一篇短文投稿，介绍

自己曾参加过的一项志愿活动，参加英语征文比赛。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

假期：vacation一holiday

不同的：various—»different

帮助：help—assist

影响：impact一influence

2.句式拓展

同义句替换

原句：Whentellingthestoriesforeachexhibit,Ipaidspecialattentiontoculturaldifferencesto

fosterabetterunderstandingforvisitorsfromvariouscountries.

拓展句：WhenItoldthestoriesforeachexhibit,Ipaidspecialattentiontoculturaldifferencesto

fosterabetterunderstandingforvisitorsfromvariouscountries.

【点睛】【高分句型11Whentellingthestoriesforeachexhibit,Ipaidspecialattentiontocultural

differencestofosterabetterunderstandingforvisitorsfromvariouscountries.（运用了状语从句中

的省略）

[高分句型2]Thistourguiderolenotonlyenrichedmyknowledgeofnationalhistory,butalso

helpedshapemypassionsandvalues.（运用了notonly...butalso连接谓语）

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Teens正在就我国社会老龄化越来越严重的问题举办征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包

括：1.关爱老人的原因；2.关爱老人的方式；3•倡议大家共同关爱老人。

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注意：字数100左右。

【答案】Astheagingpopulationinoursocietygrows,ifscrucialtoshowloveandrespecttoour

elders.Theyhavecontributedsignificantlytooursocietyanddeserveourcare.

Therearevariouswaystoshowloveandcarefortheelderly.Firstly,wecanvisitthem

regularly,listentotheirstories,andspendtimewiththem.Secondly,wecanprovidepracticalhelp,

suchasassistingwithdailytasks,providingtransportation,orofferingmedicalsupport.

Additionally,wecanalsosupportpoliciesandprogramsthatbenefittheelderly,suchaspensions

andhealthcare.

Iurgeeveryonetojoinhandsinshowingloveandcareforourelderly.Bydoingso,wecan

createawarmerandmoreharmonioussociety.

【导语】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇短文投稿，陈述关爱老人的原因、关爱老人的方

式，并倡议大家共同关爱老人。

【详解】1.词汇积累

增力口：grow—>increase

重要的：crucial-^important/essential/vital

各种各样的：various—avarietyof^allkindsof

提供：provide—>ofler

止匕夕卜：additionally—inaddition

2.句式拓展

简单句改为倒装句

原句：Bydoingso,wecancreateawarmerandmoreharmonioussociety.

拓展句：Onlybydoingsocanwecreateawarmerandmoreharmonioussociety.

【点睛】【高分句型1]Astheagingpopulationinoursocietygrows,it'scrucialtoshowloveand

respecttoourelders.（使用了As引导时间状语从句、itis+M/.+todo…句型）

［高分句型21Additionally,wecanalsosupportpoliciesandprogramsthatbenefittheelderly,such

aspensionsandhealthcare.（使用了that弓|导定语从句）

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你校正举办主题为“ACoolTry!”的英语征文活动。请你以自身经历写一篇短文投稿，内容包

括：

1.简述尝试的过程；

2.收获或感想。

注意：

1.词数100左右;

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

ACoolTry!

【答案】

ACoolTry!

Lastsummervacation,togaindifferentlifeexperience,Iwasaccompaniedbymyparentsto

giveBungeeJumpingafirsttry.

Beforethejump,professionalinstructorsprovidedadetailedsafetybriefing,explainingthe

equipment,thejumpprocedures,andwhattoexpectduringthefallandrebound.ThenIwasfitted

withaharness,whichwasattachedtotherubbercord.Asthemomentoftrutharrived,Istoodon

theedgeofthejumpingplatform,heartpoundingandlegstrembling.Eyesclosed,Itooktheleap,

withamixedsensationofexcitement,terrorandweightlessness.

Thewholeexperiencewasoverinamatterofseconds,butthememoryofthethrillandthe

senseofachievementlastalifetime,givingmeconfidencetofacenewchallengesandembrace

adventure.

【导语】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以自身经历参与主题为“ACoolTry!”的英语征文活

动，需涵盖尝试的过程和收获或感想。

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【详解】

1.词汇积累

获得：gain—acquire

提供：provide—>ofler

装备：fit一equip

来临：arrive一come

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Thewholeexperiencewasoverinamatterofseconds,butthememoryofthethrillandthe

senseofachievementlastalifetime,givingmeconfidencetofacenewchallengesandembrace

adventure.

拓展句：Thewholeexperiencewasoverinamatterofseconds,butthememoryofthethrillandthe

senseofachievementlastalifetime,whichgavemeconfidencetofacenewchallengesandembrace

adventure.

【点睛】

[高分句型1]Beforethejump,professionalinstructorsprovidedadetailedsafetybriefing,

explainingtheequipment,thejumpprocedures,andwhattoexpectduringthefallandrebound.（运

用了现在分词作状语、“特殊疑问词+不定式”作宾语）

[高分句型2]Eyesclosed,Itooktheleap,withamixedsensationofexcitement,terrorand

weightlessness.（运用了独立主格结构）

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你校英文报正举办以“ThePowerofSmile”为题的征文比赛，请结合自身经历写一篇短文投稿，

内容包括：

1.自身经历；

2.你的感悟。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.题目已为你写好。

ThePowerofSmile

【答案】ThePowerofSmile

Asmilehasthepowertotransformnotonlyourownmood,butalsotheatmospherearoundus.

IrememberatimewhenIwasfeelingdown,butasimplesmilefromafriendbrightenedupmyday.

Itmademerealizethateveninthetoughestmoments,asmilecanbringaglimmerofhope.

Smilingislikeauniversallanguagethatconnectsuswithothers.Itshowskindness,empathy,

andpositiveenergy.Ithastheabilitytoupliftspirits,fosterconnections,andcreateamorepleasant

andharmoniousworld.

So,lefsembracethepowerofsmile.Letitbeaconstantremindertoseethegoodinlifeand

shareitwiththosearoundus.Asmileisasmallactthatcanhaveabigimpact.

【导语】

本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的稿件。要求考生结合自身经历写一篇短文，参加校英文报

正举办的以“ThePowerofSmile”为题的征文比赛。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

艰难：tough—>hard/difflcult

培养：foster—>develop

拥抱：embrace—>hug

影响：impact一eflect/influence

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Letitbeaconstantremindertoseethegoodinlifeandshareitwiththosearoundus.

拓展句：Letitbeaconstantremindertoseethegoodinlifeandshareitwiththosewhoarearound

us.

【点睛】

【高分句型11IrememberatimewhenIwasfeelingdown,butasimplesmilefromafriend

brightenedupmyday.（运用了when引导的定语从句）

[高分句型2].Itmademerealizethateveninthetoughestmoments,asmilecanbringaglimmer

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ofhope.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）

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你校英语报近期将推出一个主题为“高中生如何养成良好的心理状态”的专栏。你与美国教育

专家Dr.Smith进行了交流后写一篇英语文章投稿，主要内容如下：1.交流的主要内容：2.交

流后的收获。

注意：1.写作词数应为100左右；2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。

【答案］Recently,IhadtheopportunitytointerviewDr.Smith,arenownedAmericaneducation

expert,onthetopicoffosteringapositivemindsetamonghighschoolstudents.

Dr.Smithemphasizedtheimportanceofmaintainingabalancebetweenacademicpressure

andpersonalwell-being.Hehighlightedthesignificanceofself-carepracticessuchasregular

exercise,adequatesleep,andmindfulnesstechniques.AccordingtoDr.Smith,cultivatinghobbies

andspendingqualitytimewithfriendsandfamilycanalsogreatlycontributetoahealthymental

state.

Icametorealizethatachievingacademicsuccessinhighschoolshouldn'tcomeatthe

expenseofmentalhealth.Dr.Smith'sinsightsserveasareminderforstudentstoprioritizetheir

well-beingwhilestrivingforexcellence.

【导语】本书面表达属于应用文写作。要求就“高中生如何养成良好的心理状态”的问题与教

育专家进行交流后，写篇交流心得投稿。

【详解】1.词汇积累

著名的：renowned—>prestigious

培养：fbster—cultivate

强调：emphasize—■underline

压力：pressure—stress

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Recently,IhadtheopportunitytointerviewDr.Smith,arenownedAmericaneducation

expert,onthetopicoffosteringapositivemindsetamonghighschoolstudents.

拓展句：Recently,IhadtheopportunitytointerviewDr.Smith,whoisarenownedAmerican

educationexpert,onthetopicoffosteringapositivemindsetamonghighschoolstudents.

【点睛】【高分句型11AccordingtoDr.Smith,cultivatinghobbiesandspendingqualitytimewith

friendsandfamilycanalsogreatlycontributetoahealthymentalstate.（运用了动名词作主语）

【高分句型2]Icametorealizethatachievingacademicsuccessinhighschoolshouldn'tcomeat

theexpenseofmentalhealth.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）

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假定你是李华，你校英文杂志社要举办以“与科学家跨时空对话（TalktoaScientistacrossTime

andSpace）”为主题的书信征文活动，请你写…封信给你最崇敬的一位科学家。内容包括：

1.表达对他（她）的崇敬之情；

2.解释你崇敬他（她）的原因。

注意：1.词数80左右2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

DearSir/Madam,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearGrandpaYuanLongping,

Iamwritingtoexpressmyadmirationforyou.Youdevoteyourselftotheresearchtohybrid

ricewithwillingnesstoservethecountry.

Youliveaverysimplelife,butyoucontributionsareinvaluabletothefieldofscienceand

agriculture.Withoutyouandyourteam,therewouldstillbemillionsofpeoplehavingtofacethe

threatofhunger.

Itwasyourhard-workingspiritandperseverancethatworthusstudying.Youaremyrole

modelandhasbeeninspiringmetostudyhardandinsistonmydreamofmakingcontributionsto

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mycountry.

Iamreallyproudthatwehavesuchagreatscientistlikeyou.

Yourssincerely

LiHua

【导语】本文是一篇应用文。要求考生代替李华以“与科学家跨时空对话（TalktoaScientist

acrossTimeandSpace）”为主题写信给你最崇敬的一位科学家，参加书信征文活动。

【详解】1.词汇积累

致力于：devoteoneselfto—commitoneselfto

简单的：simple—+plain

不，懈努力：perseverance—determination

坚持：insiston—persistin

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：Youliveaverysimplelife,butyoucontributionsareinvaluabletothefieldofscienceand

agriculture.

拓展句：Thoughyouliveaverysimplelife,youcontributionsareinvaluabletothefieldofscience

andagriculture.

【点睛】【高分句型1]

Withoutyouandyourteam,therewouldstillbemillionsofpeoplehavingtofacethethreatof

hunger.（运用了虚拟语气）

【高分句型2]Itwasyourhard-workingspiritandperseverancethatworthusstudying.（运用了

强调句型）

Passage11

上周你参加了学校组织的主题为“以劳动感恩父母”的活动。请你给校英文报写一篇稿件，分

享你的经历，内容包括：

（1）劳动过程；

（2）你的感受。

注意：

（1）写作词数应为80左右；

（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

ShowGratitudetoParentsthroughLabor

【答案】ShowGratitudetoParentsthroughLabor

Inordertoarouseourawarenessofbeinggratefultoourparents,ourschoolheldanactivity

lastweekend.

Toshowmythanks,Idecidedtodosomethingformyparents.Gettingupearlierthanusuallast

Saturday,IspentmuchtimepreparingtheirbreakfastandthenIbegantohelpdocleaninginour

house,whichmademetiredandexhausted.WhenIsawmyparents9satisfiedsmiles,Ifeltthatmy

laborwasworthwhile.

Throughthisactivity,Fvelearntthatitisnoteasyformyparentstoworkandtakecareofusat

thesametime.ItistheirselflessandunconditionallovethatIshouldappreciate.

【导语】本文是应用文。要求考生给校英文报写一篇稿件，分享你的通过劳动感恩父母的经

历。

【详解】1.词汇积累

举办：hold—>host

感恩：thanks一appreciation/gratitude

照顾：takecareof^lookafter

感激：appreciate一begratefulfor

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Inordertoarouseourawarenessofbeinggratefultoourparents,ourschoolheldanactivity

lastweekend.

拓展句：Ourschoolheldanactivitylastweekend,whichwasaimedatarousingourawarenessof

beinggratefultoourparents.

【点睛】【高分句型1JGettingupearlierthanusuallastSaturday,Ispentmuchtimepreparingtheir

breakfastandthenIbegantohelpdocleaninginourhouse,whichmademetiredandexhausted.（运

用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

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[高分句型2]WhenIsawmyparents9satisfiedsmiles,Ifeltthatmylaborwasworthwhile.（运用

了when引导的时间状语从句）

[高分句型3]ItistheirselflessandunconditionallovethatIshouldappreciate.（运用了强调句）

Passage12

你校英语报正在举行主题为“SuccessComesfromHardWork”的征文比赛。请你写一篇短文投

稿，内容包括：

1.阐述勤奋的意义；

2.举一个勤奋促使你成功的事例；

3.描述成功后的感受。

注意：

1.词数100左右;

2.题目已为你写好。

【答案】SuccessComesfromHardWork

Hardworkisthekeytosuccess.Itisthecommitmenttoworkinghardthatallowsustoachieve

greatnessintherelentlesspursuitofourgoals.

OneexampleofhowhardworkledtomysuccesswaswhenIpreparedfortheseniorhigh

schoolentranceexamination.Besidesattendingclasses,Ispentcountlesshoursstudying,reviewing

andpracticing.Isoughthelpwhenfacedwithchallenges.Asaresult,Ipassedtheexaminationwith

flyingcolors.

Thefeelingofsuccessthatfollowsdiligenceisindescribable.I'vegainedasenseofconfidence

andaccomplishment.Iknowthatnogoalisoutofreachaslongaswearewillingtoputinthe

necessaryeffort.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“SuccessComesfromHardWork”为主题给校

英文报投稿。

【详解】1.词汇积累

实现：achieve一accomplish

无数：countless一numerous

帮助：help一assist

获得：gained—^obtained

2.句式拓展

同义句替换

原句：Besidesattendingclasses,Ispentcountlesshoursstudying,reviewingandpracticing.

同义句：Inadditiontoattendingclasses,Idedicatednumeroushourstostudying,reviewing,and

honingmyskills.

【点睛】【高分句型1]Iknowthatnogoalisoutofreachaslongaswearewillingtoputinthe

necessaryeffort.（运用了that引导的宾语从句和aslongas引导的条件状语从句）

[高分句型2]OneexampleofhowhardworkledtomysuccesswaswhenIpreparedforthe

seniorhighschoolentranceexamination.（运用了how引导的宾语从句和when引导的时间状语

从句）

Passage13

你校正举办英语征文比赛。请以AnUnforgettableActivity为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：

1.活动简介；

2.你的感受。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

AnUnforgettableActivity

【答案】AnUnforgettableActivity

AmongalltheactivitiesthatIparticipatedin,workingasavolunteeratanursinghomeisthe

mostunforgettable.

Itwasasunnyday.Onarrivalatthenursinghome,myclassmatesandIvisitedtheelderlyin

groupsandgavepresentstothemtoshowourrespectandloveforthem.Afterthat,weorganized

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variousactivities,someplayingchesswiththeoldandsomeperformingtraditionalChinesemusic

anddance.Atlast,wemadedumplingsfortheelderly.Theywerepleasedwithwhatwedidand

sharedmanywonderfulstorieswithus.

Overall,theactivitywasofgreatsignificance.Itnotonlytaughtmehowtocareforpeoplein

need,butletmeexperiencethepleasureofhelpingothers.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校正举办英语征文比赛。请考生以AnUnforgettable

Activity为题写一篇短文投稿。

【详解】1.词汇积累

参与：participatein—>takepartin

给：give—>offer

各种各样的：various^diverse

最后：atlast-finally

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Overall,theactivitywasofgreatsignificance.

拓展句：Overall,theactivitywasofgreatsignificance,whichwasalsogreatlymeaningful.

【点睛】【高分句型1]AmongalltheactivitiesthatIparticipatedin,workingasavolunteerata

nursinghomeisthemostunforgettable.（运用了that引导的限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2]Theywerepleasedwithwhatwedidandsharedmanywonderfulstorieswithus.（is

用了what引导宾语从句）

Passage14

你校将以“我们的劳动实践课（Ourlaborpracticecourse）”为主题，举办英语征文比赛。请你写

一篇英语短文投稿，内容包括：

1.学校开展劳动实践课程的目的；

2.你遇到的挑战和从中受到的启发。

要求：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【答案】OurLaborPracticeCourse

Withtheaimofeducatingstudentstofeelfreertoengageinbroaderexploration,experimenting

andquestioning,ourschoolhascarriedoutaseriesofagriculturalpractices.

Whileworkinginthefield,I,asaweeder,pulledoutarowofyoungplantsbymistake,which

causedmygroupmemberstoscream.Tomakeupformymistake,Iboughtseedsandreplanted

theminthefield,usingupmyen