应用文技巧3：表达的多样与扩充

潮流渐变创意汇报人姓名汇报日期表达的多样与扩充musicMUSIC1.句子形式多样化:根据表达的需求,可以采用多种句式,这样既能恰当表达,又能避免形式单一【典型例句】

①Theywereso

heavy

that(如此沉重以至于)wecouldn’tliftthematfirst.②There

is

no

doubt

that(毫无疑问)itisunwisetodependcompletelyontheratingsinconsumption.musicMUSIC【拓展训练】

①Inrecentyears,moreandmorepeoplestarttoprotectourenvironment,whichmakesourenvironmentmoreandmorecolorful.→______________________________________________________________________,ourenvironmentisbecomingmoreandmorecolorful.(with复合结构)

→Inrecentyears,_______________________

whostarttoprotectourenvironmentthatourenvironmentisbecomingmoreandmorecolorful.(therebe句式)

②Ifyoustudyhard,youwillmakerapidprogress.→_________________________________________(并列句)

Inrecentyears,withmoreandmorepeoplestartingtoprotectourenvironmenttherearesomanypeopleStudyhardandyouwillmakerapidprogress.musicMUSIC2.使用非谓语动词形式,句子凝练高端【典型例句】

①After

learning

the

course(学过这门课程后),I’msureI’llhaveabetterunderstandingofthedifferencesandsimilaritiesbetweenChinesecultureandWesternculture.②On

arriving

at

the

tea

house(一到达茶室),theforeignstudentswereimpressedbytheuniqueteapotsandteacups.musicMUSIC【拓展训练】

①Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher.→Shewalkedoutofthelab,________________________.(非谓语动词)

②Theysangandlaughedastheywentbacktoschool.→Theywentbacktoschool,___________________.(非谓语动词)

followedbymanystudentssingingandlaughingmusicMUSIC3.运用定语从句,增加细节,填补内容【典型例句】

①Materialcollectingtookusawholeweek,during

which(在此期间)weinterviewedourteachersandtookpicturesofeveryaspectofschoollife.②Iameagertoinviteyoutojoinourteamfortheupcomingevent,in

which(在活动中)youwilldemonstrateyourabilityandmakeacquaintancewithmorefriendswiththesameinterest.musicMUSIC【拓展训练】

①Besides,therewillbealotofusefulandinterestingactivities,______________________________________________________(从中你对中国文化会有更清晰的认识).

②IhavefoundaflatforyouonFangcaoStreetnearJianxinChineseSchool.Itisonthethirdfloorwiththreerooms,______________________(其中一个是卧室),andtheothertwoarebathroomandkitchen.

fromwhichyoucanhaveaclearerpictureofChinesecultureoneofwhichisbedroommusicMUSIC4.巧用倒装,增强句子的表现力【典型例句】

①Not

only

will

our

club’s

works

be

displayed(不仅我们俱乐部的作品会被展出),butwealsohaveavaluablesetofpaper-cuttingcreatedbyafamousartistofthisfield.②Not

only

did

you

help

improve

my

English(你不但帮我提升了英语),butyoualsogavememoreconfidenceinlearning.③Next

came

the

moment

when

I

asked

them

to

have

a

try

themselves.(接下来,我让他们自己试一试。)musicMUSIC【拓展训练】

①ThoughI’mweak,I’llmaketheeffort.→____________________,I’llmaketheeffort.(倒装)

②HehadnosoonercomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.→______________________________________thanhewassentabroad.(倒装)

Weakas/thoughIamNosoonerhadhecomebackfromBeijing

musicMUSIC5.恰当使用强调句,增强说服力【典型例句】

①It

wasyouwhotaughtmehowtolearnEnglishwell.(是你教我如何学好英语的。)②It

wasonFridaythatouractivitybegan.(我们的活动是在星期五开始的。)musicMUSIC【拓展训练】

①Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.→_______________hehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper_____

heknewwhathadhappened.(强调句)

②_____workinginteamsinsteadofonmyown_____

hasfreedmeoftroubleandmademyworkmoreefficient.(强调句)

Itwasnotuntil

Itis

thatthatmusicMUSIC6.自如应用各种名词性从句,精彩纷呈【典型例句】

①IfyouareinterestedinwhatIhavestatedabove(如果你对我上面所说的感兴趣),signuponourschoolwebsitebeforeSeptember1st.②That’swhyIthinkthetripalongtheYangtzeRiverwillbeabetterchoice.(那就是我认为沿长江旅行将是一个更好的选择的原因。)musicMUSIC【拓展训练】

①Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.→___________________isthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings.(主语从句)

②Ihavejustfound___________________________________________________(我那天下午得参加一个重要会议).

Whatsurpriseshim

thatIhavetoattendanimportantmeetingthatafternoonmusicMUSIC7.with

or

without精彩点缀,妙不可言【典型例句】

①With

so

many

different

forms

of

poetry

to

choose

from(有这么多不同形式的诗可供选择),studentsmayeventuallywanttowritepoemsoftheirown.②Without

any

hesitation(毫不延迟),webegantowork.musicMUSIC【拓展训练】

①Asanoldsayinggoes,living_______________________________(没有清晰可达到的目标)islikesailingwithoutacompass.

②Ican’tthankyouenoughforyourgeneroushelp,___________________________________________________(没有这些帮助我不能获得这么大的进步).

withoutaclearandachievableaimwithoutwhichIcouldn’thavemadesuchgreatprogressmusicMUSIC8.巧用副词,充分表情达意【典型例句】

①Iamextremely

delighted(非常高兴)tohearthatyouhavebeenadmittedintoakeyuniversity.②Igenuinelyhope(真心希望)thatyoucansqueezesometimeforourfestivalandhavefunwithus.musicMUSIC【拓展训练】

①She_________(耐心地)explainedalltherulestothestudentsandrequiredeveryonetofollowthem.②Wewere_________(完全地)satisfiedwiththeresultoftheexperiment.patientlyperfectlymusicMUSIC9.变主动为被动,凸显英语思维【典型例句】

①Myfathergavemeanewbookonmybirthday.→Iwas

givenanewbook(bymyfather)onmybirthday.(间接宾语作主语)→Anewbookwas

giventome(bymyfather)onmybirthday.(直接宾语作主语)②Andsomeworld-famousplayerswill

be

invited(将会被邀请)togivelessons.musicMUSIC【拓展训练】

①Atmostfivebooks________________(可以被借用)atatimeandthey___________(可以被保存)fortendays.

②You____________(被允许)abouttenminutestoprepareforthework.

canbeborrowedcanbekeptareallowed

musicMUSIC10.语气委婉而中肯,易于接受【典型例句】

①Ifyouhavefurtherquestions,please

feel

free

to

let

me

know(请随时告诉我).②Isincerely

hope(真诚地希望)youcansetasidesometimefortheartfeast.【拓展训练】

①Iwonder__________________(你能否告诉我)whatbooksIneedtoreadandtherequirementsofmyhomework.

②Whatdoyouthinkofit?Areyousatisfiedwithit?Ifnot,________________________________(请尽快告诉我).

ifyoucouldtellmepleasetellmeasquicklyaspossiblemusicMUSIC【语篇填空】

根据所给信息补全短文,并注意高级句式的应用。

假定你是李华,你校的交换生Tom对中国的民间艺术很感兴趣,本周五学校将要举办“校园文化节”,请你写一封电子邮件,邀请Tom去体验编织艺术。DearTom,_____________________________(好消息来了).TheCampusCultureFestivalwillbehostedthisFriday.SinceyouhaveastrongpassionforChinesefolkart,it’sagreatpleasureformetoinviteyoutojoinus.

HerecomesapieceofgoodnewsmusicMUSICTheactivityisscheduledtolastabouttwohours,from3:30pmto5:30pmintheschoolhall.Itcoversawidevarietyofcontents.________________________________________________________________________________________________________(我们不仅能够欣赏到许多吸引人的编织艺术作品,从桌椅到各种装饰品,不一而足),butalsowe’llwatchthedocumentary___________(关于)thehistoryoftheweaving