2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：人生哲理类-海边寻宝 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习人生哲理类——海边寻宝1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文JimandAndywalkedalongthebeach,lookingforanadventure.Theyjokedthatsomedaytheywouldfindatalkingfishoramermaidorabottlewithatreasuremapinside.Sofartheyhadonlyfoundshellsandrocksandseaweed.Todaythoughwasdifferent.Theboysfeltexcited.Seacrabsscamperedontherocks.Uponesideanddowntheother.Theywerequickandlively.Thetidedidn’tseemtoeverwashthemaway.ThenJimsawafish.Itwas

stranded

onthebeach,justfloppingaround.“Canittalk?”Andyasked.“Itlookslikeanyotherfish,”Jimsaid.Hepickeditupgentlyandcarriedittothewater.4续写原文“Doyouthinkitwillgrantusanywishes?”Andylaughed.Theboyswatchedasthe

silver

fishspedoffthroughthewater.“No.Maybenexttime.”Jimgrinned.Asthetwofriendswalkedfartherdownthebeachtheycameupona

bottle.Itwasgreenwithacorkinthemouth.“Ourluckwillchange.Doesithaveamapinsideoragenie?”jokedAndy.Andyreacheddownand

pickedup

thebottle.Herubbedit.Nothinghappened.Hepulledonthecork.Nothinghappened.Heshookit.Nothinghappened.5续写原文“Trythecorkagain.Ibetthegenieis

waitingfor

ustoreleasehim.Orwe’llfindatreasuremapandhavearealadventure,”Jimexclaimed.Andytuggedagainonthecork.Hewiggledit

backandforth.Hetwisteditaroundandaround.Finallyitpoppedoutwithoutbreaking.Andy

shookthebottle.Nothingcameout.Lookinginsidehecouldn’tseeanything.Jimlookedtooandshookhishead.Empty.“It’sjustanoldwinebottle,”Jim

complained.Hegrabbedthebottleandtosseditbackontothesand.6段首句Para1:Thebottlehitarockandshatteredintomanypieces.

Para2：Twoboysranafterit.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Jim和Andy想在海边寻宝，挽救了一条搁浅的鱼，结果发现了一个瓶子，瓶子摔碎后他们发现里面有一把长长的银色钥匙，Andy弯腰想拾起钥匙。突然瓶子又完好如初，钥匙又回到里面了。他们跟着瓶子走，然后它在一个小岛附近停了下来，那儿有很多财宝——是那条搁浅的鱼来报恩的。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：Thebottlehitarockandshatteredintomanypieces.由第一段首句内容“瓶子撞在岩石上，摔得粉碎。”可知，第一段可描写瓶子碎了，Andy和Jim看见一把银钥匙掉在地上，Andy弯腰想拾起钥匙。突然瓶子又完好如初，钥匙又回到里面了。11续写思路分析Para2：Twoboysranafterit.由第二段首句内容“两个男孩追着它跑。”可知，第二段可描写两个孩子跟着瓶子跑。他们进入海里时没有下沉而是漂浮在海上。他们感到很兴奋。瓶子把他们带到一个岛屿附近，那儿有很多财宝——是那条搁浅的鱼来报恩的。12续写思路分析续写线索瓶子摔碎——发现银钥匙——捡起钥匙——瓶子完好如初——瓶子滚向大海——男孩追瓶子——来到财宝小岛——鱼的报恩13续写素材可用词汇：行为类看见：see/spot开始：begin/start进入：enter/getinto情绪类惊讶：astonishingly/surprisingly激动：excited/thrilled14续写素材[高分句型1]Whydidn’titmakeanynoisewhentheyshookthebottle?(运用了when引导时间状语从句)[高分句型2]Theyfollowedthebottleandthenitstoppednearanislandwheretherewaslotsoftreasurelikediamondsandstones.(运用了where引导定语从句)15Part3范文呈现16范文呈现Thebottlehitarockandshatteredintomanypieces.

BothAndyandJimgaspedastheysawalong,silver

keyonthegroundintheglasspieces.Thentheylookedateachother.Whydidn’titmakeanynoisewhentheyshookthebottle?Whydidn’ttheyseeit?Andybentovertopickup

thekey.Suddenlytheglasspiecescametogethertoformabottle

again.Thekeywasmysteriouslybackinside!Andthebottlebeganrollingslowlytowardthesea.17范文呈现Twoboysranafterit.Whentheyenteredthesea,astonishinglytheydidn’tsinkintothewaterbutfloatedonthesurfaceofit.Theyfeltexcited.Theyfollowedthebottleandthenitstoppednearanislandwheretherewaslotsoftreasurelikediamondsandstones.“Youcantakeasmuchaspossible,”avoicecamefromthecoastwhereatalkingfishwasswimming.Itwasthestranded

fishthatJimsavedandputbackintothewater.18范文译文瓶子撞到一块石头上摔成了碎片。当安迪和吉姆看到地上的玻璃碎片中有一把长长的银钥匙时，他们都倒吸了一口气。然后他们互相看了看。为什么他们摇瓶子时没有发出任何声音？为什么他们没看到？安迪弯腰捡起钥匙。突然，玻璃碎片又聚在一起形成了一个瓶子。钥匙神秘地回到了里面！瓶子开始慢慢地朝大海滚去。两个男孩追着它跑。当他们进入大海时，令人惊讶的是，他们没有沉入水中，而是漂浮在水面上。他们