2022届高考英语二轮专题应用文复习-邀请外教出行课件

高考英语应用文复习邀请外教出行作文（15分）

假定你是高二（1）班的李华，计划本周末和同学们去北京奥林匹克森林公园进行徒步活动，请给外教Lucy写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括：1.活动安排：（如活动时间，行走路线等）；2.需要做的准备工作；3.询问对方意向。注意： 1.词数不少于60;2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Interaction（交际性：互动）

Willyoubeavailable?Wouldyouliketogiveitatry?Isthisappealingtoyou?Astrongappealtoyou,isn’tit?Soundsgreat,doesn’tit?Tone（交际性：语气）

LessformalHow’severythinggoing?

Arrangement（内容：介绍活动安排）

Start/end/lengthActivity—walkingMorethanwalkingpurpose(route,distance,time,pace)(game,party,barbecue...)所用语言关键词汇Iamwritingtoinviteat/in/onthisSaturdaytheOlympicForestParkwalk/hike(jog,run...)Grade2Class1建议：advice(Uncountablenoun)；adviseV.sbtodosuggestion(CountableNoun);suggestV.(that)sb(should)do准备：prepare...fortheactivity;preparation××Class1,Grade2我写信想邀请您参加我们的徒步走活动。徒步活动定在周日早晨8点开始,大约三个小时。我们会走公园一半的路，会很累。我建议您穿合身的衣服和包头鞋,这样你就会走得轻松而舒服。一定带上水和帽子，万一天气热太阳晒。如果有时间，您能来吗？如果有问题，请联系我。我写信想邀请您参加我们的徒步走活动。IamwritingtoinviteyoutojoinusinhikingthisSunday.TakeahikingwithusHikewithus徒步活动定在周日早晨8点开始,大约三个小时。Thehikingisscheduledtokickoffat8.amthis

upcomingSundayandrunfor3hours.Asplanned,thehikingwillkickoffat...我们会走公园一半的路，会很累。Wewillcoverhalfof(therouteof)thepark,whichisdefinitelytiring/challenging.Wewillcoverhalfof(therouteof)thepark,whichissupposedtobetiring/challenging.我建议您穿合身的衣服和包头鞋,这样你就会走得轻松而舒服。Isuggestyouwearfittedclothesandclosed-toeshoessothatyouwillhavearelaxingandcomfortablehiking.Tomakesureyouwillhavearelaxingandcomfortablehiking,fittedclothesandclosed-toeareyourperfectchoice.一定带上水和帽子，万一天气热太阳晒。Dobringsomewaterandwearacapincaseitishotandthesunisburning.您能来吗，如果有时间？Willyoumakeittojoinusifyouareavailable?Willyoucomeandjoinusifitisconvenientforyou?Whynotgiveitatryiftimeisavailableforyou?如果有问题，请联系我。Ifyouhaveanyquestion,feelfreetoask/contactme.Don’thesitatetoaskme.范文赏析DearLucy,IamwritingtoinviteyoutojoinusthisSundayforawalkingactivityintheOlympicForestPark,whichisthelargestparkinBeijing.Therearemanywalkingpaths,withlengthsof3k,5k,and10kwithinthepark.Andweplantowalk10k.Itwillbeverychallenging.Ifyou’reinterestedinit,pleasemeetusat9:00onSundaymorningatthesouthgateofOlympicForestPark.

Ifyouwanttobreatheinthefreshairandgetmuchexercise,whynotcome?Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply!Yours,LiHua要点一：活动安排交际性：写作目的陈述Asforpreparation,you’dbetterwearsneakerstoguaranteeyourcomfortandawind-jacketincaseitiswindy.Inaddition,youcantakesuncreamtoprotectyourskinfromthesunlight.Abottleofwaterisalsonecessary.

Ifyouwanttobreatheinthefreshairandgetmuchexercise,whynotcome?Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply!Yours,LiHua要点二：所需准备要点三：询问意向高分作文赏析15分要点齐全；结构合理活动内容和准备工作都很清晰学生很明显使用了本学期学习的词组很多。过程性学习痕迹明显语气略显客气14分书写漂亮，要点齐全；结构合理活动内容和准备工作都很清晰；词汇丰富，句式多样，没有错误；交际得体，体现了很强的语言运用能力建议该学生使用颜色比这个略浅的笔14分要点齐全；结构合理活动内容和准备工作都很清晰词组表达很丰富；非谓语，从句使用也很正确书写还有进步的空间语气略显客气12分书写漂亮，要点齐全；结构合理活动细节以及准备工作都很丰富；句式多样，交际得体。不过其实仔细看一下，这篇文章从开篇的willbestartat8to12，together用成动词；后文中还有诸如therehave；toourdelightisthat等表达使用不当；最后joinwithus.建议该同学注意改错。不过这篇作文正好说明书写的重要性同话题作文假如你是李华，你们学校将举办新年联欢会。请你给外教Linda女士写一封邮件邀请她参加。邮件内容包括：1.通知联欢会事宜。2.希望Linda表演节目。3.询问对方意向。

DearLinda,Howisitgoing？I'mwritingtoinviteyoutoourNewYear'sParty．MyclassmatesandIplantohaveapartytocelebratetheNewYear．WearegoingtohavethepartyinourclassroomonDecember29th．Thepartywillstartat2o'clockintheafternoon．Attheparty，wewillsingsongs，playgames，anddance．Ihopeyoucancometoourpartyifyouareavailablethen．Nothingisneededtopreparefortheparty,for