2025届新高考英语精准冲刺复习 读后续写语篇练习++偏爱的思考

2025届新高考英语精准冲刺复习

读后续写语篇练习1——“偏爱”的思考Part1题目呈现2续写原文下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。①Forthefirsttenyearsofhislife,Victorwastheprinceofthehousehold.Ashewasanonlychild,hisparentspettedhimandshoweredalltheirloveandattentiononhim.Whatevertoysparentshisparentsbought,theywerealwaysmeantforhim.Whateverfoodwasintherefrigerator,therewasnoonetocompetewith.Victorcouldleavehistoysorbooksaroundthehousewithcompleteeaseofmind,knowingthatnoonewouldgettheirhandsonhisbelongingsandcauseanydamage.②However,allthatwastochangeovernightwhenVictor'sparentsbroughtbackhisnewbabysister,Lina,fromthehospital.Withherrosycheeks,wideopeneyesandangelicsmile,Linacaughttheheartsofherparents,grandparentsandrelatives.EveryonefocusedtheirattentiononthiscutebundleofJoy.Whenevershecried,hermotherorfatherwouldrushtoherbed.Shesimplycriedbecauseshewantedtobecarried.TherewaslittletimeleftforVictor.3续写原文③NowthatVictor'smotherhadhisbabysistertotakecareof,sheexpectedVictortodomostofhischoreshimself.Victorwasaskedtocleanhisownroom,ironhisownschooluniformandcleanhisownshoes:BeforeLina'sarrival,hehadneverliftedafingertohelpoutwiththesetasks.ThewholefamilyalsowentoutlessbecauseitwasunsafetoexposeLinatoanybacteria(细菌)intheoutsideworldtoooften.④Victorfeltneglected（忽视）byhisparents.HefeltthattheylovedLinamorethanhim.Asaresult,hetriedtoattracthisparents'attention.Oneevening,Victor'sparentswerecalledupbyhisteacherbecauseVictorhadgotintoafightatschool.HisteacherhadnoticedVictor'sbehaviorandworkattitudechangingdownwardsinthepasttwomonths.4续写段首语Paragraph1：Uponhearingtheteacher’sfeedback,Victor’sparentsgotlostinthough.

Paragraph2：Victorrealizedthathisparentsstillcaredforhim.5Part1文本分析①人物：②情节线：VictorBeforeLinawasbornAfterLinawasborntheprinceofthefamilyHisparentspettedhimandgavehimalltheirloveandattentionEveryoneinhisfamilyfocusedtheirattentiononLina.Hehadtodosometasksonhisown.Hedecidedtodosomethingtoatrracthisparents’attention.behavedbadlyatschool......Victor-aboy,Lina-Victor’sbabysister,Victor’sparents③主题：④Victor的感受和心理活动的变化：家庭成员之间的理解和爱receivedallhisparents’loveandattentionfeltneglectedtriedtoattracthisparents’attention

独生子Victor十岁前享受这父母对他的全部的宠爱和关注，但这一切在他的妹妹Lina出生后发生了变化。父母将全部的注意力集中在Lina身上，这让他感到被忽视，因此他想引起父母的注意力。

思考：阅读部分的最后老师告诉了Victor的父母他最近在学校的表现。

在接下来的读后续写部分，Victor的父母会做什么变化，Victor有会有哪些心理变化你？父母：反省---改变Victor:感受到爱---回报。①第一段：Whatevertoyshisparentsbought,theywerealwaysmeantforhim.Whateverfood

wasintherefrigerator,therewasnoone10competewith.这两句说明在妹妹出生前父母对Victor物质生活的满足。思考：在续写时，我们可否与这两包呼应，通过描写父母重新关注并满足Victor的物质需求来体现父母的变化？Part2细读语言②第三段：ThewholefamilyalsowentoutlessbecauseitwasunsafetoexposeLinatoanybacteriaintheoutsideworldtoooften.taJ说明在妹妹出生后，Victor的精神生活也受到了影响。思考：在续写时，如果我们能通过细节描写体现父母对Victor的陪伴和关注，父母的变化是不是会更加全面？③第三段：Victorwasaskedtocleanhisown

room,ironhisownschooluniformandcleanhisownshoes.此句通过wasasked体现出Victor做这些家务是被动的、不情愿思考：由于父母的忙碌，Victor被要求做一些自己力所能及的家务，但感到被忽视的Victor显然并不愿意做这些事情。在续写部分，如果Victor的感受发生了变化，情节中加入他在行动上的相应改变，整个人物是不是会显得更加丰满？④高频词：love,attention在阅读部分反复出现，是串联整个故事发展脉络的重要成分。思考：这些高频词在续写部分大概率会出现。阅读部分提到父母的love和atention从最初全部给了Victor到之后全部给了Lina这一变化，续写部分是否应该描述父母及时做出了调整，把一部分love

和attention给了Victor,Victor意识到父母对自己的爱从来没有改变，承担起自己作为家庭一份子的责任？10Part3研读首句第一段首句：关键词：theteacher'sfeedback,lostinthought；首句译文：听到老师的反馈，Victor的父母陷入了沉思。第二段首句：关键词：realized,caredforhim；首句译文：Victor意识到父母仍旧关爱他。续写部分预测：第一段内容：父母反思他们最近的行为，意识到他们忽视了Victor的感受，决定平等对待这两个孩子。他们经常为Victor准备美味的食物和新玩具，陪他写作业，并邀请他和妹妹一起玩儿。Victor感到很高兴。第二段内容：感受到父母关爱的Victor决定改变自己。他有时间就帮助父母照顾妹妹，也做一些力所能及的家务活儿。他开始意识到自己已经长大了，应该承担起责任了。111.转换表达：描写Victor父母的反思。AfterLinawasborn,theyfocusedonher.①After

Lina

was

born,they

（把所有注意力都集中在）her.②After

Lina

was

born,they

(全身心投入）her.2.转换表达：描写Victor父母的心理活动。Theydecidedtotreatthetwo

childrenequally.①They

（决定）totreatthetwo

childrenequally.②They

（下定决心）totreatthe

twochildrenequally.3.描写Victor的心理活动。①扩充句子：Hewaswillingtosharehistroubles

withhisparents.Hewaswillingtosharehistroubles

withhisparents

（而不是）hidingthem.②补全句子：He

（开始意识到）thatheshould

（担承对........的责任）thefamilyashe

grewup.Part4微写作练习devotedalltheirattentiontoputtheirheartinmadeadicisionmadeuptheirmindsratherthan/insteadofcametorealizetakeresponsibilityfor12121.扩充句子：父亲陪伴Victor做作业。Victor'sfathersatbesidehim.Victor'sfather

satbeside

him,

（

静静地看书；使用动词-ing形式）.2.转换表达：他帮助父母照顾妹妹。Hehelpedhisparentslookafterhissister.Hehelpedhisparents

hissister.3.Victor帮忙做家务。①扩充句子：

（写完作业之后；使用after开头的短语）,Victorcleanedtheirrooms,

（整理他的卧室）andwasheddishes.②扩充句子：Hedidallchoresinhissparetime.Hedidallchores

（他能做的）inhissparetime.readingbooksquietlytakecareofAfterfinidhingishomeworktidinguphisbedroomthathecould13合并句子：1.Hedidhishomework.Hisfathersatbesidehim.Itmadehimfeelcomfortableandwarm.①Hedidhishomework

（连词）hisfathersatbesidehim.②Hisfathersatbesidehim,

（定语从句）.2.Hismotherwascooking.Heplayed

withhissisterhappily.

（时间状语从句），heplayedwithhis

sisterhappily.3.Victorfeltthewarmthofhisfamily.Heimproved

hisperformanceatschool.①

（非谓语动词作状语），Victorimproved

his

performanceatschool.②Victor,

（定语从句），improvedhis

performanceatschool.andwhichmadehimfeelconfortableandwarmWhile/WhenhismotherwascookingFeelingthewarmthofhisfamilywhofeltthewarmthofhisfamilyPart3范文呈现14范文呈现Uponhearingtheteacher'sfeedback,Victor'sparentsgotlostinthought.AfterLinawasborn,theydevotedalltheirattentiontoher.To

some

degree,they'dneglected

Victor'sfeelings.Therefore,they

madeadecisiontotreatthetwochildrenequally.Gradually,somethingchangedinthefamily.After