2023年新高考英语读后续写提分技能10 读后续写：作步创意 模板法

读后续写：八步创意模板写作TOC\o"1-3"\h\uPart1:八步法详解 1Part2:高考真题实战演练 5实战演练1：读后续写浙江卷 5实战演练2：读后续写浙江卷 9Part3：高考真题再现 11真题1：2022.6新高考1卷（身残志坚的男孩） 11Part1:八步法详解（1）情绪：消极情绪（2）细节：进一步解释描写（3）转折：个人的努力或借助外界（4）转机：事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到欣慰（5）失望：但是问题还是没有解决或出现了新问题（6）新法：突然有了一个想法（一句话说明这个想法）（7）结局：过了一段时间；事情有了最后的转折（8）总结：点题，呼应前文详述：（1）消极情绪典型表达是：感到（这个可以有很多表达方式，并且可以结合在每一个环节中，可有非谓语动词形式和介词短语）1.aflushof(表情绪的名词)=awaveof...=afeeling/senseof...一阵...2.joy/excitement/pride/anger/rage/panic/terror/sorrow/sadness/grief/embarrassment/dispointment/guilt/shame...)3.(表情绪的名词)floodedoversb=sweptoversb

因...颤抖tremble//shiver/shake(withfear,panicexcitement,rage...)

（2）进一步细节描写典型是：流泪；心里想……流泪：1.泪水模糊了眼睛Tearsblurredone'seyes.

2.眼睛模糊了One'seyesgotmisty.

3.泪眼模糊One'seyesmisted/dimmedwithtears.4.几乎要哭了...beclosetotears5.泪水落下tears(rolldownone'seyes/cheeks/face)

心里想1.

从句，内心的声音告诉某人...

Aninnervoicetoldsbthat

2....thought/saidtooneself

（3）转折（个人努力或借助外界）典型是：鼓起勇气或另外一方的鼓励；毫不犹豫pluckup/take/gather/one'scourage(todo...)

毫不犹豫：1.某人迫不及待地想做某事sbcouldhardlywaittodosth

2.不假思索，毫不犹豫withoutasecondthought3.连想都没想withouteventhinking

4.毫不迟疑地withoutdelay5.毫不犹豫withouthesitation

（4）事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到欣慰典型表达是：似乎：好像...Itwaslikedoingsth好像...Itseemedasif/that...希望：1.hopingthat

从句抱着一丝希望

2.see/feelaglimmerofhope看到一丝希望3.tryinghardtodosth

欣慰：1....breathedasighofrelief松了一口气

2....sighedwithrelief松了一口气3.(Awaveof)relieffloodedthrough/washedoversb

4.toone'srelief,..

使人欣慰的/放心的是

（5）但是还是问题还是没有解决或出现了新问题典型是：不幸的是；不知道做什么不幸的是：但是某人真不走运Butbadluckforsb,...但白费力气/徒劳butinvain

3.

但没有成功butwithoutsuccess

4.但没有用butnouse

不知道做什么1.某人做了某事，不知道下一步该怎么办。Sbdidsth,wonderingwhattodonext.2.某人做了某事，不知道接下来该怎么办Sbdidsth,notknowingwhattodonext.3.某人做了某事，不确定下一步该怎么办。Sbdidsth,unsureofwhattodonext.

4.某人不知所措。Sbwasatalosswhattodo.5.感到难以决定...Sbwasinadilemmaaboutwhethertodoornot.（6）突然有了一个想法：一句话表示想法典型：某人想到/明白...;

有了主意1.Itsuddenlyoccurredtosbthat

从句=Ithitsbthat

从句=Itstruckmethat

从句

=Itdawnedonsbthat

从句2.(idea,thought...)occurred/cametosb.=...came/flashedintoone'smind=...crowdedinone'smind3.One'smindbegantorace（7）皆大欢喜：过了一段时间，事情有了最后的转折过了一段时间1.notlongafterthat,...=shortlyafterwards,...=beforelong,...=Itdidn'ttakelongbefore

从句=Ittooksometimebefore从句不久,...

2.foraninstant/moment一瞬间

有了结果1.Toone'ssurprise(delight)/Strangelyenough,itturnedoutthat

从句2.Butonsecondthoughts,...但是转而一想，...3.Butwhathappenednextwaspuremagic.

接下来发生的非常奇妙

皆大欢喜：参考（1）

（8）最后总结，点题典型是：直到...才意识到...1.

倒装句：Notuntil

时间状语

didsbrealize/noticethat

从句2.

强调句：Itwasonly时间状语

thatsbrealizedthat

从句

还记得某人的话；还在某人的脑海中1.One'swords(echoed/rangout)inone'sears.2.One'swords(voice/song)lingered/whisperedinone'smind/head.

3.One'sheadwasstillfullof...

经历与教训1.Whata/an...lessonsbtaughtme(sblearnedfromsb)!

(valuable/useful/great/painful)2.Whata/an...experiencesbhad!3.

(enjoyable/pleasant/wonderful/unforgettable/memorable/interesting/valuable)4.Downdeepinone'sheart,...在某人的内心深处Part2:高考真题实战演练实战演练1：读后续写浙江卷（2016森林遇险）夫妻旅游途中吵架，妻子独自离开，述路在树林里，直升飞机来了几次授救但没有看见她。她感到很失望，OneweekendinJuly,

Jane

andherhusband,

Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbya

lake

intheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom.“I’mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp”and

walked

away.

Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehad

climbed

toahighplace,sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.

“Tom!”shecried.“Help!”

Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.

Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴落）somewhere

atadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundto

astream.

Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow,Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.

Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janehearda

helicopter.Isthatforme?Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffher

yellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1：

Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:

ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第一段：Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.(但是没有直升机来了，天又黑了。)读后续写续写1.Awaveofterrorsweptoverher.一阵恐怖的浪潮席卷了她。1.情绪2.Herheartpoundingfiercelyandherpalmsweating,aninnervoicetoldherthatshehadtofindasafeplace.她的心剧烈地跳动着，手心冒汗，一个内在的声音告诉她，她必须找到一个安全的地方。2.细节：详述情绪3.Tiredandterrifiedasshewas,Janepluckedhercouragetofeeltheway.虽然她很累，也很害怕，但简鼓起勇气去感受这条路。3.转折∶个人努力4.Luckily,itdidn'ttakelongbeforeshefoundacave.5.Sighingwithrelief,shefeltaglimmerofhope,sayingtoherself."Tomorrowisanotherday."4.幸运的是，没过多久她就找到了一个洞穴。5.松了一口气，她感到了一丝希望。对自己说。“明天又是新的一天。”转机：成功、希望来了。Withthat,shewenttosleep,inwhosedreamherhusbandkepthercompany.说完，她就去睡觉了，她丈夫在梦里陪伴着她。衔接句第二段：ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.简醒来的时候天已经亮了。读后续写续写1.Hungryanddisappointed,shefoundnotanyhelicopteroverhead,atalosswhattodo.1.饥饿和失望，她发现头顶上没有任何直升机，不知所措。再度失望（出现新问题）2.Itsuddenlydawnedonherthatsheshouldfindabigopenareafirst.3.Havinggobblingdownsomeblackberries,shecan'twaittosetoff.4.Afterwhatseemedacentury,suchanareadidcomeintosight.Herfacebrightenedup.2.她突然明白，她应该先找一个大的空地。她狼吞虎咽地吃了些黑莓，迫不及待地要出发了。4.好像过了一个世纪之后，这样的地区确实出现了。5.她的脸变亮了。突然有了办法Whatacoincidencethatmeanwhile,ahelicopterwasflyingtowardsher.Uponitslanding,outdashedherhusbandwhohuggedJanetightly,tearswellingupintheirheart.6.与此同时，一架直升机正朝她飞来，真是巧合。7.她的丈夫紧紧地拥抱着简，眼泪涌上心头。结果解决问题，巧不成书，皆大欢喜Itwasatthemomentthattheydecidednottoquarrelanymorebutlearnedtocompromise.8.就在这时，他们决定不再争吵了，而是学会了妥协（总结）实战演练2：读后续写浙江卷（2018年6月）父亲带儿子去西部荒野的一个朋友家体验农场生活，见父亲和叔叔骑马，儿子也很想骑，于是亲身上马体验。临走叔叔告诫我们不要走偏了路（"Don’tbelateforsupper,"UnclePaulcried,"andkeeptothetracksothatyoudon’tgetlost!"）。一路上，风景优美，让人陶醉。阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Itwassummer,andmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinthelateafternoon.UnclePaul,mydad’sfriend,pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos.HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthefarmhouselisteningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdowntherivernearby.Veryearlyinthemorning,UnclePaulwokeusuptohavebreakfast."Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfarm,"hesaid.Afterbreakfast,IwenttohelpAuntTinafeedthechickens,whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethesheepouttograze(吃草).IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorses.Theylookedreallycool.Intheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahorseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithme.Iwasn’tgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains."Don’tbelateforsupper,"UnclePaulcried,"andkeeptothetracksothatyoudon’tgetlost!""OK!"mydadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfarmhousewereoutofsight.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,andthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven(编织的)blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.注意：（1）所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；（2）至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：（3）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；（4）续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.读后续写八股文思路1.Awaveofnervousnesssweptovermeespeciallywhenthehorseranlikecrazy.（情绪）2.Myheartpoundingandmypalmssweating,aninnervoicetoldmethatIhadtocalmdown.（细节详述）3.Thoughinapanic,Ipluckedmycouragetopullonthereigns.（转折：个人努力）4.Luckily,itdidn’ttakelongbeforeIsettleddownthehorse.（转机：成功，希望来了）5.Justatthatmoment,Dadranover,gasping

forair.（衔接句：新问题来了）6.“Boy,wearewayoffthetrack.”Hesaidseriously,alookofconcernspreadingacrosshisface.Paragraph2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.1.Hungryandfrustrated,wetriedtofindawayoutbutinvain.(努力，失败)2.Itsuddenlydawnedonmewecouldrodedowntherivernearby.（突然有了办法）3.Unexpectedly,theriverbroughtustothefamiliartrackatlast.（开始做）4.Afterwhatseemedtwohours,UnclePaul’sfarmhousedidcomeintosight.（成功了）5.Myfather’sfacebrightenedup,sodidmine.（感受）6.Uponourarrival,Uncle

Paulcouldn’twaittoaskedus,“Wherehaveyoubeen?Iamjustcalling

911.”（幽默对话）7.“ToAlice’sWonderland”myfatheranswered,winkingatmewitha

biggrin.8.Whatanunforgettable

experiencewehad!(总结)

Part3：高考真题再现真题1：2022.6新高考1卷（身残志坚的男孩）Itwasthedayofthebigcross-countryrun.Studentsfromsevendifferentprimaryschoolsinandaroundthesmalltownwerewarmingupandwalkingtheroute(路线)throughthickevergreenforest.IlookedaroundandfinallyspottedDavid,whowasstandingbyhimselfofftothesidebyafence.Hewassmallfortenyearsold.Hisusualbigtoothysmilewasabsenttoday.Iwalkedoverandaskedhimwhyhewasn’twiththeotherchildren.Hehesitatedandthensaidhehaddecidednottorun.Whatwaswrong?Hehadworkedsohardforthisevent!Iquicklysearchedthecrowdfortheschool’scoachandaskedhimwhathadhappened.“Iwasafraidthatkidsfromotherschoolswouldlaughathim,”heexplaineduncomfortably.“Igavehimthechoicetorunornot,andlethimdecide.”Ibitbackmyfrustration(懊恼).Iknewthecoachmeantwell—hethoughthewasdoingtherightthing.AftermakingsurethatDavidcouldrunifhewanted,Iturnedtofindhimcomingtowardsme,hissmallbodyrockingfromsidetosideasheswunghisfeetforward.Davidhadabraindiseasewhichpreventedhimfromwalkingorrunninglikeotherchildren,butatschoolhisclassmatesthoughtofhimasaregularkid.Healwaysparticipatedtothebestofhisabilityinwhatevertheyweredoing.ThatwaswhynoneofthechildrenthoughtitunusualthatDavidhaddecidedtojointhecross-countryteam.Itjusttookhimlonger—that’sall.Davidhadnotmissedasinglepractice,andalthoughhealwaysfinishedhisrunlongaftertheotherchildren,hedidalwaysfinish.Asaspecialeducationteacherattheschool,IwasfamiliarwiththechallengesDavidfacedandwasproudofhisstrongdetermination.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答.Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn’tlookatme._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考答案】Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn’tlookatme.Isaidgentlyandquietly,“Noonecanchangeyourmind,exceptyourself.Ifyoudesiretochallengeyourself,thereisnothingtodowithothers’thoughts.”Hesatstillwithadeepbreath.“Youhaveafullpreparationbeforethisevent,whichisthemostimportantreasonwhyyoushowuphere”,Iaddedwithasinceretone.Hearingmywords,Davidturnedtometremblinglywithtearsspillingoutofhiseyesandexpressedhehadmadeafirmdeterminationtofinishthecross-countryrun.HiscoachheardwhatDavidsaidandgavemealook—thekindthatwasmoredeterminedthananyoneelse’s.IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.Theracestarted.Itseemedthattherunwaywasextremelylongforyoungchildren,nottomentionachildwithaheartdisease.Davidinsistedonrunningasifhe