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写一篇关于职业规划的短文本单元要求写一篇关于职业规划的短文，属于说明文的写作范畴。[基本框架]开头(thebeginning)——引出职业主体(thebody)——列举原因结尾(theending)——提出展望[常用词块]1．sharemoredreamcareerswithyou同你分享更多理想的职业2．keepupdating持续更新3．havegreatexpectationsforthefuturejob对未来的工作有很大的期望4．enrichingtheirlifeexperience丰富他们的生活阅历5．liveawell­offlife过上小康生活6．ahighlyqualifiedtourguide一位高素质的导游[常用语句]★精彩开头1．Somewanttobedoctors，somewanttobeteachers，andsomewanttobeengineers.有人想当医生，有人想当老师，有人想当工程师。2．Mydreamcareeristobeatourguide.我梦想的职业是当一名导游。★正文佳句1．Icanenjoymyselfduringthesummerandwinterholidays.我可以在暑假和寒假里玩得很开心。2．Ihavebeenadmiringtourguideswhotravelworldwide，enjoyingthespectacularscenery，appreciatingdifferentculturesandenrichingtheirlifeexperienceatthesametime.我一直很羡慕环游世界的导游，他们能欣赏壮观的风景，欣赏不同的文化，同时丰富他们自己的生活阅历。★余味结尾1．Inaword，Iwillstudyharderthanevertoprepareformyfutureteachingjob.总之，我将比以往任何时候都更加努力地学习，为我未来的教学工作做准备。2．Therefore，mydreamcannotbefulfilledwithoutindustriousworktopavetheway.因此，没有辛勤的工作来铺路，我的梦想就无法实现。请你以“MyIdealJob(我理想的职业)”为题写一篇80词左右的短文，要求包括以下要点：1．人们有不同的理想职业；2．我理想的职业是什么；3．我怎样为我理想的职业做准备。[学生习作]MyIdealJobIwanttobeateacherinthefuture.Firstly，Ilikechildrenandenjoyplayingwiththem.Secondly，Icanenjoymyselfduringthesummerandwintervacations.Finally，Iwanttoteachstudentsknowledgetoensurethemtoworkbetterinthefuture.Inordertobeagoodteacher，Iwillstudyhardallthetime.Ihavetoimprovemyhandwritingandmakemyselfmoreknowledgeable.Inaword，Iwillstudyharderthanevertoprepareformyfutureteachingjob.点评：1．本篇习作符合写作要求，能够对自己未来理想的职业进行合理描述，原因贴合实际，内容丰富充实。2．该篇写作能够使用firstly，secondly，finally等过渡词，使得文章更加有条理。3．文章简单句过多，同时词汇方面还应该斟酌。[升格作文]MyIdealJobMyidealjobisgoingintoteaching.Firstly，Ilikechildrenverymuch.Secondly，ateacherhastwovacationseachyearandIcanenjoymyselfduringthevacations.Finally，IwanttoteachstudentsallthatIknowsothattheycanworkbetterforourcountryinthefuture.Inordertobeagoodteacher，Iwillstudyhardnotonlyinclass，butalsoindailylife.Iwilltrainmypatience，improvemyhandwriting，andenrichmyknowledge.Inaword，Iwillstudyharderthanevertoprepareformyfutureteachingjob.在成长的过程中，我们总是对未来的职业充满憧憬。请以“MyDreamCareer”为题写一篇英语短文，内容包括：1．你的理想职业；2．选择它的理由。注意：1.词数80左右；2．可根据内容要点适当发挥，以使行文连贯。【参考范文】MyDreamCareerMydreamcareeristobeatourguide.Sincemyearlyage，Ihavebeenadmiringtourguideswhotravelworldwide，enjoyingthespectacularscenery，appreciatingdifferentculturesandenrichingtheirlifeexperienceatthesametime.Besides，thiscareerisfinanciallyrewardingaswellsothatIcanliveawell­offlife.Additionally，Iwillhavemoreopportunitiestomeetpeoplefromallwalksofl