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Howtoshowfear

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Howtoshow“fear”

1.描写心理感受2.面部表情3.肢体动作4.心理活动

(想什么)5.环境描写一、ExpressionsForthefeelingof“fear”n.

:

great/extremefear

terror/horror恐惧,惊恐

panic恐慌(不知所措)

alarm惊慌

vt.:

terrify使恐惧/惊恐adj.:

panicky恐慌的alarmed

惊慌的

scared/frightened害怕的

terrified恐惧的fear/fright害怕

scare/frighten使..害怕

panic(vi.&vt.)

(使)恐慌alarm惊慌

great/extremefeargreat/extremefear

ExpressionsFor“fear”n.:fear/fright害怕;terror/horror

恐惧,惊恐;panic

恐慌;alarm

vt.:scare/frighten;terrify;panic(vi.&vt.);alarm惊慌

adj.

:scared/frightened;

terrified;panicky;alarmed

Choosetheproperwordstofillintheblanks:1.Atthesightofthegiantgreybear,Ifelt___________.

2.Atthesightofthegiantgreybear,awaveof______________floodedoverme.

scared/frightened/terrified/panickyfear/fright/

terror/horror

“无灵”主语句Awaveofterror+floodedover+me.

“无灵”主语句

描写心理的高级句式

“无灵”主语

+有灵动词+sb无生命的情感名词))()

“无灵”主语句

“某人感到…”

burst

wave

Afloodof+

rush

sense/feelinghint/trace(一丝)

情感状态名词++sb

有灵动词

))()

慢慢产生_______

掠过________

席卷________

抓住,控制________

淹没________

吞噬________+涨涌_________+压倒________

creepuponpass/runthrough

sweepover

seize

floodover

swallow

wellup

overwhelm/

overcome“一阵/一种…向某人袭来”

用“无灵”主语句,续写描述感受的句子:当她意识到她在森林里迷路时,…Realizingshegotlostintheforest,__________________________________________________

awave/rush...ofpanic/terror/fright/fearseized/sweptoverher.

shewasseized/sweptoverbyawave/rush...ofpanic/terror/fright/fear.

二、ExpressionsFor“physicalreactions肢体反应”吓呆了

freeze

scream

couldn’thelpcrying

throattighten(vi.)

coverone’seyeswithone’shands

one’slegsfeelweak

one’sheartwaspounding/beatingviolently

shiver/tremblesb’spalmssweat(vi)/beinacoldsweat(n.)

喉咙发紧

sb’eyes/mouthbewide

open.

Variouswaystocombinethefeelingandthephysicalreactions1.

因为恐惧,呆住了2.

惊恐地尖叫

1.肢体动作+with+情感n.(原因:…得…)

3.太害怕了,以至于一动也不敢动。

肢体动作+in+情感n.(状态:…地…)Ifroze

withterror/horror.Iscreamed

interror/horror.I

wastooscaredtomoveaninch.I

wassoscaredthatIdarednotmoveaninch.

2.too..to…;so…that从句

4.那条狗突然跳出来冲向我,我吓呆了,一动也不敢动。Whenthatdogjumpedoutatme,Ifrozewithterror,tooscaredtomoveaninch/,so

scaredthatIdarednotmoveaninch.

3.

主句肢体动作,

too..to…/

so…that从句(补充)

5.Astrongsenseofhorrorseizedme.Itrembled

alloverandmypalmsweresweating.

4.

情感和动作

分开造句:无灵主语句。+

肢体动作句

。(多个肢体动作用并列句)6.BecauseI

wasoverwhelmedwithastrongsenseofhorror,Iheldtheropetightly.(请改用非谓语做状语升级句子)Overwhelmedwithastrongsenseofhorror,

Iheldtheropetightly.

5.

情感adj.,+主句(肢体动作,主语必须是人)7.请给上句加多一个肢体动作:心砰砰地跳。

Overwhelmedwithastrongsenseofhorror,

Iheldtheropetightly,withmyheartpoundingviolently.

5.

情感adj.,+主句(肢体动作,主语必须是人),+with复合结构.Overwhelmedwithastrongsenseofhorror,

Iheldtheropetightly,withmyheartpoundingviolently.

6.

情感adj.,+主句(肢体动作,主语必须是人),+独立主格结构。独立主格结构?:下面哪题可以用非谓语合并两分句?

1.Iheldtheropetightly.Ishouted,“Help!Help!”

2.Iheldtheropetightly.Myheartwaspoundingviolently.Iheldtheropetightly,shouting“help!Help!”(能用非谓语做状语的前提是:两句的主语要一致)

那主语不一致就不可以用非谓语了吗?Iheldtheropetightly,________poundingviolently.可以,在非谓语前加上自己的主语。myheart加上自己独立的主语,这样的非谓语做状语,叫独立主格结构。1.Whenspringcomes,everythingwillcomebacktolife.2.Becausealltheworkwasfinished,wecangohomenow.Spring________(come),everythingwillcomebacktolife.comingAllthework_______(finish),wecangohomenow.finished(独立主格结构用ing还是done,取决于它前面那个“独立主语”)

1.看到一头大棕熊,我害怕极了,心脏砰砰狂跳,双腿发软。

2.害怕极了,我的喉咙发紧,手心出汗。(用with复合结构,或独立主格结构)3.她脸色发白,眼里满是恐惧。(用with复合结构,或独立主格结构)4.

她吓得浑身发抖。

Let‘spractice!

1.看到一头大棕熊,我害怕极了,心脏砰砰狂跳,双腿发软。

Atthesightofagiantbrownbear,Iwassweptoverbyterror.Myheartwaspoundingviolentlyandmylegsfeltweak.2.害怕极了,我的喉咙发紧,手心出汗。(用with复合结构,或独立主格结构)3.她脸色发白,眼里满是恐惧。(用with复合结构,或独立主格结构)Herfaceturnedpale,(with)hereyesfilledwithterror.4.

她吓得浑身发抖。

Sheshivered/trembledalloverwithterror/fear/fright.

Let‘spractice!Overwhelmedwithterror,Ifeltmythroattighten,(with)mypalmssweating.

三、Whatwillyousayandthinkwhenyouarefrightened?

1.我大脑一片空白,只想离开这个恐怖的地方。

2.他问自己/喃喃说:“我该怎么办?我该怎么办?”3.她大声喊:“救命!救命!”/她大声呼救。4.她祈祷/希望直升机helicopter会再一次回来。5.她祈求好运。

Mybrainwentblank.Ijustwantedtoleavethishorribleplace.

Heaskedhimself/murmured,“WhatshouldIdo?WhatshouldIdo?”

Sheshouted/cried,“Help!Help!”/Sheshoutedforhelp.

Sheprayed/hopedthatthehelicopterwouldcomebackagain.

Sheprayedforgoodluck/fortune.“心理活动和语言描写”以伴随状语,加入之前的句式里。被火震惊到了,Lucy僵住了几秒钟,然后拼命冲向他们的营地,同时大喊救命。

Shockedby

theflames,Lucyfrozeforafewseconds,andthendesperatelydashedtotheircamp,shoutingforhelpinthemeantime.

四、Whatisatmospherefor“fear”?1.除了森林,她什么都看不到。2.黑暗笼罩森林。3.夜幕降临(fall/settlein),风在她的四周可怕地怒吼着。4.天空乌云密布。5.刺骨的(biting)寒风咆哮,像锋利的小刀一样割着我的脸。6.大雨倾盆,溪水上涨,狂风咆哮,撞击着窗户。7.

她听到狼的嚎叫声。

Shecouldseenothing,buttheforest.

Darknesscovered/ruledtheforest.

Thenightfell/settledin,andthewindhowledaroundher.

Theskywascoveredwithdarkclouds.

Thebitingwindwashowling,cuttingmyfacelikeasharpknife.

Therainpoureddown,thestreamsrose,andthewindhowled,hittingthewindow.环境描写不仅起到烘托人物心情,渲染气氛的作用,还能推动情节的发展。

Sheheardthehowlingofwolves.结合环境描写,肢体动作,神态,心理活动和语言,表现一个人在森林迷路过程中可能出现状况和恐惧。环顾四周,除了森林,她什么都看不到。意识到自己迷路了,她感到十分害怕,双腿发软。她继续往前走,祈祷着好运。可两个小时后,夜幕开始降临,很快,黑暗笼罩森林。听到狼的嚎叫声,她吓得浑身颤抖,想着自己可能会死在这里。

Lookingaround,shecouldseenothing,buttheforest.Realizingshegotlostintheforest,shewassweptoverbyarushoffright,(with)herlegsfeelingweak.Shekeptwalking,prayingforgoodfortune.However,twohourslater,thenightbegantofall.Notlongafterthat,/Soon,darknesscovered/ruledtheforest.Hearingthehowlingofwolves,sheshiveredwithterror,thinkingshemightdieintheforest.当她看不见弟弟的时候,她感到十分惊慌。

Whenshelostsightofherbrother,1.(awaveof)panicseized/overwhelmed/overcomeher.2.shewasseizedby/overwhelmedwith/overcomewith(awaveof)panic.她十分生气,一把抓起桌上的油画,把它撕成碎片。1.Shewasoverwhelmedwithanger,andshegrabbedthepaintingonthetableandtoreitintopieces.2.Shewasso

overwhelmedwithanger

thatshegrabbedthepaintingonthetableandtoreitintopieces.

3.Overwhelmedwithanger(原因状语/伴随状语),shegrabbedthepaintingonthetableandtoreitintopieces.看到台下的观众,她非常紧张,头脑一片空白。Seeingtheaudiencebelowthestage,aburstofnervousnesssweptoverherhermindwentblank.(错)

Seeingtheaudiencebelowthestage,shewassweptoverby/wasoverwhelmedwithaburstofnervousness.Atthesightoftheaudiencebelow,shewassooverwhelmedwithnervousnessthathermindwentblank.

他十分沮丧,低下头,眼里满是泪水。2.Hewassooverwhelmedwithfrustrationthathe….1.Overwhelmedwithfrustration,heloweredhishead,withhiseyesfullof/filledwithtears.全用过去时态:激动地鼓掌:

激动得发狂:高兴得挥舞双手:他既惊讶又失望:雷鸣般的掌声从群众中爆发出来:

他想出一个主意:

clappedwithexcitement

wentwildwithexcitement

wavedone’shandswithgreatjoy

Hefeltamixtureofsurpriseanddisappointment

1.Hecameupwithanidea.2.Anideaoccurredtohim.

Thunderousapplauseburstoutfromthecrowd.

ExpressionsFor“physicalreactions肢体反应”吓呆了

befrozenwithfear.etc

screaminterror

couldn’thelpcrying

throattighten(vt.)

coverone’seyeswithone’shands

one’slegsfeelweak

one’sheartwaspounding/beatingviolently

shake/tremblesb’shandssweat/beinacoldsweat1.Whenthatdogjumpedoutatme,Iwas

frozenwithterror,tooscared

tomoveaninch.那条狗突然跳出来冲向我,我吓呆了,一动也不敢动。

Howtocombine

“physicalreactionsandemotion”

with+情感n,too...to...,情感adj.短语做伴随状语2.Iwasseized/overcomebyastrongsenseofhorror.Itrembledalloverandmypalmsweresweating.我害怕极了,浑身发抖,手心都出汗了。

并列句3.Hepanicked,coveredhiseyeswithhishandsandscreamedloudlyinfright/fear/terror.他惊慌失措,用手蒙住眼睛,惊恐得大声尖叫。

并列谓语(动作链)4.Hewasthrownintopanic,hishandsshakingwithfear.

+独立主格结构5.Overwhelmedbyastrongsenseofhorror,Iheldtheropetightly,myheatpoundingviolently.

句首放情感adj.,+主句(肢体动作)仿写:1.Whenthatdogjumpedoutatme,Iwasfrozenwithterror,tooscared

tomoveaninch.2.Iwasseized/overcomebyastrongsenseofhorror.Itrembledalloverandmypalmsweresweating.3.Hewasthrownintopanic,hishandsshakingwithfear.4.Overwhelmedbyastrongsenseofhorror,Iheldtheropetightly,myheatpoundingviolently.1.看到一头大棕熊,我吓呆了,一动不敢动。2.Atthesightofagiantbrownbear,我害怕极了,心脏砰砰狂跳,双腿发软。3.Atthesightofagiantbrownbear,我一下子慌了,手心出汗((独立主格)4.害怕极了,我的喉咙发紧,双腿发软。

Atthesightofagiantbrownbear,Iwasfrozenwithterror,tooscaredtomoveaninch.

Iwasseizedbyterror.Myheartwaspoundingviolentlyandmylegsfeltweak.

Iwasthrownintopanic,mypalmssweating.

with+情感n,too...to...,情感adj.短语做伴随状语(独立主格)(并列句)

句首放情感adj.,+主句(肢体动作)Overhelmed/Overcome/Seizedbyastrongsenseofterror,mythroattightened,mylegsfeelingweak.

turnpale

ExpressionsFor“facialfacialexpression”

eyesfullof/filledwithterror1.看到一头大棕熊,她脸色发白,眼里满是恐惧。(with复合结构)

Atthesightofagiantbrownbear,herfaceturnedpale,withhiseyesfilledwithterror.

ExpressionsFor“Psychologicalactivity”心理活动描写”

1.我大脑一片空白,只想离开这个恐怖的地方。

2.去那里的路上我有一种毛骨悚然的感觉,

3.他问自己:“我该怎么办?我该怎么办?”

Mybrainwentblank.Ijustwantedtoleavethishorribleplace.

I

gotarealcreepyfeelingonthewaythere.

Heaskedhimself,“WhatshouldIdo?WhatshouldIdo?”1.除了森林,她什么都看不到。2.黑暗笼罩森林。

Howtodescribetheatmosphere.

Shecouldseenothing,buttheforest.

Darknesscovered/ruledtheforest.衬托人物,渲染气氛Shocked,Gradyfrozeforafewseconds,andthendesperatelydashedtotheircamp,shoutingforhelpinthemeantime.butthewindhadfannedtheflamesofthefiretowardsourtent.Frightenedbytheflames,Iranoutofthetentimmediately.Shestoodthereshockedwithhereyeswide

open==Shewasshockedandstoodthere,andher...Exhaustedandcold,thethoughtthatwemightdiehereflashedacrossmymind,whichmademe

quiverwithanuncontrollableterror/horror/fright

(难以控制地发抖).4.Lookingatthe

vast

sea,Ifeltasenseoffear

surgingthroughmywholebody.(在身体涌动)Astimetickedby,fear

creptuponmyheart(爬上我心头)andIcouldhardlytellhowlongIcould

ploughon

(前行).6.

Thethoughtofhopelessness

sentshiversdownmyspine(让我后脊背发凉).Tearsoffrustrationandhorrorgushingfrommyeyes,IfeltIhadsunkintohopelessness.11.Asenseofterrorsweepingthroughmybody,Ishoutedinpanic,“Help!Help!”展开想象:结合环境描写,肢体动作,神态和心理活动,尝试表现一个人在森林迷路过程中可能出现状况和恐惧。

terrified

“无灵”主语句

“某人感到…”

burst

wave

Afloodof+

rush

sense/feelinghint/trace(一丝)

情感状态名词++sb

有灵动词

))()

慢慢产生_______

掠过________

席卷________

抓住,控制________

淹没________

吞噬________+涨涌_________+压倒________

creepuponpass/runthrough

sweepover

seize

floodover

swallow

wellup

overwhelm/

overcome“一阵/一种…向某人袭来”

用“无灵”主语句,翻译句子:当她以为自己把票丢了时,她着实惊慌起。__________________________________________________________atthethoughtthatshehadlostthetickets.

Awave/rush...ofpanicseized/sweptoverher

“无灵”主语句

burst

wave

Afloodof+

rushhint/trace(一丝)

情感状态名词++sb

有灵动词

))()掠过________

席卷________

突然侵袭________

淹没________

吞噬________压倒

_______

pass/runthrough

sweepover

seize

floodover

swallow

overwhelm/ove

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