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123Graspsomeskillstoimprovewriting.Takeproperwritingsteps.Contents:Understandwhatagoodcomposition

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advancedvocabulary

Outlining(提纲)

Analysing(审题)

Drafting(草稿)

Polishing(修改)

Proofreading(校对)Transcribing(誊写)

2WritingSteps明确文章的目的和体裁标出说明和要点中的关键词确定每个要点的时态确定每个要点的人称WritingStepsAnalysing(审题)

typemainpointstenseperson2exampletypetenseperson2

在你临近毕业之际，你(张华)的网友（Peter）发来邮件和你畅谈毕业心情，你立即回复，回信中提到：1.初中阶段你有哪些收获;2.初中阶段你有哪些遗憾或未实现的愿望;3.你对未来的高中生活有哪些计划或打算。4.最后你会尽全力争取考出好成绩。要求:1.90词左右,首句已给出,不计入总词数;2.字迹工整,语言流畅,表达准确,逻辑清晰。DearPeter,Thelifeofmyjuniorhighschooliscomingtoanend._________________________________________________threeparagraphsWritingStepsOutlining(提纲)

AboutjuniorhighschoolAboutnowAboutseniorhighschoolthreetopicsentences2WritingStepsProofreading(校对)

2WritingStepsTranscribing(誊写)

23Howtopolishyourdraftreplacejuniorvacabularyemploypropersentencepatternsaddpropertransitions有益的第一反应词good替代词beneficialwealthysignificant重要的富有的importantrichof+n.example3-1replacejuniorvacabularyreplacejuniorvacabularyexample3-1解决第一反应词solve替代词deal/copewithsparenoefforttodoforinstance例如尽力forexampletrytodoreplacejuniorvacabulary实际上第一反应词infact替代词actuallyasamatteroffactinrealityexamplereplacejuniorvacabulary3-1立即atonceimmediatelywithoutdelay3Howtopolishyourdraftreplacejuniorvacabularyemploypropersentencepatternsexample3-2employpropersentencepatterns

吉姆每天准时到校。Jimcomestoschoolontimeeveryday.Jimneverfailstocometoschoolontimeeveryday.第一反应句替代句example3-2employpropersentencepatterns巧用双重否定Practice

他必须采取行动才能实现梦想。Hemusttakeactiontoachievehisdream.Hecan'tachievehisdreamwithouttakinganyaction.第一反应句替代句example3-2employpropersentencepatterns

这样做的话，我们才能有个美好的将来。Ifwedolikethis,wecanhaveagoodfuture.Onlyinthiswaycanweenjoyabrightfuture.第一反应句替代句example3-2employpropersentencepatterns倒装句型

天安门广场紧邻故宫博物院。Tian'anmenSquareisnexttothePalaceMuseum.NexttothePalaceMuseumisTian'anmenSquare.第一反应句替代句example3-2employpropersentencepatterns

我们还是小孩子,父母理应保护我们。Wearestillchildrenandourparentsshouldprotectus.Wearestillchildrenandshouldbeprotected.第一反应句替代句被动语态example3-2employpropersentencepatterns

因为他的粗心驾驶才发生了事故。Hehadanaccidentbecauseofhiscarelessdriving.Itwasbecauseofhiscarelessdrivingthathehadanaccident.第一反应句替代句example3-2employpropersentencepatterns

他们很熟悉这个校园。Theyknowtheschoolverywell.Theydoknowtheschoolverywell.第一反应句替代句Practice强调句型example3-2employpropersentencepatterns省略句When/WhileIwassleeping,Iheardaloudnoise.When/Whilesleeping,Iheardaloudnoise.if/when/wheneverpossible/necessaryifso/not/anyexample3-2employpropersentencepatterns她是个友好的女孩，总是面带微笑和我们说话。Sheisafriendlygirl,andshealwaystalkstouswithasweetsmile.Sheisafriendlygirlwhoalwaystalkstouswithasweetsmile.第一反应句替代句定语从句example3-2employpropersentencepatterns我非常喜欢运动，运动使我保持健康。Ienjoysportsverymuch,andtheyhelpmekeephealthy.Ienjoysportsverymuch,whichhelpmekeephealthy.第一反应句替代句定语从句Practiceexample3-2employpropersentencepatterns双重否定被动语态省略句倒装句型强调句型定语从句3Howtopolishyourdraftreplacejuniorvacabularyemploypropersentencepatternsaddpropertransitions3-3addpropertransitionsexample表因果关系：表并列补充关系：表进行举例说明：表达自己观点：表文章结构顺序：

表转折对比关系：

表总结：

because,therefore,asaresult

…whatismore,besides,moreover,inaddition…forexample；suchas…asfarasIknow,inmyopinion,astome

…firstofall,andthen,intheend/finally…however,but,although…inshort,inaword,allinall,…practice3

在你临近毕业之际，你(张华)的网友（Peter）发来邮件和你畅谈毕业心情，你立即回复，回信中提到：1.初中阶段你有哪些收获;2.初中阶段你有哪些遗憾或未实现的愿望;3.你对未来的高中生活有哪些计划或打算。4.最后你会尽全力争取考出好成绩。要求:1.90词左右,首句已给出,不计入总词数;2.字迹工整,语言流畅,表达准确,逻辑清晰。DearPeter,Thelifeofmyjuniorhighschooliscomingtoanend.______________________________________________________appreciation4

Thelifeofmyjuniorhighschooliscomingtoanend.SinceIcametothejuniorhighschool,I’vegainedconfidenceandhappiness.Withthehelpofourteachers,I’velearnedplentyofknowledge.Besides,I’vemadesomegoodfriends.

However,thereisstillsomethingthatIfeelsorryabout.BecauseIwasbusywithmyschoolwork,Icouldn’tkeeponreading.Onceinawhile,IfeltsoupsetandanxiousthatIquarreledwithmyparents.

Inthefuture,I’llgetonwellwithmyparents.Meanwhile,I’lltrytomakegooduseofmytimeandspendmorefreetimereadingbooks.I'vemadeupmymindtosaprenoeffortto