【公开课】Unit+2Using+Language+Reading+for+Writing写作课件人教版（2019）选择性必修第三册

Unit2HealthyLifestylePeriod5ReadingforWritingWriteALetterToTheEditorAboutYourLifestyleTolearntheorganisationofaletteraboutone’slifestyleTolearntowritealetteraboutoneaspectofyourownlifestyleWarmingupIfthereisasummercamporganisedbythemagazine,wouldyouliketojoin?Whyorwhynot?Whatdoyouexpecttolearn?1.Whowritethesetwoletters?

WangLuandGeorgeFielding.2.Whatarethepurposesofwritingtheseletters?Toinformtheeditoroftheirproblemsandactionstheytaketosolvetheseproblems.

ReadingforgeneralideasWhatisthebasicstructureofaletter?DearEditor,

Yourstruly,/Sincerely,signature___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________bodyComplimentaryclose信尾敬语Salutation称呼TowhomwhoReadingforstructuresDivideeachletterintofourpartsandtrytomatchthemainideasbelowtoeachpart.identifyproblemsconsiderwhattodo describewhathe/shehasdonetochangegivetheresults ProblemDecisionAction(s)Result(s)Problem-solutionpatternProblemProblemDecisionDecisionAction(s)Action(s)Result(s)Result(s)ReadingforstructuresReadthesetwopassagecarefullyandfinishthetableonP21.Readingfordetailssleepyanddizzypassionflueasilymanytoothacheseatnosugarexerciseregularlybuyingsweets,biscuits,andsugarydrinksatleast30minutesanddidsomethingactivedynamicandstrongerbothbodyandmindsoundlysuffersfromfluortoothachesincontrolofherownlifewellReadingfordetailsReadingfordetailsstressedoutwornoutplayingcomputergamestakecontrolofhislifeandfindotherwaystorelaxrockclimbingmonthlywithhisdadenergeticchangehimselfforthebettermostworrying:现在分词作状语，意为“最令人担忧的是”

especiallywhat…和

how...两个并列部分是同位语，补充说明前面的choices仿写：最令我担心的是，我常睡眠不足。它已经影响到我的学业。Writing-identifyingproblemsProblem激发我的动力下定决心改变……痴迷……以至于痴迷……决定掌控……仿写：我的动力被激发以后，我下定决心改变坏习惯，掌控自己的生活。Aftermymotivationwasstimulated,Imadeupmymindtochangebadhabitsandtakecontrolofmylife.Writing-expressingdecisionsDecisionWheneverIwantedtoplaycomputergames,Iwentjogginginstead,whichnotonlyimprovedmyhealthbutalsoenhancedmyqualityoflife.仿写：每次我想玩电脑游戏的时候，我就出去慢跑。这不仅改善了我的身体状况，也提高了我的生活质量。Writing-Describingaction(s)Action(s)仿写：我能为自己做决定，我能使自己变得更好。TomakechoicesaboutmyselfiswithinmyownpowerandIcanchangemyselfforthebetter.Writing-Showingresult(s)Result(s)1.曾几何时Therewasatimewhen

2.更糟糕地是Worsestill3.依赖……做某事

relyon...todosth.4.决定；选定

decideon

5.约束自我disciplinemyself

6.下定决心做某事

makeupone’smindtodosth.7.立即；马上straightaway8.筋疲力尽的；疲惫的

bewornout9.焦虑不安的；心力交瘁

stressedout10.提高质量enhancethequalityof11.恢复精力getrefreshed写作指导本单元的写作任务是给编辑写一封关于健康生活方式的信。此类作文主要围绕以下几个方面写作：1.健康生活的必要性、重要性。2.指出目前存在的不利于健康的问题。3.健康生活方式：加强锻炼、注意饮食、均衡营养、养成良好的生活习惯等。4.如何从自我做起，如何制定计划改变不良的生活习惯等。Brainstormwithyourpartner.Q1:Whatlifestylehabityouwouldliketochange;Q2:Whyyouwanttochange;Q3:Howyouplantochange;Q4:Whatresultyouhopetosee.OvereatingUnhealthyFoodDrinkmilkteaoftendrinkandsmokeplaycellphoneinbedtoostressedoutStayingupLateWriteALetterToTheEditorAboutYourLifestyleDearEditor,IwaswalkingpastashopwindowtheotherdaywhenIsawmyreflection.Atfirst,Ididn'trealiseitwasme.WhenIsawitwasme,IfeltsadasIwasoverweight.Ididn'trealisehowIlooked,andnowIreallywanttochange.Ireallylikeeating,butIrealiseIeattoomuch,andIdon'teatgoodthings.IwanttochangebecauseIwanttobeabletolookatmyselfandfeelhappywithhowIlook.Ialsowanttobehealthy.Myplanistochangemydietandexerciseregularly.Iwillstopeatingsugar,andonlyeatatmealtimesratherthaneatingsnacksduringtheday.Iwillfocusonhealthyfoods.ThenIwillexerciseeveryday.Iwillwalktoschoolandback,andontheweekend,Iwillgoswimming.Ihaveonlybeendoingmyplanforaweek,butI'malreadystartingtofeelbetter.Ihaven'tlostalotofweightyet,butIfeelpositive.IfeelconfidentthatIwillreachmygoal!Yourssincerely,A.SmithproblemdecisionresultactionsummaryDearEditor,

①Knowingthatletterarewanted,I’dliketosharemystorywithyou.②Asmystudiesgrew,Iwasstressedoutandwornout.TherewasatimewhenIsufferedapoorsleep.Worsestill,theaddictiontosmokingbroughtmeanegativeeffectphysicallyandmentally.

③Suddenly,Ibecameawarethatifleftunchecked,mybadhabitswouldmakemeaccomplishnothing,Imadeupmymindtochangemyselfstraightaway.

④WheneverIwantedtosmoke,Itriedtodisciplinemyselfbydoingotherthingstogetrefreshed.

Ichosetoworkoutregularly,whichenhancedmyqualityoflife.

⑤Now,thereisnodoubtthatIammoredynamic,

withmymotivationstimulated.

Yours,LiHuaPart2-Writing:建议信letterofproposal第一段：写信目的：了解对方的困难，表达建议的意图第二段：内容要点：展开建议的具体内容并说明理由（3条为宜）第三段：表达期望：希望建议对对方有用建议信模板DearXX，

Hearingthatyouhavetroublewith...

Ifeelmorethansorry,asaconsequenceofwhichIwon’tmissthisfabulouschancetogiveyousomeadviceonhowto....

Mysuggestionsareasfollows.

Tobeginwith,itisagreatidea/adviseableto...(建议一),makingyou...Inaddition,youareexpected/supposedto...(建议二),whichwilldefinitelyhelpyou...Lastbutnotleast,

youmightaswelldo...(建议三).Bydoingso,youwill....

Ihopeyouwillfindmysuggestionsuseful.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Sincerelyyours,XX开头：指出对方问题：

Recently,Ilearnedthat……表明来意写信的目的是为了给出建议：Herearesomehumblesuggestionsforyou.

I’mwritingtosharemyideason......So,Iam

writingtogiveyouahand.Havingknownthatyouhavesometroublein...Iamwritingtosharesomeadvicewithyou.

主体：建议一Firstofall,whatyouneedtodosthis...建议二

Additionally,ifIwereyou,IwoulddoB.

建议三

What’smore,IsuggestyoushoulddoC.Itisintelligentofyou/agre