2024届高三英语作文复习写作专项读后续写主题语境续写：人与动物（狗狗篇）讲义素材

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【阅读&感知】挑选了一篇跛脚男孩和天生残疾狗狗互相救赎的故事，以完形填空练习方式呈现，让学生在做题过程中梳理情节、探究主旨，并积累描写狗狗的有用表达。PuppiesforSale身有残疾的小男孩看到了一只与他同病相怜的小狗，他决定以全价把它买下，虽然老板愿意免费赠送。在小男孩看来，残疾的人有着与正常人一样的价值和尊严，不能歧视他们。

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shopownerplacedasignabovehisdoorthatsaid:“PuppiesForSale.”____likethisalwaysattractyoungchildren,andtonosurprise,aboysawthesignand______theowner:“Howmucharethepuppies?”heasked.Thestoreownerreplied,“From30to50.”

Thelittleboypulledoutsome______fromhispocket.“Ihave2.37,”hesaid.“CanIplease________them?”

Theshopownersawthenote,smilingandwhistling.Outofthekennel(狗窝)camefive______ballsoffur.Onepuppywasfallingbehind.Immediatelythelittleboy______thelame(跛的)puppyandsaid,“What’swrongwiththatlittledog?”

Theshopowner______thattheveterinarian(兽医)haddiscovereditdidn’thaveahipsocket(膝盖骨).Itwould______lame.Thelittleboybecame______.“ThatisthepuppythatIwanttobuy.”

Theshopownersaid,“Ifyoureallywanthim,I’lljust______himtoyou.”

Thelittleboygotquite______,pointinghisfinger,andsaid;“Idon’twantyoutogivehimtome.I’llpay______price.______,I’llgiveyou2.37now,and50centsamonthuntilIhavehim______.”

Theshopownersaid,“Pleasedon’tbuythislittledog.Heisnevergoingtobeableto______andplaywithyouliketheotherpuppies.”

Tohis______,thelittleboyreached______androlleduphistrouserslegstoshowabadlytwisted(变形的),lameleft______supportedbyabigmetalbrace(支架).Helookedupattheshopownerand______replied,“Well,Idon’trunsowellmyself,andthelittlepuppywillneedsomeonewho______!”1.A.AnimalsB.SignsC.PricesD.Deals2.AmetB.beggedC.questionedD.approached3.A.paperB.coinsC.changeD.check4.A.seeB.takeC.raiseD.select5.A.roundB.tinyC.shyD.warm6.A.pitiedB.favoredC.foundD.noticed7.A.orderedB.explainedC.regrettedD.declared8.A.neverB.sometimesC.alwaysD.even9.A.sadB.excitedC.calmD.worried10.A.giveB.tellC.bringD.show11.A.upsetB.happyC.disappointedD.hurtful12.A.fullB.halfC.lessD.more13.A.SurprisinglyB.NaturallyC.SlowlyD.Actually14.A.paidforB.soldoutC.caredforD.healedup15.A.moveB.surviveC.runD.sit16.A.delightB.surpriseC.sorrowD.despair17.A.downB.upC.outD.forward18.A.armB.fingerC.legD.heart19.A.angrilyB.secretlyC.softlyD.shockingly20.A.suffersB.paysC.passesD.understands这个故事也被某校改编成了读后续写，原文和范文质量尚佳。PuppiesForSaleAshopownerplacedasignabovehisdoorthatsaid:“PuppiesForSale.”Signslikethisalwayshaveawayofattractingyoungchildren,andtonosurprise,aboysawthesignandapproachedtheowner;“Howmuchareyougoingtosellthepuppiesfor?”heasked.Thestoreownerreplied,“Anywherefrom$30to$50.”Thelittleboypulledoutsomechangefromhispocket.“Ihave$2.37,”hesaid.“CanIpleaselookatthem?”Theshopownersmiledandwhistled.

Outof

thekennel

came

Lady,whorandowntheaisleofhisshopfollowedbyfiveteeny,tinyballsoffur.Onepuppywas

laggingconsiderablybehind.

Immediatelythelittleboysingledoutthelagging,limpingpuppyandsaid,

“What’swrongwiththatlittledog?”Theshopownerexplainedthattheveterinarianhadexaminedthelittlepuppyandhaddiscovereditdidn’thaveahipsocket.Itwouldalwayslimp.Itwouldalwaysbelame.Thelittleboybecameexcited.“ThatistheverypuppythatIwanttobuy.”Theshopownersaid,“No,youdon’twanttobuythatlittledog.Ifyoureallywanthim,I’lljustgivehimtoyou.”Thelittleboygotquiteupset.He

lookedstraightintothestoreowner’seyes,pointinghisfinger,andsaid;“Idon’twantyoutogivehimtome.”注意:.1.续写词数应为150左右;

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragragh1:“I’llpayfullprice,"headded,inafirmtone.Paragragh2:Hearingtheowner'swords,thelittleboyreacheddownandrolleduphislefttrouserleg.PossibleVersion:“I’llpayfullprice,"headded,

inafirmtone.

Blindtotheconfusedexpressions

ontheowner'sface,theboycontinuedhisspeech,"Thatlittledog

iswortheverybitasmuchasalltheotherdogs

andinfact,I'llgiveyou$2.37now,and50centsamonthuntilIhavehimpaidfor.”Theshopownercountered,"Doyoureallywanttobuythislittledog?Heisnevergoingtobeabletorun,jumporplaywithyou

liketheotherpuppies."Hearingtheowner'swords,thelittleboy

reacheddownandrolledup

hislefttrouserleg.

A

badlytwisted,crippledleftleg

supportedbyabigmetalbrace

cameintosight.Theboylookedupattheshopownerandsoftlyreplied,”Well,Idon'trunsowellmyself,andthelittlepuppywillneedsomeonewhounderstands!"

Tearssparklingineyes,theowner

handedover

thelamepuppytotheboy.

Italwaysfeelssogreattohavesomeonewhounderstandsyouandcaresforyouheartandsoul.Writing【练习&运用】读后续写语篇一（2022湖北十一校联考）阅读下面短文,根据所给情节两段首句进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。故事大意：我为了更好的生活，听从医生建议，去狗狗收容所领养一只狗，一同减肥，

AnydaythatIhadtogototheairportwastheworstdayofmylife,andasatravelingappliancesalesman,Ihadtoflyquiteabit.Onthisparticulardayin2020,Iwasassignedtoamiddleseat.

Backthen,IwassofatthatIcouldhardlyfitdowntheaislefacingforward,soIwasforcedtowalksidewayslikeacrab.Iweighedbetween340and360pounds;theexactfiguredependedonwhetherItookmyweightbeforeorafteroneofmyenormousmeals.

WhenIfinallysqueezedintomyseat,theseatbeltwasn’tlongenoughtofitaroundmy52-inchwaist.Theyneverwere.

Atthatmoment,IknewinmyheartthatIneededtochange.Istartedlookingforsignsthatmightleadmetowardabetterlife,andimmediatelyasignshowedup.IturnedontheTVandhappenedtocatchaninterviewwithaformerworldchampion.Hesaidhe’dbeenunderthecareofadoctorwhoputhimonawhole-food,plant-baseddiet.Helostweightwithoutfeelinghungry,andhewashealthierandstrongerthanhe’dbeensincehistwenties.Ineverimaginedmysignwouldcomefromhim,buttherehewas.

Ihadnoideawhata“whole-food,plant-baseddiet”was.Iwentonlineandsearchedforadoctorwhocouldhelpme.That’swhenIfoundPreeti,anexperiencedmedicalspecialist.Ifelthopefulwhensheagreedtoseemethenextday.ThedoctorrecommendedalowcaloriedietandsomephysicalexercisesIcoulddoinmyhome.ShealsosuggestedthattomaintaindisciplineIshouldgotoashelterandadoptadog.“Exercise?”Iasked,“Adog?”Icouldn’tbelievewhatIheard.But,shesaid,“Adogisagoodcompanion.Plus,youliveinanapartment,whichmeansthedoghastobewalked.Soifyouwalkyourdogtwiceaday,thatwillbeyourexercise.I’msureitcanenhancethequalityofyourlifeandimproveyourhealth.”para.1Withdoubtsandhesitation,IdroveuptoadogshelternearwhereIlived.para.2Icamebackhomewiththelargeblack-and-whitedogwithabigroundbody.Step1Readforcluesandfigureoutthetheme1.WhydidIresolvetochange?2.HowshouldIloseweightaccordingtothedoctor’srecommendation？3.WouldIsucceedinchangingmyselfandleadingabetterlife?4.Whatmessageisthestorylikelytoconveytothereader?Step2Weavetheplotspara.1Withdoubtsandhesitation,IdroveuptoadogshelternearwhereIlived.①WhatcameintomysightimmediatelyIgotinthere?②WhichdogdidIchoosetoadoptandwhy?para.2Icamebackhomewiththelargeblack-and-whitedogwithabigroundbody.①Whatwasthedoglike?Washeactive,energeticorhealthy?②WhatdidIdoinanefforttochangetogetherwithmydog?③Didweattainourgoal?批改学生习作后发现对狗的动作描写和神态描写是主要难点，还有指代狗的代词用it是否合适等其它小问题，一一指出后，再挑选学生习作中精彩语句共同学习。possibleversion:Withdoubtsandhesitation,IdroveuptoadogshelternearwhereIlived.

Uponopening

thedoor,Iwasamazedtoseevarioustypesofdogs.

Hardlyhadtheycaught

sightofastrangerapproaching

when

theystartedbarking.

Itwasdifficulttodecideonone.Atthatmoment,alargeblack-and-whitedogyawninginthecornercaughtmyattention.

Hisroundbodyimmediatelyremindedmeofmysizeand

whatPreetisaid—Adogisagoodcompanion.Iknewhewas

theone

forme.

Icouldn'tresisthischarmanddecidedtoadopthim.Icamebackhomewiththelargeblack-and-whitedogwithabigroundbody.

InamedhimDavid,whooftenlaymotionlessonthefloorandyawnedwitheyeshalf-closed.

Imadeupmymindtochangebothofus.

Shortlyafterward,Ifoundaball,draggedDavidtotheparkandthrewitathim.Daviddashedforwardtocatchtheballstraightaway.

Gradually,

we

fell

intothehabitofwalkingtwiceaday,

justas

thedoctorrecommended,and

David

alwaysseemedtoknowwhen

Ineededalittleextraencouragement.

Hewould

nudgemewithhisnoseorlickmyhand,remindingmethat

Iwasnotaloneinmyjourneytobetterhealth.

Onemonthlater,itsuddenlyhitmethattherewasnoneedformetowalklikeacrabontheplane.

Meanwhile,David

became

leanand

seemed

morecontentthaneverbefore.Wehadbecomeateam,workingtogethertoimproveourlives.Writing【巩固&迁移】读后续写语篇二（2023常州卷）阅读下面短文,根据所给情节两段首句进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Intheheartofabitterwinter,snowblanketedtheland,tuningtheworldintoafrostywonderland.Inasmallvillagenestledamidsttheicylandscape,anunusualtaleunfolded,starringadognamedMaxandagroupofvillagers.Max,aloyalandspiritedcompanion,belongedtoalovelygirlnamedEmma.Together,theybravedtheharshwinters,findingcomfortintheirunwavering(坚定的)bond.Onefatefulevening,astheicywindshowledoutside,asuddensnowstormstruckthevillage.Snowpiledhigh,makingtheroadsdangerousandactofseeingnearlyimpossible.Thevillage'spowersupplywascutoff,leadingtheworldintodarkness.Inthemidstofthestorm,Emmafoundherselflostinthefreezingwilderness.ShehadgoneouttofetchfirewoodforherfamilywhileMaxwaskeptathome,butthesnowstormhaddisoriented(使...失去方向)her,leavingherinseveredanger.Emma'sparents,consumedwithworry,desperatelysearchedforher.

“Emma!Emma!”

hermothercalledoutherdaughter'snamemadlybutgotnoresponse.Emmaveryprobablylostherconsciousnessonsuchacoldnight.Moreandmorevillagersjoinedthesearch.Theycombedthroughthedarkwoods,theirbreathformingmistyclouds.Thewindhowledmournfully(哀伤地),echoingeveryone'sworry.Max,sensingtheurgencyandthebondbetweenhumans,sprangintoaction.Withhiskeensenseofsmellandgreatdetermination,hesetouttofindthelostgirl.Throughthebitingcoldandswirlingsnow,MaxfollowedEmma'sscent(气味),notfrightenedbythefreezingtemperatures.注意:(1)续写词数应为150个左右;(2)所给开头两段如下。AsMaxsearchedthefrozenlandscape,heencounterednumerouschallenges.Asthetwofiguresemergedfromthestorm,everyonewatchedinawe(敬畏).（时间有限，主要框架已课堂讨论过，仅让同学们在课堂上完成了主要情节的衔接部分和主旨写作。）完成续写：

AsMaxnavigatedthefrozenlandscape,heencounterednumerouschallenges.

Thesnow

______________._________________________________________.Finally,afterhoursofsearching,MaxdiscoveredEmmabeneathasnowcoveredtree.

__________________________________________________________________________________Emma,___________________________________________________________________________.

Asthetwofiguresemergedfromthestorm,allthevillagerswatchedinawe.

Inaflash,thegirl'smotherrecognizedherdaughter,

frightenedbutalive.Overwhelmed,themother

__________________________,“ThankGod!Youareback!”Max

__________________________________________.Thevillagers,

witnessingthis_____reunion,letoutcollectivesighsofrelief.Theirfaces

wereilluminatedbysmilesthat_________________.MaxhadnotonlysavedEmmabuthadalso

________________________________________________________.这篇续写的学生习作普遍比上一篇好太多，应是之前语料积累丰富的缘故。讲评课分享了学生习作中的亮点语句，同学们也很积极地赞叹和学习。possibleversion:AsMaxnavigatedthefrozenlandscape,heencounterednumerouschallenges.

Thesnow

weighedheavilyonhissmallbody,slowinghisprogress.

Hispawsgrewnumbwithcold,andhisfurbecamecoveredwithice.Finally,afterhoursofsearching,MaxdiscoveredEmmabeneathasnowcoveredtree.

Withaburstofexcitement,Maxbarkedjoyfully,awakeningthegirlfromherunconsciousstate.

Hegentlynudgedherwithhisnose.Emma,

shiveringfromthecold,clungtoMax'swarmfurashecarefullyguidedherbackhome.Asthetwofiguresemergedfromthestorm,allthevillagerswatchedinawe.

Inaflash,thegirl'smotherrecognizedherdaughter,

frightenedbutalive.Overwhelmed,themothercollapsedtoherknees,handstremblingasshereachedouttoher,“ThankGod!Youareback!”Max

circledaroundthereunitedmotheranddaughter,tailwaggingjoyfully.Thevillagers,

witnessingthisheartwarmingreunion,letoutcollectivesighsofrelief.Theirfaces

wereilluminatedbysmilesthatmeltawaythecold.MaxhadnotonlysavedEmmabuthadalso

ignitedasenseofunitywithinthecommunity,makingthebitterwinteraseasonofhopeandgratitude.和相关的续写题还有许许多多，日后再分享~下面送上狗狗描写语料Wordsandexpressionsapairoflargewateryeyes

一双水汪汪的大眼睛twobigroundeyes

两只圆溜溜的大眼睛anoselikeasmallblackgem

一个黑宝石般的鼻子wagthetail

摇尾巴smell/sniff

嗅；bark

吠；lick

舔；scratch

抓，挠；growl

低吼puttheearsup/pinbackthetears

把耳朵竖起来holdittightlywiththepaws

用爪子紧紧抓住raiseitswholebodyonitshindlegs

用后腿支起全身leaptoitsfeet

跳起来10.restthenoseinitspaws

把鼻子搁在爪子里II.Sentences1.Thedoghasgoldenfurwhichfeelsverycomfortable,liketouchingthesoftcotton.小狗有着金黄色的毛，摸着十分舒服，像是摸着柔软的棉花一样。2.Thedogclungtohisfeetandlookedathimwithbrighteyes.小狗紧贴着他的脚，用明亮的眼睛看着他。3.

Uponhismaster’sarrival,

thedogleapttohisfeet,snortedhappilyandboundedforward.主人一到，这只狗就跳起来，高兴地哼了一声，向前跳跃着。4.Dogstakemuchpleasureinrollingandrubbingtheirnecksandbackswiththeirpaws.狗很喜欢用爪子滚动和摩擦自己的脖子和后背。5.Atthesightofastrangerapproachingthehouse,thedogwatchedhim,earsup,headslightlycocked.看到一个陌生人向房子走来，那只狗竖起耳朵，微微抬起头，注视着他。6.Thedoggotwo