主题08 校园生活-2021年中考英语作文素材大全

主题8

——校园生活

I.主题词汇

校园活动：acolourfulschoollife,allkindsofactivities,after-schoolactivities,takeanactivepartin,

haveasportsmeeting,haveabasketballmatchwith,goonaspringouting,takeatripto,bea

memberof,learnfromeachother,fillone'sheartwithhope,holdaneveningpartyjointheReading

Club,buildoneself/sb.up,havethechancetodosth.,helpeachother,improveone'sskills,winthe

firstprize,beattheotherplayer,losethegame,stepintosociety

校园人物：atopstudent,atruefriend,befulloflife,fairandhonest,befriendlytosb.,bepatient

withsb.,bereadytohelpothers,bestrictwithsb.,bewillingtodo,facedifficultiesbravely,havea

senseofhumor,haveastrongwill,havethesamerulesforeverybody,treateverybodyequally,keep

asecret,playdifferentroles,organizeclassactivities,speakhighlyofsb.（高度评价某人）,thinkof

othersfirst,shareone'sjoyandsadness

n常用句型

校园活动

1.Themodernsocietyrequiresmanyqualitiesofyoungstudents,soonlylearningfromtextbooksis

notenough.（总起句，通常在第一段或段落的句首。）

2.Wecanlearnagreatdealfromotherstudentswemeetinactivities.

3.Afterlonghours'study,theycanrelaxthemselvesbytakingpartinschoolactivities.

4.SometimeswehaveclassmeetingsandEnglishfestivals.Theyareveryinteresting.

5.Wecantakepartindifferentactivitiesaccordingtoourpersonalhobbies.

6.Ifwelikemusic,wecanjointheMusicClubonThursday.

7.Ithinktheseactivitiescanmakeourschoolliferichandcolourful.

8.Ienjoymyschoollifeverymuch.

9.AtlastArtFestival,myclassmatesandIprovidedaprettygooddrama.Onaccountofthem,it

becamemygreatesthonorinmylife.

校园人物

1.Howtimeflies!Mycolourfulmiddleschoollifeisnearlyending.HereiswhatIthinkofabout

myself.

2.1wasproudofmyselfbecauseIgotonwellwithmyclassmatesandmygradesweregood.

3.Ihavegotmoreknowledgeandimprovedmylife.

4.Withherhelp,ImadegreatprogressinEnglish.Now,Icanevencommunicatewithforeigners.

5.ItwasMarywhogavemethegreatesthelpandmademyschoollifesowonderful.

6.Weshareourjoyandsadnessjustlikeabigfamily.

7.WhenIhadastomach,myclassmateslookedafterme.Itmadememoved.

8.Whenmyclassmatesmeetsometroublesthattheyareunabletoovercome,Iamreadyforgiving

themahandanytimeanywhere.Ihavehelpedthemalot,andIamalwayshappytodothat.

m.模拟试题

Beproudofmyschool

a.Whatdoesyourschoollooklike?

b.Whatfundoyouhaveatschool?

c.Whydoyoulikeyourschool?（Giveatleasttworeasons）

要点分析：

1.通过具体的活动（如：兴趣小组、体育活动、与老师同学的相处、自己在学校生活中的收获

等）来表达对学校的情感。

2.时态：一般现在时。

3.文章结构：略写校园环境，详写校园生活和自己的成长、收获。

4.切忌：言之无物，只说“热爱”自己的学校，却不说为什么“热爱

写作思路：

I）总体概述“我为学校而骄傲”

1.1amproudofmyschoolbecauseitisbeautifulandwehavemanyinterestingschoolactivities.

2.Myschoolisverybig.Wehave...Thereare...（从建筑、设施、绿化的角度写）

II）具体谈谈校园活动和人物

1.Wehavelotsoffunatschool.Afterschoolweplay...Wedolotsofsportslike...Sometimeswe

have...（从体育活动、课外活动、主题活动的角度写）

2.Studentsinourschoolstudyhardanddowellintheirsubjects.

3.Eachstudentrespectshis/herteachersandispolitetoothers.

ni）从校园活动和人物中得到的启迪

1.Ilovemyschoolbecause...Ilearnalotfrom...Ireallyfeelproudofmyschool.

2.Ifeveryonemakesacontributiontoourschool,itwillbemorebeautiful.

范文点评

Iamproudofmyschoolbecauseitisbeautifulandwehavemanyinterestingschoolactivities.

Myschoolisverybigwithseveraltallbuildings.Wehaveabigplayground,andtherearelotsof

treesandflowerseverywhere.Besides,thereisabigfountaininourschoolgarden.Somestudents

usuallyplaytogetherafterclass.Othersappreciatethegoldfishinthelake.Italsogivesusmuch

happiness.

Wealsohavelotsoffunatschool.Afterclassweplaygamesanddolotsofsports,likeplaying

basketball,footballandtabletennis.SometimeswehaveclassmeetingsandEnglishfestivals.

Ilovemyschool.Theteachersareverykindandthestudentsarefriendlytoeachother.We

shareourjoyandsadnessjustlikeabigfamily.

范文选登

Myschoolverybigwithseveraltallbuildings.Thereare2,000studentsinmyschool.Wehave

abigplaygroundwithlotsoftreesaroundit.Therearealotofflowerseverywhere.

Wehavelotsoffunatschool.Afterclasswedolotsofsports,likeplayingbasketball,football

andtabletennis.Also,wechatwitheachotherunderthetreesandplaygamestogether.Howhappy

weare!

Ilovemyschoolbecauseit'slikeabigfamily.Theteachersinmyschoolareaskindtousas

ourparents.Ifeelproudofmyschoolanditisoneofthebestschoolsinmyheart.

范文链接

1.Myclassmatesandmyclass

MyschoollifeiswonderfulandIfeelproudtobeamemberofmyclass.Inmyclass,Iget

alongwellwithmyclassmates.Iusuallyreadbookswiththemandshareourthoughtstogether.

WhenIhaveaPElesson,Ialwaysplaybasketballwiththemandweallenjoyourselves.AndI

rememberonedaywhenIhadastomachache,myclassmateslookedafterme.Itmadememoved.So

inmyopinion,myclassmatesareveryfriendlyandkind.

Frommypointofview,myclassismysecondhomebecauseitalwaysgivesmewarmthand

love.If11bethemostvaluabletreasureinmymemory.

2.Studyisfun

Whydowecometoschool?Differentpeoplemayhavedifferentanswers.Somepeoplesay

thattheycometoschooltostudyjustbecausetheydreamofabetterjobandabetterfuture.Butin

mypointofview,studyisfun.

Itissaidthateveryonewhoisinterestedinstudymayfindpleasureinreading.Exactly!Study

cannotonlyenrichmyknowledgeandbroadenmymind,butalsobring

范文选登

Myschoolisverybigwithseveraltallbuildings.Thereare2000studentsinmyschool.We

haveabigplaygroundwithlotsoftreesaroundit.Therearealotofflowerseverywhere.

Wehavelotsoffunatschool.Afterclasswedolotsofsports,likeplayingbasketball,football

andtabletennis.Also,wechatwitheachotherunderthetreesandplaygamestogether.Howhappy

weare!

Ilovemyschoolbecauseit'slikeabigfamily.Theteachersinmyschoolareaskindtousasour

parents.Ifeelproudofmyschoolanditisoneofthebestschoolsinmyheart.

范文链接

l.Myclassmatesandmyclass

MyschoollifeiswonderfulandIfeelproudtobeamemberofmyclass.Inmyclass,Igetalong

verywellwithmyclassmates.Iusuallyreadbookswiththemandshareourthoughts.WhenIhavea

PElesson.Ialwaysplaybasketballwiththemandweallenjoyourselves.AndIrememberoneday,

whenIhadastomachache,myclassmateslookedafterme.Itmadememoved.Soinmyopinion,my

classmatesareveryfriendlyandkind.

Frommypointofview,myclassismysecondhomebecauseitalwaysgivesmewarmthandlove.

It'llbethemostvaluabletreasureinmymemory.

2.Studyisfun

Whydomecometoschool?Differentpeoplemayhavedifferentanswers.Somepeoplesaythat

theycometoschooltostudyjustbecausetheydreamofabetterjobandabetterfuture.Butinmy

viewpoint,studyisfun.

Itissaidthateveryonewhoisinterestedinfindpleasureinreading.Exactly!Studycannotonly

enrichmyknowledgeandbroadenmymind,butalsobringmelotsoffunaswell.What'smore、

studyalwaysteachesmehowtobehonest,confidentandknowledgeable.

Inaword,studyisfun.

3.Takingpartinschoolactivities

Manystudentsareveryinterestedinschoolactivities.Theyhavetheirreasons.Firstly,theythink

thatlearningfromtextbooksisnottheironlytask.Theybelievethattheyshouldtakeeverychanceto

getmorepracticalknowledge.Secondly,theythinkthatafterlonghoursofstudy,theycanrelax

themselvesbytakingpartinschoolactivities.

However,alargegroupofstudentshavelittleinterestinthemandspendmostoftheirtimeon

studies.First,theybelievethattheyshouldmakefulluseoftimetostudy.Second,theyfeelthat

schoolactivitieshavelittletodowiththeirfurtherdevelopment.

Inmyopinion,weshouldtakeanactivepartinschoolactivities.Ononehand,wecanlearna

greatdealfromotherstudentswemeetinactivities.Besides,themodemsocietydemandsthat

studentshavemanygoodqualities,soonlylearningfromtextbooksisnotenough.

4.Aletteraboutmyschoolactivities

DearTom,

Howareyou?NowIenjoymyschoollifeverymuch.Besideslearningmanysubjectsatschool,

wehaveallkindsofactivitiesafterclass.

Wecantakepartindifferentactivitiesaccordingtoourpersonalhobbies.Forexample,wecango

toourschoolscomputergrouponMondaytolearnmoreaboutcomputerscience.Wecanalso

improveourEnglishbyjoininEnglishCorneronTuesday.Ifwelikemusic,wecanalsoimprove

ourEnglishbyjoininginEnglishCorneronTuesday.Ifwelikemusic,wecanjointheMusicClub

onThursday.WecangotoplayballgamesonFridayinordertomakeourselvesstronger.

Ofalltheseactivities,Ilikeplayingballgamesbestbecausehealthisveryimportantforus

students.Ithinktheseactivitiescanmakeourschoolliferichandcolourful.Wealllikethese

activities.

5.Mymiddleschoollife

a.Howtimeflies!Mycolourfulmiddleschoollifeisnearlyending.HereiswhatIthinkofabout

myself.

Inthepastfouryears,IwasproudofmyselfbecauseIgotonwellwithmyclassmatesandmy

gradesweregood.Now,Ihavemanyinterestssuchasreadingbooks,playingsportsandsoon.In

thisway,Ihavegotmoreknowledgeandimprovedmylife.

Asforthefuture,Ihavetwodreams.Oneistobeateacher,andtheotheristobeavolunteer.

Helpingothersismygreatesthappiness.

AlthoughIhavemademuchprogress.Tiltrymybesttodoevenbetter.Believinginmyselfisthe

keytosuccess.

b.Howtimeflies!Mycolourfuljuniormiddleschoollifeiscomingtoanend.I'mgladtotellyou

somethingaboutmyschoollife.WhenIwassixyearsold,Istartedschool.SinceIbecameastudent,

Ihavebeenstudyingveryhard.Myparentsarequiteproudofme.Now,Istudyatakeymiddle

school,whichisnotonlymodembutalsobeautiful.Theteachersinmyschoolaresokindand

hard-workingthatIlovethemverymuch.All[heteachersregardusstudentsastheirownchildren.

Alsotheyarestrictwithusandstrictintheirwork.Iamgettingalongverywellwithmyclassmates.

Wheneverwehavedifficultiesinourstudy,wehelpeachother.Ihavemanyinterestssuchas

dancing,singing,readingbooksandplayingsports,andIespeciallyenjoyplayingbasketball,which

makesmesmarterandhelpsmelearnfasterandbetter.SoI'veimprovedmylifeinthisway.My

schoollifeisfullofhappinessandfun.AlthoughIhavesomenewchallengeseveryday,I'lltrymy

besttomeetthem.

6.AhappymemoryinmyJuniorHighSchool

a.Therearemanyunforgettablememoriesinmymind,andamongthemthehappiestmemoryisthes

portsmeetinginsummer.ltwasveryhot,thesunshonebrightlyandeveryonewassoexcited.BuyI

wasverynervousbecauseitwouldbemyturntorun.Withthesoundof'gonIbegantoenco

urageme.ThatsaidWewereallproudofyou."Ilearnedthatthemostimportantthingisthelove

betweenus.ThatisthehappiestmemoryinmyJuniorHighSchool.

b.AswewillgraduatefromJuniorHighSchool,thehappiestmemoryIwillneverforgettheex

perienceofaclassmeeting.Wehadthegroupofmeetingtoperformance.Wewrotethearticlesonit

andpracticedalotoftimes.Withthehelpofourclassteacherandthehardworkdayandnight,

wedidsowellintheperformance.FromthatIknewnopainsnogames.Itisthehappiestmemoryi

nmyJuniorHighSchool.

c.Schoollifeplaysanimportantroleinourdailylife.IhaveahappymemoryinmyJunior

HighSchool.Lastmonth,wehadaspringouting.WewenttoGangpingForestPark.Theweatherwa

ssocomfortablethatweallenjoyedourselves.Wehadapicnicundertheandsangtogether.Weshar

edourtootherpeople.Finally,weplayedagamewithteamwork.Itwassointerestingandweleame

dalot.WhatahappymemoryinJuniorHighSchool.

d.AsIamabouttograduate,IwouldliketotalkaboutahappymemoryinmyJuniorHighSchool.In

mymind,Ithinkthesportsmeetingisahappymemory.Wewereveryexcitedwhenthesportsmeeti

ngwasheld.Onthatdayallofustookonactivepartinit.Somejumpedropesomehadarunning

race,andothersplayedsomegames.Whenever.Someonewhowonaprize,

wecheeredforhim.Wehadsuchagreattimethatwewerealltriedafterthesportsmeeting.How

timeflieswhenwearehavingfun!ItwasahappyandmeaningfulmemorythatIwillalwaysre

member.

7.MyTV-tumoffweek

a.EveryonelikewatchingTVinourdailylife.SodoI.Butitisunhealthyforustowatchittoomu

ch.IhaveaTV-turnoffweek,assoonasIfindthatIamgettingmoreandmoreunhealthy.When

IhaveaTV-turnoffweek,IturnoffmyTVandhaveoutdooractivitiesregularity.Ialsochange

mybaddietinordertohaveastrongbody.WhatismoreIhelpmymotherdosomehousework.SoI

believe,Iwillhaveagoodandstrongbodysoonerorlater.

b.Asachild,everyonelikeswatchingTV.Sodoi.However,TdliketohaveaTV-turnoffweek.Th

eearewereasonsforit.First,itisgoodformyeyes.Second,I'lldothefollowingactivities.First,

Fillistentothemusicmoreoften.Next,I'lldosomesports,suchasrunningjumpingandplayingba

dminton.Icannotonlyrelaxmyselfbutalsomakemy

lifemuchstronger.Inconclusion,inordertomakemylifebetter,lamhappytohaveaTV-turnoffwe

ek.

c.llikewatchingTVverymuch,butIstillhaveaTV-turnoffweekinordertoprotectmyeyesandst

udyhabits.

DuringtheTV-turnoffweek,Iwillhelpmyparentsdosomehouseworkthanbefore.Iwillalso

gototheparkandenjoythefreshairaswellasthebeautifulview.Ontheotherhand,thisactivityca

nhelpmesaveelectricityandtheenvironment.Howmeaningful!1also

thinkIwillreadbooksinsteadofsittinginfrontoftheTVset.Let'shaveaTV-Turnoffweekrightno

w.

d.Asweallknow,TVbecomesanimportantpartinourdailylife.IlikewatchingTVbecauseI

canknowalotofnewsfromit.ButelectricityisrunningquicklywhilewearewatchingTV.SoIhav

eaTV-tumoffweektosaveelectricity.Iwillreadbooksandplaywithmyfriendsinsteadofwatchi

ngTVduringtheTV-turnoffweek.Ithinkitenablesmetogetonbetterwithothers.Anditcanprote

cttheenvironmentaswell.AsfarasIamconcerned,wealloughttoclosetheTVourselves.

e.It*scommonfbrteenagerstolikewatchingTV.Asamemberofthem.Sodo1.1wouldliketoha

veaTV-tumoffweek,Iwanttorestmyeyesandconcentrateonstudying,DuringtheTV-turnoffwee

k,

Iwillputmyheartintomystudying.Iwillenjoymyselfbydoingsomeindooractivitiessuchasdoi

ngapuzzle.TherearetworeasonsforwhyI

amgoingtodothesethings.First,Ineedtorelaxmyself.Astechnologydevelops,weareforcedtoli

veinaworldoffastpace.Sowhynotgetawayfromtechnologyandrelaxmyself?Second,

I'mastudentofGradeNine.Ihavetostudyhardinordertohaveabrightfuture.IbelieveIwillce

rtainlyenjoymyTV-turnoffweek.Itwillbehelptome.

8.MyfriendshipwithMary

Mary,a15-year-oldgirl,ismybestfriend.Sheistallwithbigbrighteyes.Whenwetalkaboutsomet

hing.Shealwayslooksatme.Smiling.Twoyearsago,Icametothisschool.Everythingwasstrang

etomeonmyfirstdayatschool.Ifeltverylonely.Justthen,Marycametome.Sheinvite

dmetoplaygameswithherhelp,ImadegreatprogressinEnglish,nowIcanevencommu

nicatewithforeigners!ItwasMarywhogavemethegreatesthelpandmademyschoollifesowo

nderful.Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.That'sreallytrue.

9.Schoolrules

Therearemanyrulesinourschool.Forexample,wemustwearschooluniformseverydayandwe

mustgettoschoolontime.Wemustn'tusemobilephonesinclass.IagreetosomeofthemFor

instance,weshouldbeinschoolontimeandnotusemobilephonesinclass.It*sourdutytoobey

suchrules.ButIdon*tagreethatwehavetowearschooluniformsallthetime,Ithinkouruniforms

areuglyandyoungpeoplewanttolooksmart.Wewanttowearourownclothestoschool,because

wefeelcomfortableinourownclothes.Iwouldliketheschoolleaderstoaskforouradvicewhen

theymakeschoolrules.

10.Myviewsonagoodstudent

Therearemanygoodstudentsinmyschool.They'reallgoodexamplesforme.Idon'tthinkhighmar

ksarethemostimportantthingtojudgesstudent.Inmypointofview,agoodstudentshouldbekin

dandandhelpfultoteachers,studentsandparentsaswell.Inaddition,weshouldbehard-wo

rkingonstudyandtrybesttogethighmarks.FmsureIwillbeagoodstudent.

11.Tobuildaharmoniouscampus

Ourschoolislikeourhome.Weshouldtrytobuildupaharmoniouscampus.Inmyopinion,oursc

hoollifenowisnotverygood.Thereisstillsomethingthatshouldbechanged.Forthetimebein

g,ourstudentsdon'thaveagoodmanner.Toimprovethesituation,Isuggestschooladdsomelesson

stohelpstudentsdobetter.Besides,wecanplantmoretreestoimprovetheenvironmentinorder

tokeepstudentsinagoodmood.Let*stryourbesttobuildaharmoniouscampus.

真题在现

Writeapassageofatleast60wordsonthetopicnChangesinmyschool.（以《学校发生的变化》

为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）

Usethefollowingpointsasareference0（以下提示仅供参考）

Whatchangeshavetakenplaceinyourschool?

Whatdoyouthinkofthesechanges?

(注意：文中不得出现任何姓名，校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)

★审(Read)的：简开

从作文标题“Changesinmyschool”中可得知，主要的写作内容应为校园的变化，再根据题干

中所给提示：

1.Whatchangeshavetakenplaceinyourschool?2.Whatdoyouthinkofthesechanges?可将书写

方向定为：1.校园发生的变化是？2.我对这些变化的看法是……然而，写到这里，我们会发

现题干中并没有之前所预想的第三点提示，在这种情况下，则要按照传统写作的三大段模式,

自行附加结尾，即：3.对校园生活进行总结提出期望。

★写(Write)

根据之前所讲写作步骤：作文题目一写作框架一添加素材一初稿,

即可进行如下书写步骤的拆解:

1.Whatchangeshavetakenplaceinyour开篇：Thechangeshavetakenplacein

school?myschoolare...

2.Whatdoyouthinkofthesechanges?中间：Ithinkthechangesare...

3.Conclusion./Hope.结尾：Inconclusion./Ihopemy

school...

接下来，我们需要思考，涉及到校园生活类话题时，可以应用多少词汇及句式，才会使文

章的内容变得更加丰富。

★可用素材★

词汇大搜罗

▲名词：

1.environment2.health3.knowledge4.life

5.part6.playground7.rubbish8.school

9.student10.teacher11.thing12.time

13.year

▲动词：

1.believe2.can3.feel4.have

5.grow6.help7.love8.make

9.pollute10.protect11.say12.see

13.spend14.talk15.teach16.worry

▲形容词

1.bad2.better3.clean4.great

5.important6.long

▲副词

1.everywhere2.much3.seriously4.usually

连接词及短语大搜罗

▲表时间

when,while,as

▲表转折

but,yet,however

▲表因果

so,therefore,asaresult

常见句型大搜罗

1.Whenwe...,we...,当我们.,我们...

2.Weallbelievethat…我们都相信..

3.Inrecentyears,…•在最近几年里..

4.Asweknow...,众所周知，..

5.Asstudents,...作为学生，..

运用以上单词、连接词以及句式，就可以在已写出的文章框架（开篇、中间结尾）的中心句

的基础上，添加必要的写作素材，从而形成文章的初稿，如下：

初稿：

Changesinmyschool

Whenwetalkaboutourschool,weusuallyhavealottosay,includingtheteachers,thestudents

andsoonWeallbelievethattheschoolisanimportantpartinourlife.Itteachesusknowledgeand

helpsusgrowup.Weloveitsomuch.However,inrecentyears,theenvironmenttherehasbeen

seriouslypolluted,andwefeelworried.Wecouldseethecleanplaygroundinthepast,butnowit

becomesa"new"onewithrubbisheverywhere.Asweknow,thepollutedenvironmentisbadfbrour

health.Therefore,wemustdosomethingbeforethingsgetworse.Asstudents,wespendlongertime

atschool.So,loveourschoolandprotecttheenvironmenttomakeitabetterone.

到此为止，评分标准中的第一个8分已收入囊中，但切勿忘记，考题除了对文章的结构