2025届高考英语复习读后续写爱心故事类+帮助失去妻子的人走出阴影

高考英语读后续写语篇练习爱心故事——帮助失去妻子的人走出阴影1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Hewasthereeverymorning,sittingmotionlessonthefrontstopsofhishouse.Hisbrightblueeyesseemedsodistantandsad.Everymorning,Iwalkedthisroutewithmydaughtertoherkindergarten.Wewerenewtotheneighbourhood,soIdidn’tknowmanyofmyneighbours.Ononebeautifulmorning,aswepassedhishouse,mydaughterpipedupandcalledouttohim,“Hi,Mr.Man!”Shewasanoutgoinggirl,andIwasn'tsurprisedathercheerfulness,butherenthusiasmsoonfadedwhenthemandidn’tlookatherorsay‘Hi’back.Aswecontinuedonourwalktoschool,mydaughteraskedwhythemandidn’twanttosayhitoher.Stumblingforwords,becauseIdidn’thavetheanswer,Isaidsimply,“Maybeheishavingabadday.”Oncebackhome,Itackledthebreakfastdishes,andIthoughtaboutMr.Man.Whatwashisstory?Whydidheseemsosad?1wantedtodosomethingtocheerhimup.Ithoughtofafewwaystomakehisdayabitbrighter,butnothingseemedspecialcnough.4续写原文Thenextmorning,afterdroppingmydaughteroffatschool,Isawoneofmyotherneighbourstendingherfrontgarden.AfterIintroducedmyself,sheinvitedmeinforachat.Shewasalong-timeresidentoftheneighbourhood,whokneweveryoneandeverything.Shewasabubblypersonality,butwhenIaskedheraboutthemanwholivednearby,shegrewserious.Bobrecentlylosthiswifeinacaraccident.Hehasn’tbeenthesamesince.Thefollowingweekseemedtoflyby.IhadtalkedtomydaughteraboutwhatwecoulddotomakeMr.Mansmile.5段首句Paragraph1:Witheverysuggestionlmade,shesimplysaid“No,notthat.”Parsgraph2:Inside,inperfectcalligraphy,itsimplyread,“Thankyou,fromMr,Man.”6Part2题目分析7点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点8续写思路分析本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者的邻居鲍勃最近在一次车祸中失去了妻子。从那以后他就每天早上都伤心地一动不动地坐在家门口，沉默不语。作者了解到情况后，就想做点事情让他高兴起来的故事。9续写思路分析Para1：Witheverysuggestionlmade,shesimplysaid“No,notthat.”由第一段首句内容“对于我提出的每一个建议，她都简单地说:“不，不是那个。””可知，第一段可描写作者的女儿想出来办法帮助鲍勃。10续写思路分析Para2：Inside,inperfectcalligraphy,itsimplyread,“Thankyou,fromMr,Man.”由第二段首句内容“里面，用完美的书法简单地写着:“谢谢你，来自某某先生。””可知，第二段可描写作者一家使得鲍勃重新燃起了对生活的希望。11续写思路分析续写线索想办法帮助Bob——邀请Bob来家做客——与Bob聊天使其高兴起来——Bob写信感谢——感悟12续写素材可用词汇：行为类①.与某人谈话：talkwithsb/haveawordwithsb/talktosb②.做饭：makedinner/cookthemeal③.开始：begin/start情绪类①.快乐：happy/pleasure②.孤单：lonely/friendless13续写素材可用句型：[高分句型1].Intheevening,whenBobcameoverfordinnerwiththefamily,itwasalittleawkwardatfirst.（由连接词when引导的时间状语从句）[高分句型2].WewerehappybecauseBobhadregainedhishopeforlife.（由because引导的原因状语从句）14Part3范文呈现15范文呈现WitheverysuggestionImade,shesimplysaid“No,notthat.”Undermyquestioning,shespokeherownmind.ShewantedtowriteaninvitationtoBobthisafternoon,invitinghimtocomeoverfortheevening.Icouldmakeanicedinnerforhim,andwecouldeatandtalkwithhimasafamily,sohewouldn’tbesosadandlonely.Thehappyatmosphereofthefamilycanmakepeoplefeelhappinessfromthebottomoftheirhearts.Intheevening,whenBobcameoverfordinnerwiththefamily,itwasalittleawkwardatfirst.Later,inourconversationandlaughter,Boblaughedindelight.Afterdinner,weinvitedhimtocomeoveroften.Thenextmorning,wereceivedaletter.16范文呈现Inside,inperfectcalligraphy,itsimplyread,“Thankyou,fromMr,Man.”Whenweopenedtheletter,wesawthatitwaswrittenbyBob.WewerehappybecauseBobhadregainedhishopeforlife.Amonthlater,Bobcametoourhousewithagift.Myfamilyisveryhappy.Bobtoldusabouthisrecentsituation.Hehadbeguntoworkhardandtolivehappily.Onceagain,thankstous.17范文译文对于我提出的每一个建议，她都只是简单地说“不，不是那样。”在我的询问下，她说出了自己的想法。她今天下午想给鲍勃写一封邀请函，邀请他晚上过来。我可以为他做一顿丰盛的晚餐，我们可以像一家人一样和他一起吃饭和聊天，这样他就不会那么悲伤和孤独。家庭的幸福气氛可以让人们发自内心地感受到幸福。晚上，当鲍勃和家人一起过来吃饭时，一开始有点尴尬。后来，在我们的谈笑中，鲍勃高兴地笑了起来。晚饭后，我们邀请他经常来。第二天早上，我们收到了一封信。18范文译文里面用完美的书法写着：“谢谢你