高考英语读后续写校园故事类艺术比赛为学生增强了信心课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习校园故事——艺术比赛为学生增强了信心1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文4续写原文Rishahadthewholeweekendtoworkonherproject,butshecouldnotthinkofanythingtodo.OnMonday,Rishafeltfrightened,soafterschoolRishaaskedMs.Clayifshecouldwriteanartpaperinsteadofdoinganartproject.“Iunderstandthisprojectscaredyou,Risha,”Ms.Claysaid.“Justremember,youcancreateanykindofartyouwant.”Ms.Claysmiledather.“Artisaperson’swayofexpressinghisorherfeelings—itisn’talwayspainting,drawing,orcutting.Iknowyouwillthinkofsomethingverycreative,andIcan’twaittoseeit.”WhenRishaarrivedhome,shetookoutapieceofpaperandapencil.SherememberedMs.Clay’swords.“Artisaperson’swayofexpressinghisorherfeelings.”Rishawrotetheword“terrified”onherpaper.Shecrumpled(弄皱)thepaperandthrewittothesideofherdesk.5段首句Paragraph1：ThenRishastaredatthecrumpledball.Paragraph2OnFriday,Rishacarefullycarriedherprojectintothelibrary.6Part2题目分析7点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点8续写思路分析9续写思路分析Para1：ThenRishastaredatthecrumpledball.由第一段首句内容“然后Risha盯着这个揉皱了的球。”可知，第一段可描写看到纸团后，Risha的感想和采取的行动。10续写思路分析11续写思路分析续写线索想起做雪球——完成项目——老师和同学表扬——感到骄傲12续写素材13续写素材可用句型：[高分句型1].Shenoticedthesmileandthenodsfromteachersandotherstudentsassheputherworkonatable.(由连接词as引导的时间状语从句)[高分句型2].HerpridegrewwhenMs.Clayplacedafirst-placestaronherartwork.(由when引导的时间状语从句)14Part3范文呈现15范文呈现ThenRishastaredatthecrumpledball.Itremindedherofasnowball.Suddenlyanideastruckher.Whynotcreateawinterwonderlandoutofcrumpledpaper?Rishadidn’thavetodraworpaintorevencut.Rishamademanypaperballs,gluedthemalltogether,andplacedthemonabigpieceofhardpapertoformasnowman.Thesnowmanworeahatmadeofblackpaperandascarfmadeofredpaper.Herfinishedprojectwasreallywonderful.16范文呈现OnFriday,Rishacarefullycarriedherprojectintothelibrary.Shenoticedthesmileandthenodsfromteachersandotherstudentsassheputherworkonatable.Ms.ClaywalkedovertoRisha.“Youhavecreatedacreativepieceofartwork.Iamsoproudofyou!”Ms.Claysaid.Rishawasproudofherselftoo.HerpridegrewwhenMs.Clayplacedafirst-placestaronherartwork.“MaybeIamagoodartistafterall,”Rishathought.17范文译文然后里沙盯着揉皱的球。这让她想起了一个雪球。她突然想到了一个主意。为什么不用皱巴巴的纸创造一个冬天的仙境呢？里沙不用画画，甚至不用切割。里沙做了很多纸团，把它们粘在一起，放在一张大的硬纸上堆雪人。雪人戴着一顶黑纸做的帽子和一