专题05上海高考应用文类作文（解析版）

►专题05上海高考应用文类作文_________________________________________________________________________________________考点精考点精讲【考情链接】应用文是一种与日常生活、学习或工作密切相关,实用性很强的文体,包括书信、电子邮件、日记、通知、发言稿和读后感等,每种类别的应用文都有各自的结构和行文特点。书信是应用文中使用最广泛的文体；其中建议信、申请信和推荐信考察最频繁。【典例剖析】（2021.6

上海高考）

假设你是明启高三学生李华，收到外国朋友Bill的邮件，告诉你他准备开始学习汉语，现有两门汉语课程供他选择（课程信息下表所示），但他对课程选择有些茫然，想听取你的建议。给Bill

回复一封邮件，在邮件中你必须：推荐其中一门课程通过比较两门课程的信息，说明你推荐该门课程的理由。课程名称汉语听说汉语读写课程内容日常会话故事读写安排每周一、四晚7:00-8:30，共8周每周五晚7:00-8:30，共16周语言全中文中英双语一、框架梳理交代背景（问候语+写信的目的）I'veheardthat…Iamexcited/thrilled/delightedtohearfrom…Hearingthat…Ihighlyremend……youarepreparingto…andtherearetwocoursesforyoutochoosefrom……youaregoingtolearnChinesebutthatyouarefacingatoughchoice,Iamwritingtoyoutosharemyhumbleopinions.…youaretornbetweentwocourses…I’dliketovoicemyremendation.…youarepreparingtolearnChinesebutareatapletelossaboutwhichcoursetotake,Icanhardlywaittowritethise-mailtoyou,sharingmyopinions.SoelatedamIthatI’vereceivedyoure-mailwhereyoumentionedthatyouhavebeenpreparingforlearningChinese,butthealternativesofcurriculumstillconfusedyouandmadeyouhesitant.表明选择（推荐其中一门课程）AccordingtomyexperienceasanEnglishlearner.Iwouldadviseyouto…IfIwereyou,Iwouldenterfor…ratherthan…Aftercarefulparisonbetweenthetwocoursesandtakingintoconsiderationyourpersonalsituation,Ibelieve…ismoresuitableforyou.Allthingsconsidered,Istronglyremendyoutochoose…Considering…,…canbettersatisfyyourrequirementsthan….Between…and…,Imaintainthattheformerismoresuitableforyouandtheremendationwillbejustifiedasthefollowingreasons.Basedonyourpersonalsituation,IconsidertheChineselisteningandspeakingcourseisabetterchoiceforyou.选择理由（比较两门课程的信息）Firstandforemost,Ibelievethatitscontent,whichmainlyincludesreadingandwritingstories,mayarouseyourinterestinChinese.First,paredtoreadingandwriting,listeningandspeakingiseasierandmoreusefulindailylife.Meanwhile,Audio-OralChinesestandsoutwithitsgoodpaceforanovicelikeyou.Second,thiscoursegoesinabilingualform.What’smore,paredwiththecoursearrangementofChineseListeningandSpeaking,Inthefirstplace,astothescheduleofthecourse,readingandwritingcourseisarrangedmorereasonably.Inparisonoftwocourses,theyconcentrateon“dailyconversation”and“readingandwriting”respectively,…What’smore,whenitestothetimeplan,sinceyou’vebeenburdenedwithheavyworkloadinweekdays,Fridaynightmightbemoresuitableforyou.Intermsofthewaythecourseispresented,bilingualeducationseemsmorefriendlytoabeginner.Intermsofpracticaluseforashorttrip,Audio-OralChineseoutshinesChineseLiteracy.StudentstakingthiscoursecanhaveaccesstovariousChinesestories,whichnotonlyservestofostertheirgreatinterestinlearningChinesebutalsoenablesthemtounderstandChineseculturedeeply.Inaddition,there’snodoubtthatit’llbetoughforyoutoacclimatizeamidtheatmosphereofall-ChineseteachingwithoutEnglishparedtotheotherone.Whereas,theformer’sscheduleistootightandhectic,whichismoredemandingthanthelatter.Firstandforemost,theformercoursefeaturesstoriescreativewriting,whoseinnerideadowninsidetheteachingplanposesabiginvitationforpeoplewholovegettinganinsightintothebeautyofalanguagebesidessimplymasteringit,justlikeyou.总结希望Goodluckwithwhicheveryouwillchoose.IamlookingforwardtohearingfromyouassoonaspossibleandtalkwithyouinChinese!Ihopemyideascouldcontributealittle,andlookforwardtoyourreply.IsincerelyhopethatyouwouldtakemyadviceintoaccountandgainalotfromtheexperienceofChineselearning.Ihopemyremendationcouldbehelpful.That’sallmyreasonswhyIremendyoutochoosethesecondcourse.二、正文的部分语言汇总分析：比较两种课程的特点，做出选择TopicExamples选听说课程Therefore,itisagoodchoiceforyoutotakethecourseofAudio-OralChineseasitfeaturesdailyconversationwhiletheotherfocusesonChinesestoryreadingandwriting.Forexample,whenyoudineout,asabeginner,Ithinkitessentialtolearnsomeusefulexpressionstomunicatewiththewaitress.Thisfrequencyallowsyousufficienttimetopracticeandtheintervalwon’tbetoolongastoforgetabouttheknowledgelearntatlastclass.选择读写课程Ibelievethatitscontent,whichmainlyincludesreadingandwritingstories,mayarouseyourinterestinChinese.Thesestories,varyingfromancientlegendstononfiction,wellshowcasetheprofound5000-year-oldChineseculture.ByexposingyourselftothepioneeringideasmanifestedbyscholarsthroughoutChinesehistory,drawinginspirationfromtheteachingsofConfuciusandLaozi,perhapsyou’llacquireanewperspectiveonlife.NotonlycanitenableyoutoperceivethecharmofChineseasalanguage,butitmayalsocultivateyourthinkinginChinese,whichisveryimportantforalanguagelearner.TheteachingmethodofthiscourseisbilingualwhilemonolingualteachingmodeisemployedinChineseListeningandSpeaking.Inmyopinion,bilingualeducationhelpstofacilitatestudents’mandofChinesebetterespeciallyforanewlearner.StudentstakingthiscoursecanhaveaccesstovariousChinesestories,whichnotonlyservestofostertheirgreatinterestinlearningChinesebutalsoenablesthemtounderstandChineseculturedeeply.paredwiththecontentofdailymunicationwhichisintendedforseniorlearners,thestoryreadingandwritingcannotonlyexpandyourvocabularybutalsoenrichyourunderstandingoftheChineseculture.Intermsofthewaythecourseispresented,bilingualeducationseemstobemorefriendlytoabeginner.Creative

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DearBill,I’msogladtohearfromyou,andit’sevenmoresurprisingtoknowaboutyourChineselearningplan.It’ssuchapleasuretobeofsomehelptoyouinchoosingthecurriculum.MypersonalremendationisthecourseofChinesereadingandwriting.Firstandforemost,Ibelievethatitscontent,whichmainlyincludesreadingandwritingstories,mayarouseyourinterestinChinese.Thesestories,varyingfromancientlegendstononfiction,wellshowcasetheprofound5000-year-oldChineseculture.Besides,byexposingyourselftothepioneeringideasmanifestedbyscholarsthroughoutChinesehistory,drawinginspirationfromtheteachingsofConfuciusandLaozi,perhapsyou’llacquireanewperspectiveonlife.Onthecontrary,theothercourse,featuringmostlydailyconversations,mayseemmorepractical,yetitcanbemoresuperficialandboring.Second,thiscoursegoesinabilingualform.Afterall,facedwithall-Chineseteaching,apletestrangertothislanguagesuchasyouyourselfmayfeeloverlystressedanddepressed.Inthepresenceofthesenegativeemotions,youroptimallearningpotentialislikelytobepromisedandyourlearningpassionundermined.Lastbutnotleast,thiscourseextendsaslongastwoweeks,withonelessonperweek,whiletheotheronegivesthesamenumberoflessonsinhalfthetime.parativelyslow-paced,youmayhavemoretimetoreviewandaccumulatelanguageuse,thuslayingamuchmoresolidfoundationandbenefitingfuturestudy.Asyoucansee,thecourseofChinesereadingandwritingisofgreatbenefit,andIwouldpickitwithouthesitationifIwereyou.However,whichevercourseyouchoosetoattendintheend,IwillbackyouupinChineselearninglikealways.Yourssincerely,LiHua【真题回顾】（2019.6

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Directions:WriteanEnglishpositionin120—150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假如你是李敏，在一本英文旅游杂志上，你发现了这样一条信息：某古城景区对当地人收费5美元,对外国人收费15美元,针对这一情况，请你以李敏的口吻给该杂志编辑写一封信，具体要求如下：1.介绍一下你在杂志上看到的内容；2.针对此事自己的态度以及理由。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Deareditor,

I’mastudentandmynameisLiMin.I’mwritingthislettertoreflectuponmyconcernsaboutapieceoftourisminformationinyourmagazine.Accordingtotheinformationonadmissionticket,thehigh-profileattraction“AncientCity”chargesa$15entrancefeeperforeigntourist—amazinglythreefoldthatofthelocals.Icontendthatthispracticeisquiteunreasonable.Firstandforemost,asfortheforeigntouristsingfromafar,thestrikingdifferenceinentrancefeemayresultinresentmentofunfairness.Furthermore,ifforeigntouristsrealizethattheywillhavetopaymuchmoretovisitaworldwidehistoricalandculturalrelics,theywouldperhapsdecidenottogotothecountryonvacation.Tosumup,everyeffortshouldbemadetoattracttouristsfromoverseasandtopromoteculturalrelics.

Thankyouforyourtimeandreading.Ireallyappreciateyourresponseatyourconvenience.Bestregards,Yourssincerely,LiMin【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以李敏的口吻给杂志编辑写一封信。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.介绍一下你在杂志上看到的内容；2.针对此事自己的态度以及理由。第二步:列提纲reflectupon，amazingly，contend，firstandforemost，resultin，furthermore，decidetodo，tosumup，makeeffort，appreciate，atyourearliestconvenience第三步：连词成句1.I’mwritingthislettertoreflectuponmyconcernsaboutapieceoftourisminformationinyourmagazine.2.Accordingtotheinformationonadmissionticket,thehigh-profileattraction“AncientCity”chargesa$15entrancefeeperforeigntourist—amazinglythreefoldthatofthelocals.3.Icontendthatthispracticeisquiteunreasonable.4.Firstandforemost,asfortheforeigntouristsingfromafar,thestrikingdifferenceinentrancefeemayresultinresentmentofunfairness.5.Furthermore,ifforeigntouristsrealizethattheywillhavetopaymuchmoretovisitaworldwidehistoricalandculturalrelics,theywouldperhapsdecidenottogotothecountryonvacation.6.Tosumup,everyeffortshouldbemadetoattracttouristsfromoverseasandtopromoteculturalrelics.7.Ireallyappreciateyourresponseatyourconvenience.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…Andthen,Finally,Intheend,Atlast（供参考）2.表并列补充关系：Firstandforemost,Furthermore3.表转折对比关系：However,Onthecontrary,but,Although+clause(从句),Inspiteof+n/doing,Ontheonehand…,Ontheotherhand…Some…,whileothers…,asfor,so…that…（供参考）4.表因果关系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult（供参考）连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，【点睛】[高分句型1]Furthermore,ifforeigntouristsrealizethattheywouldhavetopaymuchmoretovisitaworldwidehistoricalandculturalrelics,theywouldperhapsdecidenottogotothecountryonvacation.（使用了条件状语从句，宾语从句和不定式作宾语）[高分句型2]Tosumup,everyeffortshouldbemadetoattracttouristsfromoverseasandtopromoteculturalrelics.（使用了被动语态和不定式短语作目的状语）_____优选操练优选操练演练1：（邮件）Directions:WriteanEnglishpositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假如你是明启的李明，最近正筹划建立“线上图书馆”，鼓励同学们多读书，读好书。为了更好地为同学们服务，图书馆现向大家征集建议。请你为图书馆负责人写一封邮件。邮件内容须包括：■为线上图书馆提出合理建议；■说明这样做的原因或好处。DearSirorMadam,IamLiMing,astudentinourschool.Inresponsetoyourcollectingsuggestionstoestablishan“onlinelibrary”,Iamwritingtoputforwardmyhumblesuggestions,hopingtobeofsomevalue.Firstly,itbenefitsalottodiversifythecategoriesofbooks,thusenablingstudentstomakeproperchoicesandstimulateourreadinginterest.Besides,relevanttechnologyshouldbeimproved,whichcanfacilitatereaders’resourcesearch.Lastbutnotleast,Ithinkitnecessarytosetupanonlinebookclubwherewecanexchangeideasonwhatweread.Hopefullymyideaswillbehelpful.

Yours,

LiMing【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给线上图书馆负责人写一封邮件，为线上图书馆提出合理建议并说明这样做的原因或好处。【详解】1.词汇积累建议：suggestion→advice激发阅读兴趣：stimulatereadinginterest→arousereadinginterest此外：besides→what’smore有帮助的：helpful→useful2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Firstly,itbenefitsalottodiversifythecategoriesofbooks,thusenablingstudentstomakeproperchoicesandstimulateourreadinginterest.拓展句：Firstly,itbenefitsalottodiversifythecategoriesofbooks,whichcanenablestudentstomakeproperchoicesandstimulateourreadinginterest.【点睛】【高分句型1】Besides,relevanttechnologyshouldbeimproved,whichcanfacilitatereaders’resourcesearch.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Lastbutnotleast,Ithinkitnecessarytosetupanonlinebookclubwherewecanexchangeideasonwhatweread.（运用了where引导的限制性定语从句和what引导的宾语从句）演练2：GuidedWriting（推荐信）Directions:WriteanEnglishpositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假定你是明启的高生李华。某电视台线上学习节目打算增设两个栏目。初步拟定从“ReadingforFun”、“TextbookLearning”、“HomeworkGuidance”、“OnlineListening”以及“QuestionsandAnswers”五个栏目中选取两个，特此向所有在线学习者征求意见。请你给电视台写封信，推荐两个栏目。内容须包括:1)你推荐的两个栏目；2)你推荐这两个栏目的理由。注意：作文中不得出现你本人的姓名、班级及等真实信息。【参考范文】Deareditors,Iknowyou’regoingtosetupnewprogramsonline.SoI’mwritingtosuggesttwoprograms---“ReadingforFun”and“HomeworkGuidance”asanonlinelearner.Firstofall,Ithinkreadingisofgreatsignificancetothewholelifeofpeople.“ReadingforFun”cancreateagoodlanguageenvironmentforonlinelearners,broadentheirhorizons,andencouragethemtoabsorbrichlanguage,inorderthatlearnerscanbetterusethelanguage.Secondly,homeworkallowsustomasterwhatwehavelearned,whichcandeepenunderstandingandmemory.However,manyofourstudents’parentsareusuallybusyandhavenotimetoguidetheirhomework.Andstudentsdohomeworkathome,wheretherenoteachers.“HomeworkGuidance”notonlycanhelppletehomework,butalsocanimprovetheenthusiasmofstudents.Besides,undertheguidanceoftheprogram,studentscandevelopgoodstudyhabitsandnotworryabouttheirhomeworkanymore.That'swhyIremendthetwoprograms.Iamsuretheywillbewell-receivedbytheonlinelearners.Ihopeyoucantakemysuggestionintoconsideration.Sincerelyyours,LiHua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给电视台写封信，推荐两个栏目，并写出推荐这两个栏目的理由。【详解】词汇积累建议：suggest→propose→advise鼓励：encourage→urge有益的：helpful→significant→beofgreatsignificance培养：develop→bringup2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：However,manyofourstudents’parentsareusuallybusyandhavenotimetoguidetheirhomework.拓展句：Howevermanyofourstudents’parentsareusuallybusy,whohavenotimetoguidetheirhomework.【点睛】[高分句型1]Secondly,homeworkallowsustomasterwhatwehavelearned,whichcandeepenunderstandingandmemory.(运用了what引导的宾语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]That'swhyIremendthetwoprograms.(运用了why引导的表语从句)演练3：（建议信）Directions:WriteanEnglishpositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.图书馆需要购置一批新书，现向学生征求意见。假如你是王凯，请用英语给图书馆孙老师写一封信，你认为图书馆最需要购置的两类图书，并说明理由。下表所列图书类别可供参考:PopularScienceArtsandrecreationLiteratureputersciencePopularScienceArtsandrecreationLiteraturePhilosophyandpsychologySocialsciences•Language•Historyandgeography•Language___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考范文：DearMr.Sun,Havinglearntthatourlibraryisplanningtobuysomenewbookstoequipitselfwithbetterresourcesandyou,theonewhowillmakethefinaldecisiononwhatkindofbooksshallbepurchased,areaskingfbrmoresuggestions,1wouldliketosharemypersonalopinionwithyou.Firstly,whatweneedmostarePopularSciencebooks.Usuallypopularsciencebooksexplainbasicprinciplesofnatureinasimpleandinterestingway.Theyhelpusunderstandsciencesubjectsbetterandarouseourcuriosityaboutscientificdiscoveries.Especiallyforthosewhoholdtheprejudicethatallstuffinvolvedinscienceareboringandunattractive.Secondly,inadditiontoreadingforknowledge,wereadforfunandinspiration.ThatiswhyIremendedanothercategoryofbooks:literaturebooks.Classicworks,writtenbymasters,presentgreatthoughtsthroughtellingfascinatingstoriesandusingdelicatelanguage.Theynotonlyofferusjoyandexcitement,butalsoencourageustothinkcritically.Readingthiskindofbooksmoreoftenwillmakeusmoresensitivetotheworld.Iwillbesogladifyoucantakemyremendationsintoconsider.Yourssincerely_____好题必好题必测练习1：（电子邮件）Directions:anEnglishpositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假设你是明启的李华，你校外籍教师Chris将在文化周期间做一个有关西方艺术的讲座，现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请给Chris写一封电子邮件，邮件必须包含以下内容：•你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈、戏剧中任选其一）：•选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；•希望从中有何收获。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】DearChris,I’m

Lihua,astudentfromClassone,Gradethree.Iamverygladtohearthatyouwillgiveusalectureonthewesternartintheculturalweekthatwillbeheldnextweek,andIdohopethelecture

isaboutwesterndrama,asIamveryinterestedinwesternliteratureandart,anddramaistheperfectbinationofthetwo.Asisknowntoall,alotoffamousliteraryclassicsarerepresentedinadrama,suchasthegiantShakespeare's"Hamlet","Othello","KingLear"and"Macbeth",allofwhichareexcellentdramaworks.AlthoughIhavesomeknowledgeofdrama,Istillwanttohaveadeepunderstandingofit.Inviewofthisreason,Ihopeyoucangivemeadetailedexplanationofthehistoryofdrama,includingitsorigin,developmentandevolution.Iamlookingforwardtoyourexcellentlecture

yourstruly,Lihua【试题解析】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封电子邮件：假设你是明启的李华，你校外籍教师Chris将在文化周期间做一个有关西方艺术的讲座，现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请给Chris写一封电子邮件，邮件必须包含以下内容：•你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈、戏剧中任选其一）：•选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；•希望从中有何收获。时态应为一般现在时。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如；culture（文化），drama（戏剧），bination（结合），represent（体现），giant（文豪），detailed（详细的），literaryclassics（文学经典），origin（起源），development（发展）及evolution（演变）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有givesbalecture（给某人做演讲），beinterestedin（对……感兴趣），havesomeknowledgeof(对……有一些了解)，suchas（例如），lookforwardto（期待），inviewof（鉴于）以及haveadeepunderstandingof（对……深入理解），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“Asisknowntoall,alotoffamousliteraryclassicsarerepresentedinadrama,suchasthegiantShakespeare's"Hamlet","Othello","KingLear"and"Macbeth",allofwhichareexcellentdramaworks.”，宾语从句“Iamverygladtohearthatyouwillgiveusalectureonthewesternartintheculturalweekthatwillbeheldnextweek”及“Ihopeyoucangivemeadetailedexplanationofthehistoryofdrama,includingitsorigin,developmentandevolution”，让步状语从句“AlthoughIhavesomeknowledgeofdrama,Istillwanttohaveadeepunderstandingofit.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。练习2：（建议信）Directions:WriteanEnglishpositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假设你们正在向学生征询开设选修课（optionalcourse）的有关事宜。请你写一封建议信给校长，提出你希望开设的选修课的名称，并简要说说这门课应该涉及的主要内容以及开设这门选修课的意义。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Dearheadmaster,I’mLihua,astudentfromclassone,gradethree.I'mverydelightedtoknowthatourschoolisgoingtoofferseveraloptionalcourses.IhopethatthecourseofSinology（国学）canbeoffered.Asweallknow,SinologyisaperfectcognitionandsummaryofnaturewiththecontinuousdevelopmentofChina'sfivethousandyearsofhistory.LearningtheclassicsofSinologycanhelpusgraduallyfindoutallkindsofideologicalproblemsthataredifficulttosolveinlifeandworkfromthesemostsimplecognition,Chineseclassicsarefullofthewisdomoftheancients,solearningSinologycannotonlyincreaseourknowledge,butalsoletuscultivateourselvesandshapeourpersonality.Mostimportantly,learningSinologyplaysanimportantroleininheritingourcivilizationandincreasingculturalconfidence.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemysuggestionintoconsideration.

Yourssincerely,Lihua【试题解析】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封书信：假设你们正在向学生征询开设选修课（optionalcourse）的有关事宜。请你写信给校长，提出你希望开设的选修课的名称，并简要说说这门课应该涉及的主要内容以及开设这门选修课的意义。时态应为一般现在时。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如；offer（开设），optionalcourse（选修课），Sinology（国学），civilization（文明），wisdom（智慧），cultivate（修身养性、培养），personality（人格），culturalconfidence（文化自信），ideological（思想的、观念的）及inherit（传承）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有allkindsof（各种各样的），bedelightedtodo（高兴做某事），takesthintoconsideration（将……纳入考虑之中）以及playanimportantrolein（在……方面起着重要作用），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“Asweallknow,SinologyisaperfectcognitionandsummaryofnaturewiththecontinuousdevelopmentofChina'sfivethousandyearsofhistory.”，宾语从句“IhopethatthecourseofSinologycanbeoffered.”，形式宾语“Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemysuggestionintoconsideration.”，非谓语动词“Mostimportantly,learningSinologyplaysanimportantroleininheritingourcivilizationandincreasingculturalconfidence.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。练习3：（申请信）Directions:WriteanEnglishpositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假如你是明启高三学生李华，最近你校准备创立一个“解忧”社团（AnxietyRelievingClub），旨在帮助同学们排忧减压。你很想成为其中一员，请给社长写封申请信，内容须包括：1.你想加入该社团的理由；2.你对解忧活动的建议与举措。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________DearSir/Madam,IamverygladtohearthatourschoolisgoingtosetupAnxietyRelievingClubtohelpstudentsrelievestress.Asawarm-heartedandoutgoingboy,Iameagertobeeamemberofit.Atthebeginningofhighschool,Iwasundergreatpressure.Thankstothehelpofteachersandclassmates,Icameoutofthehaze,soIhavetheexperienceofhelpingotherstudentsreducepressure.Ihavefoundthatmanystudentsundergreatpressureareshyanddon’tliketomunicatewithothers,soIthinkhelpingthembeeactiveisthekey.It’sagoodchoicetoletthemjoinstudygroupsandsportsactivities.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemysuggestionsintoconsideration.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.

Yours,

LiHua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封申请信，申请成为“解忧”社团的一员，信中介绍你想加入该社团的理由和你对如何开展解忧活动的建议。【详解】1.词汇积累高兴的：glad→happy创立：setup→establish害羞的：shy→self-conscious建议：suggestion→advice2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Atthebeginningofhighschool,Iwasundergreatpressure.拓展句：Atthebeginningofhighschool,Iwasundergreatpressure,whichmademesad.【点睛】【高分句型1】IamverygladtohearthatourschoolisgoingtosetupAnxietyRelievingClubtohelpstudentsrelievestress.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)【高分句型2】Ihavefoundthatmanystudentsundergreatpressureareshyanddon’tliketomunicatewithothers,soIthinkhelpingthembeeactiveisthekey.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)练习4：（演讲稿）将组织一次“我心目中的英雄"主题班会活动，请你以HeroesinMyHeart为题，写一篇演讲稿。基本要求如下：你心目中英雄的标准；你心目中英雄的事迹简介（请举1-2例）；从这些英雄事迹中，你学到了些什么？___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【试题分析】（1） 分析体材：发言稿，属于在正式场合下使用的口头文体，包括演讲、报告、欢迎或欢送稿和宣讲倡议书等。发言稿可以是介绍性说明文，也可以是就一主题提出论点和相关的论据。发言稿是直接面向听众的，语言使用上一定要准确简介、通俗易懂、层次清楚、条理分明；发言稿一般由开头语、正文和结束语三部分组成。开头和结尾一般都有固定的格式，如：Goodmorning/afternoon/evening,everyone/ladiesandgentlemen,Ifsagreathonorformetostandhereandgivemyspeech.Mynameis...Thetopicofmyspeechis...Thankyouforyourlistening.分析题材：HeroesinMyHeart;审题：我心目中的英雄，历史中或者当今时事中的英雄，学习和生活中身边的英雄都可以，只要具有说服力即可；我心目中的英雄标准（注意接下来要能举出该标准的1・2英雄事例）；从这些英雄事例到人生道理；【参考例文】Asforthemeaningofhero,Differentpeoplehavedifferentexplanations.Myheroismonpeople,buttheydoextraordinarythingsintheirlives.Duringthewaryears,fightingheroesoftheliberationofthemotherlandsacrificedtheirlivestoblowuppeople'senemyintheairinordertoopenuptheroadofvictory.FromDongCunruitoHuangJihuang...countlessheroeswiththeirliveshavebeenwrittenoneafteranotherheroicpatrioticmovementwhichhadinspiredthepatrioticspiritofgenerationsofyouth.AtthebeginningofPRC,noonecouldnotforgetapersonwhohelpedalargenumbersofpeopleselflessly.HisnamewasLeiFeng.Tobespec