高考英语读后续写梦想故事类+已婚已育女性重回学校圆梦学业+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习理想故事——已婚已育女性重回学校，圆梦学业1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Formanyyears,Ihadarecurringdream.Iwasalittlegirlagain,rushingabout,tryingtogetreadyforschool.“Hurry,you'llbelateforschool,”mymothercalledtome.“Iamhurrying,Mom!WhatdidIdowithmybooks?”DeepinsideIknewwherethedreamcamefrom.Itwasaboutsomeunfinishedbusinessinmylife.Asakid,Ilovedeverythingaboutschool.Ilovedbooks,teachers,testsandhomework.MostofallIlongedtosomedaymarchdowntheaisletoreceivemydiploma.Thatseemedmoreappealingeventhangettingmarried.Butat15,Ihadtodropoutbecausemyparentscouldn'taffordtuition.Myhopeofgettingadiplomawasdead,orsoIthought.Prettysoon,Imarriedandhadthreechildren,andIthought:“Theregoesmydiploma.”4续写原文Evenso,Iwantedmychildrentobeeducated.ButLinda,ouryoungestchild,hadjuvenilearthritisinherhandsandknees,whichmadeitimpossibleforhertofunctioninanormalclassroom.IfeltsorryforherandIdidn'twanthertoliveherlifewithregret.Ididn'tgiveuphopeofherbeingbacktoschoolinsomeway.Oneday,Isawanadinthenewspaperforeveningcourses.“That'stheanswer,”Isaidtomyself.Lindaalwaysfeelsbetterintheevening,soI'lljustsignherupfornightschool.Lindawasbusyfillingoutenrollmentformswhenthesecretarysaid:“Mrs.Schantz,whydon'tyoucomebacktoschool?”Ilaughed:“There'snoway!I'm55!”Buthepersisted,andbeforeIknewwhatIhaddone,IwasenrolledforclassesinEnglishandcrafts.“Thisisonlyanexperiment,”Iwarnedhim,buthejustsmiled.So,Itoldmyselftotryforjustasemesterandtoseeifitwouldwork.Anyway,mydreamwasstillthereinmyheart.5段首句Paragraph1：Itwasexcitingtogotoschoolagainbutitwasnogame.Paragraph2：LindaandIsaweachotherthroughthetime.6Part2题目分析7点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点8续写思路分析本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者15岁时因为父母付不起学费，不得不退学，后来结了婚生了三个孩子。作者在为最小的孩子琳达报夜校的时候，自己也打算尝试一个学期，但作者坚持了下来并最终取得了毕业证书，实现了自己的学业梦想。9续写思路分析Para1：Itwasexcitingtogotoschoolagainbutitwasnogame.由第一段首句内容“再去上学是令人兴奋的，但这不是游戏。”可知，第一段可描写作者去上学时的感受和学业进步情况。10续写思路分析Para2：LindaandIsaweachotherthroughthetime.由第二段首句内容“琳达和我经常见面。”可知，第二段可描写作者和琳达是如何互相鼓励的，以及作者最后如何取得了毕业证书的。11续写思路分析续写线索感到兴奋——白天做家务——晚上上学——成绩稳步提高——和琳达互相鼓励——取得毕业证书12续写素材可用词汇：行为类充满：befullof/befilledwith回去：goback/return完成：finish/complete情绪类尴尬：awkward/embarrassed惊讶：surprise/astonishment13续写素材可用句型：[高分句型1]Sittinginaclassroomfullofkidswasawkward,evenifmostofthemwererespectfulandencouraging.(运用了现在分词作状语)[高分句型2]WhenIwasdown,Lindaencouragedme.(运用了when引导时间状语从句)14Part3范文呈现15范文呈现Itwasexcitingtogotoschoolagainbutitwasnogame.Sittinginaclassroomfullofkidswasawkward,evenifmostofthemwererespectfulandencouraging.Duringtheday,Iwasstillabusymarriedwomanhavingloadsofhouseworktodo.Intheevening,Iwasahardworkingstudentworkingonmycourses.Tomysurprise,bothLindaandIdidverywellinnightschool.Iwentbackagainthenextsemester,andmygradessteadilyimproved.16范文呈现LindaandIsaweachotherthroughthetime.WhenIwasdown,Lindaencouragedme.“Mom,youcan'tquitnow!”Andwhenshewasdown,Iencouragedher.Ihavetosayitwasatimewhichwasreallyhardonbothofus.Butneitherofusgaveup.Atlast,Igotmydiploma.Tomysurprise,almostallofmyclassmatesvotedformetobeclassspeaker,andIgota$3,000collegescholarship.Theunfinishedbusinessinmydreamswaseventuallyfinished.17范文译文琳达和我一直在一起。当我情绪低落的时候，琳达鼓励我。“妈妈，你现在不能放弃！”当她情绪低落时，我鼓励她。我不得不说，那段时间对我们俩来说都很艰难。但我们都没有放弃。最后，我拿到了毕业证书。令我惊讶的是，我几乎所有的同学都投票支持我当主讲人，我获得了3000美元的大学奖学金。我梦想中未完成的事业终于完成了。18范文译文他的叔叔走到他面前，但看到他的脸时突然停了下来。然后他喊道：“哦！是你！”但当他的叔叔看到困惑的父亲时，他立即解释说他刚刚在街上遇到詹姆斯。